Pony Tales [MLP Fanfic Reading] 'In Her Sanctuary' by OmegaPony11 (darkfic/romance)

[@captainopvious7498]

There is an alternative ending by the author although he did not used it he published it in his blogs. Here: *Cadance took a deep breath before looking over at Twilight’s body. Her lips curled up in a smile now that she was finally alone with her favourite little filly. She was so lonely in the Crystal Empire, and Shining Armour missed his sister terribly. It would be like bringing the entire family together again. “Sunshine, sunshine, ladybugs awake…”*

[@Stranger312656]

Oh

[@tsukishadow5715]

This seems as if it is Cadence the one to now steal Twilight away 😨 Or rather. . .her, uh, body

[@freakazonestudios7979]

Gotta admit that would of been a better ending.

[@oakenshadow6763]

Wow. Now that's a horrifying ending.

[@magnus8363]

It feels more fulfilling than the other ending idk

[@Ramon609]

At the very end there with the lines of Cadence swearing she saw a tear... could this perverse and dark magic performed onto Twilight's body caused Twilight's soul to be stuck in her dead corpse of a body? Was Twilight still somehow in some kind of alive state? Forever be buried in the ground and forever in such a state..? That moment gave me a real feeling of dread..

[@Paul77786]

Ramon609 I bet Anubis will say,”This disrespectful to the dead .....and sacrilege”.

[@astrallis7873]

@@Paul77786 to Anubis I say it is not sacriledge to raise the dead which I am know for being a necromancer and the darkness itself

[@Koicreations]

I accidentally disliked so I liked too apologize

[@Ramon609]

@@Koicreations It's all good

[@iceluvndiva21]

Annnnd now I'm picturing the wicked Queen when she was a hag cackling how snow white would be burried alive.... Thanks

[@mitamajr]

Me: stops the video to gather myself before continuing Me: Okay I think I can handle the rest. Cadence: Sunshine sunshine ladybugs awake... Me: Nope. Can't handle it.

[@kowhaifan1249]

Well that’s literally the last line so you kinda did

[@jasminevillamor7759]

No way.....

[@notevenirish]

"The only time you'll see a TwiLestia on my channel" did someone beg you to do one or something? 😂 Another great fic as always.

[@TheRealSparkplugTheFox]

Even knowing Twilight had been dead this whole time I can't help but think she had turned to that chapter with the ultimate disreguard for life for the situation Celestia had put her in.

[@angrykidgamerandfriends2024]

Celestial: are love will be are shield Luna: hold my beer

[@eighth.hoodie]

I will quote luna for the rest of my life.

[@iceluvndiva21]

To be fair? She's probably severely out of practice given that Cadence and Luna are taller than her by now.

[@Cloudly.Horizon.]

What was that reference of?

[@ditzydoo4378]

Celestia; an immortal body forever young, a soul ravaged by the inexorable passing of time and love lost. Twilight; forever still, separated from the one she loves, forever trapped within the passages of her mind. *Edit*: OMG!, What a chilling twist ending no one saw coming. I think this one should be a Creepy Pasta. >_< Beautifully done Scribbler, Gina M, Cloud9 &and Smolchelsbels . Cheers Luv. ^_^

[@drewyukih3735]

DitzyDoo actually I saw it coming. I don’t know. I just predict things for some reason.

[@mindshuffler3332]

Look, when Celestia said that she was retiring, this was not what I had in mind.

[@wolfordragondemon]

The concept of this story is really interesting. Especially with the Equongous idea. Personally I feel like it was cut off too short just as it was building up steam. It couldve gone on for at least a little longer. It would've been really interesting if luna caught her performing the forbidden Magic. But that's just me.

[@TakeWalker]

"The only time you'll ever see a Twilestia on my channel." An excellent criterion for breaking an otherwise excellent rule. :3

[@TheCommenterDragon]

Once again, another simply divine and tremendous reading Scribbler i love it, your Pony Tales readings always brighten my day, that's one of the many reasons why i enjoy listening to them.

[@steel58836]

When I saw the tragedy tag, I didn't realize it would be that tragic.. Great reading Scibbler, the ending pretty much made me tear up to the point of crying

[@projectz1363]

Up until 3:19 I thought she was taking care of twilight as like her child so when she said "her lover" I got a bit of whiplash lol

[@okok450]

the second I heard twilight didn't move when she woke up I thought she was dead or at least not here

[@Cloudly.Horizon.]

