Fixing YOUR art! 4

[@Threshershark3]

I think it's funny how in the last piece you touched up everything- except the frog all hail the immortal frog who escaped Jackies clutches/j

[@JackieDroujko]

the frog had no notes

[@RoatingM0th]

Hes perfect

[@mandelaexe]

The frog is a masterpiece

[@clo_tat]

Why fix what’s already perfect?

[@ALLYGAMEPLAYSandSTREAMS]

The frog is perfect the way he is

[@Pawntelle]

Cant wait for jackie to constructively and kindly shred people’s art

[@anastasiafish2065]

I like your approach to critique. I like that you say “this is how I would do it” and “this is how I envision it” you don’t tell someone that that’s how it should be done, just how you would approach it, and how it reads to you. Kind of just running with the blueprint they gave you and expanding on it in a technical way.

[@sighmanmade]

thank you so much jackie thats my art ! 😭 i also used a canvas texture png and put it on a multiply layer to give it that traditional texture vs digital !

[@JackieDroujko]

Thank uuu!

[@giftofthewild6665]

I loved your drawing! Was so beautiful ❤

[@Valerie_8038]

@@JackieDroujko😊

[@DreamSuga]

Thank you so much for touching up my work! I love the way you pushed my wicked witch character with the silhouette and shape exaggerations😊 Also very excited for the upcoming Japan trip

[@anoni6108]

I really liked the jazz drawing before, the lack of structure to me was really illustrative of how jazz feels to me ✨

[@radiofloyd2359]

I think a middle ground between her design and the og would have gone the hardest. I like how she added structure to the shape of the woman's face, but I wish it had been kept with as little detail.

[@whgeek]

I mean that's how art is. All subjective. She's bringing it more towards her style and towards what she likes more.

[@kathylennerds750]

Agreed! I do question if that was fully OPs intention, though as to _me_ it almost didnt seem stylized enough for that to be the intentional vibe. Also, because they submitted their art to be "fixed" by her, I think it is fair to assume they would want to go a bit more realistic than what they had? But yeah, the vibes of that piece were already very nice :'D

[@ramenai]

12:56 [crying as someone who has hairloss issues even before they hit 30s]

[@defa2136]

Yeah I’m 24 and I have really bad balding because of genetics but oh well

[@radiofloyd2359]

I'm 20 and my hairline is wayyy worse than the drawing

[@autumnblaze6267]

same like, wtf, plenty of people start balding in high school - ya don't have to flex your good hairline this hard, not everyone's as privileged

[@KL-kx1pl]

hey some of us are balding and that's okay "he shouldn't be this bald at this age" 😞

[@PersonOnTheInternetz]

Imagine the other way around. A man sayin she shouldn’t have such a big chest at that age. Everyone is individual. I don’t like those comparisons but here it kinda fits…

[@giftofthewild6665]

Yeah I actually don't agree with her here. I've seen guys with wispy thin hair who are starting to bald in their early 20s and I thought that was maybe what the artist was going for in that piece. Adding all the extra hair was unnecessary imo.

[@MyEnglishIsWorseThanMyKinks]

​@@giftofthewild6665 the guy looks like he's bolding. If it was intentional, I'm sure the original author wouldn't be upset over this correction, and would only take into consideration other tips. However, if the character is not supposed to be balding, then it's a valid critique. I once met a young artist who made a fanart of someone else's OC and made her entirely bold just because they didn't know how to draw hair. Nothing wrong with bold women, sure, but if you're making all your characters bold or balding just because you can't draw hair, then it's a skill issue you should strive to fix

[@MrsRimavelle]

Also it could just be big forehead. I imagine someone could submit their self portrait and she would say it's wrong coz they don't have conventionally pretty features lol

[@mrfish.-]

@@PersonOnTheInternetz Yeahhh that’s not a good comparison. Children should not be drawn with enlarged chests anyways. I get your point though!

[@caiwyne]

This is the perfect type of critique. You are not being rude or mean, you are very kind and giving great advice from your expertise! Love watching these vids :D

[@Hmmmmmmmmm....]

Ii love how the whole video was less like "here's how can i fix your art" and more like "how would i do this art according to my knowledge"

[@ilianastudio]

I LOVE your input on the witch design ❤ such a great example on how to push the design for storytelling.

