SPLIT | SciFi Short Film | Time Travel | Drama

[@tomcat3360]

Great story, pacing, acting. Excellent editing!!!! I would love to see this expanded into a series.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thank you!! 🙏🏻 let’s see what happens

[@flyingo]

Ok finally.. a good one that leaves a viewer wanting more. I’ve seen probably a hundred “time travel” shorts here on KZbin but they’ve all been lacking somehow. This one is pleasantly different.. I genuinely want to see more.. continue the story, let me know what happens.. and “when” it happens!

[@MichaelFergusonVideos]

Interesting premise/plot. Further development would be welcome.

[@falloutfan2502]

This is actually really well done! For a short indie project, it's quite engaging. Simone's acting, especially when getting the news of the split, is really heart-wrenching. Very nice production and interesting concept - would make a good full-length feature.

[@ThePloppy]

This was very well done and interesting. It doesn't hurt that I'm in love with Simone either.

[@falloutfan2502]

You and everyone else! What's not to love? She's her own type of star.

[@ThePloppy]

@@falloutfan2502 Yeah, she's like that girl next door who's somehow outa reach. Me and everyone else probably figures George has a secret crush on her. He's not gay (as far as I know... and he lushes over women in the movies they review). I just see him editing their videos and pawning over her in secret. They were school buddies. She probably rejected him early on and they remained friends. Been there!

[@falloutfan2502]

@@ThePloppy Yeah, I assume the same. Don't know if George is "George He", but that person is credited with some work on the video game voice she did. Likely they worked together at some point too. Yeah, she's quite a singular woman, for sure. I'm sure she gets marriage proposals and garbage all day. But I hear she's also rich and has a VERY nice life up in BC, so never mind, lol. Dream on.

[@ThePloppy]

@@falloutfan2502 Yes, George from CineBinge is George He. I haven't read personally about the video game voice thing but it would have been him, I guess. I found out that he also won an AVN award for best cinematography in a VR adult video in 2017 for P*rn H*b. It was a parody of Donald Trump. He's also credited with working with Kanye West in producing the first live VR cast of some award show. I don't remember the details, but I think it was the very first live VR event ever done. George is mega smart. And just him being best friends with Simone makes him mega lucky!

[@barrycarter1010]

Could someone explain this? I don't get it

[@paulhunt4690]

Time. It’s not linear. The sooner we accept, the closer we are.

[@rygarbensen3953]

The closer we are to what??

[@karnold8172]

Awesome multiverse set up for continuing stories. Short and sweet, thank-you.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Our pleasure!

[@mystorymenzi7726]

Love this concept - it’s based on the multi universes theory

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

It sure is! Thanks a lot!

[@241sail6]

Good story. I remember Neal from the show Eureka.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks! Neil's a great guy and a talented actor! Lucky to be able to call him a friend.

[@MisterG2323]

Nice proof of concept. I'd like it better if it had a proper resolution.

[@axerxes3981]

Nice job. Very well done!! Thanks for sharing. Ax

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks, Ax! 🙏🏻

[@iamthesolitarymaninblack]

Had a look at your reaction channel so decided to what else you were involved with.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Check out my latest, Luto: Daemonium!

[@DogBeast221]

Does James have an issue with ectropion of the lower lids?

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

No, that’s just make up!

[@docwilson5384]

Amazing job....Peace

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks!!

[@sad_wolf8]

Well done! Any more 'little' writing projects like these on the way...? An anthology series would be cool!

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks! More coming for sure!

[@クマール王子]

the acting was good and I liked it very much but I was unable to follow what was going on. Can you please explain the ending from when the girl said "you're not james" at 5:12. Thanks!

[@filifilms]

neat film, thanks for sharing, looking forward for more!

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks! Check out my latest film, Luto: Daemonium :)

[@falloutfan2502]

Is "April" by the same producer? Is it available anywhere?

[@stephenwestland942]

I watch a lot of these short stories. They are all well done. But despite having a PhD in science I can barely understand any of them. It would be great if someone could give an interpretation in the comments.

[@peterruiz6117]

Wuaaaooz....Full movie stuff.....Good acting and set

[@mcpa2991]

Really nice work!

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Glad you think so! 🙏🏻

[@invisibleagents]

Can someone explain this, no idea what this story was about

[@RMR1]

The acting is a little overwrought at times, though that may be due at least in part to the amount of exposition the actors have to deliver in such a condensed time frame. I would have preferred more "show" and less "tell," but I realize how challenging that is in such a short film. Despite its flaws, "Split" does have much to recommend it. The visual effects are sparse, but arresting and the direction crisp.The overall production values are above average at this level. And Simone Swan is convincing in an understated, yet taught performance that is one part scientific inquiry and one part emotional uncertainty. 3.2/5.

[@takiyaazrin7562]

I did not understand from the start. Why does it matter if he comes back at 12:36 or 12:37 ?

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

The time barrier wouldn’t let him stay past 12:37, and forced him back to the present day…

[@anonemini319]

That was a good `un. Got caught in that story. Well done all.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it!

[@WatchRichRebuildsChannel]

Cool short movie 👍👍

[@erwinquiachon8054]

Good writing, acting, cinematography, editing, and sound design. It fits the current conversation of UAP. In engineering, we work with the conservation of energy principle that energy cannot be created or destroyed, only transferred or transformed. That's how we do real life energy calculations. By this, your energy cannot be transferred to another time where you exist, unless it is transformed to the existence of someone else in that time. That would also suggest that humans are capable of being telepathic, sharing thoughts without sharing energy. That form of telepathy would be like an advanced wifi where we can share data in different timelines. By the conservation of energy principle, you wouldn't need to worry about a split. But, Holly and James could telepathically send info to each other, or themselves, in other timelines. That would explain the stories that members of the U.S. military have been admitting to about UAP showing up and shutting down nuclear weapons and telepathically reading the minds of the people operating those weapons. By the conservation of energy principle, that would be possible if the UAP were actually human beings from the distant future who do not live in the time period they are travelling to.

