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0:00 Who wrote this essay
1:28 Planning for the exam and top grades
4:25 Start with a Thesis
5:30 First paragraph of the essay and the need to link ideas
6:53 Link to the ending of the play
7:54 The danger of starting with the Extract!
10:09 Excellent language analysis and alternative interpretation
12:10 How to use Context to explain interpretations
15:30 Write about Tone in interpretations
17:27 Context of Christianity
18:38 Context of Banquo
19:04 How to get Context wrong
20:30 How to write a conclusion
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@georgep1907
@georgep1907 4 жыл бұрын
Hey sir, got my mark back and got 159/160 in Lit, literally only watched your videos when I was revising, can’t thank you enough
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
I remember you Max. Congratulations!
@ash39877
@ash39877 3 жыл бұрын
i beg u please send me ur essay i beg u pleaseeee please i will literally do anything
@PileOfDuracells
@PileOfDuracells 3 жыл бұрын
Is this supernatural
@user-qp6ts2dp5g
@user-qp6ts2dp5g 3 жыл бұрын
@@PileOfDuracells LMAO right
@nickiminajschild2315
@nickiminajschild2315 3 жыл бұрын
@@ash39877 Allie🤣🤣
@cosmo6345
@cosmo6345 3 жыл бұрын
It’s funny how much he’s able to criticise an essay that got 158/160
@tyron1_411
@tyron1_411 2 жыл бұрын
all his essays combined was 158/160, just macbeth got 28/30
@shrek_has_swag2344
@shrek_has_swag2344 2 жыл бұрын
@Yeet Feet 2 that kids entire life would just disappear
@sombi8807
@sombi8807 2 жыл бұрын
@Yeet Feet 2 tears. lmfao
@cOrAL_Grimes
@cOrAL_Grimes 3 жыл бұрын
How and Why does Sanjay know so much sophisticated vocabulary?? 😭😭
@loform4763
@loform4763 3 жыл бұрын
his parents had the belt on him all day that's all he could do
@alinalilka8430
@alinalilka8430 3 жыл бұрын
@@loform4763 LMFAO bro well the effort payed of didn't it 😂😂😭😭😂😂😂😂😂
@eatinsomtin9984
@eatinsomtin9984 3 жыл бұрын
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@alinalilka8430
@alinalilka8430 3 жыл бұрын
@@eatinsomtin9984 thank you 😂😂😂
@SquirtSongs
@SquirtSongs 3 жыл бұрын
@@alinalilka8430 paid*
@mbappesdad7620
@mbappesdad7620 2 жыл бұрын
As an A level student looking at this now, I’m grateful I don’t have to worry about English Literature anymore the content for the subject is unreal
@paracline5500
@paracline5500 Жыл бұрын
compared to history it isn't much really
@olihemming2299
@olihemming2299 Жыл бұрын
@@paracline5500 fr
@bug688
@bug688 7 ай бұрын
@@paracline5500HISTORY IS TEW MUCH - a struggling student who takes history
@tjs9133
@tjs9133 4 жыл бұрын
I really want this guy as my teacher
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
I am on KZbin, so I can help you with a video on most topics you are studying! Thanks for your kind comments
@ayisasirek7790
@ayisasirek7790 4 жыл бұрын
That name tho lmfao
@tahamuhammad5454
@tahamuhammad5454 3 жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish my teacher says us to only listen to him and not to watch yt videos,but cant thank you enough
@arzhass5868
@arzhass5868 3 жыл бұрын
@@tahamuhammad5454 tells*
@tahamuhammad5454
@tahamuhammad5454 3 жыл бұрын
@@arzhass5868 damn thanks
@lumosv1014
@lumosv1014 2 жыл бұрын
16:15 Only legends noticed that Sanjay wrote "Macbeth was 18", "Macbeth was so much younger" and "Macbeth married her". Otherwise, top-notch essay in a top-notch video. Thank you once again!
