Jay and Stu Write a Whole Season of Doctor Who

[@enbyennui]

Jay & Stu chuckling at "David Tennant, again" is very funny now

[@marshallmarrs5375]

Was this video two whole years ago? Yes. Do I still want the Jekyll and Hyde episode to be called “The Doctor, Jekyll, and Mr. Hyde”? Also yes.

[@wofi784]

25:25 They mentioned the actual 14th Doctor without knowing it

[@friday6448]

I really like the idea that the first episode starts with the post regeneration trauma making the doctor seem like just another homeless guy at the food bank, with burned clothes and the companion thinking that he is just high. Then you follow it up with short scenes showing the doctor joining the staff there and helping out, and you can show them developing a repor and friendship over the episode by having them initially just being co-workers. So then you also kinda get to do a little bit of post-regeneration weirdness at the start and having a seasoned-ish doctor for the majority of the story

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Great idea!

[@moncystuff6089]

If you want the ending to be less dark maybe the Doctor gets a new scarf or something?

[@ZidaneWarner]

I absolutely love the idea of the Doctor giving a melancholic speech to a flower. It actually feels very in character and would be an iconic moment of the show.

[@dinosaurpolitician3663]

I can't wait for Doctor Who in 10 years when they actually can use the 2020 pandemic as a setting

[@DarkDaysOfficial]

That's if it's not cancelled by then.

[@robbycooper6787]

Why haven't they used the crusifiction of Jesus or the industrial revolution as a location yet

[@DarkDaysOfficial]

@@robbycooper6787 The crucifixion is probably because they're worried about the back lash from religious groups.

[@robbycooper6787]

@@DarkDaysOfficial ok fair enough but in episode 3 of season 10 they said Jesus was whitewashed or something idiotic like that

[@RipOffProductionsLLC]

@@robbycooper6787 wasn't there an episode with victorian era steampunk cybermen?

[@iamtheecho]

Only about an hour into this so forgive me if this idea comes up. Time travel question that's always asked. "if you had a time machine would you go back and kill (insert big historical bad here)?" Doctor and Jodi land in 2020 and go to the unveiling of a big new tech thing that's going to "revolutionize the world as we know it"! Then a Time Traveling Assassin shows up and it looks like hes here to kill the tech guy, because the new gizmo must go bad in the future and the assassins here to stop that from happening. The Doctor and Jodi spend the episode running around protecting tech guy from the assassin, only to find out the assassin is here for Jodi. The unveiling is a big event that's well documented in the future. its common knowledge that Jodi was defiantly their before her rise to power, that's why the assassin picked this day because he knew where she would be and she wouldn't be protected by guards yet. This could be the way she finds something must go bad in her future but what?

[@Jedi_Spartan]

Wasn't the idea of a time travelling assassin the starting point for Day of the Daleks?

[@iamtheecho]

@@Jedi_Spartan Indeed lovely call back, also The Doctor was basically supposed to be a time traveling assassin in Genesis of the Daleks

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Brilliant Idea!

[@ewanfawkes2708]

I actually wrote this out as a full story in a comment of mine.

[@backerthehacker3700]

Mad how they put together a better season of doctor who in four and a half hours than chibs did in over four and a half months

[@Lizzieaftermidnight]

Yeah I'd watch the shit out of this than season 11/12

[@auto_mata]

If you were going to do that pub episode, might be a nice touch to have the Doctor's Psychic Paper fail to work inexplicably. Only to later, shock reveal, determine that the officers on the street rarely read anyone's papers, just purely use that as a pretense.

[@Colouroutofspace4]

Or because Jodie knows about psychic papers for having traveled with thr doctor, the police have cyber technology to see through it.

[@SpirusOfH]

This is over a year old but I have to say that this is genius!

[@adamfreddo5703]

Be a neat little twist if maybe the dalek collector is one of the last of the Thal race and has an alterior motive of punishing Daleks as revenge for wiping out his race.

[@bellboy7809]

Here’s an idea for a new doctor introduction. You do a season with a new, but well experienced doctor, a doctor who (!) has obviously been doing their thing for a while. They meet the companion, they recruit them, they have a romp or two, but eventually, they get separated. When the companion is about to die, they get rescued by... the previous doctor? Previous doctor gets an episode or two, companion is confused but roles with it, than BAM. Previous doctor ends up regenerating, becoming new doctor, the one we started the season with. This could be a single season thing, probably two seasons at least. Was that articulate? Probably not. Was it basically Charley Polard’s story, but slightly different? Yeah, basically. Is it an interesting structure for a TV show? I very much think so.

