Comparing Poems: A Step By Step Guide (GCSE)

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[@captainarmz2134]

how has this only got 6 and a half thousand views ? - you deserve more - you have really helped me understand the comparison of 2 poems

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[@ycr-ez9vc]

Thank you Sir! This was a very well made video and it really helped me since I've been struggling to compare poems for the longest time and my teacher hasn't really taught us how to compare poems effectively so thank you so much for this video.

[@sabzeyab197]

I’m doing my GCSE’s in a couple of weeks and I was so so stressed that all of a sudden my grades have decreased in my mocks.. BECAUSE of poetry and my teacher hasn’t really been much of any help unfortunately but thankfully I’ve just found this KZbinr because now I’m finally finally understanding Anthology 😭💗

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what poem do u predict?

[@ayanal-amin8090]

Yh rn I’m stressed for eng poetry because my teacher hasn’t even covered the whole anthology and so I had around 6 whole poems that I haven’t covered at all but now I’ve got 3 left. Ngl I’m not sure about how I’m going to even practice with these poems

[@benrodman8013]

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[@tiaislam645]

@@ayanal-amin8090 omds sm Legit my mocks have started. I have literature tmrw. And we’ve only done ozymandias london war photographer and remains. But not even in depth. And we still have like 4 more or sumthn to do😪

[@dazbalz]

how did it go?

[@aisharahman4264]

I can't believe I'm just watching this now. I finally understand. Thank you.

[@Mayretired]

6:48 1 paragraph: Point Reference Technique Effect Connective (similarly, on the other hand) Point Reference Technique Effect Connective (in addition, adding onto) Zoom in (word) Effect (word) Connective ( furthermore, additionally) Zoom in (word) Effect (word) Link (Therefore, This links to)

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[@MrEverythingEnglish]

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[@divacandyful]

this was very helpful...just wished it watched this earlier😭 because i did a test TODAY on this and chose to to War photographer and remains but i've just realised how vague i am

[@someboredkid7933]

Hello,amazing video,I'm feeling more confident after watching it, but my only concern is inst the pargaph too long

[@kawlanonya833]

it took me 3 hours to do one paragraph..oml. the paragraph filled the whole page. do we actually have to do this 'paragraph' 3 times in an hour?? helppppp

[@Mary-jt2fv]

Poem A and Poem B: point, reference, technique, effect Poem B to Point A in addition, zoom in, effect Poem A to Poem B furthermore, zoom in, effect Therefore -> Link

[@KZ-vs7gz]

Is this all in one paragraph?

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[@mcrackz9729]

How many paragraphs of this?

[@srdsyndetical]

@@mcrackz9729 3 paragraphs - got gcses in almost a month and im awful at english lit so i came to this guy and it hopefully will help

[@reasalopal]

@@srdsyndetical 3 paragraphs?

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[@jasondabeast847]

So concise and easy to follow, I got an English lit mock tomorrow this has helped a lot. [EDIT]I got a 7, very happy w it.

[@MohammedHassan-cq4xr]

What was your mock questions on ? for the poetry and section A ?

[@jasondabeast847]

@@MohammedHassan-cq4xr for the poetry we had to compare bayonet charge to another poem and for section A we had to say how Macbeths fears are presented in an extract (I forgot what the extract was) and in the play as a whole.

[@triharders2456]

Nice I’ve got them tomorrow. I’m not strong with English tho

[@Samuel.Gry_]

​@@triharders2456what was your mock on in poetry?

[@ThomasMeeson]

while it is fairly similar, your PRTE structure seems to make a lot more sense to me than PETAL that I am taught are school

[@tombha23]

great video as always. I would say another reason why this question gets so low marks is because of having to remember multiple quotes from many different poems.

[@ms_ams8]

I agree and also context

[@GL887]

The amount of memory needed to get a high mark in eng lit is exhausting.Especially if you also have to learn how to write a good essay!

[@khayxx0]

15:45 whyd i acc start dying with laughter💀💀

[@rameenzzz]

Lmao

[@bkgamer1474]

Thanks a lot sir, you have helped a lot in English, and made it a lot easy.

[@promilarani1238]

Don’t we only get given one poem but then we have to use our own memory to remember quotes from another poem ?

[@flacko_s]

yeah

[@Mooseyyy11]

i need the prayers. my mock is i tihnk on thursday (monday today) and im so far behind. i need to do well, thanks lad

[@playzsax5922]

Hi sir, how many quotes would you say we need to remember per poem?

