Rainworld - custom threat - The precipice!

[@cakevore]

this is good! can imagine being chased around with this drumming at the back of my ears

[@justgames2788]

thanks for the feedback!

[@VYNAIUS]

"gentle bells" Very cool!

[@justgames2788]

Thanks!

[@chibsmf96]

this actually sounds sick as hell

[@justgames2788]

thanks same as your vids!

[@jpeg6541]

this is good

[@justgames2788]

thanks!

[@jessiesowter]

While it does sound good as a threat theme, it's basically the same as your 'The Wall' threat theme. The Precipice is an entirely different area, so I don't understand why they have such similar threat themes. As another commenter said, you seem to like that particular bell melody, and it _is_ probably the third or fourth time you've used it. If you're struggling to find a melody you like, I suggest looking on the web for musical samples to give you some inspiration. While the melody is okay, it gets annoying after a while and kind of ruins the threat track. I also suggest either replacing it with something more creative, or just removing it. The arps don't really fit in with regular arps - I thought it was a bassline when I first heard it. Maybe change the pitch and/or the instrument to give it more of an "arps" vibe. Listen to a couple of the original threat tracks with arps and you should see what I mean. Maybe add a kick layer? Generally, all threat themes have this layer, so i don't understand why this one in particular does not. The bass layer doesn't sound at all like a regular bass layer. It's more like a kick, just more synth-sounding. I also think that layer is a little bit too loud, i suggest changing the volume a little, if possible. The piano layer sounds good, just... the timing sucks. It's not in sync with anything. Again, the music sounds alright, it just has many flaws.

[@justgames2788]

bro im just bad 🗿

[@MojiEmoji]

criticize my threat theme now 😎

[@justgames2788]

Hey I gave up on making these and learnt to edit videos thanks for the comments!

[@very-mean-spirited-lizard]

Criticism was not requested. However, if you choose multiple times to engage with me about the goodness of rain world threat themes in the comment section I feel that I have natural permission to share my thoughts here too. Music is ok. Could be more creative though. You seem to like that certain bell melody and re-used a third or fourth time now. This is especially weird, because apparantly this upload is dedicated to a different region (Precipe is part of Shoreline). Honestly, this bell melody is not very good. For me it is easily the worst part of all your music pieces. Again, only my opinion, but they would all be better if you just deleted that specific track without replacement. Why don't you spent 15 minutes on googling how to properly render a video for youtube? I understand the frustration that it did not work out in your preferred program, but this is not really an excuse. One thing I noticed is sound artefacts in these videos because of your method.

[@justgames2788]

Thanks! I don't mind the criticism, it's just I've been sometimes working on the song, but I diddent want to put the wall a third time!, I know I should edit the videos too, I should do it but it gets a bit annoying like you said

[@justgames2788]

I like fish

[@justgames2788]

🤓

[@justgames2788]

Hey I thought about what you said and started learning to edit my videos, thanks also my friend wrote those last 2 comments