@alannatomlinson7723
@alannatomlinson7723 4 жыл бұрын
thank you Sanjay whoever and wherever you are. You are so helpful and kind to share the work you put so much hard work and dedication into. Very much appreciated and not taken lightly
@talithahiggs1912
@talithahiggs1912 3 жыл бұрын
When he said avoid suspicion. I think this is talking about how Shakespeare was suspected to be part of the gunpowder plot, and he wrote Macbeth to be placed on the kings good side and avoid suspicion surrounding him and the plot as he was friends with people involved at the time, he wrote the play to show he was devoted to the king
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Well done
@mohammadrezaei8532
@mohammadrezaei8532 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you this really helps considering we've missed 6 months of school !
@slurpinbird5207
@slurpinbird5207 2 жыл бұрын
I'll be honest. I didn't revise English once but got (sometimes nearly) full marks on every essay. Straight 9s. I think the way you have structured this video is very well done :)
@fatimaalramahi9944
@fatimaalramahi9944 2 жыл бұрын
Even in your actual GCSE? Because I would guess that if you didn’t revise once you would have not known much evidence for the exam?
@ohsu8344
@ohsu8344 2 жыл бұрын
@@fatimaalramahi9944 she probably got the context from stuff they learnt in lessons
@luke_c4rpenter907
@luke_c4rpenter907 Жыл бұрын
Sir, i went from a grade 3 in my November mocks, to a grade 7 in my Feb mocks. I can’t thank you enough.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Жыл бұрын
Well done!
@luke_c4rpenter907
@luke_c4rpenter907 Жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish thank you, i couldn’t have done it without your support
@philippaimobio
@philippaimobio 6 ай бұрын
@@luke_c4rpenter907 how did you do it
@cosmo6345
@cosmo6345 3 жыл бұрын
This was so helpful, I have my exam in a couple days and we've only just started Macbeth so this has helped me gain advanced terminology, contextual references and good points and links. I will definitely be coming back to watch more of your videos!
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@Creator-zo1wf
@Creator-zo1wf Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Mr Salles! I’ve been watching your videos closer to my Year 10 mock exam week and they’ve proven to be extremely helpful! Thank you very much once again.
@kindermist_5779
@kindermist_5779 4 жыл бұрын
Hi sir, I’m currently in year 10 however I’m doing a test tomorrow which will affect my year 11 mock mock test grade next year, so I’m really stressing ,but this video is giving me so much useful points to take in . I’m very thankful and hopefully this will help me tomorrow ✊🏻 Thanks again.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@Soni-jd4li
@Soni-jd4li 2 жыл бұрын
What did you get..?
@kindermist_5779
@kindermist_5779 2 жыл бұрын
@@Soni-jd4li for my final gcse grades, i got 7 in literature and 9 in lang :D
@Soni-jd4li
@Soni-jd4li 2 жыл бұрын
@@kindermist_5779 congrats! I’m also super surprised that you replied (it’s quite well known that people don’t respond to such questions lol)
@kindermist_5779
@kindermist_5779 2 жыл бұрын
@@Soni-jd4li thanks 😂😂 yep that’s true most of the time
@nickdonaldson466
@nickdonaldson466 3 жыл бұрын
I've been watching your videos just so I could begin a rota for revision, and I got 28/34 on my last exam! I'm in year 10, and I'm super happy with my result
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Well done!
@blizzard7520
@blizzard7520 3 жыл бұрын
Was this that gave you z28/34 or others as well cause my Xmas are in 3 days
@Stamnoj
@Stamnoj 8 ай бұрын
Predicted a 5 by the end of the year and trying to get a 6/7 to avoid uni rejections, thanks for the analysis
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 8 ай бұрын
I'm publishing how top students prepared every week on my Substack. Subscription is free and the link is always in the description to each video
@addieee1194
@addieee1194 2 жыл бұрын
Hi sir, I messaged a month ago about my English literature mock and thank you for your videos! I got 33/34 on the Macbeth essay and 30/30 on the Jekyll and Hyde essay 😁
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Fantastic!
@Anwar87.