[@benpriest9555]

Yeah I think that would be an interesting idea for probably only one season

[@HiperPivociarz]

Jay, I have an idea for your pitch. How about the guy says 'You must hear it a lot, but you remind em of Jodie Queen", and instead of being scared, Jodie is ecstatic to learn she goes on to become a historical figure, until she finds out she becomes a historical figure for all the wrong reasons.

[@Jedi_Spartan]

I've just listened to Human Resources from the first of the Big Finish EDAs, that seems similar to something that gets revealed about Lucie Miller.

[@MrDarthT]

CGI Alan Rickman, voiced by Benedict Cumberbatch.

[@greghawkins59]

I'd like a cyberman story where they aren't a struggling colony but instead a rich and prosperous society where each person who becomes a cyberman can customise their cyber-suit however they like, there would be so much room for expérimentation with cool designs.

[@Real_Dystopian]

That’s a good idea! Mind if I use it?

[@greghawkins59]

@@Real_Dystopian go for it, I'd love to see the results

[@boogiebot2279]

Out of interest, how would each person express themselves when the cyber men have repressed all of their emotions( so that they don’t self destruct). Presumably their creativity would also be gone, as other than some past memories there is nothing to distinguish between cyber men. Not saying it’s a bad idea, just an interesting element to incorporate into the story.

[@greghawkins59]

@@boogiebot2279 well seen as there wouldn't be the need to get rid of all emotions maybe it would just be negative emotions like pain and fear that would be removed, allowing creativity and imagination to remain.

[@boogiebot2279]

@@greghawkins59 It could also link into moral questions about if fear is a necessary evil or if disgust simply ruins the world. Or it could be ignored if moral questions with the cyber men have been overdone at this point.

[@Jack91790]

"David Tennant again"

[@ChrisSchwally]

I watched all 4 hours, and honestly I'm hype for this, and now I'm sad this isn't a thing

[@TheJaviferrol]

"Time travel show with a female who finds out the time of her death and that it was a housefire" Stuart just came up with the Outlander Season 4-5 plotline

[@vadandrumist1670]

As they say, nothing is original.

[@strbourne]

I like how Stu keeps trying to get Jay banned and immediately giving up

[@Colouroutofspace4]

The Doctor tries to reform Margret Thatcher.

[@joekreissl4499]

that exact premise was already done in the episode 'the satan pit'

[@spyderhobit]

That’s hilarious that someone suggested David Tenant!! 2 years later and it’s true!

[@MrDarthT]

I think "Dalek, But Again" should end with the companion sending a message to the Dalek Empire to save the captured Daleks, but causes the entire planet they're on to be sterilised. And then they also destroy the captured Daleks because of them being too insane to live. Then The Doctor basically ends the story saying "told you so".

[@RipOffProductionsLLC]

I like Jay's idea that this episode doesn't show the true terrifying might of The Daleks, just imply it from that the vindictive veteran and the Doctor say about them, and maybe the brief PTSD nightmare the vet has as the cold open, and maybe a few ruins/war memorials outside.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

I like the idea that Jodie begins to sympathise with the tortured Daleks and tries to help them only for the Daleks to pull the rug out from beneath her. Most of them kill themselves but several hatch a plan to kill the collector. They kill a bunch of people before taking Jodie and some others as hostages. In the end though, the new Dalek that has not yet been tortured kills all the tortured Daleks and the Doctor manages to save most of the hostages. Jodie, however, gets trapped with the new Dalek who is about to exterminate her when the oldest Dalek arrives and exterminates it. By this point the Doctor has made it into the room and is about to kill the Dalek but then the Dalek begs for mercy. The Doctor still doesn't believe that a Dalek can change but Jodie does not agree. She ends up managing to talk the Doctor into helping the Dalek which they take to another planet for it to begin a new life.

[@banielthomson]

25:25 do be seeming extra comical now huh

[@Yan_Alkovic]

Wow, that bit where you explained the human-like aliens was just brilliant! That's gonna be my headcannon now.

[@catmaster2231]

funny comment

[@Hypershock93]

I'm just past halfway thru at this point, but when they suggest the robot fakeout/voices in the head thing, I kept going MAKE IT ABOUT THE CYBERMEN!! You can hint that She may or may not have taken the supplements/upgrades and is being converted, but the twist is she hasn't and does the thing all of her own volition

[@mitchellsmith2628]

25:25 aged like a fine wine

[@jartism]

I really think there is a lot of opportunity for interesting arcs and stories to be had by having a companion from a different time era or country. It would be a great breath if fresh air after every single new who companion coming from 20th century England

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Some other alterations I would make would be swapping 2060 and the prisoners. I feel this would work better because we have 2060 as the big fallout between the Doctor and Jodie and so the Doctor tries to return her to her home but then he accidentally drops her off in 2060. The other would be replacing 'The Human Revolution' (when was the revolution?) with a present day Earth episode. The premise I thought of the Doctor and Jodie return to Newcastle two months later and hear about strange stuff going on in the city. I feel it should set some things up for the finale, perhaps Arthur (Who I mentioned in another comment) appears as a preacher in a pub. We also get some more character development for James (another character I made up) who helps the Doctor and Jodie solve the problem but decides not to join our Tardis team in the end.

