No Happy Ending (A T&F Psychological Horror Audio Story, 15+)

[@LittleOwl2003]

The audio is a bit difficult to hear, so to make things easier, heres the transcript: docs.google.com/document/d/11IDDzp6Bo_hYDTgTIJJcwuE_vrDuTuww/edit?actionButton=1

[@finnythao1548]

26:07 Godred screaming because a part of him being removed

[@fishpop]

Thought this was an original character but it wasn't until his mentioned the second faces that i realised he was Godred.

[@Chessie-Steam-Special]

I found out this was Godred because the engine on the cover is like one of the cudel fell locos!

[@railfansrailways7078]

You can tell godreds looseing it when he talks about running over a cat with detail

[@bluebellsfan8704]

True

[@Britishgrendier]

Wtf

[@ARG0T]

This also really sheds light on the direness and morbidity of scrapping (killing) living machines

[@Warriorwolf]

I would love to see someone make a animated version of this story

[@LittleOwl2003]

Honestly same, the only problem is this story only really takes place in one location, plus the audio and the image alone keeps the suspension of disbelief in tact so really this only works as a audio only piece. But if somebody finds a way or wants to have a crack at it, I wouldn’t be opposed to it

[@countchompula1896]

Felt like the stages of grief

[@theamazinggamer111]

The book had the simple explanation of workmen taking parts of him more and more until there was nothing left. Gradually seeing Godred’s slow decent into depression and madness as his body parts are simply pulled off of him, used to mend his brethren, is really foreboding. I can’t imagine what went through his head all this time. The fact he was just left to rot for what felt like an eternity is a much worse fate than scrapping him quickly and painlessly… His screams. Those horrifying and fear invoked screams…that’s what true horror and insanity is made off. You nailed this, Little Owl. And EVERYONE else that worked on this too! A+

[@EddyStudios-it4cf]

I just watched this again and I cried again, this feels like it's been worked on for a decade, This is my favorite piece of fan work ever

[@matthewanderson2351]

The real villain in the end is the controller. Godred deserved to be punished, but not psychologically, physically and masochistically tortured to death by dismemberment. And that monster got away with it... And the other engines just neglected him and willingly allowed the controller to give them his pieces with no sympathy... Disgusting... At least Lord Harry got a second chance and a new name. Or should I say... Godred got a second chance in his new body...?

[@LittleOwl2003]

Oooh now that’s a theory I’ve not heard before. The idea that Lord Harry was possessed by Godred and that caused his change in persona. I purposefully meant for the ending to be interpretive so hearing new interpretations is always very welcome

[@zafool4997]

Honesty, with the fact that Cuddle Fell engines have two faces, the idea of two engines in one body could work

[@wise3907]

Poor Godred.

[@tomoliver4756]

Absolutely beautiful. The writing is phenomenal and the performances from Stephen Mansey (despite the audio quality) as Godred and Dexter Manning himself surprisingly as Lord Harry / No. 6 are top notch.

[@BlueflameKing1]

This was amazing. Wish i found it sooner. This reminds me of the horror of the rails story broken wings, and could even be seen as a companion piece. Great stuff.

[@amitysluzara2022]

What a masterpiece! That ending omg

[@EquestriaExploration]

°-° Oh heck... Poor Godred That was chillingly well-written, Owl. Nice work ^^

[@crispycart1976]

It was about 20 mins in when I released the engine I'd been staring at was Godred, then I released that he was gonna get smaller and smaller.

[@spottotea]

dear jesus, i was just doing my thing, and then i hear that cat part, and then i hear that damned SCREAM. thats how you know how scary it is.

[@MarianneStudios]

Undoubtedly ecstatic that it’s finally here! WOW! That was wholeheartedly fantastic and a truly emotive piece! Due to the beginning evoking so much sadness as opposed to fear, I was asking myself when the ‘horror’ part would come into play...then I got my answer as soon as Godred’s painful shouting began before Shane’s entrance! The psychological horror is truly there with the way Godred is written and performed which makes him so sympathetic throughout, truly an engaging narrative! I’m getting slight Handmaid’s Tale vibes from some of the themes explored! The horror was terrifically excruciating as well as the pathos (I just wanna hug Godred 💔), I honestly felt myself tearing up at the end, almost synchronising with Godred’s weeping...and then the epilogue began, WOW that was such a cleverly written ending! I LOVED IT! One again, a tragic but beautifully written tale with a fantastic performance, fantastic job!

[@thomaslawrence2375]

Full review video coming soon but all I can say for now is.... I AM SO PROUD OF YOU ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT WORK 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳❤️❤️❤️❤️

[@agracetejada2645]

42:47 Godred: having an emotional breakdown. Me: *cries over vent thought or some sad stuff or smth* (This also another resued comment 😅)

[@SubSimpich]

Wow. After all this time it's finally here. And all I can say is, FRICKING HELL! I mean knew it was going to be dark, but this legit got heavy in places. But that's all in all what made the writing in this superb. Well done Jack! And well done to the VAs. They absolutely killed it!

[@Ms-Vlogs.]

I’ve just listened to this while I’m fishing and holy crap! This is horrific but incredible at the same time, well done!