[@real_abyssal]

Someone needs to send this woman a piece of art that's so good it has nothing to be fixed in to see her reaction

[@claudiaamengualmateo6989]

I looove these videos but I feel like most of the anatomical corrections you give only apply to conventionally pretty and skinny characters I would love to see a video focused on anatomical corrections or tips for different body types more on the realistic side rather than cartoon style. Anyways love the video❤❤❤

[@ballsier]

i was thinking the same!!!

[@michaillazarou]

What part exactly of the tips you think applies to conventionally attractive or skinny characters? It was literally advice on lighting, contrast, composition/c. Design and basic anatomy. You can apply it to every face and every body. Just because the piece looks better than before, it doesnt mean it's conventionally attractive

[@claudiaamengualmateo6989]

@@michaillazarou when she corrects the "anatomy" of the characters. I'm not referring to the more cartoon stylized correction I'm referring to when she corrects the "anatomy" of a realistic portrait or illustration.

[@_Munshka]

This is such a stupid comment.

[@definelizziey]

@@claudiaamengualmateo6989 i’m sorry, i get what you’re trying to say, but can i have a specific example from the video? like a comment she makes or a specific art piece you think was anatomically fine before

[@nikolettemantis]

This series is so so helpful! As an intermediate artist I still have much to learn fundamentally and technique wise an the way you go in and not only adjust the drawing it’s clear you’re sharing helpful knowledge on top of it ☺️ thank you

[@Skykristal]

nah, I think you did a very good, respectful change is the last one! it still has the same feel and style, but its pushed much more. If I were the artist, I would love that.

[@I-sha.]

Its amazing how fixing small detail's make such a big difference

[@arlo493]

I think im in love with jerryblossom’s piece; I’d love to see their updated/improved version!

[@DJBSharpMusic]

Same. On its own, it's really good, but as I say to myself and other artists, we're only as good as we allow ourselves to be because we can always improve on "perfection." (No such thing, as I say)

[@ChantelleArts]

It's amazing how you can always come up with so many ideas and ways to improve that I never would've thought of 🥰

[@taisarantes7503]

I love these videos! Even though it is not my art, it helps me think differently while I'm drawing, I mostly absorb more of the character design tips, because that's what I'm really focusing on improving right know, but it's really nice to see anatomy tips as well. I enjoy a lot watching these videos and it made me happy that this one is longer! Thanks for sharing your knowledge :)

[@ahlrequin]

I dont even draw but your videos are just so nice, you give great specific advice which are very clear to understand and make perfect sense, thank you!!

[@rathelmmc3194]

It's always great to see someone really talented at their craft. I enjoyed watching you improve those art pieces!

[@KL-kx1pl]

Me trying to shrink my neck size to have a more masculine neck to shoulder ratio

[@4srasGl0wingb0obt4t]

REALLLLLLL

[@pringles3333]

19:03 We can really tell that your strengths are in cartoony character deigns here lmaoo

[@tealautumn]

15:55 was my favorite to watch, wow 😭🩷

[@nickfromanotherworld]

The third one is so gorgeous, I would definitely put that up in my home

[@lyssasletters3232]

The second piece and the final piece had particularly great improvements!

[@vespyofthetavern]

you've really taught me to really enjoy drawing characters and explore shapes in designs! thank you for your content

[@fluu619]

I'm so mad i can't join the group tour 😭 That sounds soooo much fun! So much you could learn and see 😍

[@zoopdora101]

I LOVE THIS!!! Such a relaxing and educational video! Super fun and playful

[@proboffensive]

i was waiting for you to fix that first girl's skull but it's okay. another banger by jackie droujko

[@kelpstorm]

not so sure how i feel about the last one, but i really liked the others!! its insane how much of a difference lighting makes to the overall piece, especially for the second one!! i found it very interesting how you added purple tones into the grey skin, normally i use purple for shading but you used it for the skin tones itself, i might have to try that!

[@t0xiwe426]

4:00 why you gotta hate on my low hanging boobs 😕

[@shakthishrisriram186]

Your videos are the best. Thankyou for the motivation!

[@I.like.cats.and.strawberrys]

12:54 as someone with a big friggin forehead, this hurt my soul lol Noo jk, the video was amazing!! I think i learned something, ans as someone that doesnt draw that much its really cool to learn about lighting/anatomy once in a while And besides that, i just really love "fixing art videos"

[@Marshalicious]

I think the last one didn't have a big upper lip but it was like an open mouth haha, still cool vid!