[@marshmallowdoom7720]

This series would be so good and I love the arc idea. I need that Sontaran episode.

[@erinecho1735]

can't believe you didnt put forward Mauler to play the new doctor

[@Lizzieaftermidnight]

I assumed that the house fire was caused by her computer overheating, she spends so much time using it to Google how to avoid said fire, that it overheats and catches fire

[@thejintymyster6396]

That would be really good

[@Lizzieaftermidnight]

@@thejintymyster6396 thx

[@eliotmccann2589]

That was thoroughly enjoyable, gents- and quite feasible too. Very well done!

[@iHDFootball]

I feel emotionally invested and now need this to happen.

[@jackdriffill2394]

I like all their episode ideas save for episode one, they briefly discussed an idea where an organism is inside a closed facility during lockdown and it’s growing unchecked which while not intentional will become hazardous, my idea would be it is an invisible or hidden organism that releases poison gas as a defence mechanism when others get close and the lockdown is coming to an end so leisure centres like the building the creature is in are about to be reopened, and this gives a clear opportunity to show Jodie’s moral compass while also showing how our new(?) doctor will react to this unintentional threat

[@moondowntheface6282]

I've always thought of Brian Cox, the Scottish actor who plays William Stryker in X-Men as a potential doctor (obviously not the scientist), shouldn't you be resurrecting some of the classic villains such as Omega, The Rani, Borusa, The Celestial Toymaker, The Black Guardian, The War Chief and The Meddling Monk.

[@GeekyGuy.]

I love that you're making jokes about Tennant coming back... but it actually seems like he might according to all the rumours

[@notaninstrument7707]

Who else comes back to watch this all the time

[@notaninstrument7707]

I do, Not an Instrument. I do.

[@blubbree2263]

idea for the dawn of man 2 part, there was a decrease in human populations around 75,000 years ago to less than 10,000 breeding adults and this could be set then and the doctor and Jodie go back to investigate what happened (could feed into the pop science interest Jodie has too as that makes the rounds on archaeology youtube regularly) it would be a good way to sci-fi explain a somewhat unexplained thing in our human past, great job guys!!

[@noahjohnson5603]

Wasn’t Moffat the one who said the first two incarnations were color blind? In the Day of the Doctor novelization?

[@Simplayified]

I love the idea of The doctor post regeneration working in a soup kitchen, dressed like a homeless person and he doesn't know who he is yet but he is a regular because he is stalking out the place because there is something shifty going down and he feels the need to help.

[@PandanaJim]

I made my own Doctor Who seasons and this is surprisingly similar

[@Morphstock]

Episode idea - A Night On The Toon With The Cybermen - the Cybermen go out drinking in Newcastle and get a such a bad kicking that The Doctor has ro rescue them.

[@hada__02]

Lowkey really want to write Tomorrow’s world as an actual script now, great vid!

[@microchoc]

to be fair i would listen to Stewart reading the TOS

[@markbechtold7372]

For the doctor, either Damien Lewis or Richard Coyle. Also, for dark star trek, you guys should watch DS9.

[@tovarischkrasnyjeshi]

I feel like I'd have a hard time not just writing myself into a companion role. Go about looking at the sentimental scientific things, like points in the formation of earth and sun, evolution of life, key points in prehistory, future events of human achievements, the end of earth, humanity, etc. But try to go to key points in the character's life, trying to bring back loved ones or play with dead pets or kind of thing, and drive this incredible wedge between the doctor and a companion who can't understand why he doesn't fix great atrocities like nazis or such. Sort of make the Doctor do Time Lord Victorious in reverse.

[@legofan370]

"Native people killed, that's a nice one." - Jay Exci, Empress of Milk 2020

[@Jedi_Spartan]

8:01 Weird coincidence that I rewatched Love and Monsters yesterday as part of my semi binge of New Who (2/3 episodes per day because of school work and other things I need to do). On the topic of that, dear God, what was Russell thinking with that last line?! 1:04:21 I think someone thought of that for the Silurians in Stubagful's Snuggly Chibnall Time while watching Hungry Earth/Cold Blood. BTW, I'd watch the shit out of this season.

[@somethingblueaudio]

Listening to this is spooky because in my previous show we did the "Companion is actually a dark historical figure" arc but with the companion concealing it from the Doctor instead.