@Anwar87. 2 жыл бұрын
How did you do that give me tips please 😭
@laylahudson6541
@laylahudson6541 2 жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish how is everyone so good I’m currently at a 4/5 English Lang is impossible :/ I’m literally getting a 7/8 in everything else
@yourlocalpostman
@yourlocalpostman 2 жыл бұрын
@@laylahudson6541 for Eng Lang Paper 1, it's strongly recommended to write a solid, good creative writing piece and ensure that you memorise it so u can just copy and paste it into the exam. It's theoretically guaranteed 35+/40 marks as long as it's good
@Blessingstevens06
@Blessingstevens06 2 жыл бұрын
@@laylahudson6541 samee omdsssss i hate it and its stressing me out even worse i dont have motivation to revise english anymore cause i keep doing bad
@turbiyo4026
@turbiyo4026 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks to u, i got a grade 9 on my english literature mock on macbeth
@motarafamily3712
@motarafamily3712 3 жыл бұрын
Could you do more of these essay reviews because it really helps me out
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Will do
@Goose-ei2ht
@Goose-ei2ht Жыл бұрын
thanks salles ive got an exam on monday about this and this has really helped me get notes written down properly :)
@cristinadanciu8548
@cristinadanciu8548 4 жыл бұрын
This helped me so much! Thank you!
@rw-pi1gw
@rw-pi1gw 2 жыл бұрын
Hi, Mr Salles. Im in year 10 and I've been watching your videos for a year now and you've helped me achieve a grade 9 in English (74/80) thank you so much sir!!!!!!
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Awesome. Well done!
@beklemeyapmacaykoy3938
@beklemeyapmacaykoy3938 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much sir because i got 18/30. It is a good score because I’m still learning English. I watched your An Inspector Calls video today and i think I’m gonna get 20 and above.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@lathusan10
@lathusan10 2 ай бұрын
Wow! This is extremely good! Thank you so much.
@chickenroyale
@chickenroyale Жыл бұрын
Got 120/130 in GCSE thanks to Mr Salles
@GCSEtryhard
@GCSEtryhard Жыл бұрын
nice
@TheAwesomeTolga198
@TheAwesomeTolga198 4 жыл бұрын
I so can't wait to be featured on one of these one day lol.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
I'll get there!
@moody2442
@moody2442 4 жыл бұрын
the bits of insight you give on what the examiner is probably thinking is really, Just got to keep reminding myself of not only the basics and clear points but also pander to a variety of views because of natural bias. hopefully will push me up to an 8 :))
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
Good luck
@ollycantsee2446
@ollycantsee2446 2 жыл бұрын
English Lit Mock In 2 days, this channel is the only thing giving me hope at this point. Honestly thank you so much :]]
@Bossman-kb8vo
@Bossman-kb8vo 2 жыл бұрын
bro i got mine on monday :( its only macbeth and unseen poetry init?
@ollycantsee2446
@ollycantsee2446 2 жыл бұрын
@@Bossman-kb8vo I have done mine now but I did Inspector calls and Macbeth SA's It wasnt fun xD
@nuraalmawal
@nuraalmawal 2 жыл бұрын
I’ve got my English lit exam tomorrow :0
@z-mkgaming7464
@z-mkgaming7464 2 жыл бұрын
@@Bossman-kb8vo I had OMAM and Unseen, got Macbeth PEEL chains tmrw
@Zenab-hs1ky
@Zenab-hs1ky 3 жыл бұрын
so my English teacher decided to get sick a week before my year 11 mocks idk if she has covid but we've been having useless supply teachers and we haven't been working I hope this helps because I'm tryna get a grade 6 and above
@iamsomeone8266
@iamsomeone8266 3 жыл бұрын
literally had the same problem
@alisalis1568
@alisalis1568 3 жыл бұрын
Are you in my class?😂
@DB-qe2wr
@DB-qe2wr 3 жыл бұрын
@@Zenab-hs1ky what question was on your lit mock
@xx_alisha_xx4726
@xx_alisha_xx4726 3 жыл бұрын
Same thing happened to me
@libbymayw
@libbymayw 2 жыл бұрын
currently in year 10 and predicted a 4 but working at a 3 and I’m hopefully going to improve through your videos!
