Revealing my MUNDANE Yale Supplements | Kevin Zhen Ezra Stiles Class of 2020

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ElevatEd School

ElevatEd School

3 жыл бұрын

I just want you guys to know that when I applied to Yale… I LITERALLY GOOGLED “why yale.” And the answer to my other Yale supplements were essentially spliced up versions of my essays I recycled for other schools. Truth be told, I don't think my responses were anything special. Maybe the writing quality was good...? I'm not sure. This was four years ago. Let me know your thoughts in the comment section below!
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@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool Жыл бұрын
Hi everyone! In the two years since we started this channel, we've helped more than 70+ students get into every single Ivy League School, Stanford, MIT and more! If you're interested in working with us, please visit our website: www.elevated.school/getstarted. And if you'd like your essay edited by a member of our team, visit www.elevated.school/editmyessay . Also, please note that we do take on exceptional low-income students every year, so if you identify as part of that group and would like a scholarship, let us know! I hope you found this video helpful and are having a wonderful day 😇
@radishdocx
@radishdocx 6 ай бұрын
Dear Kevin, I don't think you must cure cancer to have an impactful essay. I really enjoyed your essay because it was community-oriented and the imagery was wonderful. I also liked the fact that you cared enough to potray specific instances oh how the children reacted to you at first vs after. Thank you for taking the time out to making these videos.
@thiagogregory1
@thiagogregory1 3 жыл бұрын
Your last essay and your commentary brought tears to my eyes. I am a 16-year-old guy, and I love to volunteer/help, and specifically, I love to help kids! I feel like they are the future, and seeing them grow, and grow happy, smart, safe, brings joy to my eyes. I too dream of being a dad one day. I have been thinking of this since I was a little kid myself lol. Many say I need to enjoy my youth years and don't think of this too soon, and I don't plan on having kids anytime soon tbh, BUT, I can't help but always think of my future as a parent, a husband, an employee, etc. Children are literally little angels and they can be shaped to be anything, so why not shape them to be happy, help their communities, and... change the world for the better!
@UnpleasantlyPeasantly
@UnpleasantlyPeasantly 2 жыл бұрын
Who here is an applicant nervously comparing your essays to successful ones?
@Hehehe-fj9uz
@Hehehe-fj9uz 3 жыл бұрын
I was actually looking forward to this video thank you so much! It’s really cool you were able to really construct a narrative. Although I agree that the first essay could be considered “mundane”, I would say that the subsequent ones (especially the last one) were quite insightful and thought provoking! Also I left my info for a Friday 20 minute session so looking forward to that!
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
you're welcome man! glad you found this helpful and insightful :)
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
Hey guys! If you found this video even mildly entertaining or helpful, it would really mean the world if you considered liking and subscribing -- the channel is very small, so everything helps! 😇
@rishikagupta2032
@rishikagupta2032 3 жыл бұрын
I love your channel so much...you're one of the most helpful and genuine college KZbinrs :)) Thankuu!!
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
You’re too kind Rishika :)
@jessxcali
@jessxcali 2 жыл бұрын
Watching this in 2021 but just wanted to say thank you!! These are incredibly helpful as I'm wrapping up my college supplements. And I think your dream of becoming a dad and cooking for your wife is the greatest dream there is - to have a life where you can use your skills in expressing love to close ones is awesome :))
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the kind comment Jessica!! Glad you found this helpful :)
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
🎓 How to get into an Ivy-League College 2021 [playlist]: bit.ly/ivyzhensei ✏️ My Common App Essay: kzbin.info/www/bejne/maaUfH2fgaeUg68 ✍️ My Yale Supp Essays: kzbin.info/www/bejne/pKjHk4WoiLitg80 😱 My Yale Admissions File: kzbin.info/www/bejne/kKDRpompprWir5o 🙋 Interviewing Friends in College: bit.ly/collegewinterviews 🙏 SUBSCRIBE to my Microscopic channel so I can teach you everything about college, life and college life pls: bit.ly/kevinzhenytsub 😩 Buy me a coffee lmao: ko-fi.com/kingkev98 If you feel overwhelmed during the college apps process, check out go to collegeadvisor.com/kevin-zhensei to get a FREE Ivy League Strategy Session! This a great resource for helping you strategize your narrative, craft your essays, and boost your extracurriculars! 100% free people!!
@royzhao6537
@royzhao6537 2 жыл бұрын
Hello
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
@@royzhao6537 sup roy
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
Here's a Google Doc link to my Yale supplements! docs.google.com/document/d/1Z3cQwxQhUj-sM_1tu3nx4ZJumyOuUDAcBOJZwi47Mjg/edit?usp=sharing
@ayechanphyo6672
@ayechanphyo6672 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! Your answers and light hearted tone kinda make me relieve since the due date for college app are approaching!!phew!
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
@@ayechanphyo6672 you're welcome! good luck Aye!
@ayechanphyo6672
@ayechanphyo6672 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool Thank you so much, Kevin! Btw how can I contact you if I want a college counseling session ?Do you still accept senior’s college application review since the deadline is quite close(I am stay taking time to get it done”)?
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
yup! you can schedule a time here: bit.ly/botherkevin20
@ayechanphyo6672
@ayechanphyo6672 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool I am sorry! Just to make sure, the session are for reviewing common app essays right or just in general for questions as I would need to schedule it in estimate of when I can finalize my app if it is the former one.
@khyatimahto8691
@khyatimahto8691 3 жыл бұрын
OMG, I came across your channel today itself and I've literally watched most of your videos. I'm a 9th grader and your videos are really, really helpful!! tysm :) So, I was just wondering if you have any suggestion on submitting an arts portfolio. Like, if my arts supplement isn't good enough for a college/uni...can I get rejected based on that!?
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
hi Khyati! glad to see you starting early! short answer is No - you won't get rejected simply because of your arts portfolio. Generally speaking, I wouldn't submit an arts portfolio unless you've won at least state-level awards for your artwork. Hope that helps!
@khyatimahto8691
@khyatimahto8691 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool tysm :)
@elaineli1155
@elaineli1155 2 жыл бұрын
Hey :) Do you do a essay editing service?
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
Yup! Email me at kevin@zhened.com for more details
@meerakochhar2527
@meerakochhar2527 3 жыл бұрын
Is Yale’s food that good? I’ve been finding mixed reviews online. Are they better than a lot of other colleges’ food? Lol
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
Great question! It depends on the dining hall lol. When I was there the new colleges had amaazingggg food, but some of the older ones were not as good.
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
I've also tried other colleges' food, like Princeton, Harvard, Brown, etc. and I think Yale's is better :D
@meerakochhar2527
@meerakochhar2527 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschoolOk, thank you! I’m a big foodie so it’s good to know 😋
@neelukalra2482
@neelukalra2482 2 жыл бұрын
Hello Kevin - would you be able to do a 20 minute chat as indicated at the end of your video to review Yale essays. I'm not sure what the criteria is or if the offer is still open. Thank you
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
Sure! Just schedule a time here: bit.ly/botherkevin20
@yesimkhanh9932
@yesimkhanh9932 2 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool is it free?
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 2 жыл бұрын
@@yesimkhanh9932 yup!
@shaamsnur8089
@shaamsnur8089 3 жыл бұрын
Daily uploads???
@elevatedschool
@elevatedschool 3 жыл бұрын
for this week lol
@shaamsnur8089
@shaamsnur8089 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool keep it coming!
@abhiroopreddy8673
@abhiroopreddy8673 3 жыл бұрын
@@elevatedschool kevin world domination!!!
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