Paper One, Paper Two, HLE, EE - Improving Analysis

Magic sentence? Yes, that's right. Using this structure in your writing will help you better analyze texts and show better thinking in your work.
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You guys are underrated. I have been editing my HL essay for an extended period of time, maybe a month or two, and the magic sentence helped me in my analysis. Thank you Mr. Cohen and Mr. Giles!

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Just wait. We just (like today) finished a series where we look at an HL essay from start to finish. Five videos covering the whole process. Might be helpful. Stay tuned.

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This is really helpful! My exam is in 3 hours and watching this boosted my confidence! Thanks, wish me luck!

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Thank you guys for all the effort, the paper 1 videos have been really helpful and have helped improve my writing!

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[@rohinikayal4440]

Hi, you guys are great! Could you give an example of how this would flow within one body paragraph? I am confused how would this be placed in a paragraph.

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These are such good tips thank you so much

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Good luck! You got this.

[@elih.4240]

Quick question, when should the magic sentence be introduced? Is it used as a topic sentence or more on the analytical side of things? Thanks!

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The Magic Sentence is more for body paragraph writing and the meat of the paragraph and not the topic sentence. We’ll be making a Magic Sentence 2.0 so stay tuned. Many ways to analyze!

[@MWJXWA]

A mnemonic for the magic sentence that my students are using: "We Visited The Pretty Island"

[@gilbirdbeilschmidt4640]

A question: are these simple techniques enough to get a 7? Or do I need really specific terminology. I feel like using the plot as a technique is really simple. Is that okay to use in the exam?

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Use a variety of features and be technical when it’s called for.

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