[@lexifelly7888]

I love how she doesn't "correct"(Is that how you tell it? Sorry, english is not my first languaje.) the art style of the person like how mostly Art teacher's would do. She just show how she would do the details of the art, and not the entire piece. Its honestly so lovely.❤

[@yasmin_1503]

I love the adrenaline I got when the pace picked up as she was editing the witch

[@Muinaiselukka]

Balding?? I've had that high hairline since I was a kid lmao 😭

[@TheSpartacusTV]

12:56, my brother in christ, I'm 19 and that guy in the drawing (before you fixed the hairline) has a way better hairline than I do 😭. My forehead is the size of France, omg

[@SymphonicVortex]

My favorite series please continue to do more!

[@tiffany.Elizabeth.]

I can barely make stick people look good but I love these videos so much!

[@ecowo57]

the roast in the thumbnail is crazy omg 💀 Great video btw

[@angelbiscuits]

justice for big foreheads lmao 🥲

[@JackieDroujko]

My forehead is huge too, I’m united with this drawing

[@MnMintam]

I don't draw, I don't illustrate and I barely know how to hold a pen, but as a random video that popped up in my recommended section, I love it!

[@nor-alex]

Hey Jackie! Love your content. I saw your Japan mentoring trip a few days ago and I'm a young artist going into the design/art business in just one year. Unfortunately it was not fitting for me to join this year, but if you're doing it in the future I'd love to go! Are you planning to do any more of these trips in the future?

[@JackieDroujko]

that's great to hear! not sure if i'll do them again, i suggest keeping an eye on my instagram stories, that's where i always make accouncements!

[@nor-alex]

@@JackieDroujko oh okay! I already follow you on there hehe. Thank you for responding!

[@clementinebaylis5402]

this is the first video of hers ive seen and i love her aproach but does she ever just fix the art techniques without making the character more conventionally attractive ?:)

[@haystacksgrassy2474]

Make this a series!! 🙏🏽💖

[@aidanstockin6241]

I literally love these videos….. please don’t stop

[@Somi404]

You are so amazing, how easy it is for you to add a 💫zest💫 to each of these works! Love it so much!

[@meloo-melosh]

I love how she doesn’t do the “drawing the piece in my own style instead and call it fixed” but genuinely critiques it on a respectful manner

[@tuhkapussi987]

Yesss, been waiting for this! I wish one day I'd be brave enough to submit my art 😂 but nice work! Your videos are always fantastic!

[@evelyn_r]

Personally I like the 2nd one you worked on, though it’s a bit too light. Just seemed the original was based at night. The problem I have the most is that you change the vibes on the first and third. Like the angle on the lady loses the passion, instead of her head thrown up and to the side, she is then just in side profile, and changing the physique that can be found in the world to the more standard comic boy physique. Beautiful edit on the guy in the red shirt but you really seem to prefer western standards. lol the way you got the witch and so ran with her 😂 what if she was more formal? What if she liked more simple designs? lol more like they’re distant cousins with the original, completely different series in different styles 😂 awesome witch but first one belonged in samurai jack and the other in a much more modern series. Fun though. The last was cool thought again different styles completely 😅

[@kolkik-gg]

This is the first time I want to see the process not the results (right after spray arts)

[@Agent-XI]

YES ANOTHER VID LIKE THIS

[@Sanpaku-san]

I like the hat, but the purple feels like a little too much color imo. A lighter gray gradient might look better.

[@aahhh8983]

love the first one but i’m sad you got rid of her tummy and not perky boobs, feels like a projection of your body image ideals and i think you could have achieved a posture adjustment without doing that

[@Valerie_8038]

She didn't change the stomach just the way she was posing. Also she’s helping beginner artists, begging er artists make these mistakes

[@Valerie_8038]

With anatomy

[@kristianbanks6450]

Your art is incredible! 👏

[@KahlanHollenbach]

Hey, is there any way for me to submit some if my art for you to critique? I need better advice because im still getting used to drawing electronically, and incould really use some guidance on some techniques, and such.

[@ssnowyvibes6244]

you’re my favorite artist!

[@elvishdust]

I need that jazz painting as a wallpaper. Is there any place i could find it without the face cam?

