Punishment game (OC animatic)

there a few mistakes in this vid:
the background I made it myself
some of he lines in the backgrounds doesn't connected to the body and some of them are colour with them
02:44 the hair is glitching ;-;
02:47 the background is too small
to fast
that's all I guess
I made this for like 10 hours
OC used:
Yuri Tadaki (me)
Amami Kinetsu (my bf)
Yuzuki Aoi (my BFF)
that's all bye😁