Shadows of the Past - Original Song

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[@Keram-io8hv]

This is canon voice of Lorgar for me from now "Iam not the creature you fought on Istvann," said Lorgar while raising his mace. "Nor am I!"

[@sigma2586]

✨Raven lord✨

[@Aryan_homophobe]

Lorgar at the beginning "I am ready for the coming strife" Lorgar 5 minutes later "ABORT! ABORT! I WAS NOT READY! I repeat. I WAS NOT READY!"

[@silentnight6810]

...I'm tied between laughing at the comment or going wtf at your username 🤣

[@fqnoqetuoetgon]

SECTOR NOT CLEAR SECTOR NOT CLE

[@e21big]

@@fqnoqetuoetgon "Ready" "NOT READ NOT RE-"

[@alericantonelli4656]

​@@silentnight6810least he's honest lol

[@AgreeableSmile]

So true

[@spartana1116]

When logar learned why a group of crows is called a murder

[@RJKY6676]

An Unkindness. Corvus Corax is the Common Raven. Corvus Corone is Common Crow.

[@user-ic1gf8pg9m]

its lorgar actually not logar

[@Warhammer_AI]

​@@RJKY6676 It's him, the 11th Primarch Corvus Corone

[@e21big]

Love that Lorgar got the sweet honeycomb choire boy voice while Corax go full metal lol

[@PhillyTheKid]

We all know lorgars history with choire boys

[@bombercbc9431]

I'm now imagining all of raven guards chapters being fan of old terra metal songs as their drop pods dive deep into enemy territories

[@icdansheep1873]

I really love the characters singing against each other, same with Rylanor's Last Stand. Honestly one of my favorite things overall in music lately

[@enderfire3379]

I think you'd like hazbin hotel

[@icdansheep1873]

@@enderfire3379 Already on my list to watch, but thanks! :D

[@TheHorreK2]

I will never forget the Heresy moment of istvann, when Lorgar had his Dragon Ball Z Power-Up moment only for Corax to swoop in, slaugthter all of his body guard and almost instantly kill Lorgar if it wasnt for Konrad.

[@ricardoandre7049]

And Konrad wasnt even happy for saving Lorgar. He instulted him imidiatly

[@MarqFJA87]

@@ricardoandre7049 Yeah, Konrad really only got involved to deny Corax (whom he hated a lot for being so similar yet so different) his kill, rather than actually wanting to save Lorgar's life.

[@ricardoandre7049]

@@MarqFJA87 Konrad literaly saved his cause he is suposed to be alive after istvaan (fate bullshit), not cause he cares.

[@MarqFJA87]

@@ricardoandre7049 I did say that he didn't care about Lorgar; in fact, he expresses his hatred of said brother immediately after saving his ass. And he can have more than one reason to do it; he hates Corax's guts more than Lorgar's, and he doesn't want to have his belief about the immutability of his future visions be disproven, so he intervened.

[@hastatischarf9074]

The switch to harsh vocals gave me genuine goosebumps

[@madgizmo2212]

Man, Corax lurking in the rafters of Lorgar's house porch waiting to mug him for his lunch money has never sounded so awesome.

[@Khawlidor]

I think of that one time Patrick was hanging underneath an arch while waiting for SpongeBob with a malicious grin.

[@JinzoTK]

I love that ending. It highlights their current mindsets so well. Lorgar relying on his beliefs. Corvus consumed by his revenge.

[@Vincentius_Cardinal]

Everyone's talking about the vocal switch up, but the line that hit me hardest was I would have called you brother in brighter days. It's always tragic when Brothers must go to battle.

[@lt.danhooper1635]

An unexpected surprise to be sure, but a welcome one.

[@Epifairos]

Came here to say those words, brother.

[@eotwkdp]

Corvus corax with a single goal and remembering all that who were lost and what was lost. Despite the warps (mainly the areas where chaos owns )tendency to corrupt he pushed through and growing stronger. Another step in becoming as powerful as his father but differently. The lord of ravens.

