⚰️ reacting to feedback on my writing // is my book even *good*?

[@ChancellorMarko]

Y'all have the best critique circle it's not even fair!⚰️

[@lynndjung]

i am SO lucky

[@KrisMF]

i NEED the rest of this book like you don't understand..... honoured to be an early reader for a future bestseller

[@lynndjung]

[@kelleyiswriting]

OMG i'm nervous to watch my feedback being reacted HAHA thank you so much for letting me read and I LOVED

[@lynndjung]

ty for reading and for sharing your own words!! i love doing these swaps with you and your feedback was wonderful

[@AshDaniWrites]

This was such a fun watch and really motivated me to continue my outline so I can eventually get feedback on my writing. The feedback you received has me even more excited for your book! Can't wait until it's publicly available one day ⚰

[@lenny33_reads]

MOTHER HAS POSTEDDD

[@lynndjung]

LOLL love this energy

[@AriBPK]

loved this, lynn! it's always the best to get feedback as a sanity check to make sure things are hitting the way you want! so excited for crypts ⚰

[@lynndjung]

tysm ari!! haha i'm glad i'm not the only one. i'm excited for crypts too!

[@Eldalynn]

I've been so nervous on sending people my work. Watching this has given me hope that feedback won't be as bad as I've made it in my head.

[@lynndjung]

i promise it won't be! ty for watching

[@ByJasmineDayton]

Oooo this is so fun! I love seeing their different and similar takes. SO excited for you!

[@lynndjung]

it's always so interesting to see how different perspectives 'see' the same story! tysm

[@jennlimwrites]

Is it weird to say that I enjoy the friendship between you three haha it’s so nice to see how you all collaborate with and support each other. I am so curious about what all is wrong with Alessia and can’t wait for more ⚰️

[@lynndjung]

loll not at all, I enjoy our friendship a lot as well!! 'what all is wrong with Alessia' made me cackle, I can't wait to share more about this odd lady

[@awritingdai]

Getting feedback from your friends (maybe even especially from your friends??) is sooo nerve racking!! Being vulnerable is hard, even with your favourite people!! Glad it went well!!! 😊

[@writewithjoy]

⚰️ how exciting!! as a reader, half the time I go in completely blind and don’t even read the blurb (especially if I’m reading based on recommendation), so my preference is to write the book as if the reader knows literally nothing.

[@lynndjung]

this is so interesting and super helpful to know, ty!

[@e_nyuszi]

Yay she's back!!

[@jaswriting]

uwaaah I love this video so much! I just got my beta reading notes from a writing group I'm in and I'm putting off reading it for a day now 🙈 I know they all have lovely and helpful notes for me but it's really nerve-wracking haha but this video gave me a boost of motivation! Lovely video as always, Lynn!☕

[@rosebudnicoll]

love this!!! and the book sounds so good!! 🤍

[@Lara_Ameen]

I love the way Kris and Kelley give feedback! It’s such a wonderful way to do it! 😍 I’m sure your prose is absolutely stunning! 🥹🥰 I also love the way you dissect it! I’m obsessed with the gothic vibes, ghosts, and I can’t wait to learn more about Alessia’s female rage! I hope it also sells on sub so I can sensitivity read it! Haha. 🥰📝

[@lynndjung]

Thank you so much Lara!! I'm so grateful to have them as friends. I can't wait to share more about Alessia as well!!

[@CheyenneSedai]

⚰ I'm so excited for this book, but also you're lucky to have friends that can be so in depth and insightful with their critiques.

[@lynndjung]

i truly am-manifesting the same for all writers!

[@jarrardraju7984]

BABE, WAKE UP NEW LYNN VIDEO DROPPED

[@heyyitssj]

I’m about to solicit beta readers and I’m so nervous to be getting feedback on my book 🙈

[@lynndjung]

It's so nerveracking fr - but you've got this!! ultimately it will help the project!!

[@lexiewritesfortheGods]

⚰️ LYNN D. JUNG HAS POSTED (it's a sign to get my life together, i have 3 assignments to do today lol) good luck with your writing!!

[@Annakuijken]

Can honestly not wait to read the book. Sounds so good. Any change we can get to know more about the magic? 🍵

[@lynndjung]

thank you so much!! i would love to chat more about the magic system - making a note for my next writing vlog for this project!

[@Grace-rf114]

LYNN HAS DONE IT AGAIN⚰

[@σκοτάδι-υ7σ]

You said inundate girl. Your speaking is amazing

[@lianperezcedeno]

Thank you for this. 🤍

[@nataliejaneshields]

So excited to read your bestseller when it hit shelves 😍⚰

[@lynndjung]

aw Natalie!! tysm that is so sweet!

[@carololiveira4831]

I think you could drop hints that it’s about revenge in the beginning, but not tell us what for until much later? It would keep a mystery up, but give us some info ⚰️

[@CuddlySketches]

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[@lynndjung]

[@cynthiawrites]

it's always exciting and nerve wracking when friends look over your work. i'm curious to see what's up with alessia ⚰

[@KeanuEugene]

Ok, just found this video by chance, never seen any of your content before and I've never read the book. But from this video it sounds like you simply do too much showing and not enough telling. Not telling in the most obvious way of 'Main character does this' to the audience. But using your words and descriptions along with dialogue tags the tell the audience 'It's alright to be confused here', at least that's what I do in my writing. Great video by the way, love when people show the process not just the success.

[@mikwrites]

we love project crypts!!! i love how clear you are in what type of feedback you want to receive and I'm definitely taking that moving forward - you have the best critique partners ⚰🤍

[@joymello5102]

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