Hey, good work, absolutely excellent plot and very convincing and your attention to detail is second to none!! Looking forward to hearing part 2 mate.
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Cheers Robert. Planning to get part 2 up next Tuesday.
@cynthiacossu5234 Жыл бұрын
This was absolutely EXCELLENT! Thank you! 😊
@TFOOS Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@joedaley30544 жыл бұрын
This is really good! I can see everything happening as you're narrating it so vividly! I love the Delia Stout plot line you came up with
@TFOOS4 жыл бұрын
Thank you :)
@marigold973 Жыл бұрын
Only recently found your video and look forward to listening. I believe we're given a glimpse of Joan post-induction as a prisoner in uniform in Ep. 692. When Joan is on her way to get the money (16:25 and 16:50), we see Joan's side profiles, as she stands still while wearing a blue jacket and plaid shirt. PCBH never disappoints on the details and with these brings such a satisfying close. Still, I've always wondered if there could be... just one more episode. Thank you!
@tradingpost24725 жыл бұрын
I saw everything happening as he read, so easy to feel like you're watching an episode! 💫
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
Thank you
@andrewswift8487Ай бұрын
The immediate post-Ferguson era of PCBH would have been fascinating. Who would have replaced Joan? (One fan fiction story had Terry Walters from Blackmoor as Joan’s replacement).Would Lorelei Wilkinson have returned to Wentworth from Ingleside once her trial for killing Craven was over? Would Rodney Adams have been sacked?
@jimmythebantam5 жыл бұрын
If they ever did some PCBH audiobooks, you should be a narrator.
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
I would love that!
@tradingpost24725 жыл бұрын
Fabulous mate, hung on every word, look forward to the next 'plus episode! 🖐️
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
I'll try to get one written up - I think there was more originally but the rest of it was never found sadly
@26hypnotica5 жыл бұрын
Really good stuff and definitely captured in the same adaptation of the show and characters we all know. Love the accent too.
@alanalexander6 жыл бұрын
Great job mate - hooked for part 2 now!
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Cheers Alex, me too to be honest. Can't really remember what happens next!!
@andrewwatson12062 жыл бұрын
Yes this is what would have happened if the series carried on . Ann and meg would have been sent to prison for their part in setting up Joan and Joan would have been made governor permanently
@Agnethatheredhairkid6 жыл бұрын
Absolutely top form! I can actually envisage this happening in the genuine script. You know me as TheOldJude.
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Thank you !
@123billydog4 жыл бұрын
Its taken a long time to actually getting round to hearing this and all I can say is wow. So impressively thought out and I never though a continuation of the closing episode was possible in all honesty. By 692, which was a highlight in the series, I thought a lot of the characters were very weak with poor backstories and a lack of likability but, this is a great piece of fiction....so far
@TFOOS4 жыл бұрын
Thank you - I was obviously well into the series when I wrote that and I'm so glad it surfaced again after all these years
@sirjaya25344 жыл бұрын
You were 17 when you wrote this? So good!
@TFOOS4 жыл бұрын
I was, thank you. Glad it resurfaced after all this time.
@alexjohnston8889 Жыл бұрын
Just watched the last episode, loved your 693, I wanted692 to end with a shot of Joan perhaps getting away with something and her still working at wentworth, putting on her gloves, smiling evilly at the camera as rthe show ends and her reign of terror continues
@pedanticradiator1491 Жыл бұрын
I know this video is a few years old now so I hope it's OK to comment. But i once posted on a Prisoner Facebook page my rough outline of what happened to each of the main characters after Episode 692 which was very different to this. If you are interested I could post it on here
@SaxyLament6 жыл бұрын
I could actually see all this happening in my mind!
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Cool! I sort of forgot where I was going with it - it is from about 20 years ago - but I myself am interested in where it might lead!
@davidmills33325 жыл бұрын
heres an idea for all us fans of the great soap, why dont we set up a crowd funding account to see if we can encourage a tv network to bring it back again, - not the awful WENTWORTH - but as the original was, I would donate £50 to it
@Summer21.4 жыл бұрын
David Mills That sounds like a brilliant idea! 😃😊👍🏻
@rossco54092 жыл бұрын
How could they bring the original back when most of the cast have past away!!! They did reinvent it with Wentworth, 9 series of a very successful rewrite. Shame you can't please everyone in life.
@marigold973 Жыл бұрын
I'm in! I cannot bring myself to watch the newish version called Wentworth because it appropriates previous characters by name so is kind of a cringe remake. I'd appreciate (and pay) to see a modern continuation of Wentworth presenting fresh faces.
@Mister_H6 жыл бұрын
Brilliant, gagging for the next instalment 👌
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Thank you Mr H!