[@Cat-o_Sicarius]

LOOOOOOOOORGAR I'LL HUNT YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH LORGAR

[@UncleAsmos2005]

*YOU CAN'T ESCAPE ME!* *I'LL CHASE YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARP!*

[@HeinrichMuller-mv6hn]

There is actually a Theory that the daemonization of the Traitors blocked their full potential aka being powerful warp beings stronger than Greater Daemons in their own right.

[@kronos661]

And it seems to be true, after all even demonised they ultimately did not defeat their brothers.

[@Goldenspartan86]

In Daemonology a daemon comments that Mortarion was a natural and had an insane potential. Since while even just a beginner he was able to shackle a greater warp entity. But he was doomed from birth by nurgle who meddled with his fate from the start and his bitterness towards the witch stopped him from potentially being as strong a psyker as Magnus. If not for the grandfathers meddling they probably would have been great friends rather than mortal enemies.

[@KriegeroftheLake]

Considering the powers Corvus is displaying now, yeah, I’d believe it

[@hammer1349]

I think the truth lies in who has control. Lorgar has gained his powers from the Chaos Gods, thus are limited intentionally and somewhat passively as well. They don't want another Horus or another rival so they only give him so much. Corax's powers come from his own soul and those the chaos gods have damned. Betrayal and fury, vengeance and shadow - corax is in someway I'd argue fed by it all. He says it himself "I am vengeance incarnate, I am justice delivered." He is not bound by any will or force except his own. That I think is what separates them, corax can achieve entirely different levels of power compared to Lorgar. And as they say, fear a man who had nothing to lose and everything to gain.

[@thewerdna]

Particularly I like version of this theory that the primarchs were made of minor warp gods who had been born of humanity's past religions. Since if just the humans who are part of the Tau empire can accidentally create a minor warp god of the greater good, then most of humanity's past religions or figures from mythology likely created a ton of minor warp gods. Thus big E went and found the fading remnants of whichever 20 of these gods who had been strong enough to persist past being no longer worshiped and used then to make the Primarchs

[@Lord_Wolfsadler]

I love my boy Corax. "Oh I've become some sort of raven demon? Fine, I'll keep hunting in the name of vengeance and the emperor" While Lorgar is still whining about his so-called "truth" , lamenting the sacrifices he gleefully and willingly made

[@lord_dodo502]

i have waited excitedly for this song for over a year and it has not only met my expectations but shattered them in its greatness.

[@bravomike4734]

That was perfect. Just perfect. Especially the last line. And then getting recommended "The perfect cherry blossom" was the cherry on the top.

[@commissarpootis]

This song gives me some heavy Rhapsody of Fire vibes, specially on Lorgar's parts.

[@Gibilisko]

I wasn't prepared for the growl part near the end of the song, good god did it hit me hard!

[@lucasgamezz140]

Especially since even that holds up their themes. Warpform Corax is a crow Daemon Lorgar is just.. a daemon dude. Lorgar's growl vocals are deep and and Corax genuinely sounds like a chainsmoker crow

[@TheWarmachine375]

StringStorm's content is always pure unadulterated awesomeness.

[@Donolohe]

I know I joked in the past about StringStorm's musical, but look into my eyes and tell me that you can't imagine this being a theater recording. Like, this is just bait, the way the vocals rub against each other, the melodic dialogue set up, the music intermission, it's all done purposefully by Stringstorm so that AI bot inside your head spits out 'Hamilton but WH40k' prompt images.

[@nshtghattas7944]

"AI bot inside your head" Bro you mean imagination?

[@Donolohe]

@@nshtghattas7944 Yes. But also a pretty specific version of jank imagery that was easier to convey that way.