[@ahmadalanani8992]

40-45 absolute minimum for a grade 5

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[@playzsax5922]

@@ahmadalanani8992 only a year late mate

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@@ahmadalanani8992 He said per poem☠

[@Yma0104]

@@ahmadalanani8992 bro memorising the entire poem word for word 💀

[@nami7983]

How many paragraphs should I aim to do in this question?

[@spytex5268]

3 mate

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Very Helpful thank you! I have my English lit exam on Monday and this is a "blessing" 😁 (english pun if you do igcse edexcel english literature)

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[@dynamo1726]

Can you please make a video on unseen poetry as we will be tested on that after the half term. Also, my teacher said AQA told her the Macbeth question from the externally set paper will be on Lady Macbeth in Act 1 so can please make a video that will help us on this? Thanks very much and I appreciate all the work you put in to help us achieve the grades we need!🙏🙏

[@sandrarr5434]

Oh really - on Lady Macbeth?

[@dynamo1726]

@@sandrarr5434 this was for last year

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@@dynamo1726 what'd u get?

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@@chickennugget6528 lool I’m doing my alevels now. English can go fuck off but good luck.

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Bro what did you get?

[@nabz8742]

this the question that will come up in our literature exam for poems?

[@harveysheffield403]

idk but I'm doing it on Wednesday lol

[@Mrclips910]

This is similarity and differences right?

[@georgeparadissis3145]

Do we do a paragraph on structure too? What about context?

[@bilal3128]

exactly i am so confused about that

[@ImMyDevotion]

this is really helpfull but how can you add the context/intention?

[@spytex5268]

Very helpful as always just wondering tho how many quotes do u need to learn for poetry?

[@nailahrobertson4867]

i dont think their is a specific amopunt just as many as possible buy a power and conflict book and just remember all per poem

[@sidjediacore8642]

can you do this method with structure of poems to?

[@Ilovedoris]

This is so helpful thank you so much :))))

[@asmiforeal]

we also have to do an intro and a conclusion right?

[@maxgilliver577]

What’s the best way to remember quotes

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Flashcards

[@abir3299]

Please make more videos based around literature paper and blood Brothers, and pretzel for literature as I can't find anything as detailed like yours online keep up the good work thanks a lot for everything

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@Mr Everything English do we need a thesis and conclusion in our answer for comparing poems?

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no

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[@toxic.freeman]

What about structure, form and context???

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frr

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do you have to write about structure and form ?

[@Afrxhz]

Why does he make it look SOOOOOOO EASSSYY, but I know I am going to struggle.

[@vedangkamli5269]

Can it be a difference and not similarity??

[@phantombeast2317]

Obviously

[@ettixy]

Sir how should I write it as one paragraph ? Or when should I cut it in two two ?

[@SSKN_0712]

My teacher taught me to use Squidle Statement Quote Unpick Inference Develop Link Explain for poems, is this also good or should I use Pretzel

[@shahzarbukhlaw5963]

Hi, what about context though? Thanks, your videos are really helpful

[@gbxnzz]

he said in a previous video that context can be fit in any paragraph. the reason it isnt in his plan/structure is because he doesnt use context in every paragraph.

[@mwahnobarssss]

@@gbxnzzdo you know where and how to add the context tho?

[@simonday1040]

do we get the poem extracts in this question?

[@marwa1037]

yeah but only for one one the poems

[@FMKDeem]

Thank you sir this was very helpful

[@ikramrahman5466]

Doesn't comparison means what's the difference between two things. but do we also get marks on similarity, (when comparing poems)

[@magickiller_0]

do we include context in the paragraph analysis

[@coffichu]

Does anyone know if you need an introduction or conclusion for these questions or just the three main bodies?

[@bearopp8381]

He said no needed for introduction

[@residuallord98gaming42]

Yes you need a conclusion and introduction

[@Xdbantaxd]

I used prtzele and my teacher got mad I didn’t do it her way and took marks of me

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Yo teachers a loser

[@renimate8782]

3 times?

[@hamnaali4977]

Thank you so much for creating this helpful video! Could you please show us a grade 8/9 exemplar essay using this method? I'd really appreciate it. Thank you again!

[@freddy7174]

can anyone let me know if it is a much to include context of the poem when comparing 2 poems?

[@itsesma1549]

I wish you could do some Edexcel as well it would be very helpful for me but thank you

[@Angularie2]

what about context?

[@AverageDBLenjoyer]

Did u even watch the whole video

[@travis6900]

I'm preparing for my year 10 mocks. Would that also have 3 paragraphs that I need to do or would it be less?

[@Unknown-ei5zu]

for 30 marks you should have 3-4 points/paragraphs

[@zarabatool8710]

will you please suggest me two modern poems that I can compare and contrast easily.

