A lot of men completely miss that message of having a second chance and use manga like vagabond to “go their villain arc.”

This was really interesting! I always feel so critical of my own writings but I really enjoyed listening to how your explain ideas on the tone and execute the voice.

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Happy Holidays Lynn sorry 4 the hiatus, life punched me in the gut.

How many short stories can I finish in a day? Then proceeds to take on the entire plot of an epic fantasy novel for the first one 😅 All the best for the new year!

loved this video lynn! kudos to you for writing in second person, i'm too scared to 😂

this was such a fun video, lynn! kudos to you for trying second person, i am too scared 😂

🪱this is so inspiring, i enjoy writing short stories and i would love to see you do a story a day!

Appreciate the detailed breakdown! Just a quick off-topic question: I have a SafePal wallet with USDT, and I have the seed phrase. (alarm fetch churn bridge exercise tape speak race clerk couch crater letter). How should I go about transferring them to Binance?

So many words!! Omg, that’s awesome

This a very specific comment that exposes me as a designer, but what are the fonts you use in your videos? Lol, I think the cursive one is so cool

🪱 Ahh, great motivation for me to write! Have 2 weeks off and I'll be using it to work on my book. Merry Christmas/Festive Season Lynn and everyone in the comments. May 2025 be a great writing year for us all 🌟

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hi! love your vids lynn! I was wondering what walking pad you have and if you'd be willing to share how long you have it and if you recommend it? I've been thinking about getting one and there are just so many options hahaha thanks!

this is so exciting to me!! I haven’t written a short story in years, but I’ve been itching to exercise those muscles again, so I went back and reread some of my old work that I never submitted and it makes me want to revise them and find the right lit magazine, if I can 🥹🪱

Whooo Lynn video! These always put a smile on my face. Also thank you for your backlog of streams, one of them got me through my writing goal from yesterday when it was past midnight and I really needed to just get those words on the page.

after reading one of your published short stories i just these are amazing 🪱

Oooo loved this video! All your ideas and titles sound so intriguing. The daily short story challenge is such a good idea. Would love to see that. Started my short story journey this year. None finished lol but hope to get to them all next year.

Really enjoyed this video, Lynn! I started writing short fiction this year and it made me realize I can't write short stories cause I'm an overwriter so my stories have been turning out to be novellas instead 🤣 But I've grown to really enjoy writing shorter fiction and I wanna continue writing them in between writing full length novels! 🐛

omg this is so fun!! I would love to do this one day 💕💕 i start a lot of things and almost never finish hAHA so watching this was super motivational!! YOU'RE AMAZING LYNN i can't wait to read ALL of these <3 and SNOWDROPS i literally think about this story all the time. ❄🪱

Great job! Sort stories is something I want to look into at some point as well, even if it's only for myself 😃 🪱🪱🪱

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🪱 This has inspired me to finish a bunch of short stories that I’ve left for way too long :)

🪱I loved the video it was exactly what I needed for motivation to finish my own short story before the year ends. Thanks for the video💕💕

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Never been so early🙂‍↔️ Bless you and your energy,, always gets me in a writing mood ❤

watching this as inspo to work on my own fairytale-esque short stories ☠

Hey great job on those short stories. Those categories and titles sounds interesting. Keep up the good work Lynn.

Can honestly not wait to read the book. Sounds so good. Any change we can get to know more about the magic? 🍵

Here are my tips for writing horror. 1. Horror is supposed to be genuinely terrifying, so write about something you would not want to witness. 2. Introduce at least 1 person with antisocial personality disorder in your story, because this person is going to lead the reader from the first pages to the conclusion. 3. Describe the passions of your main characters first - what motivates them, including the villain, and why. 4. Read a ton of books and articles about things, then describe the mind - set to determine if its fixed, or growth - based. 5. Research other mental disorders than aspd. 6. While you are writing, focus on the horror fan community - these are going to be the ones who will judge your novel based on your ability to put yourself into the shoes of its characters, and how good the output and the input is. 7. Use your bad novels as a guide to follow the advise of those who criticise them the most. 8. Use your own intuition. 9. Just because you are writing a horror novel does not mean it has to be about demons or about ghosts, it can be about, for example the Deepwater Horizon oil disaster. It can be about Vamco, despite it´s 2024. It can be about a family or a friend who died following a covid jab schedule. 10. Follow Lynn´s advise and other similar advise on how to write effective horror, and understand that, the more effective it is, the closer your reader will be to madness. Try take a classic book title and see if you can flip it´s meaning upside down and make it be about a horror, life in the Wild West, robotics, etc.

I know I'm late, but I love these types of videos - so interesting to hear your thought process!

You said inundate girl. Your speaking is amazing

Thank you for this. 🤍

Good advice

we love project crypts!!! i love how clear you are in what type of feedback you want to receive and I'm definitely taking that moving forward - you have the best critique partners ⚰🤍

I love the way Kris and Kelley give feedback! It’s such a wonderful way to do it! 😍 I’m sure your prose is absolutely stunning! 🥹🥰 I also love the way you dissect it! I’m obsessed with the gothic vibes, ghosts, and I can’t wait to learn more about Alessia’s female rage! I hope it also sells on sub so I can sensitivity read it! Haha. 🥰📝

Is it weird to say that I enjoy the friendship between you three haha it’s so nice to see how you all collaborate with and support each other. I am so curious about what all is wrong with Alessia and can’t wait for more ⚰️

the amount of motivation and hope i got watching this😭🥹 congrats again lynn and thank you for filming this so we could be a part of it with you!!!🫶

OMG i'm nervous to watch my feedback being reacted HAHA thank you so much for letting me read and I LOVED <3 i feel super grateful to read an early draft 💕☺⚰⚰⚰

Whenever I change the character even slightly, I either make sure it lines up with their backstory or I'm changing that backstory bro! I'm so glad you are sharing this witth writers who don't know this, though! :D

Ok, just found this video by chance, never seen any of your content before and I've never read the book. But from this video it sounds like you simply do too much showing and not enough telling. Not telling in the most obvious way of 'Main character does this' to the audience. But using your words and descriptions along with dialogue tags the tell the audience 'It's alright to be confused here', at least that's what I do in my writing. Great video by the way, love when people show the process not just the success.

I'm writing a horror/romance novel where two girl detectives end up falling in love while investigating an abandoned mansion.

Oooo this is so fun! I love seeing their different and similar takes. SO excited for you!

⚰ I'm so excited for this book, but also you're lucky to have friends that can be so in depth and insightful with their critiques.

Wow, I just found out, I had a problem. During my writing, I came so many things, My final was developing structure, and I use mind map, when all things are set, I had a problem giving it back to content, due to the big picture of the structure. Hope that make sense. LOL Think of it like the book is Encoded, now I need to decoded.

I think you could drop hints that it’s about revenge in the beginning, but not tell us what for until much later? It would keep a mystery up, but give us some info ⚰️

love this!!! and the book sounds so good!! 🤍

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