[@enderfire3379]

​@@Donolohe"low quality funky town theme plays"

[@darkjackl999]

this got me to finally read the story, and it was really good didnt expect lorgar to get bodied as hard as he did in the story, i love how he basically locked himself in his tower to sulk after

[@Warhammer_AI]

Breaking News: Bird Man and Weird Priest fight in local bar.

[@alexanderkuznetsov484]

Brave of you to do this. Also, love the Lorgar's voice, as well as his disillusionment.

[@RoyalGriffin99]

I like this song. It is atmospheric, bombastic and tragic in its own way. Music and lyrics perfectly reflect the atmosphere of the confrontation between Corvus and Lorgar, and the tragedy of the situation where two brothers met to kill each other, and the fact that both are no longer what they were or what they were supposed to be. One is a herald of evil, the other a dark monster born of revenge.

[@jakubwitas6627]

As always with stringstorm: 1st listen - meh 2nd listen - its not that bad 3rd and more - Im going to listen to this masterpiece for the next month

[@TheWarmachine375]

*FOR THE MAN-EMPEROR OF MANKIND!!!*

[@General_of_the_Enclave]

Man!? You mean God-Emperor, filthy heretic!

[@Grimdark-Melodies]

*god Emperror :)

[@laynethebreadlord7373]

​@Npcs_alpa Another piece of information, due to the quintillions of people that have worshipped him as a god and the approximately 3.65 billion players he's devoured, to say he is anything but a god would be incorrect. The Emperor was a man turned God either willingly or not.

[@Mir_The_LOL_King]

*Starts to glow with divine light*

[@Mir_The_LOL_King]

​@Npcs_alpaemperor was made through the sacrifice of all the old pyskers on old earth(whom saw into the chaos and decided to save humanity) and op was referencing another peice of literature 😅

[@kirillchernyatin6146]

I am was underwhelmed when first listened to it, but it's growing me.

[@radekhomola7658]

Lyrics: Covus Corax: I search the Eye, for my brother´s fate Vengeance driven, I cannot wait Through black seas, I dare to dive My wrath ablaze, he won´t survive Eldritch evils I resist The hate in my heart still persists For my sons and father´s light I´ll make him pay No matter the price! Lorgar Aurelian: I used to stand, as a believer Damned by my faith, a marked deceiver My fall from grace, my legion´s fate Has led me to this bitter state The Raven lord hunts for my life I am ready for the coming strife No longer bound by The False God´s lies Come, dear brother, let fates collide Covus Corax: My talons seek, your traitorous heart Lorgar Aurelian: Your justice is nothing, but lies from the start Covus Corax: Lies?! My heart bleeds, for all the lives we´ve lost Lorgar Aurelian Yet your heart is still a slave to a rotting corpse both: I shall end you at any cost! Lorgar Aurelian: Sparks now fly, as fate weaves its dance A destined end, I refuse to give chance Brothers clash and bloodied hands Against fate, i shall make my stand The Gods have blessed me, brother mine Thier gifts have changed me, made me divine Potential unsealed, I am now more than thee For I am unchained eternally Covus Corax: The Sea of Souls, changed me too, you see The slaughter you schemed, a turning point to be Now our souls are as dark as night Not even vengeance can make things right Though you wield powers anew None can match, the darkness in me brewed Justice for your crimes overdue Death is your fate for all that you do You are blinded, by all the lies you preach Lorgar Aurelian: The cost of truth, its prize, still in reach Covus Corax: Justice will be done, though our future´s grim Lorgar Aurelian: Thruth is all, dear brother my only hymn both: Our fates entwined, our hearts grow dim Covus Corax: Betrayer! Lorgar Aurelian: Skies asunder, dark made flame The Raven caws nigh Bloodened rain Covus Corax: Idolator! Worthless cur! Why do we fight?! What made you turn?! No! Save your breath! I´ll see you burn! I would have called you brother during brighter days But your treachery, must end in death´s embrace Lorgar Aurelian: Why must the truth demand such a high sacrifice Committed still, I fight and pay the price Covus Corax: My claws strike, with an unforgiving fury Lorgar Aurelian: Your misguided wrath, by my faith and zeal, I´ve parried Covus Corax: The heavens themselves bleed, from your betrayal so great Lorgar Aurelian Yet I shall not die here, for I´ve denied my fate! Lorgar Aurelian as Deamon prince: Thruth is my shield, my zeal, my sword to fight I will not fall to fate, but rise with all my might! Covus Corax as Shadow bird deamon: Across the stars, for aeons evermore I´ll hunt you down, Betrayer! And settle the score! Both in normal forms: On our last encore, one will live no more