[@jacobblackard785]

Honestly I can't imagine being torn apart for a mistake sure it was Godred fault but tearing him apart for doing the accident

[@Castlerock15]

But Smudger just laughed

[@SonicsBizarreWorld]

The horrifying truth finally realised 34:24/ 34:39/35:27/36:56

[@Greg44348]

Bro can i say im listening to this while on a trip to Florida and I'm loving this so much bro it so interesting im so invested so far and I can't lie your voice is kinda soothing i like it keeps me relax and makes me feel safety i want u to never give up on your dreams ever brother and i will always support u you just earn yourself a new loyal subscriber 😊😇🤟❤️

[@sleeperain3349]

This story didn't scare me, it just made me want to cry, anyone who's suffered from depression knows the feeling of hopelessness and isolation, being trapped and tortured by your mind, the feeling like no one is coming to help you because they cant see your pain, feeling like there is no end to it all and all you can hope for is for everything to end soon. Not sure if the author intended for me to feel that way but bravo

[@Dr.LucrosOfficial]

Woohoo! Solid 8/10 right there! You did great!

[@timkim1234]

Thank you so much

[@Somerandompokemon]

Hmm… godred, judgment is not mine to pass.. but one day, may you, your broken mind and heart find peace.

[@dragonfox4553]

i think at some point i would just be begging for death

[@evanclarke5561]

Was the ghost of Godred trying to tell Lord Harry to be a better engine?

[@LittleOwl2003]

That’s a very good interpretation!

[@stitchunderground626]

Great job Jack i really like this keep up the great work man!

[@sbc9127]

41:16 a reference to LADAS

[@LittleOwl2003]

Ayyyyyyy! I was hoping someone would notice!!!

[@sbc9127]

@@LittleOwl2003also LADAS was named after Laura Alice duff Assheton-Smith

[@sbc9127]

She wasn’t named after the landowner , but infact the wife

[@паровозиктомас0]

это когда мы в молодости бросаем свои прошлогодние паровозики

[@reconwarroirthetrue1685]

❤😊this should be an animation story along with the audio At well 😀 😄 👍 can't wait for THAT!!! LIKE THIS!!!! Audio story by the way.!!!!❤❤❤❤ excellent job incredible KEEP !!!! IT!!! UP!!!❤ also you should do it in wooden railway form as well !!!!❤ do both.

[@agracetejada2645]

*Me screaming out all of my vent thoughts at* 26:09 (This was an old comment that I reused 😅)

[@agracetejada2645]

26:28 27:25 completely losing over it 😂😂😂🤣🤣

[@agracetejada2645]

26:09 Oh my goodness MY EARSS 😵😵

[@TheGingerEngine]

Holy moley this is going to give me nightmares (and I say that because it's fantastically dark). Would you be okay for me to review this as part of my fan video reviews in a couple of months? Very, very well done 🚂🚃❤️🌎🙏

[@LittleOwl2003]

Oh absolutely go right ahead!! I’d be incredibly honoured!!!

[@TheGingerEngine]

@@LittleOwl2003 thank you, this is like a Shakespearean tragedy of the Culdee Fell. Honestly it's beautiful 🚂🚃😊❤️🙏🌎

[@Rusty160]

Little error at 1:48 and 1:54 The same line is said twice

[@Greg44348]

Ive actually seen your friendship is tragic reactions i just noticed that question what your favorite friendship is tragic episode and who your favorite character in my little pony 🐴

[@LittleOwl2003]

I’m gonna be honest I’m a Fluttershy guy lol, but my favourite episode I think is the last one, just the build up and raw emotion is unmatched

[@Greg44348]

@@LittleOwl2003 u talking about the episode were at the end were princess Candace gets taken by the other princess sombra killed?

[@Greg44348]

@@LittleOwl2003 we love our Fluttershy im a rainbow dash Fluttershy and twilight guy 😁😁

[@LittleOwl2003]

@@Greg44348 No I was taking about the first FIT

[@Greg44348]

@@LittleOwl2003 o ok sorry I thought I were talking about the last episode of friendship is tragic season 2 episode 6 my apologies bro

[@MasterofMacarbe]

You got the name for the music starting at 41:28?

[@fishpop]

27:20 Bit of missed script there: Shane Dooiney: Quite boring isn't it?

[@LittleOwl2003]

True, but it worked without that line so I ain’t worrying about it

[@EddyStudios-it4cf]

This is awesome MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@Duckthechad08]

Can someone please adapt this

[@LittleOwl2003]

Honestly it would be my dream! But I can see a problem with doing so as it mostly takes place in one location the entire time and most of the imagery would be quite challenging to replicate effectively

[@janellewarren2119]

Let me just reinstate my question about what happened to godred was he scrapped or is he still at the back of the shed and what's the devil happened Lord Harry

[@LittleOwl2003]

Uhhh fire away? Lol

[@LittleOwl2003]

If I answer, that gives away the purpose of an ambiguous ending, let your imagination take you to your conclusion

[@agracetejada2645]

Can somebody explain what happened here at 26:09? 😟

[@LittleOwl2003]

That’s for you to decide my dear boy XD

[@agracetejada2645]

@@LittleOwl2003 😭😭😭😭

[@janellewarren2119]

I think one of his parts were taken

[@agracetejada2645]

@@janellewarren2119 OH SNAP- 😰

[@wise3907]

Did Godred die?

[@haraldisdead]

No his face was put on a car- Of course he died