@randomvidz8742
@randomvidz8742 2 жыл бұрын
If your in year 10 watching this guy's videos and revising and from school you will 100% achieve a 6 or above
@cricsuperior6180
@cricsuperior6180 Жыл бұрын
How are you doing now?
@mirshathmohamed2814
@mirshathmohamed2814 Жыл бұрын
@@randomvidz8742 Probably even higher. In year 10 I was on a 3 for both but now I'm on an 8 for lang and a 9 for lit.
@user-kf4lk7yq1q
@user-kf4lk7yq1q 11 ай бұрын
sanjay were on earth did you learn vocabulary like quinessential
@tchalla6680
@tchalla6680 Ай бұрын
he definitely didn't read @MrSallesTeachesEnglish guides
@ch3riebby
@ch3riebby 3 жыл бұрын
GOT A MOCK TODAY! AHHH! but Im going to walk into that room because im confident on it, thanks to Mr Salles. THANK YOUUUUU!!!
@DB-qe2wr
@DB-qe2wr 3 жыл бұрын
what was the question
@anssa6163
@anssa6163 2 жыл бұрын
Im doing my year 11 mock today, in year 10 i got a grade 3 these videos are extremely helpful so hopefully i can get a 5-7 because 7 is my predicted grade
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Good luck
@anssa6163
@anssa6163 2 жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish i got 41/64 probably like a grade 6, im pretty happy with it but im gonna aim for a grade 7 or even higher
@fatimaalramahi9944
@fatimaalramahi9944 2 жыл бұрын
@@anssa6163 good luck 🤞
@SalvationMATT1
@SalvationMATT1 11 ай бұрын
how did u do?
@anssa6163
@anssa6163 11 ай бұрын
@@SalvationMATT1 i got an 8 and a 9 in the end
@jeffs_r_us7166
@jeffs_r_us7166 2 жыл бұрын
the man, the myth, the legend: Sanjay.
@faizakhanshowreel
@faizakhanshowreel 4 жыл бұрын
Mr Salles, please share your exquisite analysis on A View from the Bridge & To Kill a Mockingbird
@kasimmakesshorts
@kasimmakesshorts 3 жыл бұрын
oh
@abigaillouise7452
@abigaillouise7452 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you I’ve been watching your videos recently I have my Mocs on Wednesday and my GCSEs next year rly nervous but you’re definitely helping Also what question number is this?
@mrtwum.yepthatsme6367
@mrtwum.yepthatsme6367 Жыл бұрын
I got 22/30 on my mocks! And I really thank u but I know I can do better and get at least a grade 8
@jezzaminejude6090
@jezzaminejude6090 2 жыл бұрын
Omfg Sanjay u slayed that, i hope u know you’re a English lit idol for many
@1stktte128
@1stktte128 Жыл бұрын
Gonna start watching all you videos for an inspector calls and Macbeth hopefully they get me off the grade 6
@taravxk
@taravxk Ай бұрын
hey how did you do?
@stardreamix786
@stardreamix786 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this! This is really helpful! :) Thank you! ;) Stay safe all!
@addieee1194
@addieee1194 2 жыл бұрын
Hi sir, I've just had my English literature mock (I'm currently in year 11) and I've been predicted a 9 previously, so hopefully it follows through. I had my mock on Jekyll and Hyde, and Macbeth. Thank you for this video it'll be really useful for future exam revision! I'll keep you posted on how I end up doing
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you and good luck!
@pressureRL
@pressureRL 2 жыл бұрын
I’m predicted a 7 no idea how I’m gonna do it lmao. Also I’m i yr 11 so good luck to the both of us
@addieee1194
@addieee1194 2 жыл бұрын
@@pressureRL how did the mock go?
@pressureRL
@pressureRL 2 жыл бұрын
@@addieee1194 got a 4 in literature and a 7 in language, been revising a lot more literature recently tho, what about you?
@addieee1194
@addieee1194 2 жыл бұрын
@@pressureRL yess that's great, especially lang! It went well, I'm not sure whether to take English for a level now, wbu?