[@MaitreKorda]

Lorgar's choir boy voice is so fitting holy shit.

[@jysgaming2934]

Another one added to the playlist

[@5555petros]

One day we'll get a Konrad, Angron or Perturabo song.

[@Sus-ir9zc]

Brother Storm has a ability to male rock operas

[@nikoclesceri2267]

This is one of the songs that would probably grow on me with time.

[@fernandobraga8455]

The last time I was that early, I overheard the IV, the VIII, XVII and the XX planning on going Traitor on Isstvan V's space.

[@morgant.dulaman8733]

And you never thought to tell anyone?

[@fernandobraga8455]

@@morgant.dulaman8733 Well, things were heated back there. I thought I may have misheard the comms. It was not until steel fell from the skies that I noticed my mistake.

[@morgant.dulaman8733]

@@fernandobraga8455 Speaking as a Night Lord, I find that...disappointing somehow. I mean, I'm glad it worked out as well as it did for us but...dang man, you just justified the inquisition and commissariat's "a plea for ignorance is guilty of wasting my time" stance in a single sentence.

[@seath8055]

​@morgant.dulaman8733 As one should. Innocence does not exist, only varying degrees of guilt. And you Night Lord, are guilty of wasting the breath your Holy Emperor allowed you by stating the redundant... Oh, and also turning traitor. I pronounce you a heretic and you shall be dealt with accordingly. *BLAM!*

[@morgant.dulaman8733]

@@seath8055 ...You do realize what happened to the last guy who tried to blam his way through a Night Lord's helmet, right? I do approve of the no innocence line though. Glad to see the original attitude of the legion is carried on in the Inquisition, Arbites, and Commissariat.

[@nathanelliott8094]

Please put on spotify soon, this goes to hard for me to wait

[@somethingsomething2685]

The part where they show their demonic voices was epic

[@erkhesbatkhuyag9915]

Stringstorm never fails to deliver! Not only exceeded my expectations, but also managed to make me visualize the fight you can just feel the emotions both Lorgar and Corvus and spitting out

[@timmoree3356]

This goes so hard, and I love it!

[@vinzvendivil1049]

THE BERER OF WORDS AND THE RAVEN LORD, THE PREACHER AND DELIVERANCE, TWO SIDES OF THE SAME COIN, ONE FOLLOWS THE 4 WHILE ONE REMAINS LOYAL TO A CORPES

[@jankokovac1229]

This is just amazing

[@SwarmLoreLord346]

It gets better every time it is the stringstorm effect and also I love this battle in lore :)

[@nebelwanderer4974]

New song, let's go!!!

[@firestarr5812]

When it finally goes down in Canon, it better be a hell of a fight.

[@zanewarp3970]

Absolutely love this song, the shift from the more human voices to the demonic screech at the end is a great effect, and the song writing is on point. Probably my favorite song of yours in a while.

[@Horacio-Lupercal]

Corvus : LORGAR GET YOUR HOLLY ASS BACK HERE I'M NOT DONE WITH YOU

[@Beeg-Baller]

The waiting has been worth it. Maybe it's just because I've got used to all your other songs, but this is just SUCH A BANGER!

[@hastatischarf9074]

This needs to be on spotify ASAP

[@BloopTheNoop]

THIS WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT AWESOME JOB

[@CT7575Sarge]

Great job as always!