[@nancyhi8357]

one single eisode of this would have more value than all of the chibnall era combined

[@thatgaiagirl6788]

Came back to this because it’s great and immediately had a lil idea: you can add foreshadowing in the Sontaran episodes by having Jodie become the (possibly self-elected) leader of the little village and almost lead them to destruction early by thinking her way is right. Also i kinda feel like the Dalek episode should be before the Jodie reveal so we can go straight from that to the Finale, but thats pretty minor.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Great idea, perhaps at first she helps the aliens but then they and the Sontarons all get the false impression that she is some kind of god and the Sontarons kidnap her which forces the Doctor to have to go to the City of Sontar to rescue her.

[@thelegendthemyththeman4772]

You could have hade her being the reason for the Dalek invasion of earth the companion

[@Yan_Alkovic]

Am I the only one who persistently pictured Jodie Queen as Jodie Whittaker? Also I am _super_ thrilled with what you've come up with! This is really cool stuff, if only you could make it! Maybe you could actually write out all of the episodes and then get together other DW fans who are also decent voice actors and then release it on your channels? Yeah, that sounds like too much of a bother, and it'd be hard for you guys to write it all and then find actors and then do the FX for the audio... Still, one can dream, eh?

[@Lumancer]

It is a shame that none of the rejected pun titles included "The Red Queen Hypothesis", it actually fits this arc you've set out for the companion quite well. This was a fun exercise, thank you for sharing it!

[@David-cg1lh]

The red queen?

[@cryptkeeperthe9634]

Can I use some of these for my upcoming Doctor Who RPG campaign? It's a Ninth Doctor campaign featuring an alien like Frobisher but instead of a Penguin Noir Detective, he's an orangutan salesman, we got a literal Lord of the Rings Elf from Middle Earth, a human like alien that likes killing, and a Quantum Physics grad named Revvy from 2021 California who is deathly afraid of Raccoons.

[@cryptkeeperthe9634]

For anyone interested in learning more, the first adventure is in Aperture Labs from portal, with GLaDOS is trying to acquire the TARDIS to better use the multidimensional portal. That's how the elf, Feaa, comes in. The party wakes up in the lab and basically have to work their way to the TARDIS. The second adventure will feature the Dyatlov Pass Incident.

[@pwaaoolhtims4344]

Dalek+Man=Dan... Evil Dan

[@maus6967]

OMFG I MISSED THIS ONE TOO

[@markpatrick2735]

cyberman one would work best if it was only a single cyberplanner doing propaganda from the shadows

[@louiswright8282]

I've got a feeling stu is gonna make a fury from the deep sequel sooner or later.

[@junegeeitisahardgfulmer7911]

This is genuinely great.

[@HiperPivociarz]

Meanwhile at Lucasfilm, a few years ago: Rian Johnson: One of them needs to be the shit one J.J. ABrams writing one: One... or two... shitty movies. Done.

[@Yan_Alkovic]

To Stu's question at the end: learning about theoretical physics and also learning languages.

[@catmaster2231]

funny comment

[@hannabelphaege3774]

English Bobby helmet with the cyber handles

[@JRHainsworth]

Every tiem I looked at their word document I lost my shit

[@johnwhittington2998]

I’ve always Rated Tim Roth as a potential doctor

[@greghawkins59]

Wait no the twist should be she does a genesis of the daleks type thing where she destroys the entire planet in order to prevent the sontarans doing all the terrible things they go on to do but a small group of sontarans escape and spread propaganda about her and then clone themselves and become the warrior race they're known as.

[@MrDarthT]

If you go with a Sontaran genesis story, I would go with the idea that the Rutan-Sonataran was has been going on for a while. The government of Sontar wants to end the war and negotiate peace because of how much of their resources are being spent on the war. The civilians are starving/ dying of plague, or something. When the warrior caste finds out, they choose to kill off the civilians and government of their world. The Doctor and this "Jodie Queen" character stumble upon this, and The Doctor knows they can't do anything because the Sontarans are an important part of the universe's history.

[@deltathetastudios2776]

Genesis of the War Beni

[@Colouroutofspace4]

David Lewis would be a great doctor. From Dirk Gently's Holistic Detective Agency would be great as the doctor. Plus he'd be a ginger so that's a plus

[@clam6254]

“david tennant again, teeheeheehee” 😐

[@Jedi_Spartan]

25:25 "Well..."

[@fotzegamingandmedia1840]

I wish all the other British Massives were apart of this talk

[@austinfletchermusic]

The only hesitation I have here is in Silver Salvation. Someone might see "Bad faith actors convincing other people to modify their bodies" and go "Oh, it''s the transes." So, just to counter that, I vote for making the local anti-Cyberman activist trans. As long as it's made evident in the episode in some way, it doesn't even have to be mentioned. Just as a "No, fuck you, this is about people ignoring evidence so that they can keep their hateful worldview and not deal with the real problems!"

