4 Tips to IMPROVE YOUR WRITING! How to Write Concisely and Clearly

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

😁 Hi everyone! Thanks for watching! Join my list to get emails from me: bit.ly/3QzoGgI Find my videos helpful? 😃 You can buy me a coffee to show your support here: ko-fi.com/learnacademicenglish QUESTION: Can you write these sentences again more concisely? Let me know in the comments below. 1. Being professional is really important and the key to success. 2. Finding a job with good hours and that has good wages is very necessary. 3. Students who go to university they often need student loans to pay for tuition. 👍 WHAT TO WATCH NEXT: How to Add Citations to Avoid Plagiarism (in MLA and APA Style): kzbin.info/www/bejne/hpCbqWyFqZx4Z7s English WRITING Lessons: kzbin.info/aero/PLTaPDxv5nudk2w9s_xU4zrbQ3NJuiaMh3 English SENTENCES Playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLTaPDxv5nudkueBaTBejyvPM8tFNj-Wda How to Write RESEARCH QUESTIONS: kzbin.info/www/bejne/r6mmlWuNorqDrMk How to Write TITLES: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hoLKn6ppq5x5kNk Grammar lessons: kzbin.info/aero/PLTaPDxv5nudnbMc7WK5e6Hz1EQrz49Yvd My book recommendations for English learners: amzn.to/3xg7zXD 😊 Thanks for watching! See you again soon!

[@charlesgoodyear3050]

1. An aid to being successful is being professional. 2. It is essential to find a job with good hours and wages. 3. Students attending university often require student loans to pay for tuition.

[@angeloangelo1169]

Hi, Can you advice me a writer who writes concisely ? Thanks

[@Hhx777]

Hello,Thankyou for sharing these amazing tips...this is a major problem of my essay writing. Did an attempt of writing it concisely: 1) Being professional is important and key to success. 2) Finding a job with good hours and wages is necessary. 3) University students often need loans to pay for tuition.

[@KhadijaAhmadi-m9i]

Hello professor Jenna! 1-Being professional is important and key to success. 2- Finding a job with good salary is very necessary. 3- students who go to university often need student loans for tuition.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

@@KhadijaAhmadi-m9i Great job! In #1, you don't need to repeat the ideas of "important" and "key" because they have a similar meaning :)

[@Jimdunne_]

I am a native English speaker, but this video is excellent and will help me in the future.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

That's great to hear! Writing can be challenging for everyone!, native speakers and people who are learning English. I'm glad you found it helpful. 😊

[@LinoMalefo-km3sy]

In your teaching was very interseting to me; as a result i'am got more ideas so thank you very much and God bless you.

[@adi_ibnu]

I'm late for my "Writing concisely course". I forgot my Student ID. Hence, I couldn't get into the venue. Get over it and bumped into this video. thank you so much

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Love it! Thanks for letting me know 😊

[@nataliem1661]

you should make an entire video about specific vocabulary words to help write efficiently. it would be very helpful🙂

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hi Natalie, thanks for your suggestion! I had not thought of doing a video about specific words to write efficiently because the most important point is to avoid extra words or to not repeat yourself with similar words. If I can think of the types of words that you were asking for, I will make that video. Thanks again!

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[@danielmanyowa2013]

I'm learning a lot. I'm doing a BSc in Mass Communication

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad to hear you are learning some new things! Let me know if you have questions

[@discipleshipdevelopment757]

Communication is a powerful tool.

[@CouplesLite]

Thank you

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're welcome!

[@cinthiaki]

❤ Thanks for the tips

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're welcome!

[@harikeshbboy1670]

It has succeeded help me teacher amazing !

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

I'm so glad you found it useful! 👍👍

[@harikeshbboy1670]

It is great teacher !

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad you found it helpful! 😊

[@anv.4614]

Dear Teacher, I like every video from you as every of them is very knowledgeable. Thanks Ma´am. Warm greetings from Germany.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Happy to hear that! You are very welcome. 😊

[@himajareddy3196]

Wow! These tips are really useful. Thank you so much! Ma'am.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're most welcome 😊

[@mrinalaniteotia6235]

Precise and clear lecture, thank you so much! Please make more videos

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Thank you! I publish one new video per week as well as a few "shorts" with quick mini lessons every week.