[@grumpycato8314]

Another absolute banger of a piece congrats

[@el33ment]

Well, I waited two days for my hype to die off. Boy, I was not ready for the last 30 seconds. Bravo.

[@juliane.mfarias9285]

Oh this is fantastic!

[@NormandyFoxtrot]

I kind of love that this is a fight between a loyalist essential daemon primarch, and a traitor daemon primach.

[@IzzytheCatgirl150]

A absolute banger!

[@Matthew-hi8kj]

Is it weird that i imagine the first half about this two to be in a play tts version and the second half is just them ripping their guitars against each other XD

[@dernordwind8728]

I Like Both voices, but damn, lorgar Sounds just Perfect

[@jasongalloway4645]

Man this goes hard!

[@eotwkdp]

I believe the primachs would become as powerful as their father. (Though it depends what effects them before reaching certain points) corax who I assume is just a giant mass of crows or massive stable crow humanoid creature ripping through traitor astartes and daemons alike just to find lorgar

[@Nempo13]

"I shall end you at any cost." Lorgar saying that while hiding in his tower for thousands of years...doesn't make this work for him too well. Corvax literally killing ANY of the Word Bearers that try to approach and help their primarch for thousands of years? Yeah this line hits hard.

[@Siriel]

Fanon has badly struck you, I fear. Corax was never even on the same planet as Lorgar's tower, rather they fought on a Word Bearer outpost that was still being established, and the Word Bearers have no problem getting to the tower aside from Lorgar not answering them in his meditation. Corax's presence in the Eye is seen by the Word Bearers as just a distant rumor by the time 40k rolls around.

[@hammer1349]

​@@Sirielits entirely possible that most of the word bearers dont even know or believe that corax is out there. I dont necessarily know how corax moves around though now he potentially has a small army that may be returned to real space if possible

[@crim1188]

​@@SirielFanon is better than the trash gw comes up with anyway

[@Nempo13]

@@Siriel It isn't pure fanon. I am willing to bet you never read many of the canon stories in the magazines GW have published? No, you cannot find all of them online either especially the early runs. You can find them in the not-for-sale racks of many game stores however. I used to read them while waiting for a table to be free. Was the whole point they kept them all, because of the small lore bits in them. Corvax has been hunting and killing Word Bearers for a long time. Lorgar has been 'harassed by the shadow of a raven in the warp' for a long time. It has actually weakened him on more than one occasion. The meme is Corvax was circling his tower itself. Yes I leaned into it as it is chuckle worthy. The reality is Corvax has reached the tower MORE THAN ONCE and absolutely gutted Word Bearers while doing so before being forced to leave due to warp shenanigans. GW, and those like you, often forget the original lore in favor of vaguely worded modern books written by people who aren't even aware of the original lore. Which is just sad. It is one of the things that allowed Corvax to keep popping up in the lore. The fact he never lets the Word Bearers get comfortable. That he has actually been ACTIVE this whole time on a one man crusade. Also it was the original reason for Word Bearers being smaller in number than most of the other chaos factions (with Thousand Sons being the smallest of course) and WHY so many of them joined the Chaos Undivided as it offered protection from Corax! Offhand, no I don't know the magazine issue number. This was just some of the random OG lore I remember. Mostly because it was about a primarch I just rarely heard anything about...Corvax does not get enough screen time.

[@ordohereticus5530]

Let's fucking goooooo!!!!!!

[@piotrekb586]

I did not exept new song from stringstorm, and I was happyly supprised, Time to listen to fight between Lagar and Corvus corax until I canot herar it anymore :) (Also fun fact: Corvus corax in Latin maens common rraven, and Rogal in polish means Crossaint)

[@mafuyuhoshimiya8219]

Even though I found out the story that's talked about here only a little ago (am new to WH40K), this song always hits me emotionally, thanks

[@TheWarmachine375]

Corvus Corax vs Lorgar Aurelian in a nutshell.

[@garox5124]

Great song !