When I tried to guess what was Twilight, it went like this... (Normal -> Dead -> Filly -> Turned to stone -> Rock...) And then I thought Twilight was a Doll or something, but then thought it was not it, when actually it is...

[@hauntershunter5336]

At the beginning of the story with the discription of twilight I immediately thought "she's dead isn't she." And when celestia said the Holme book and new body for twilight I was right

[@mitskifanboy15]

MAN THE WAY LUNA SCREAMED WAS SO FUNNY

[@dr.catmouse9046]

Is like twilight old and can't do much anymore? And Celestia wanting to make twilight a new body that way she can live forever? And then her sister and neice are trying to break her grief? But she's in denial because twilight is already dying painfully and slowly. Now twilight can't be free because of the spell that's making twilight suffer slowly...... That's sad Or twilight was made into a doll by Celestia out of grief. And was afriad of being alone?... Or was she sadden by her lover dying and hates how twilight died? I feel bad because it's been decades since twilight died?

[@daltonobrian2596]

From the way I see it, Celestia and Twilight are like mother and daughter. (GOD DAMN IT! I can't believe I said that! I swear that sounded better in my head!)

[@tianoc-g4811]

Quite a sad story of a possibility of Twilight not being an Alicorn yet was closer and closer to Celestia More Than Just Master and Apprentice. I said that sounds like a dark fanfare of Twilight herself from one of The Abridged Series; with a slight hint of yandere obsession. If this is insane then I wonder if there is a story or Windsor of The Mane-iac and her State of Mind; as well as the heinous crimes she continues after her defeat by the Power Ponies.

[@777Rowen]

This is so sad. I knew something was off when Twilight wasn’t moving and Celi talked about getting Twilight a new body. She’s gone mad, and is delusional. :( 💔

[@thesilvergalaxy9559]

tbh, I just got in to this fanfic stuff, and haven't ever heard of Celestia x Twilight lol

[@Daniel-jl6fb]

Wow! Here is a story that will keep me thinking for the next few days, a fantastic story delivered with the same brilliant skill of the storytellers.

[@Troublethegremlin]

Oh I haven't heard your dark fics in so long!!! FRIGGIN LOVED IT OH THE CHILLS it was amazing as always Scribbler!!!!! And of course the author but WOW that was amazing!

[@rosesareroses1155]

I just watched the luna story and now i see celestia and luna fighting over twilight Luna: NO, SHE'S MINE Celestia: HELL NO SHE IS MINE Luna:LET GO celestia: YOU LET GO I TEACHED HER FIRST luna: I HELPED HER UNDERSTAND FRIENDSHIP twilight: -_- i-i just g-go luna and celestia: NO

[@DragonxFlutter]

OOH! Ooh...this one _really_ hurt the heart...

[@9123498765]

Honestly? I thought it was going to be worse at the start. I was thinking Twilight being kept alive but constantly beyond the brink of death in a body too old to live but kept just alive and just conscious by some necrotic magic. I suppose there is a hint of maybe that too, but more likely that was just a side effect.

[@captainopvious7498]

I also thought that twilight was at the brink of death and possibly so inactive due to her age. So there was a hint of that also.

[@1989JROG]

I love this fanfic. This was great Scribbler.

[@Ozarka0]

"...My love..." Oooooookayyyyy.... "Her lover-" YO WTF!?

[@queenchrysalis4379]

I really do love your work scribbler

[@AJponyAPschannel]

Way better tragic story than last weeks ^^’ And I love love love Gina and Cloudy and Luna and Celestia 😍!!!

[@platypusfox73]

Hey you watching this video do want to own a piece of Scribbler? ....... What happen I thought you were watching the Scribbler newest vid.... IT GOT REAL WEIRD REAL FAST! (In all seriousness though I always love seeing this little animated advertisement at the beginning of these readings. It warms my heart.)

[@kristinwiebold2433]

what makes me suprised it that the youngest princess Twilight is the one that is dead while Cadence, luna and celestia are way older than her. it should be the other way around.

[@hawkfeather6802]

This was amazing! And a little scary

[@jaiden5941]

This reminds me of "Twilight's Dollhouse."

