How To Write A PRTEZEL Paragraph

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Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

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If anyone thinks they might need this: 25 Language Devices: Defined & Explained! 1. Pathetic Fallacy Is when the weather or the atmosphere describes the mood. For example, when the weather is rainy people are sad and depressed 2nd example, the dark night could symbolise something supernatural like 3AM Satan etc… 2. Personification Is when a non-human is given human qualities. For example, the tree is waving to John as drives away. 3. Simile When you are comparing two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’ For example, his facial vision looked like a falcon’s eye 4. Metaphor Is when you are comparing two things with is or are Example He is an orc 5. Extended Metaphor Pick a metaphor and explain how --- > turn in to an extended metaphor Metaphor --- > Life is a rollercoaster. Now turning into extended metaphor add explanation so, Life is a rollercoaster you don’t know when you will be at the top or at the bottom, it will all happen in an instance, at the greatest heights you will be at the greatest heights and at times it will crash, but every day is never the same, just like in a turn in a Rolle coaster is never the same. 6. Oxymoron 2 opposite words side-by-side Example, the small giant 7. Juxtaposition You explain an oxymoron. The small giant tip-toing trying to reach the top shelf, however, his small arms and puny fingers prevented him from grabbing the bar of jam. 8. Symbolism Is when objects represent a meaning. For example, moon and the star represent Islam. 2nd Example, if you get a priest you will think someone died. In Macbeth the dagger links to death. 9. Semantic field Is where words are linked to an idea. For example, PPE, 2m and Hand Sanitiser, Head of Year link to COVID. 10. Irony Is when events in the text surprises the characters. Something not expected! Mr Birling offering a 1000. Scrooge changing his nature. 11. Rhetorical Question Question does not require an answer 12. Hyperbole Is when you hype, when over-exaggerating. I am going to eat the whole restaurant. 13. Assonance Is the repetition of the vowel sound. I am too cool for school. Oooooo 14. Alliteration Words in a row begin with the same letter. 15. Sibilance Is when words in a row have the s letter or the s sound Example: the snake was slowly hissing 16. Euphemism Is when you say something in an indirect manner. He is not with us anymore. 17. Emotive Language Is when the writer makes the reader feel emotional. By making them angry. 18. Onomatopoeia Words describe the sound Boom bang skirr pop 19. Ruel of 3 / Power of 3 / Triplets Words or phrases in a row describe something (3) The table is black, hard and wide 20. Facts/ Stats Uses evidence to support their facts. 50 % of the students prefer using email rather than social media . 21. Plosive Reptation of harsh sound Words such as 'P' 'D' 'B' 22. Zoomorphism Is when you give a person animal features. Example John barked at me / John shouted at me. 23. Opinion 24. Repetition Language Device and Structure. Is when the writer uses the words repletely to create an effect. Where is being repeated and why is that important 25. Noun, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs Structure Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc.. Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’ Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘ Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’ New character New setting Change in tone Short sentence - to build up tense Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative Short /long sentence - may show importance in both Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’ Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending Juxtaposition Extended metaphor Pace List Pov Overall tone Chronogical order Climax Repetition Links Mood , pathetic fallacy 1. Abhorrent/Heinous (means bad) 2. Euphoric/Jubilant (means happy) 3. Melancholy/Morose (means sad) 4. Indignant (means angry) 5. Swift/Rapid (means fast) 6. Colossal/Gargantuan (means big) 7. Minuscule/Microscopic (means small) 8. Bemused/Befuddled (means confused) 9. Astute/Shrewd (means smart) 10. Feeble/Decrepit (means weak) 11. Dash (means run) 12. Plunge (means jump - may not always fit so be careful how you use it) 13. Cordial (means nice) 14. Lackadaisical (means lazy) 15. Paradoxical/Outlandish (means strange)

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[@taztango6461]

Waiting for the video where you write a paragraph using prtezel. This video was great. i want to guarantee 8 or 9 answers in my gcse soPlease make a video on what can get you those 8 or 9 mark answers. Maybe comparing a 5 mark answer to 9 mark answer and explaining what separates them.