[@samshaw3657]

mad clicking right to get passed stu not knowing if chats working

[@moondowntheface6282]

Several Scottish Doctors, by several, you mean three, Sylvester, Tennant and Capaldi, that's only three

[@ryanwilliams9712]

...The definition of several is "more than 2, but not many"

[@moondowntheface6282]

@@ryanwilliams9712 I never said that wasn't the definition, 70 years is still several, most people use it now for more than eight but the original definition still applies I guess

[@toanoopie34]

@@moondowntheface6282 'most people use it now for more than eight' Do they? I think it depends on context. If you know that there are only a little over a dozen doctors, then 'several' restricts it quite significantly - between three at the low end and 5-6 at the high end. After all, if there were any more than that, the chosen word would almost certainly have been 'most', not 'several'.

[@microchoc]

alliance. Antonyms: disunion, enmity, divorce, discord, disruption, antagonism, separation, estrangement, hostility.

[@RipOffProductionsLLC]

I think Rival might have been the word they were looking for...

[@greghawkins59]

Going off that dalek episode idea, surely the finale should be the companion teaming up with that one surviving dalek (who they saved and bonded with) to enact "justice".

[@NotAvalible324]

I’m 4 years late but I like the idea of Tom Hiddleston as the doctor.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Here's the full plot for the return to Earth story I created called 'Time Machines'. Notable Characters: The Doctor Jodie James (Jodie's friend) Arthur (Future leader of Britain) Opens with a strange figure called Blake appearing in Newcastle and getting in a fight with a pair of drunk people which he dominates. He then scans them both, throws one of them into the river and shoots the other one. Intro James is walking along a street when he hears the TARDIS. He runs round a corner whilst The Doctor lands the TARDIS, he congratulates himself on being only two weeks from the night they left on. James then enters, The Doctor makes a remark about knocking and Jodie and James reunite. Meanwhile, at a large mansion house, a pair of inventors called Stafford and Liberty are conducting a scientific experiment with a group of scientists. A reporter then arrives to interview Stafford. Jodie goes to college and makes up a lie about her going on holiday. She then goes to James’ flat where The Doctor is checking the news whilst James is grumbling at him. Jodie then comes in and she and James catch up on each other’s activities. The Doctor hears about the recent spree of serial killings and sees an interview on James’ television with Brisco Stafford who says he has invented a machine that will 'change the future'. The Doctor is intrigued and asks James if he has a car. James asks why but The Doctor isn’t interested in explaining. He tells Jodie and James to come with him and put on something formal. The Doctor changes his tie and the three drive to a big house on the outskirts of Newcastle where Stafford is unveiling his machine. The Doctor uses psychic paper to get Liberty to guide them to the demonstration stage. A crowd of reporters and journalists are there including Arthur. The Doctor hands James and Jodie psychic papers and, after asking The Doctor about his plan, they learn he doesn’t have one and so go to the free buffet. Arthur tries interviewing Stafford but Stafford isn’t interested and instead goes outside to greet the press. Meanwhile Blake has arrived at the house on a motorcycle and is watching the news report on a Sightglass (the future equivalent of a mobile phone). He leaves the motorcycle by a telegraph post and attaches a box to it. He then walks over the grounds. Stafford gives a speech about the ‘Stafford Walls’ which The Doctor makes fun of. Stafford switches the machine on which generates a blue wall around the house. Blake sees it and is surprised but keeps walking. The Doctor is unimpressed until Stafford demonstrates that the walls are actually harmful to move through. The walls then drop and the spectators wander off whilst The Doctor goes after Stafford as he believes the machine