[@kangjunandi5727]

thanks teacher, you help me lot

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You are welcome! Glad I could help 😀

[@k.b5589]

All your videos are beneficial and to the point. I learned a lot from you. Good job

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad to hear that! Thanks so much for sharing this feedback!

[@buklynade9272]

Thanks for the lesson.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

My pleasure!

[@justmatho7517]

good video, I received some helpful advice

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad you found it helpful! 😀

[@JamalBenyahia-y6n]

We need videos about advanced vocabulary . Please

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Any particular type of advanced vocabulary?

[@mohammedmohammed6918]

thanks

[@soniaqaderi5115]

thank you professor, the lesson was very useful. it help me alot.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You are welcome! Thanks for the comment, Sonia 😊

[@alebrasmith-cooper5250]

Thank you!

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

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[@HSTRgpt]

Thanku mam

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're very welcome!

[@learnenglishwithmrk6115]

Another really clear and helpful video.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Thank you! 😀

[@Chinathomas_]

I noticed that when I write I overthink or just write how I talk which is broken English. But I’m here to improve.. thank you

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

I think your feeling is normal. There are many strategies that you can use to improve your writing. It sounds like you are on the right track because you want to learn and are looking for resources. Let me know if you have questions. Good luck! 👍

[@shniii21]

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[@rduraij]

Super tips thank you madam

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're very welcome. I'm glad you found it helpful! 😀

[@harikeshbboy1670]

Mam I have question to you. So can you tell me how to do it ? How to increase vocabulary teacher ?

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hello! Good question!! Here are my tips for how to increase vocabulary. First, make vocabulary learning active. Don't just look at the words; quiz yourself, try to say them in a sentence, and practice the words over and over until you remember them. You can use the Quizlet app (free version) or website to make vocabulary lists or use the lists that are already on there. Then you can use Quizlet to practice with flashcards, quizzes, etc. Second, it's easy to forget, so you must practice new words over and over. Try to make a vocabulary list every week, and put the list on your bathroom mirror so you see it every day. Third, try to learn vocabulary by topic. For example, learn lots of vocabulary about sports, health, food, religion, etc. Learning related words that are all about the same topic can help you to remember them. What do you think? I hope these tips help! :)

[@NyashaMutasa-gx1pu]

Hy great teacher ,can you please make a video on argumentative compositions

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hello, sorry for the late reply. Your original comment went to the spam comments on KZbin, so I didn't see it. Yes, I will make a video about argumentative essays soon!

[@mavisopoku2864]

Thank you

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

You're welcome!

[@Prince-gb5lr]

Hi Jenna, what's the term called when you use a single word that explains a long sentence ?

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hi Prince! I hate to say it, but I don't exactly know! The only thing I can think of is "summary" because a summary expresses a much larger amount of text in a shorter way. When we teach writing, we often use words like "key word" or "key point" to describe an idea in a short way.

[@MahboobaHaidary-u5z]

very helpful

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad you think so!

[@amirsalabat4339]

This lesson was very useful. thank you

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Glad it was helpful!

[@zakariiraillen2559]

I have a suggestion for a video topic. One can find hundreds of youtube videos on phrasal verbs but nobody explain if we can drop the particule, for exemple, can one say "hurry" instead of "hurry up", "send" instead of "send off", just "listean" instead of "listen up". I noticed that non-native English speakers, myself included, have problem on when and if it is necesary to include a particule up, off.. etc. to a verb. I have two quick questions if you don't mind. First one, are no longer and no more interchangeable. Second one, in the show "America's got talent" do the Judges say "it' a yes FOR me" or "it's a yes FROM me" and there is a third question I just remebered, does one say "say hello to Bill FOR me" or "say hello to Bill FOR me". Thank you in advance.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

These are good questions and ones I hadn't really thought about before! There are some phrasal verbs that have particles that don't drastically change the meaning of the verb, and for those, yes, you can drop the particle. "Up" is the most common one I can think of (save money vs. save up money, etc.). I will try to explain this in more detail in another video. No longer and no more are not interchangeable. However, you can use these two: I no longer eat meat. I don't eat meat anymore. (You can't say "no more" in that sentence). Say hello to Bill FOR me. In this case, the person is doing something for you, meaning that he/she is doing it in your place, so we say "for me" The judges could say both, but they probably say "It's a yes for me" meaning that "my opinion is a yes." We sometimes say "it's a no for me" when we don't want to do something or disapprove of something. I hope that helps!