[@MufasaTomato]

Bravo! 👏🏽

[@Angry_Dinosaur]

Thumbs up 👍.

[@AngelINTheMatrix]

I would love to see this as a series

[@terrafirma9328]

Interesting. Great production. Great acting, high quality. 👍👍👍👍👍

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it!

[@mardbalasy6671]

You must to be kidding. Even toddler could not bear to watch this wasted film. And you try to be adult.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

@@mardbalasy6671 😂😂😂

[@billybigballs196]

@@mardbalasy6671 let's see your best work then

[@abraxasjinx5207]

​@@mardbalasy6671100% agree. This was some of the worst acting I've seen in these shorts on KZbin. The writing was not fleshed out. There were lawn ornaments meant to be time travel devices. I love movies, and I don't say terrible often, but holy sht this was terrible.

[@artattack1198]

Didn't understand. Can someone explain ?

[@hcutter]

Don't understand it and yet intrigued. And that's what makes an effective film.

[@DavidWoods-rk8st]

Well done 😀

[@thomascollins4325]

Really good!!! Thanks for posting!!! Simone Swan had a very caring look on her face. ❤

[@barrahart]

Intriguing work. Like the Tenet-vibe in the score too (coincidence?).

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Indeed!

[@sonovivo1247]

Indeed, that was missing: a totally dramatic, even melodramatic, Sci-FI movie amongst the million of other dramatically ones… My God, so many people addicted to drama instead of enjoying what's alive and vital, making UPLIFTING movies, which give the opportunity to GROW instead of making negativity (in several domains) worse.

[@Chopper_hat]

👏👏👏

[@mircconpetko1458]

exellent story and production...u can make full movie from this theme.nice job keep it up man

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks a lot! We have more films in the pipeline.

[@nonservitium]

There's another indie film named split, too

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

There are many!

[@wd1898]

Excellent film. The final scene, right at the end... he reappears "whole" and looks in her direction... Sequel? :O)

[@patrickselden5747]

Nice one... ☝️😎

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks!!

[@ecphorizer]

Well done.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks a lot! Glad you enjoyed it. We have more films coming out soon!

[@mollykillarney2419]

Kinda wish 𝐈 had a time machine, so I could get back the 8+ minutes I just wasted watching this. ❤︎︎

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thank you for the kind words!

[@mr.d.8121]

Then you make a short film. Post it.

[@mollykillarney2419]

@@mr.d.8121 I've made six. But, thanks for thinking of me! ♡︎

[@rayfinkle2489]

@@mollykillarney2419 Sooo where can we find them? 🧐 They're not on your channel, so you must not be too proud of them...

[@rogerdavis9962]

😂😂😂

[@billyandrew]

Thought provoking. I'll watch it a few times, maybe find a way round the time issue. 🤔😉😂 Thanks for uploading.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thanks! Good luck!

[@bjb7587]

Keep watching. You must save him!!

[@markissboi3583]

2 crystal domes from toys on poles $ cheap build Zap coherance 90% he sent somewhere looks over shoulder where's that starwars Blaster with the same Plastic crystal dam i couldve went back in time and bought a winning tatts 30ml ticket

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

My biggest concern was that people would be confused, but it's great to know that you, sir, understood the movie.

[@qualityposts2011]

@@forbiddenplanet2406 I’m sorry i understood very little

[@abraxasjinx5207]

​@@forbiddenplanet2406I'm pretty sure the original comment you replied to was cracking on your shitty props, but I guess any attention is good attention on KZbin? This film is not good. Best of luck with your future endeavors.

[@MobileFilmmaking]

Awesome short. I just subbed you

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thank you! More content coming soon. I’ll try not to disappoint!

[@jpbearwoof5006]

They failed to realize that TIME IS AN ILLUSION... If they were to use their 'CONSCIOUSNESS THOUGHT' into their equations, then they will figure out that PAST and FUTURE are ONE(Present)...in otherwords, THERE IS NO TIME!!! It was his 'Thought' that changed his looks and existence, NOT TIME!

[@70stunes71]

👍🌠

[@thomasklugh4345]

Very nice...

[@SageGilbert191]

Huh

[@SageGilbert191]

Who liked my comment what did I say

[@abraxasjinx5207]

​@@SageGilbert191I liked your comment because I'm just thinking "Huh- anyone can make a film and some people will like it. Go figure."

[@mikechoi1577]

😳😎🥶😬🤔

[@abraxasjinx5207]

Damn, this acting is terrible.

[@chriscausey3233]

Probably the worst acting I've ever seen. And the story is just so cliche. Yawn.

[@batmmannn2085]

Not good.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

Thank you!!!! 🙏🏻

[@maddoxtolliver]

*so this time it wasn't **_#FARGO_** who kept pushing a button.*

[@mardbalasy6671]

That is why you aren't either good writer (script) nor cinematographer. 4 minutes of waste, could not bear all 8.

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

😂😂😂

[@Tasin_001]

Didn't understand. Can someone explain ?

[@forbiddenplanet2406]

You should watch Luto: Daemonium bit.ly/lutochapter2