could be dangerous. Stafford thanks the scientists and goes upstairs. One of the scientists then notices that the ‘Stafford Walls’ are still active and tells another scientist to go into another room to check the electric generators where they find Blake who has broken into the house and tampered with the generators. The scientist tries to stop him but gets scanned by Blake and then killed by him. The Doctor tricks Liberty into introducing him to Stafford and begins asking Stafford about the machine. Stafford indirectly reveals he kept it from when he was an employee at Torchwood 1. They then notice that the walls are still active. Meanwhile two reporters have a chat and one goes to the bathroom. Blake then comes out of the power room to encounter another scientist. He scans her but doesn’t kill her and instead knocks her out with a syringe. Then the reporter exits from the bathroom and is scanned by Blake. She walks away, sees him bring out his gun, runs to the door and gets shot in front of the other guests. The Doctor, Liberty and Stafford are arguing when they hear the spectators screaming and go to see what is going on. Blake scans the reporter whilst the spectators escape down a corridor. He then knocks out the reporter before getting a glass thrown at him by Jodie. He tries to scan her but she is pulled aside by James. They run down a corridor whilst Blake shoots at them. They make it round a corridor and encounter The Doctor, Liberty and Stafford as some other spectators rush past them whilst others go to the front door and outside. They, along with Jodie and James hide in a room with some other spectators who try to call the police but get no signal. Meanwhile the other scientist is listening to music when they reach the entrance. They then notice that the shields are still active. Just then a group of people appear, one tries to go through then but gets shocked by the wall, they shout at the scientist and the scientist hurries back to switch it off. Meanwhile another group tries to break out and can’t so they hide in some bushes. The characters upstairs grab weapons such as snooker cues and head downstairs to find Blake. They search the rooms but only find other spectators as well as the spectators with the scientist. The scientist has found that the machine is broken and she and Stafford are trying to fix it. The other spectator is trying to do CPR on the scientist that was knocked out. The Doctor does a quick assessment and concludes they were attacked with a non-fatal type of poison created in the 2030's. The characters then discuss how to escape and James asks if they have any other shields. Stafford says he doesn’t but Liberty says she does. Stafford is confused but Liberty admits that she has been cloning the machine in order to recreate it. The pair begin to argue but are quickly snapped out of it by The Doctor and Liberty rushes off to find it. Blake locates the people in the bushes using a heat detector whilst they organize a plan to escape. Meanwhile Liberty brings in the shield and The Doctor takes it so he can interrogate Blake saying ‘You can’t fight fire with fire’. The old man then runs off to distract Blake and gets immediately stunned by Blake who then runs across to scan the younger man escaping. He scans him and the man begins running back to the bushes when he gets shot by Blake just as The Doctor appears at the top of a bank. Blake scans him but doesn’t get any information on his device and The Doctor assesses that Blake is only killing certain people. He then realizes that the people Blake is killing are significant future figures. Meanwhile Arthur is still in the bushes trying to watch what is happening. The other person with him is trying to pull him away and he finally agrees. In the house the other survivors are watching The Doctor whilst Stafford, Liberty and the scientist try to fix the machine to lower the walls. One of the people then notices the shield systems are breaking down due to a lack of power. Jodie goes to inform The Doctor but James warns her it could be dangerous. Jodie slaps James and tells him about what she's been through. She then creeps outside accompanied by James. Part 1/2