[@klaus-hf4ts]

I WANNA GO TO JAPAN WITH YOUUUU AND THE GROUPPP BUT IM JUST 16 😭😭😭😭

[@Loloany]

The second draw was an INCREDIBLE change!!!

[@henipatel8425]

I also drew an art and how can I submit my art so you can fix it, I also need guidance, I am looking forward to learn and improv my skills. Please respond it’s my dream.

[@blizzy_coni]

omg you saved my monday when i saw this videooooo

[@Saud_theking]

love your smile it's fabulous...

[@Dum_Decaf]

How would one submit art to her? Would it have to be through discord? If so what the discord?

[@Valerie_8038]

You get her server through Patreon but it’s really expensive

[@Dum_Decaf]

@@Valerie_8038 thank you !

[@amarahwhite2991]

Is this in the 4th fixing ur art video?

[@jimbean4815]

Another great round of constructive criticism :)

[@sethtfp2373]

Highlighting the eyes was unwise

[@JMPT]

Very Nice ✍️

[@delcenethemanlyman9028]

Jackie's art critique series is the 1st on I've seen that doesn't feel gross. She's a professional artist who is critiquing based on technique, and because of that she leaves the art in the same style as the original artist's. Additionally, the language used is always very kind and focused on personal preference (i.e. This is how I envision it). So many of the artists who do these kinds of series just remake people's art in their own style, and make fun of the art to their audience. That doesn't help people learn, that doesn't help them build fundamental technical skills--it just makes them feel bad.

[@herohero1011]

I love love love you🤍🤍🤍🤗

[@annabergen6586]

Yall how do I join the discord pls tell me

[@Tr4sh_Art]

Does M4ngo have a social? It’s not linked in your bio

[@korral.p]

What patreon subscription do we need to have our art evaluated? I really want to see my art on one of these but I don’t have enough money for the 70$ subscription…

[@HarpersART789]

Love!

[@Garfield_666R]

20 SECONDS AGO IS CRAZY

[@Jazzberry944]

Mother dearest is back to give her constructive criticism 😭😭

[@anidiot1122]

Is your discord a petreon thing?

[@ariel-artg]

A person cant be balding without being exposed

[@ALLYGAMEPLAYSandSTREAMS]

I would submit an art but I don’t have discord lol

[@AnnaRose-tb9pd]

I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10

[@0m11.x]

14 minutes ago is arousing

[@lil._.alien1196]

How do i get get you to see my art and it be featured in this type video like where are they submitted

[@JackieDroujko]

You get access to my discord after subscribing to my patreon, then you can submit!

[@jaczo]

Is it just me or whenever Jackie posts an art fixing video I get goosebumps??

[@GamesBeatGamer]

12:55 clearly you have never met my best friend, bro has a far back hairline and we're 17

[@AnnaRose-tb9pd]

I'm getting discord to send you a art piece, and once you see it it's meant to have no eyes and nose, I've been an artist since I was 2 or 3 now I am 10 Sad edit: discord won't work even with my fake age😢

[@Freedomfred25]

Cute!

[@Brainfly-]

My hairline at age 16: 🏃‍♂️💨

[@heliaheydari150]

Hey Jackie, I wanted to know how can I send my artwork to you for maybe a critics if you wanted :)

[@JackieDroujko]

You can send it through my patreon discord!

[@heliaheydari150]

@JackieDroujko so it mean I should be a patreon member?

[@olgarodzik8211]

looooove

[@heythere8391]

woooo!!!

[@father270]

i love all of these, however not all the anatomy tips were the best. the first one, the chest did not need to be raised THAT much. it was a little too low, but a lot of women have saggier boobs and dont need to be fixed to perky ones lol.

[@key-smash]

How do you submit art to this?

[@aleeketch]

its embarrassing to be this early

[@GroM837]

Wh9s the og artist?

[@warfatix3858]

12:55 that's not very nice😂

[@VampireNinjaBunnies]

I would like to join your Discord and submit my art but I can't find the link

[@JackieDroujko]

You have to join my patreon to join the discord!

[@VampireNinjaBunnies]

@@JackieDroujko okay, I'll be sure to do that when I can afford it 😁

[@MeoIl]

DAMN IM EARLY

[@Ai-Art-42]

Interesting