[@zetaking2909]

in end logar blessed by the four will stand before the raven.... never more

[@thesmilinggun-knight9646]

Because he is nothing more then a whining choir boy who arse needs a good spanking.

[@user-dr2rp7ny4v]

Damn, just DAAAAAAMN

[@thegreatpepsiman]

Omg im literally in tears i fuckin love thai so much

[@berserkingtheburgerking9805]

Song was great, then the last part hit and it became fucking amazing! Awesome job!

[@jacktacca8013]

When will this release on spotify?

[@frostfox9752]

Commenting for the algorithm you should to!

[@silentnight6810]

Goooooooood

[@Aiur706]

Epic Rap Battles of History

[@death5244]

This songs lorgar was amazing. It really managed to capture this unquestoning and you could almost say pure religious fervor that is his motivatio.

[@italoools3877]

Good music, greetings from Chile

[@lordcirrhosisofliver]

I both like and dislike the screaming at the end, on one hand it scared the shit out of me, on the other hand it is really thematically cool ,at it represents them both entering their new forms, lorgar ascending as a demon prince and corvus becoming the crazy raven demon.

[@Liethen]

Chefs kiss mmmwwwwaaaahhhh

[@Wraith-Knight]

this should be filmed as a dance off

[@StyleshStorm]

So you've returned.

[@merlinmeurer5339]

Nevermore!

[@LoganBraastad-up2ie]

I love that in this, lorgae has the same confidence throughout the fight but in the book he literally has to limp to safety after his sons save because corax almost killed him.

[@firestarr5812]

Lorgar is more than he was then- but of course, so is Corax.

[@PABCOM1]

Shame this song isn't in Spotify yet, it would be my new most listened song.

[@johnlockeheart3953]

nice

[@Wraith-Knight]

did corax at the end just go full batmetal ?

[@RafaleTsuri]

FOR THE EMPERORRRR

[@nefariouslizard3328]

Good song, put it on Spotify

[@sthelios3864]

While this is fitting, from a musical standpoint, I'm very let down by Lorgar's voice (not the singer, only how it was directed). The Finale makes up for it tho! The lyrics are divine, as expected! And Corvus absolutely rocked his lines, as the singer always does! Being a Word Bearer player from the Heresy, I'm glad we were given flesh through this confrontation. Thank you!

[@LeviathanSpeaks1469]

Good to see you back, String! Will you consider doing Elder Scrolls lore songs? 🐉

[@ak4390]

🤟🏽

[@tzeentchlordoffates9268]

It has finally been complete. Next up Pure Furies.

[@WiheScarsOfKhan]

I WOULD HAVE CALLED YOU BROTHER DURING BRIGHTER DAYS !!!

[@Izayoink_Saccuy]

Wake up honey John TTS released another song

[@user-zz7nq3fs1t]