[@lucky69720]

Have a good long spring break scribbler.😁👍

[@Monsicorn]

2:23 is this gonna be Yandere Celestia? 6:57 Yup Yandere Celestia

[@iceluvndiva21]

Uh more like she couldn't Cope with the unexpected death of twilight (or simply out living her) and tried to grant her immortalty only to cement twilight's death. Thus she turned the body into a doll

[@selectidiot]

you dont know what yandere is.

[@LunarReflections.]

My timbers have officially been shivered.

[@legoluke646]

Celestia is crazy... turning twilight into a doll

[@anikamoody8922]

So tragic 😫 awesome work scribbler

[@elementofharmony985]

I hope I can keep the part of 0:27 ~ 0:42 in the future, it's really good to see 😝

[@genesisraptus42666]

I love your videos and reading Scribbler keep it up!

[@spectre3837]

That twist at the end wow

[@fandom_luver2985]

First!!! Edit: Great!! That's just what I needed to remind me how lonely I am. XD beautiful jobs guys. That really hit me :'(

[@yeodydreamsofficial7579]

(Tries to stop crying,twily has always been like a sister,a best friend to her,shes like a cousin as well to her)g-good (sobs) job..(sniffs)

[@BIGESTblade]

They say that love is the greatest most feeling in the whole world, it guides us, inspires us and makes a life meaningful, always wondered how could this be. I never have seen love doing what people say it does, what I have seen is how it breaks people and that it does in the nastiest ways. The question I can never find an answer for: why do we embrace it if we always know from the start how is it going to end?

[@danieltaylor5807]

A great story, and yet so heartbreaking.

[@mlpfan2145]

this is so touching

[@isthatsome1]

Yay Twilestia! But it's a darkfic and now I feel like crying. Anyways good job!

[@l1nus0nl1neproductions9]

OMG...that twist whent super-dark

[@Sandbug54]

This is my little pony song is done by hippogriff named silver Kehlani says continuity when reviewing a MyLittlePony episode

[@cascade2874]

This is guide....wonderful

[@dakotheyes9406]

300,000 soon!!!! Just 500- more!

[@McChicken03]

“And cabbages.”

[@robertomaciel9281]

A Princesa Celestia tem sempre um carinho especial para Twilight.

[@justin2308]

I actually remember reading this fic a long time ago, and man, was it depressing for me...

[@Molly_Mauk]

Ahhhhh that ending tho! 🤯👏

[@thelifeoncloud9]

I almost cried and I’m in this Holy..just..oof my heart

[@kutrael5209]

Need to stop listening to these first thing in the morning. Going to be sad all day now. Why do you do this to me Scribbler?

[@daniellindorff4614]

I couldn't find the first song.

[@vampp9]

Wait till she realizes twiglight became an alicorn

[@guarana-suquinho]

Here she didn't became one.

[@hannahharris5046]

What a fantastic reading, I love it.

[@Silentprincess360]

Does anyone know the music box song playing in the background?

[@matthewlo55]

I feel tired today but when I saw your video, I was very happy. Thank you Scribber! ❤❤

[@glowfacegaming2536]

Amazing video!!! ❤ Speaking of love. Isn't your 2 year marriage anniversary passed already? I wish you guys a great late anniversary. Ps: I try to remember every nook and cranny of your channel 😗

[@ScribblerProductions101]

We broke up in January.

[@piggygamer7779]

Once again scribbler this is amazing

[@teresamanjon3615]

For some reason... i relate to celestia, not wanting to lose a close firendo, or a lover... it inded hurts

[@daltonsturgeon5997]

Scribbler, I think this is the first time you've ever made me cry. Not just because of Twilight and Celestia, but because I kept thinking that a lot of people have suffered the same kind of tragedy, like you and Suki. So sorry about that, btw. Thank you, Scribbler P.S.: Next time you do a fanfic reading, pick something a little more romantic please. Also, not to judge, but I ship TwiLuna more than Twilestia. Not really sure why

[@hannahmetzger6622]

I personally don't really ship much of either, but if I absolutely _had_ to pick a favorite one to ship, I'd choose Twilestia over TwiLuna any day. Mainly because I greatly prefer Celestia's character over Luna's. Don't know why, though. :/.

[@daltonsturgeon5997]

@@hannahmetzger6622 Opinion respected. Luna is Best Princess for me, though

[@annemarieroberts1449]

I love your voice scribbler 🥰💖💖💖

[@echos615]

The only time you'll see Twilestia on your channel? There are a few others already...I think?

