The trick to getting ourselves more honest about self-critique (I think) is to drop the emotional context we find so frequently online. Words like "awful" or "sucks" don't help. It's even true when critiquing for others. Suggesting issues and offering solutions to those issues is what leads to improvement... I know when my drawing sucks... even if I can't say or point out exactly why. I have eyes and can see it sucking... I'm not blind. BUT to notice my background lines are precisely heavier than the foreground lines... Noticing that my hatching was done "backward" leaving little tiny blobs at the exposed ends of each stroke where it SHOULD taper off as I lift the pen... Letting myself get impatient and move to "scribble technique" instead of hatching or cross hatching precisely... ...THESE are all issues and they're FIXABLE. If I notice these details, or someone points them out, even my crooked, slightly curving and meandering perspective lines can be remedied. I CAN practice the strokes, and stop myself from getting impatient... EVEN if that means sitting up and taking a breath, stating out loud, "It's going to be here when I get back to it." and going for a coffee and a smoke... Whatever it takes... It CAN be fixed. The trick then, is to quit whining "BUT THAT'S MY STYLE!" instead of admitting that I have issues... I do. I can see most of them... haha... I said it before. "I'm not blind." Sometimes, it IS a "Style" question, versus a "Quality" question... AND that should be addressed, too. This is where experimentation gets involved. I can draw in several styles if I put my mind to it... I get out one of my "Big Books of Drawing" and flip to an illustration in the appropriate style, and then put the particular web-image or archived digital still on my monitor... AND proceed to study both the illustration (and the chapter it's in which usually has some dissertation defining said style)... AND the monitor's Screen-sized image... clipboard or trucker-can on my legs, I get out the ol' fountain pen or pick up a dipper out of my cracked-to-useless coffee mug, and start to work... It's NEVER EVER perfect... I can get pretty close most of the time... BUT I still go back and there's stuff I'm just not happy with. Sometimes the harder question is "Did I screw it up, or is it just the style I don't really get along with???" haha... AND that's a thing. I like his works, BUT I'll never completely be comfortable with Don Martin and those damnable floppy feet when he does people... I can do it... I just don't like it when I do it. BUT that is a "Style" question... NOT to be confused with a "Quality" question... AND most of all, DO NOT FORGET to breathe, relax... If it's not fun, you're not going to keep doing it. Cut yourself some slack. I'm no master, in spite of whatever impression I might make in my commentary. I'm good... I don't know at this point if I'll ever be "great"... I don't do it for that, though. Whatever it is you want to become skilled at, you CAN get there from here. It's a long road, but it's always do-able. Remember to PLAY at it. ;o)
@santone1849 Жыл бұрын
I actually really liked the first drawing . Its has something 😊
@stephentraversart Жыл бұрын
Great to hear. Thanks for telling me. 😀
@JacquelinePJames3 жыл бұрын
Excellent..thank you
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Thank you. Appreciate your telling me.
@TwainMR72 жыл бұрын
Great tips Stephen. I love your videos. you are an excellent teacher.
@stephentraversart2 жыл бұрын
Appreciate you telling me Mike. Thanks 😀
@monarabah88412 жыл бұрын
Great video 😍😍💛
@stephentraversart2 жыл бұрын
Glad you think so. Thanks Mona
@evelyncikas2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for sharing it! It really is great tips!! 🤩🙏
@stephentraversart2 жыл бұрын
My pleasure Evelina. Great to hear they were helpful. 😀
@MrLeeHolton3 жыл бұрын
Great videos. Great amount of information condensed into a relatively short video. I appreciated the perspective “quiz”.
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for saying so Lee. It's always hard to know what to put in or leave out, or even if it's helpful at all. Encouragement for the next one. :)
@remitathomas10023 жыл бұрын
Very helpful with those examples,thank you!
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Thanks Remita. It's very helpful to get your feedback. :0
@rajathrs6503 жыл бұрын
Very detailed tutorial, subscribed instantly
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Really glad you found it helpful Rajath. :)
@rajannair71953 жыл бұрын
Love your art and your channel which is very informative and well presented 👍👋
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Thanks Rajan for the encouragement. It's very different to anything I've done before, but I hope to improve. :)
@oliverpierre222 жыл бұрын
So useful!! Thank you Stephen. (And I managed to guess the rogue line of perspective.) Still an amazing bunch of sketches though. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
@stephentraversart2 жыл бұрын
Haha. Wish I'd seen it sooner. Glad it was helpful. :)
@RatusMax2 жыл бұрын
Hopefully my comment's aren't annoying you. Someone told me if I watch the video, like, comment and subscribe, it will help the algorithms. Being honest with yourself and your art is the fastest way to learn. When I was digital painting and the painting was turning out bad I kept lying to myself that it would get better if I kept adding details. It never did. So I sat there and analyzed what I did wrong and what I did right. Then digitally painted again. It came out better. That's when I knew, I needed to be honest with myself up front. When others critique my work, I get angry but then catch myself. Most of the time they are right and it's something I neglected or lied to myself about. Although there are some times when you should ignore feedback. Especially if you are getting better over time. Focus on your improvement from the last creation rather than trying to catch up with someone else. Trust me even when I know this, I catch myself trying to "catch up" to others and forget that I have developing to that point.
@stephentraversart2 жыл бұрын
Of course I appreciate your comments. And yes, they do help my channel. Critiquing our own work is a very helpful habit to be in. If we accept mistakes we won’t ever move past them. Keep at it. 😀
@MRK10993 жыл бұрын
very useful
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Excellent. Thanks for telling me. :)
@fanatlarge3 жыл бұрын
Yikes. That Chambord drawing is fiercely complex. How to get the perspective on the buttresses right is beyond my imagination.
@stephentraversart3 жыл бұрын
Thanks, but I drew it from a photo, not from life, so it was already in a 2D form, which makes it much less difficult. :)