[@ewanfawkes2708]

The Doctor asks Blake how he is intending to avoid the paradox this meddling will create. Blake explains that he has a machine that will preserve his consciousness and insert it into his 2020s self. The Doctor then looks down at his own paper and sees the message that his shield has failed. Blake then notices that The Doctor's shields are not appearing on his scanner anymore and that two humans have appeared on the heat detector. He starts shooting at the group but The Doctor throws himself to the ground in time and follows Jodie and James back into the house whilst Blake runs up the bank after them. In the house The Doctor orders most of the remaining humans to guard the windows. He gives Liberty's machine to Stafford and tells him to recharge it whilst he investigates the machine and asks Liberty if she has any plans for the device. She says she has them in her car and goes to find them whilst Stafford sits and grumbles. The Doctor tells him he is a massive hypocrite which finally shuts him up. They then hear a noise from one of the other rooms, they go to the door armed with knives, snooker cues and other weapons and open the door only to find Arthur and the other survivor. They head back through the house while a group of humans make a rudimentary blockage for the broken window. Meanwhile Liberty has found the blueprints in her car but then hears footsteps from behind her. She turns around to be immediately scanned by Blake. She screams and the other characters hear her and race out to help. Blake tries to stun Liberty but she tries to fight him just as the others appear and gets shot instead. Stafford is furious and charges at Blake brandishing a cue. Blake scans him and tries to stun him but Stafford wrestles the stun weapon off him. Blake then shoots Stafford instead and the rest of the characters run back into the house. With the inventors killed, The Doctor is out of options. The remaining scientist then has an idea. She goes to the dead scientist’s bag, searches through it and finds blueprints for the machine explaining that there had to be a reason she was killed by Blake. The Doctor is impressed and they both hurry off to repair the machine. Meanwhile Arthur has taken command of the other humans and they have placed several piles of chairs in front of the doors. They pause for a breath and and most head to the workshop, whilst Arthur and some others keep guard with some weapons, not noticing the sound of something breaking. In the workshop the scientist and The Doctor along with Jodie and James have almost finished repairing the machine when they realize they are still without power. The Doctor, the scientist and Jodie hurry off and make it to the generator room where, after some figuring out, they manage to switch the power back on and the shields outside fall. The scientist, Jodie and The Doctor then go to leave but are confronted by Blake who tries to shoot them. Blake’s bullets, however, are stopped by Liberty’s shield. The shield, however, is rapidly running out of power whilst Blake stands between them and the door. Back in the workshop, James has noticed a broken window on the other side of the house and, realizing that Blake must have broken back into the house, runs off down the corridors. Meanwhile Jodie is trying to talk Blake out of killing them but Blake refuses however and raises his gun to shoot them. They close their eyes just as Blake gets hit across the head with a snooker cue. They open them just as the shield falls to see James holding it. After this Blake is carried into the living room by Jodie and the scientist whilst The Doctor and James go outside. The Doctor investigates the box on the telegraph pole and tells James that this is what was stopping the telephones. He then removes it and James immediately calls the police and ambulance service. Back in the house Jodie treats Blake’s wounds whilst he lies on the settee when he stands up, pushes her to the wall and holds a knife to her neck. Then, suddenly, a shot is heard and Blake falls to the floor. Jodie turns to see Arthur holding Blake’s gun. Jodie thanks him and The Doctor and some other people come in. They crowd around Blake whilst Arthur shakes The Doctor's hand and reveals who he is. He leaves and The Doctor stands still looking surprised. It ends with Jodie in hospital talking to James about the day’s events. He asks her what she wants to do and if she wants to continue travelling with The Doctor? Back at the TARDIS The Doctor is filing all the information on the shield machines whilst the scientist is looking around. The Doctor asks what will happen to Stafford’s property and the scientist reveals she will inherit it and she was in fact Stafford’s niece. The Doctor then asks if she wants to travel with him but she politely turns down his offer saying she is more interested in physics than fighting. On returning to her flat. Jodie makes up her mind to go with the Doctor. She packs up a rucksack. Gives James a hug and exchanges playful banter with him and then walks along the street to the TARDIS where she finds the Doctor looking at a screen. She asks if he still wants her to travel with him and he replies yes. He then asks about where she wants to go and she suggests some distant planet in the far future. She goes off to put her bag away and we cut to a shot of the screen the Doctor was looking at. It shows a picture of present day Jodie with text saying ‘Jodie Queen’, ‘Went missing for two weeks in August 2020’ and ‘Historical figure’. Part 2/2

[@English_Thespian]

Hey, just wanted to say this is an excellent storyboard! It sounds like a fun episode in itself, but also fits into the wider plot well. Very nice. It also has a few opportunities for really cool moments of staging and camera work. I especially like the idea of everyone celebrating at the end with Jodie and James foregrounded, then a reverse shot of Arthur leaning into the Doctor and him looking intrigued, then listening, then surprised, then Arthur walks away leaving him concerned. You continue the video of Doctor/Arthur but with the audio of James/Jodie and/or some light mysterious music to signpost what is happening, so you cannot hear what is being said just the Doctors reaction. Then he approaches James and Jody and when they ask what's up the Doctor gestures back to Arthur and says something like "oh, just finally getting a proper introduction". This suffices for the moment but leaves the audience wondering. Edit: One potential problem I have with your episode idea having thought about it is that it feels like quite an "introductory" story. It feels like it's setting things up for the future rather than cashing in on any big developments or revelations from prior to this episode. If you want this to be the Episode Seven Silver Salvation replacement for the "you know who you remind me of?" moment, you probably need Jodie to take more initiative and be more independent of the Doctor, to reflect the character development she's already got from Under Siege/City of Sontar.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

@@English_Thespian Thanks for the reply! I'll jot it down for when I write the script.

[@English_Thespian]

@@ewanfawkes2708 Of course! I really like brainstorming with other writers :)

[@ewanfawkes2708]

@@English_Thespian I was thinking more of it being episode six with TUCODJ&MH being seven, SS being eight and TDOM and THR being a single episode nine. I also thought since the Sontar episodes would have been quite heavy for Jodie (TCOS in my version ends with a giant massacre) then in would have made sense for Jodie to want to return back home. I also quite liked the idea that at the end after seeing how drab her everyday life was once she gets back and her slowly deciding to keep travelling with The Doctor. The end scene with her giving a vague answer as to where she wants to go is meant to symbolize some character development in that she's less assertive of the places she wants to go and instead wants to travel with The Doctor more for the enjoyment of the experience than anything else.

[@TheGodOfGravy]

Get Robert Kazinsky, the guy who played The Don, to be The Doctor.

[@moondowntheface6282]

Richard E. Grant was promised the role of The Ninth, he got the Shalka instead

[@QazwerDave]

The 2060 episode should be called 2084 !!