@chunkplunk
@chunkplunk 2 жыл бұрын
just looking back at this with joy knowing I don’t have to do it ever again
@mikabrown4123
@mikabrown4123 3 жыл бұрын
Hi! My teacher taught us critical theories and Jacobean society for context, not anything on Shakespeare himself, do you think this would be a problem for me since I’m expected a grade 8? Thanks.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
No, if you use this context to argue for particular interpretations, that will be fine. Make sure you understand the critical theories though, as examiners find that students usually apply them incorrectly
@darkhacker8747
@darkhacker8747 4 жыл бұрын
Sir, my school does Edexcel for Literature so macbeth/christmas carol has part A and B with only 20 marks and for Inspector Calls just Part A with 40 marks. Could i still use this to achieve 40/40 for my examboard?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
Of course - literature is literature!
@liamconstable7366
@liamconstable7366 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for telling me what the question is
@mo-mercsreacts3184
@mo-mercsreacts3184 2 жыл бұрын
I have my eng lit macbeth mock yr 11 in 8 days. This is the first video I have seen of yours. I will continue to watch you so I can improve my grade. I got a 4 in Yr 10 mocks. I want to get at least a 7. My predicted is a 6
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Good luck
@userr5sccu9x44
@userr5sccu9x44 2 жыл бұрын
Yo what question did you get?
@abtheninja9370
@abtheninja9370 2 жыл бұрын
@@userr5sccu9x44 I got the question, how does Shakespeare present macbeth and banquos attitude towards the supernatural
@abtheninja9370
@abtheninja9370 2 жыл бұрын
@@userr5sccu9x44 also, I am momercs react but a different account
@mirnabatou4182
@mirnabatou4182 4 жыл бұрын
What quotation could you use when the person made a point about Banquo being a descendent of King James?
@scarliekawarlie9104
@scarliekawarlie9104 3 жыл бұрын
Sir, how would you say to structure your essay, because my other teachers for different subjects tells us the basic structure but my english teacher hasn’t said anything. How would you say to do a basic structure?
@beomgyusberry5773
@beomgyusberry5773 3 жыл бұрын
maybe start off with an introduction, followed by two paragraphs that agree with your point, then perhaps two paragraphs that disagree (dont forget context if its an AQA lit exam) and then summarise all your points and conclude - make sure it links back to the intro. idk but ig this would work - perhaps just adding some extra paragraphs if this isnt enough, but i hope this helps!
@OrangeDude7
@OrangeDude7 2 жыл бұрын
@@beomgyusberry5773 it helps me thank you so much
@asked7172
@asked7172 2 жыл бұрын
the only good teacher in the world
@Fatal_Archer844
@Fatal_Archer844 3 жыл бұрын
What is the question that Sanjay answered?
@dapo7930
@dapo7930 2 жыл бұрын
Hope we all get great grades
@IndigoIced
@IndigoIced 2 жыл бұрын
I wish I found this video before I submitted my essay last year 😩
@BananaCake71
@BananaCake71 3 жыл бұрын
Hi sir , in my school they tell us to do 3 PEE paragraphs with 3 quotes from the extract then link two of the quotes referencing to another part of the text having the same idea.When i have been watching the grade 9 videos they don't do that.Do you suggest that i do the schools method or should i do a paragraph for each AO like in this video to get top marks?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Your school is trying to teach a method which will cover all bases - so it sounds logical. Because teachers usually don't sit the exams themselves, they don't road test this to see if it is actually successful - usually it ends up with having to write too much. The only way for you to find out is to write an essay using what you have learned, and see what grade you get, compared to the 'method'.
@thetribe4893
@thetribe4893 2 жыл бұрын
kinda gunna miss your vids when I finish english gcse in a couple days.
@studyaccount7677
@studyaccount7677 2 жыл бұрын
can you make videos on grade 9 analysis on frankenstein please?
@FireFitt
@FireFitt 4 жыл бұрын
Mr salles, can you make a new video about the key quotes you need to know for Macbeth. Thanks
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
I have over a dozen!