[@Hassan-xu8rn]

war photographer and remains(war)(conflict)

[@Hassan-xu8rn]

ozy and storm for nature

[@hammadali8784]

Where can i find past paper answers for literature

[@jackoo3689]

i can send if u need

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on the aqa website

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How would you include AO3?

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Email [e-mail]

[@Blessingstevens06]

Can u compare CLB and exposure please it would be helpful or remains n bayonets charge

[@mkfitnessandyoga5030]

Great sir. Thanks

[@nbitwire]

Hey could you compare war photographer to another poem?

[@tabinkhan9559]

Sir please make a video on how to answer unseen poetry for q1 and q2 please

[@tharushanjathavan1492]

how many paragraphs of this do you have to do for the 30 marker?

[@lantempo]

3

[@jayB8_]

He said like one minute into the video.

[@jjskaur2052]

Do only do one paragraph?

[@chrome5830]

3 or more

[@Fatimah-mp7cr]

Thanks for the amazing video. Very helpful indeed

[@emaanhanafy2482]

Hey sir you know if you don’t use the Macbeth extract because you didn’t have time in the exam will this lose a lot of marks and drop my grade?

[@oshaicampbell8257]

Yes u have to use the extract aswell as ur own understanding

[@oshaicampbell8257]

But not by a lot I don’t think it would drop you a grade

[@Ikramxjhshsb]

Sir, doesn't comparison means finding the difference of the poems but should similarity also needed to be included to get more marks?

[@isobelsalt9830]

No

[@minna2855]

Yes

[@sanashan0734]

comparison can be finding the difference or similarities so if you're comparing A to B you can find the similarities in each one and the differences. but normally there's more of one than the other. so yes if you just focus on one you may not get full marks if there are the other

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Thank you 👍

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thanks a lot was really helpful.

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GO ON SON

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would this video be helpful for igcse edexcel as well?

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Yo bro can you make that vid you promised about the pretzel paragraph please for Literature you promised but its been 4 month i really need that

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

That’s already Up

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Thank you so much

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"lEBLBELE" 12:26

[@PasacheDigra]

Is this edxcel or AQA

[@iofficial_x6234]

AQA

[@robertvictor3993]

I'm 12 and in yr 8 or grade 7 I'm supposed to be in grade 6 and this helped me a little

[@Unknown-rh6ww]

can i zoom into structure

[@JodeeBoa]

How many paragraphs of that

[@laavanya5206]

Watching this with my exams in 6 hours

[@H_Series.]

how? the exam is tomarrow.

[@ajgmz]

@@H_Series. lol they probaly watching the wrong video 6 days ago whihc was literature 1

[@divineldn8023]

Do you need context?

[@iofficial_x6234]

it depends

[@ahmadqasim4773]

12:25 XD 🤣🤣🤣

[@jackyellow8562]

the fly on his face was also funny

[@jackyellow8562]

the fly on his face was also funny

[@jackyellow8562]

LOL your soo funny

[@kinghhh44]

if you are doing differences what could you say instead of in addition to

[@hammadali8784]

Do we need to have introduction paragraph and conclusion paragraph

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Nope

[@seba-hl1ld]

why is there no context??

[@jordanjumbo3429]

I enjoyed it

[@abdullahhussain8292]

Hi do you do any tutoring lessons?

[@iofficial_x6234]

yeh he does its based in Luton

[@rubyh2064]

do we not need to compare the structure and form of the poems too in the paragraphs??

[@rubyh2064]

like how would i do the next paragraph on structure? would i change the technique to how the poem is structured/formed? sorry for being a pain i just want to make sure i dont miss anything for the exam

[@deepfry4735]

@@rubyh2064 If you ever learn the answer to this please let me know, I'm really struggling with structure.

[@sandrarr5434]

Please may you do love and relationship comparison poems

[@Yma0104]

he don't do that here, my advice is to go watch mr salles teaches English for that

[@k7_a13]

thank you

[@andreasyung78]

12:27 abbalabba 😂

[@itzyadhu9300]

For the second and third paragraph do you have to do similarities or differences between the poems?

[@つかだしシダタ]

Hello, do you still need help on your poetry comparison? If so I could help you out

[@abbie6375]

@@つかだしシダタ Hi, would you be able to help me? I don’t understand much of poetry and it’s compromising all my other grades, thanks

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did someone do it?????????????????????????

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that fly tryn to ruin my education fr bru

[@ukzonetube2412]

0:58 lool

[@moonlightcat6045]

THANKYOU

[@dwai3096]

But don’t you compare the poem you learnt in lesson to an unseen poem?

[@rohan_n23]

goat!

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