Q3 Paper 1 Structure Grade 9 AQA (Mr Salles)

[@isabellekdaniels]

anyone else cramming the day before?

[@RedJonathon719]

yes bro xd

[@riki2993]

yes bro lol, ain't studying this shit subject in advance 😮‍💨

[@me-so4ez]

yes 100%

[@olivia-nf5xf]

perfect timing! i literally just did this paper so its great to look at some advice on how i could improve it!

[@r4ndom510]

what source and q5 did u get

[@TNT9182-j1e]

@@r4ndom510 they meant a practice paper

[@pepsimann2038]

@@r4ndom510 not the actual paper lmaoo

[@laurensmith1820]

Finding this channel was a revelation thank you so much Mr Salles!! Your revision guide is amazing too!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Glad to hear it! Good luck

[@islaurve]

my teachers focus so much on single word analysis that watching your vids feels like a whole new world of english!! thank you so much, you are a god send 🙏🙏

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

You're very welcome!

[@shan3769]

Always loved your energy Sir! I got this paper in a week so thank you for this.

[@ismetren7973]

Same lol, gl

[@dalmapeller2285]

Mr salle your ideas are really good! i feel like I couldn't think like you tbh!

[@zaratariq4222]

I just did my English language gcse today and I felt so confident on the structure. There was a cyclical ending and I talked about… ur right sir the examiners love cyclical structures😂

[@stabmurad]

thanks Salles mate, just got a grade 9

[@alihamajid9004]

Hi Mr salles, can you please explain the difference between effect and influence on the reader ,which is part of Ao2?

[@BrainZombie]

I literally have English Language tomorrow. Thanks for the help Sir

[@chloethorneycroft6973]

Me too, good luck!

[@visualfrog2389]

Good luck with it.

[@visualfrog2389]

@@chloethorneycroft6973 Good luck, you've got this!

[@eyi2421]

it is my first time commenting on youtube! And I must say, Sir, you have saved my life😭😭😭 Thank you soooo much! I am gonna nail the English exam tomorrow!!!!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Glad I could help!

[@Felixwas_there]

Yessir... i am also watching for tomorrow's exam

[@maarr77]

HI sir i just received my english literature mock and got a 7. ive never gotten that before at the end of year 10 mocks i got a high 4 low 5 and want to thank you i hope to get an 8 in the real thing :)

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

You can. Go for it!

[@fimpero994]

a bit scared for this exam because my biology didnt go too well today. Hope i do well tomorrow

[@PotassiumLover33]

@Vidura Jaysooriya which parts are u referring to?

[@RedJonathon719]

@Vidura Jaysooriya honestly was a bit confusd with the question about mimicry, what did you put for that one? (if u do triple)

[@dahlia5644]

@@RedJonathon719 i did triple and i said it would put them off because they think that it is the hornet rather than the hornet moth, it's quite an open question imo . they literally didnt put anything on the heart!

[@tsk_rl1499]

@@RedJonathon719 I basically just said the hornet moth mimics a hornet so any predators will see it as a hornet and avoid it, which stops it from being eaten

[@tsk_rl1499]

@@dahlia5644 I and everyone I spoke to said they thought it was quite easy though, I was quite happy with how it went, the worst question was the metabolic rate one

[@Ruby-hn9cy]

Hi, can you make a video about how to structure the inspector calls essay? and the love and relationships poetry?

[@JiJi_fluffyberries]

did they not take out poetry at your school? cos they took it out at mine we dont have to do poetry

[@zakkhuncho8272]

@@JiJi_fluffyberries the school choose what to take out my school took out the 19th century novel

[@Ruby-hn9cy]

no we took out christmas carol

[@Anonymous-sz5fw]

@@Ruby-hn9cy yeah, the 19th century novel (a Christmas Carol)

[@jasmeenkaur29-f1i]

@@JiJi_fluffyberries we took out poetry

[@10ney]

how does he waffle that well and that quickly

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Practice, young Skywalker

[@youssefhashimi4901]

your energy is unmatched

[@me-so4ez]

ngl kinda freaking out about this exam tomorrow- i swear im actually going to get a 3 like how do i improve to get a 4 omggg

[@itskyras06xo77]

Use semi colons

[@king-kb2ox]

Learn a description and apply to a story something ill do im actually scared😭

[@evlynnnnnn]

Start with question 5 (easy marker and biggest) and then go straight to q1 and do that. Annotate the extract LOTS especially if you struggle with putting anything down onto paper. If you struggle with timing , don't plan. Your annotated extract will be enough. Point, quote or reference to text, what does it convey and what does does reader feel. If all else fails in language questions use imagery, there will always be imagry. For structure, use focus change, there will always be one. Or dialogue, if there is any. Q4 , if you're stuck, just use the same techniques for the other questions you did and rewrite it to the question.

[@greenappleaven]

Could you talk about short sentences, their placements and lists or does that fall into language? Similarly with analysing a sentence length and it's effect

[@vanillamilkshake759]

Thank you so much!! Watched your video right before the paper and I think it went well :))

[@inkz3520]

9:27 was the really the most supernatural thing in this vid tbh

[@fatifatou6704]

Could you please do question 4

[@woknow9356]

Quick question how many paragraphs would u advise to do for this question and would it be fine to do 2 paragraphs for this question as this is what I normally do

[@j5studies344]

Generally, try to write as much as possible, but 3 elite paragraphs will be good enough for this question. Try to have a paragraph on the beginning, one on the middle and one on the end, commenting on how the focus shifts, the effect on the reader and ofc structural techniques.