[@Twilightmidnight1987]

I need some funny cat videos after this

[@bobbypearson1149]

Have a great day

[@texzee]

alright so, hi old video. I'm at the start and these are my theories of whats going on. 1. Twilight has died, and Celestia will not let her go 2. Twilight *is going* to die, and Celestia is using a preservation spell or something 3. Celestia has kidnapped and broken Twilight so she doesn't leave her, Like a certain type of Yandere that turns their darlings into dolls for their own use and happiness 4. (again) Twilight has died, been buried, but Celestia is in denial and still thinks shes there, just not actively doing stuff 5. She's trying to bring Twilight from the dead using Twilights old body, *but* shes going to use a different body. kinda lika the Kikyo scene from Inuyasha

[@iceluvndiva21]

Wait wait wait... WHAT?! WHAT DID I JUST WALK IN ON?! First impression: yandere? Ending: oh no this is much worse! (Also how did luna know celestia had that book? I can buy cadence visiting because she missed them.)

[@treymcclure4645]

applejack will surely miss me caught caught

[@michaelbuehler3897]

A good horror story that isn't edgy or gory.

[@pennhooven8844]

I feel like I"ve heard you do this one a few years ago. Do you know if anyone else has done this one before?

[@Rose-ff8gd]

I was thinking the exact same thing. It was actually Cobalt Willow. kzbin.info/www/bejne/rKOTe5Vre5V-rJI

[@clairewiley9720]

I thought twilight was just old not dead

[@princessyannahliguidliguid3297]

AAAAAAAAAAAAA why??? the very voice of luna gives me WoW { world of warcaft} refference TwT

[@quintonjones2699]

Awesome work

[@MyRkAcc]

The only time? Heresy i say!

[@Orca19904]

Do you have a link for the thumbnail image? I didn't see one mentioned in the description.

[@kobmaster4638]

Rest In Peace puppy

[@twilightsparkle2232]

Rip twilight I cryed

[@herepaulfilms9833]

Although, this may be a dark story, there is 1 question I’m meaning to ask. How did Twilight die? Plot hole.

[@guarana-suquinho]

She didn't became a princess in this universe.

[@Alpha121198]

I blame Kingdom Hearts for my mental association of the word Santuary and trippy visuals… I know that has nothing to do with this but the song popped into my head because of the title.

[@alfredoqueen7456]

TRYING SO HARD NOT TO CRY its just.......so sad

[@terrarianmage3647]

😭😭😭😫😫 How i felt inside

[@-__Ast0lf0__-]

That.. Was really fucked up i want more.

[@mentallyillfinger]

very clearly inspired by Fullmetal Alchemist, also what's wrong with Twilestia?

[@cornettofamily4355]

Twilight sparkle is love Celestia

[@50off35]

Hmm so is she trapped in the body? I wonder

[@anthonyrausch5708]

So “TWLIGHT” died and “SUNBUTT” has gone mad???? Just “ANOTHER DAY” in “EQUESTRIA”???? 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@anthonyrausch5708]

10:54 - The “MOMENT” sunbutt she said “ALCHEMY”….. *internal screaming*

[@anthonyrausch5708]

12:02 - Uh; O Luna “BIG MAD”!!!!!! 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@anthonyrausch5708]

13:00 - Celestia - I was “CRAZY ONCE” that’s why I have “LOCKED MYSELF” in a “RUBBER ROOM”…… 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@anthonyrausch5708]

16:45 - I would imagine in this “situation”: Luna has “A MUZZLE”; “SOME ROPE”; and a “STRAIGHT JACKET” on stand-by…… 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@jayfether167]

"This will be the only twilestea on my channel" me. . ." my recomend is disagreeing" (theres another on your channel...)

[@butterflygirl7419]

I read the first line of the desc and now I’m sorta sad... but then I don’t ship it much I just like the fics soooo

[@mechgamer1948]

who ever saw that twilight was dead coming leave a like for scribbler

[@oakenshadow6763]

Dang. This is awful. Poor Twilight. Poor Celestia.

[@azeemysf]

We want more voice acting video on junji ito manga!

[@danktankdragkings7117]

BUT TWILESTIA!!!

[@daer1481]

Oh merd. Another random romance

[@autumbreeze1129]

I... I... wow

[@rareponyfan8000]

Clap your hooves and do a little shake.