Эквиритмический перевод на русский язык. В Око войду, чтоб брата найти. Месть ведёт, не могу уйти. Варпа глубины рискну узреть. Гнев жжёт меня, его ждёт смерть Сдержу тьму внутри себя, Злость в душе до сих пор храня. За горе сынов и свет отца Отомщу и цена не важна! Раньше жил я с верой в душе, Проклят за это, обречённый лжец. Грехи мои и легиона рок - Лишь такой меня ждал итог. Коракс идёт за моей головой, Но не боюсь я выйти на бой. Больше не связан ложью отца, Иди, мой брат, пусть решит судьба. В твоё сердце нацелен мой нож. Твоё отмщение изначально ложь. Ложь?! Я помню всех, кто погиб тогда. Жаль, но сердце твоё ещё у трупа в рабах. Любой ценой убью тебя! Искры порхают в танце судьбы. Предрешённый конец, отринь все мольбы. Братоубийство и кровь на руках - Пред ликом грядущего я отрину страх. Богами был я благословлён, Дары их принял, и я - полубог Всё кончено, брат, я сильнее тебя Ибо цепи сбросил навсегда. Море Душ изменило и меня. Точкой начал для нас стала Резня. Теперь наши души темней ночи, И это даже мести не изменить. Хоть и обрёл ты много сил, Не превзойти тьму, что кипит внутри. За преступленья время платить, Позорная смерть - всё, что заслужил. Ослеплён ты, проповедью лжи. Истин цена есть приз в руках моих. Суд исполню я, хоть путь наш всё мрачней. Истине пою я мой вечный гимн. Судьбы сплетены, наш свет всё тусклей. Предатель! Небо расколото тёмным огнём. Ворон кричит под Крови дождём. Марионетка! Лжепророк! Что сделал ты? Как предать ты мог? Нет! Помолчи! Я дождусь, чтоб ты сдох. Раньше ты бы мог нам близким братом быть, Но предательство лишь кровью можно смыть. Но почему правда требует таких жертв? Верен себе, продолжу свой обет. Мой коготь бьёт с яростью неумолимой. На пустой твой гнев, отвечу верой и молитвой. Плачут небеса, ведь предал ты семью! Я не погибну, я изменю судьбу! Вера - мой щит, а рвенье - острый меч. Судьбу отрину я, взлетев из пепла сеч! В конце концов, через сотни веков Найду тебя, Предатель, И закончу всё! Ждёт последний бой, лишь один умрёт! Если кто-то хочет что-то добавить или исправить - комментарии открыты. If someone wants to add or correct something, the comments are open.

[@user-zk7fd5hq3q]

Пока что напишу только эту часть, потом ещё добавлю. А то сохранить по другому не получиться свой вариант. В око войду, чтоб судьбу брата найти. Движимый местью, я не остановим. Через моря тьмы, осмеливаюсь нырять. Мой гнев пылает, он не выживет. Древнему злу, я сопротивляюсь. Ненависть в моем сердце все еще жива. За моих снов и свет отца. Он заплатит, какой бы ни была цена!

[@user-zz7nq3fs1t]

@@user-zk7fd5hq3q, круто, что тоже решился заняться переводом. Но есть проблема с рифмой, что плохо. А ещё первая, третья, четвертая, пятая и восьмая строчка выбиваются из ритма песни из-за разного количества слогов. За критику извини, но и я сам к ней открыт.

[@user-zz7nq3fs1t]

@@user-zk7fd5hq3q, рад, что не я один решил заняться переводами, но у тебя в переводе есть некоторые ошибки. В обоих четверостишиях не везде есть рифма, а ещё первая, третья, пятая и восьмая строки выбиваются из ритма из-за того, что слогов в в переводе заметно больше, чем в изначальном тексте. За критику извини, но если видишь косяки у меня - тоже можешь высказаться.

[@quadroninja2708]

это офигенно!

[@user-zz7nq3fs1t]

@@quadroninja2708, спасибо большое! У меня есть и другие переводы на песни. Можешь посмотреть Lamenters или Rylanors last stand.

[@aksel8228]

Hello

[@macshadow1150]

What made you turn?" Weeeeeel, burning of Monarchia surely didnt help, nor how Emperor treated him and his Legion

[@HalfTangible]

"Bitch He told you 'do not worship me as a god' and you not only did it but built a 'shining example' of why He wanted it gone in the first fucking place. No shit he burned it. No shit He called you a failure. And instead of oh, I dunno, reflecting and learning a lesson, you decided to double, triple, and QUADRUPLE DOWN on showing off why He hated religion."

[@patrikgrulich2]

People need to stop pretending Monarchia was sudden moodswing. Its stated several times Word Bearers were called out several times before.

[@Ceph_M]

40k!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@gabrielakamenikova4477]

When will it be on spotify?

[@brother-term]

Bird vs priest song is very goood

[@Jen-vl2ng]

Grrr ❤❤❤❤ fucking beautiful

[@tookey4329]

Wonder what song will be out in June maybe they just moved up the schedule?