[@bellboy7809]

Sorry to say it, but The First Sontarans did the sontaran origin story first. Not that non-tv Doctor Who ideas being used in tv Doctor Who is unusual, but it’s been done. Regardless, you’ve created a good, compelling idea for a two parter.

[@NATHAN-gl9ns]

I know I'm a lot of months late but I'd go with Stephen Mangan as the doctor, or alternatively Patterson Joseph as a similar doctor to the marquis de cabaras

[@greghawkins59]

The shit episode can be an animal farm piss take where the different flavour cows take on that animal's place in the story.

[@MANGOM1LK]

jay the series 3 stream has mysteriously gone missing where is it 😭

[@Logan_Irrelevant]

There was a season three stream?

[@agentofentertainment1361]

“Hello,Now I am The Doctor. Ho Ho Ho.” I personally would love to see Matt Ryan(Constantine),Ioan Grufford(Forever,Fantastic four),and Matthew grey gruber(Criminal Minds) as the doctor.

[@JoeStringfellow-z6b]

i watched these two youtubers seperately i didn't realise they were friends lol

[@EvieOConnorxoxo]

So Jekyll and Hyde is like the books in the Goosebumps movie?

[@Dancole20]

I am against this Nardole erasure

[@JohnnyFWA]

If the doctor Jekyll man hears the voices for the first time while he’s writing the story, why do they go away when he writes it again? The first time he writes it, he gets a voice, and the second time, he loses it. It doesn’t make sense.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

I was thinking about this. The story could begin with the Doctor in the Tardis noticing that several examples of his gothic literature have gone missing with the oldest being 'Doctor Jekyll and Mr Hyde'. He and Jodie go to Bournemouth in 1885 and meet Stevenson who is considering giving up writing as it is hurting him mentally. The Doctor is worried that Stevenson giving up could damage history and so decides to use a telepathic device in the Tardis to read Stevenson's mind. It turns out there is some sort of creature that is living in Stephenson's mind and is slowly taking over his entire thinking process. The Doctor and friends manage to get rid of the Living Idea but Stevenson is still doubtful about whether he should continue writing and the Doctor (who has gone through an arc about letting people make their own decisions) tells him it is his choice. We then get a montage of Stephenson rewriting the book from scratch, struggling at first but gradually becoming happy with it and the last scene is him reading it in a theatre. He leaves the stage and goes into a dressing room where he finds the Doctor and Jodie. The Doctor shakes his hand and then asks him to sign his own copy of 'Doctor Jekyll and Mr Hyde', he begins reading the copyright information and notices the book is from the future. He stands in awe now knowing that his work will be remembered for hundreds of years whilst the Doctor and Jodie walk off, happy in the thought that they helped Stevenson out.

[@Julia33066]

Could I use these concepts but write scripts lol?

[@MyNameIsExci]

Sure!

[@Julia33066]

@@MyNameIsExci thanks!

[@Nthn1vry]

Can't believe i've only just watched this, my own story i'm working on has boiled sweet drugs.

[@ginge641]

3:16:20 Okay but how in the literal fuck would that threat ever work against a time traveller? If The Doctor gets the message across time and space, they can just arrive on the Cybermen planet before any killing can happen.

[@bowsernator438]

LOL the queen died 3:45:50

[@Mooglatan]

25:25 LMAO

[@strbourne]

I sorted the comments by new as soon as they said that to find this 😂

[@Strangepaper]

Simon Pegg

[@MrDarthT]

Here's an idea that's stuck in my head. The season starts with The Doctor meeting their new companion. Half-way through the season, The Doctor decides that the companion doesn't have what it takes, and tries to kick them out. It's then revealed that the companion is the next Doctor. The rest of the season has the current Doctor trying to get the next Doctor to reveal how they regenerate. Just before the finale, it's revealed that the next Doctor doesn't know how they regenerated because of the multi-Doctor amnesia. Which means that the current Doctor is doomed to regenerate while travelling with the next Doctor, causing the current Doctor to resent the next Doctor, and blame them for the regeneration. The season ends with the newly regenerated Doctor waking up next to their TARDIS and deciding to go back in time to figure out how they regenerated. Then, you re-watch the entire season from that Doctor's perspective.

[@NathanTAK]

Holy shit

[@legofan370]

Where would the "next Doctor" go and would they have regenerated because of them?

[@benpriest9555]

that sounds amazing

[@ishaandw]

Jay and Stu confirmed showrunners of Doctor Who in 2024 after Chibnall delivers a disappointing 60th Anniversary.

[@ewanfawkes2708]

Sadly they had to turn it down do to scheduling conflicts. Some chap called Russel got given it instead.

[@thelegendthemyththeman4772]

Review some classic stories Please