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[@Bella-pe9is]

This is so much better than point, evidence, explain. Thank you!!!!!!!!!

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You should create a playlist of the videos of writing a gcse level paragraph if you don't have one already it would make many people's lives easier since these videos help a lot

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I'm using this for a test next week for inspector calls. Thanks sir

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Did it help cuz I have mocks soon and my mate is saying I should use this

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Crazy how I got an email notification, but yes. I got an 8 so that works

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Thank you sir, I got 2 8s for English

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Please do a video on how o write three pretzel paragraphs on the unseen poem. (Part a)

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[@HonshuR]

You can add context in every paragraph in the link section to sum up how this is relavant to the question and how it actually relates to it. For example, if you are talking about Sheila and how she is suppressed, in the link you can specifically say that she was suppressed because she was a women and then go on to breifly mention gender roles during the 1920's. But nothing to take away from what Mr Everything English has said, he is the teacher after all 😂

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You definitely didn't use a metaphor

[@tk11rj]

@@MrEverythingEnglish Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

[@seyibale]

You are super amazing! Thank you Mr. Everything English.

[@VypaGaming]

I get grade 6s and 7s for following my paragraph structure called PETCEIEL (point, evidence, terminology, connotation, explanation, intention, effect, link). This works with the whole of English literature and any structure, form and language questions on English language

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[@VypaGaming]

@@feranmisekoni3778 1) Answer the question directly (answer the question in one sentence with no or very little explanation at all). 2) Back up your point with valid evidence (write a quotation from the given text in the correct lines it states or out of the text if u have to refer out of the text, make sure that ur quote matches and refers to ur point and also make sure that u pick a quote that u know u can best analyse and pick a piece of terminology from). 3) Pick a word from the quote to zoom into (pick a word from the quote to explain and analyse). 4) Write "This... suggests" or "This... connotes... which suggests..." or "The... 'write the part of the quote here' suggests..." or "The... 'write the part of the quote here' connotes... which suggests..." (the first bit of "..." must be filled in with terminology, for example, adjective, simile, metaphor, dramatic irony, repetition, ecsetra. Make sure u use a language device on a language question on English language and a structural device on a structure question on English language and either on English literature, a connotation is something that u associate a word with, you'll write ur connotation after "connotes", for example, red connotes blood, light connotes happiness, ecsetra, make sure that everything u say refers and links to the question). 5) Make sure u explain everything u say in as much detail as u possibly can. Dont stop explaining until u cant write anything else. U can write things like "because" and "furthermore" to develop and explain in further detail. 6) What is the writer's intention (what is the message that the writer is trying to get to the reader when reading this quotation or how is he/she trying to make the reader feel, think ecsetra and why, for example, "The writer intended... because..." or maybe u wanna develop even further and in the next sentence u start with "Furthermore,")? 7) What effect and impact does this quotation have on the reader and why? (U may say something like "The reader would feel... because..." or "The reader would think... because..." in the next sentence u could start with "Furthermore," to explain more and develop on this). 8) Link back to ur point. In order to do this, it's simple, just write "As a result, its clear that...". In the "..." u must write the key part of ur point, for example, if my point is "Shakespeare presents Macbeth as powerful.", I would write "As a result, it's clear that Macbeth is presented as powerful." I hope this helps with your analysis questions on English Language paper 1 and 2 and your English Literature papers. :-)

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[@tk11rj]

Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

[@GvlogsNarla]

Thank you mr Genus can I use this method about Macbeth

[@bilushah1]

Sir is it possible if you can go through the whole GCSE literature and language paper in an actual GCSE paper Thanks for help

[@thamilineiinparasa7002]

Hi there, you have referred to this structure for literature. Does this count when comparing two poems.If it doesn't could you please kindly make a video on how to structuring a poetry comparison question. I have watched the video to compare poems the best but I feel like I need help on actually structuring the essy as I have a poetry mock next week. Your vids are great, thanks!

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Im sorry for being 10 months late but comparing 2 prezels would precpre

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i have english lit today, thanks for this sir !