[@zakariiraillen2559]

Yes it does, I appreciate your explanations, thanks you so much !!

[@arnelmonares9242]

Can you teach me how to become fluent in speaking English.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

In my opinion, one important way to improve your speaking is to learn vocabulary so you can express yourself well. Practice using the vocabulary in sentences by yourself. Also, don't worry about making mistakes when you speak! :)

[@utsavdhyani8839]

Tips start from 3:23

[@satnamSingh-ni3oo]

Great video but i have bad habit that when ever i start writing i can stop my self or i can get satisfaction to write it without giving full explanation so how can solve it

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

The most important step when writing is to make an outline first. That helps you stay on track and keeps you organized.

[@zakariiraillen2559]

1. Being professional is the key to success. 2. Finding a job with good hours and wages is necessary. 3. Students often need loans to pay for tuition.

[@jollyholly2851]

You can still cut more words: 1. Professionalism is the key to success. 2. Finding a job with good hours and pay is necessary. 3. University students often need loans to pay tuition. For #3, "university" is a key word. Otherwise, you're not being clear: nursery school students? primary school students? high school students?

[@williwalt21]

is there any way i can practice these like math problems?

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Yes! I have a handout that I give my students to practice these. I will upload it here to the description box under the video this weekend, so please come back and get it.

[@atikhasan3730]

We want more videos from you...

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hi Atik! Thanks for your comment. April is one of my busiest months for work, so I am not making videos as often as usual. I will have a new one in the next 1-2 days. See you soon!

[@maninderkaur8101]

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[@rfes9321]

"Why is our English professor teaching the same way like you? Because English is my second language

[@ngonzale3]

Are there writers who are concise but you enjoy reading? How do we avoid the risks of being concise but dulling our writing? Thank you for the video.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Good point! One important point is that different purposes require different styles of writing. Writing that is done for school should usually be concise (especially in English). Creative writing, on the other hand, is different. However, because I teach English to learners of English, this video is geared toward people who may overuse words that have no particular purpose. For example, I saw this in one of my students' essays today: "in our daily lives, we share cultures through contact and communication" but in this case, we probably don't need both "contact" and "communication." Here's another: "English helps me achieve my dreams and goals." Those words have basically the same meaning here, so only one should be used.

[@ngonzale3]

@@LearnAcademicEnglish I'm grateful for your response. This has been incredibly helpful.

[@hibbaibrahim4812]

I'm a beginner how to start ?

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Hello! It's great that you are starting. If you want to learn English grammar, I recommend a grammar book like this one: amzn.to/4cPlE2R If you want to write essays, start here: kzbin.info/www/bejne/q3fcpqiJj76ej5o I don't really make videos for beginners, so there are not a lot of videos for beginning level here, but if you go to my grammar playlist, I think you can find some helpful videos: studio.kzbin.infoPLTaPDxv5nudnbMc7WK5e6Hz1EQrz49Yvd/videos Good luck with your learning journey! :)

[@hibbaibrahim4812]

@@LearnAcademicEnglish Thank you 😊

[@ts3858]

Lawyers and writing...

[@chamarawedamulla5264]

Thanks you for the video. I find this is very useful as I'm preparing for Cambridge English-CAE exam these days.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

That's great! I'm glad it was useful for you. I hope you do well on the test. Let me know 😀

[@chamarawedamulla5264]

@@LearnAcademicEnglish Of course! your explanations are very clear and to the point. Therefore non-native speakers can get the content very well. I find it useful and keep watching the other videos as well. Sure, I will definitely let you know ma'am. Thank you very much 🙂 ~I am from Sri Lanka.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

@@chamarawedamulla5264 Thank you so much!

[@ts3858]

She's a little wordy explaining some...

[@jollyholly2851]

1. Professionalism is the key to success. 2. Finding a job with good hours and pay is necessary. 3. University students often need loans to pay tuition.

[@LearnAcademicEnglish]

Perfect! :)