@notreyf6 жыл бұрын
Honestly, really really good. Yeah, if it was a real script you would have edited and re-written parts. However, you have great writing ability. How about a few FanFiction sub plots? Vera's relationship with her mother, Mrs Davidson's dinner parties and Lizzie's life before she was arrested for poisoning the sheep shearers? If there's a man who can do it, it's you.
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much. I wrote this about 20 odd years ago so it's interesting to see how it's panning out!
@MegaOrwell842 жыл бұрын
If anybody didn't know anything about the legal system in Australia would consider this to be a masterpiece. One huge mistake: Western Australia is a state that is separate from the state of Victoria. As Prisoner is set in Victoria there is no reason why Joan would be sent to W.A. Why would a different jurisdiction in a different state take in Joan? She would only be held in a Victorian prison.
@pedanticradiator1491 Жыл бұрын
In the actual final episode Joan is transferred to a prison "out west" I assume that means W.A. unless West Victoria has prisons far enough away from Melbourne for no one to know her
@marigold973 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for this additional detail. My thinking is that Joan is unpopular and finally being set up at every turn. Willie Beecham on the outside and then Connors on the inside. Maybe she fell victim to corruption between states? (Jurisdiction means nothing to the lawless) Or the show is taking a bit of license? Or just plain wrong? Each viewer is left to draw his own conclusion.
@MegaOrwell84 Жыл бұрын
@@marigold973 It certainly doesn't diminish the brilliant alternative ending though that's for sure.
@Summer21. Жыл бұрын
I believe it was just for Joan’s safety, which was why she was transferred to another prison in another state. Female inmates all over Victoria would have heard of The Freak, but having said that, news of The Freak during the last 4 years, could have travelled fast and could have spread all over Australia. If Prisoner had been set in this era, news of The Freak’s wrongdoings during the last 4 years would been spread across Australia within minutes on the internet via social media.
@charlottewebb21844 жыл бұрын
Loved this only just found it 🤣🤣
@karennicholls22962 жыл бұрын
Me too and it's late April 1922. Don't know why I haven't come across it before.
@mashibinbin5 жыл бұрын
I can honestly say that was better scripted than some of the actual episodes of the show - well done indeed!
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
Thanks very much 😊
@byronjones81363 жыл бұрын
Brilliant. Good job mate. You need to do some follow ups.
@TFOOS3 жыл бұрын
Thanks you Byron - Its one of those things I "Keep meaning to do" but its hard getting round to it. I'm sure I wrote more back in the day but its lost to time now sadly
@phyllishammond98865 жыл бұрын
He looks like al Lewis ( grandpa from the Munsters)!
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
Who me?? 😂👍
@thequeenofsavings76534 жыл бұрын
Why has no one said this is a actual episode that already aired and he just changed a bit of it to sound like the ending of the story when they actually show this already on prisoner most of the words are the same how are any of you guys fans of this show and not know or call this out smdh shameful you can’t steal a already shown episode and change a few words not many the script you reading from was showed on prisoner
@johnm70274 жыл бұрын
Which already shown episode? I honestly can't recall it.
@byronjones81363 жыл бұрын
There is no episode 693. It ended at 692.
@white1943 Жыл бұрын
Decent plot but would've been better with Meg as governor
@carolmason486 жыл бұрын
♡♡♡♡ excellent writing
@TFOOS6 жыл бұрын
Thank you. I enjoyed reading it myself! Lol.
@musicfan80485 жыл бұрын
Wot's this about Meg's fingrprints and her being the driver lol
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
Its so long ago that I wrote it I can't remember where I was going with that. I think she just saw the car blocking the entrance and the keys were in it so she moved it - something like that.
@sirjaya25344 жыл бұрын
Rita were porleh, wont sheh?
@TFOOS4 жыл бұрын
She was aye
@theoriginalluppy5 жыл бұрын
What's this about a fan made episode! Has this ever been publicly released?
@TFOOS5 жыл бұрын
Well - I was in it and also filmed some of it. I do have a copy but out of respect for the guy who ran the project who doesn't ever want it to see the light of day again - I can't broadcast it but I do plan to do a video about it and t least have stills of the bits I was in.
@philnewton-england77954 жыл бұрын
We were just about to film our own (spoof) version before this malarkey all started. We have the uniforms, props,buildings !!!! Typical
@theoriginalluppy4 жыл бұрын
@@philnewton-england7795 sods law!!!
@philnewton-england77954 жыл бұрын
Probably a good thing 🤣🤣
@jameswebb49744 жыл бұрын
Thank you
@TFOOS4 жыл бұрын
Welcome!
@amandasleightholme4 ай бұрын
You would be great in a creative writing ckass
@mrscary17804 жыл бұрын
why does it not show you detective graces life his kids his wife