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Can u use this for language

[@jakepronger7824]

Hi I’m a bit confused my exam board is edexcel and in English Literature paper 1 we have an extract from Macbeth where we get now credit for context references. By extension, in part b we have a question about a theme throughout the play and we are told here is where we link context and that we shouldn’t analyse in depth the techniques used but rather give them a passing reference. What would be your opinion? Great video btw

[@itzshad7359]

Hi is this good please reply the writer of j.b priestley present sheila birling as materialistic and change throughout the play. as there is evident where it says “Oh its wonderful! Look mummy isn't it a beauty” the use of technique is the exclamation mark showing her emotion and an adjective because she is describing something as beauty. The word of beauty is a eutrophic word because she is describing something as a very nice object that she has. When sheila was arguing about Gerald Authur because of not spending any quality time with here sheila was annoyed and depressed about gerald not spending any time but when geard show her the ring her whole emotion of sheila has changed this also means that ring define as power and control because we can see sheila being angry and irritated about gealrd but when he show her a ring is a completely different things to her attitude so the ring has power and taking control of sheila. In the edwardian time the most important job was for a men to do all of their works and men had the most respect even women had to respect mens and they had to follow all there command and they can never disboy what a men said

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This was really useful 😅

[@AO-pn9ev]

Dear Mr Everything English Sir, In my school, for some reason, we do AQA for GCSE English Language and Edexcel for GCSE English Literature. As part of Edexcel for literature, we are not marked on language or AO2, and mainly AO1 and AO3. Would this paragraph structure still allow me to gain maximum marks as apparently I’m not supposed to analyse language?

[@mj_ldss]

Got an exam in about 2 hours inshallah this works

[@ameerali3515]

Sir could you please mark this. Thanks Paper 1 q3 -The opening paragraph reveals to us that the Ford motor can was “old”, and “re-painted”, allowing us to identify the families financial constraints, creating sympathy towards them. -The change of focus in the second paragraph, reveals to us that Hartop “seemed to occupy almost all of the seat”, portraying his lack of sympathy and care towards the rest of his family, as he was “sprawling awkwardly”, on purpose, gradually building more and more sympathy towards Alice and his wife. -The change of focus in the the third paragraph is towards Hartop. Firstly, it tells us that Hartop “drove with great caution”, as the van “fussed and rattled”. This emphasise the lack of financial support that the family has, making us question why he’s put himself in such a harsh situation. -The change of focus in the 14th paragraph, reveals to us that Alice “stumbled against something on the road”. This portrays a sense of hope for Alice, as the short sentences build up a glimmer of excitement from the reader, as finding the chrysanthemums could be a turning point in her life. The final two sentences in the paragraph compliment the first, as Hartops van “was stationary”, so we feel happy for Alice, as we think she will become appreciated in the family, perhaps we will no longer feel sorry for her, but think of her as a lucky daughter. -The final paragraph served to constrast the last, as it emphasises the lack of understand Hartop has. Firstly, despite Alice’s tremendous efforts and attempts to retrieve that chrysanthemums, she “obeyed at once”, and “walked away”, indicating that she is completely worthless in the family, and despite their hardest attempts to prove her self worthy, is disregarded, and left consolidated. This makes us really feel sorry for her, as she vanished “without a word”, allowing us to identity her internal misery, and feel pity for her solemn life. Please mark out of 8. Thanks sir.

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explain effect on reader?

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[@Ekaterina-nc7cp]

Can this only be used for literature and language not structure

[@bamsibey4240]

Hey could you do one based on Macbeth and how you should represent him it I am doing bad in grades

[@0s7t3]

This is an updated version of your previous structure of so Im assuming is either much easier to follow or score more marks..?

[@mahdikashem356]

Can you use PRETZEL paragraph for English language too?

[@colaplaysrblx]

did you ever find out if you can?