[@woknow9356]

@@j5studies344 thanks!

[@alexj1295]

2 paragraphs is great, 1 might do if you use enough evidence and explanation

[@strawbellies8641]

My teacher says to do 2-3 paragraphs. If you have 2 really good paragraphs then only do 2. If you have 2 okay paragraphs try to do another.

[@j5studies344]

The Goat came in clutch !

[@sivathanushansivanathan7212]

@Mr Salles Teaches English what could happen if you get caught plagiarising?

[@lumosv1014]

Hi sir, thank you for the video! I wanted to ask you whether we can write about sentence structure in this question? Thanks again! Good luck to everyone for tomorrow!

[@yhyh4781]

Mr salles what should I do if I’m a slow reader and need to read things multiple times to fully understand them???:)

[@dahlia5644]

felt the second half of ur statement

[@muhammed_kadhimi]

Use a highlighter while reading it

[@user-lr8pg3wi7q]

don’t read the whole extract until q3 trust saves so much time

[@dalmapeller2285]

oKAY I THINK iam okay with question 3 now! tyt ty

[@kardigansutha2983]

Would it be better to do Q5 first before section A ?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

yes

[@peaceubah3439]

Thanks sir, You have made this more understandable(Q3)

[@Muhammad_ali1066]

30mins before my English exam and now I’m watching him

[@Blessingstevens06]

Hey if u see this can u please put the example paragraph in the description as a document so I’m able to print it to look over it plz

[@magiclasagna622]

Computer science : 👍 Biology : ⬆️ English : ?

[@zaratariq4222]

sociology: :/ biology: ;p english lang: ????

[@pepsimann2038]

computer science 🥶 biology 😬 english 🪦

[@anitastoyanova1170]

religious studies: 😐 Biology:😌 English language: 😢

[@mirshathmohamed2814]

Computer science: 👑 Biology: 👑 Chemistry: 👑 Maths: 👑 English: 🤮

[@jerryanderson6217]

Oh my goodness I am so weak on this ahhhh!!!

[@LoversOfSaheehAlBukhari]

Thank you soo much for this!

[@judeborgan6012]

Hi sir, will you do a video for Q4?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Editing it now. It's killing me!

[@alexandraalban6830]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you for your service!

[@volkayno5690]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you 🙏

[@judeborgan6012]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you so much :D

[@Jakeybakey5]

Hi, why are verbs being mentioned if the q is on structure ?? surely language analysis doesn’t help:’)

[@Rasool.]

thats what im wondering, q3 is the hardest question for me i just cant get my head around it

[@zaratariq4222]

@@Rasool. because theres no harm in adding them as the markscheme doesnt rlly say not to but at the same time you also wont get any extra marks for stating its a verb but also wont lose marks.

[@Rasool.]

@@zaratariq4222 oh thanks so much, i really need to get a grip of this question b4 tmwr

[@zaratariq4222]

@@Rasool. literally same idk wether to fully agree to the statement or to agree to an extent it’s stressing me out so much.

[@Rasool.]

@@zaratariq4222 my teacher was saying alot of the perceptive students tend to strongly agree

[@roccoviljoen2502]

Hi Mr Salles, may you please predict the Frankenstein question and give me some help as it is a difficult text and thank you for making these videos. I have gone from a 6 to an 8/9

[@milesblack1830]

shush

[@roccoviljoen2502]

@@milesblack1830 You're mental mate

[@merryethan2497]

@@milesblack1830 😂

[@DerpyMemeLord]

i literally just did this at school wowow

[@smashaj2955]

thank you

[@not...not...no.643]

Hello MR SALLES CAN U PLEASE MaKe a video about what to do if BOTH TASKS ARE TO WRITE A STORY as it was in NOVEMBER 2017 AND NOVEMBER 2018 ive used ur vids to undwertsand how to do description and i would be STUCK if they were both a story 😭😭😭

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

It's in my Livestream from last night. Check out the desctiption and find your spot

[@not...not...no.643]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank u ever so much i hope my rant didnt scare ur neighbour's cat's wife

[@banana_jellyfish8311]

This is very useful

[@Hannah-rs5oi]

good luck for everyone tomorrow!

[@not...not...no.643]

yday exam 📈 today exam 📉 tmrw❓❓❓

[@aimeeday2620]

thank u so much

[@king-kb2ox]

How do i structure a story

[@zaratariq4222]

start w setting describe it in detail then next paragraph introduce a character descibe why he is significant then next paragraph create a problem that involves that character(climax) then following paragraphs find a resolution then last paragraph create a circular structure i.e talk about the weather as mentioned in your first paragraph.

[@ysfabds]

@@zaratariq4222 can u explain what a circular structure is pls??

[@zaratariq4222]

@@ysfabds it’s where the source ends the same way it begins. So if the source at the beginning mentions a girl drinking water and then the final paragraphs mention a water bottle that is a circular structure because it’s gone back into a circle and talked about water again

[@Ziad-cp3lu]

U are amazing

[@brandonbush5668]

Bosch!

[@mad-tr7fc]

life saver

[@sglenny001]

Shit I didn't write a summary

[@Terrencetao-]

Gl

[@hassanziyara1214]

HEY SALLY, AM SO JEALOUS OF UR HAIR QT;)

[@Y54F]

Bosh 😂