[@lifeisbeautiful6951]

Please Can you upload the next video of this PRETZEL please🥺

[@slenderg0dwii868]

wait so it is only one quote per paragraph? i thought you include more than one quote per paragraph cuz thats what my teacher says

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ur teacher stupid

[@tabinkhan9559]

Hi sir when you will make a macbeth act 3 video please reply my message thank you sir you are a elegant teacher for English.

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

This will be out in about three weeks

[@tabinkhan9559]

OK can you do it tommorow the video

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Top man thank you 🙏

[@tk11rj]

Ai i got a question, say for literature If i'm to write 2 paragraphs for an extract, would I just do the same pretzel paragraph twice but with different quotes? thanks

[@Erolsaurus]

"Enjoy your pretzel" Me eating chicken: Awesome video by the way!

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this vid is very helpful, even when it's 1 year old.

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I was peeing before year 7 in fact I've been peeing since I was born. Will this be a problem?

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

So long as you have a nappy you’ll be fine 😉

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@@MrEverythingEnglish 😂

[@passingpoor]

Is this best for passages as well?

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Yep

[@aesha9332]

Can you use PRTEZEL on English language or not.

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Yepppp

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@@MrEverythingEnglish ok thx

[@m2.solo0]

Can you write the paragraph about Jekyll and Hyde please, I have finals in a week

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Can we apply this for our non fiction texts paper? In IGCSE EDEXCEL English language A?

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Legend

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Thank you

[@itzshad7359]

can u please do a video of that structure and using on the inspector also can u include shelial pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee

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is this work on gcse paper 1 q2 and q4

[@AlphaMindZ-07]

q2 you use PEIEIEI. write two paragraphs

[@bilushah1]

Can you also please do about journeys end , Frankenstein, Romeo and juliet about language and structure paragraphs and overall content or plot summary Many thanks

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when aee u gona do that vidoe of u doing that pargapgh

[@MrEverythingEnglish]

This will be coming in the next few weeks

[@Sean-rawlins]

1:26

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[@ReviewMania71]

The spelling of pretzel should be this , am I right?

[@zainthe_c00lkid29]

Definitely gonna use his structure because I find pearl comfusing

[@stefansalvas1854]

where would you put context?

[@ningwlv8313]

@MrEverythingEnglish can this be used for literature and language

[@freeyoumyheart]

He’s said yes

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@@freeyoumyheart Oh Thank you

[@rubaasma8689]

Can this can be used for both lit and lang?

[@freeyoumyheart]

Yes

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[@MrEverythingEnglish]

Fake news

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What paper do we use this on also what questions? 😀

[@nuradin_4481]

It improves all of your paragraphs so all of them ig

[@hamzahwaheed9528]

Is this for english language or literature or both

[@Itachixgalll]

Well both

[@abdullahhanan4941]

I would argue its more for language but see what suits you

[@Everythingoutoflego354]

Who is learning this in 2025 👇

[@m2.solo0]

Sorry but I didn’t really get the zoom in part could you do that for me please

[@rohan_n23]

its just zooming into words like adjectives verbs and you then express what they mean or illustrate

[@w_sffer1658]

I am gonna sit my exam in like 1 hour 30 mins and I will update this comment to say how I did. Watching this pretZel video Update : I hate the extract but was easy to understand + I did ok on question 2,3 and 5 but Q4 no rime

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Can this work for GCSE Language?

[@Saifybro]

yes it can

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[@Sean-rawlins]

1:18 vak

[@youeverjust]

so it's just basically a what-how-why paragraph...

[@ameerali3515]

Please sir, is it possible for you to mark my English language paper q3. Thanks.

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Ask ur teacher Maybe they could ccause this guy is probably busy

[@Asianshadows]

Third?

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i have my mocks tomorrow and im so lost yall don't be like me

[@TheF1Discussion]

Anyone here for GCSEs 2025 ? 👇

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Yh

[@theoneandonlyking707]

PEMAZC > PRETZEL

[@aminamustafa2711]

How to zoom in the words ?🤍

[@shushshush9310]

i will enjoy my pretzel in about 2 hours🥨

[@HARSH-ICLOUD]

Thank you