@FireFitt
@FireFitt 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks Sir
@donatiennduwayesu502
@donatiennduwayesu502 3 жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish which ones?
@alifaqasmi1330
@alifaqasmi1330 3 жыл бұрын
Bring out the idea of violence and it's relation to the state in Macbeth
@zachrichardson7099
@zachrichardson7099 2 жыл бұрын
Watching this the night before my lit mock, i haven’t learnt the quotations. i beg of you, please run me down with your ar on my way to school tommorrow, kind stranger.
@fillername4232
@fillername4232 2 жыл бұрын
Mr Salles, I’m in year 11 and just completed my first set of mocks, for my literature exam the extract I was given the best extract I could have asked for (act 5 scene 1), everything I have written is very good quality, but I didn’t get an awful lot written, is there any advice you can give to help with time management and getting as much done as possible
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
There is only one bit of advice - practise writing under timed conditions, and you will get quicker. If thinking fast is the problem, practise dictating.
@cathutton7352
@cathutton7352 2 жыл бұрын
What was the question ?
@fillername4232
@fillername4232 2 жыл бұрын
@@cathutton7352 ‘describe how Lady Macbeth is presented in the extract; how is Lady Macbeth presented as a woman who changes during the play’ or something similar
@ayzoffline
@ayzoffline 2 жыл бұрын
@@fillername4232 that’s exactly what I got on my mock exam question 😂
@kindermist_5779
@kindermist_5779 2 жыл бұрын
@@fillername4232 ahhh that was the 2021 gcses for me , absolute bless it was
@apoorvaanil3019
@apoorvaanil3019 2 жыл бұрын
Sir I am a literature student in India. We have drama as one of our core paper and we have to study the whole play of macbeth for our this semester. Literally I didn't had any Idea to how to link my ideas and interpretations chronologically. So to find a solution I did a thorough search on KZbin for teachers who explains the ideas more clearly, very easy and useful. I am really fascinated by your classes, because it made me to think the basic ideas and quotations in the from a very different perspective. Thank you sir for uploading these videos🙏🏼😊. I am making a humble request to you. Ca you please make each scene wise explanations, analysis and interpretation on macbeth...... please ...please.....please.....
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, I have all the scenes of act 1 and 2, and will make the others in April
@erenyeager7856
@erenyeager7856 2 жыл бұрын
I got 25/30 on my macbeth year 11 mocks, for gcse i wanna get higher
@natxshap
@natxshap 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you Sir.
@Mlgtrek334
@Mlgtrek334 Жыл бұрын
Hello Sir - if I didn't start with the extract in the Macbeth question (or 19th century novel question), would that constitute "rubric infringement"? Would my answer be capped at a certain level? Thank you
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Жыл бұрын
No, there is nothing in the mark scheme about starting with the extract. You are 100% allowed to start anywhere. I recommend chronologically
@rinka9383
@rinka9383 Жыл бұрын
My Eng Lit exam in an hour 😭 good luck everyone doing it this year.
@imclara
@imclara 2 жыл бұрын
I really wish I saw this last month 😭
@rose_bangtan7793
@rose_bangtan7793 2 жыл бұрын
I watched this video the day before my Macbeth exam and I got the exact same question😭
@rose_bangtan7793
@rose_bangtan7793 2 жыл бұрын
@@rab.j something like, how is macbeth presented as a violent character
@amsa12378
@amsa12378 4 жыл бұрын
Mr salles i want to know everything that might come into my test so I can cover them all, but our school doesn`t tell us so I would like to ask you instead of leaving all the stress to year 11. As far as I know, these are the essential materials: conflict b poems Macbeth Jacklyn hyde Christmas cold Inspector calls Creative and descriptive writing
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
The first 5 are all literature, the last one is Language. Go to AQA and download paper 1 and 2 of language, and 1 and 2 of literature. That shows you everything that will come up.
@amyclark7685
@amyclark7685 4 жыл бұрын
Boa Hancock btw, it’s actually Jekyll and Hyde not jacklyn :)
@amsa12378
@amsa12378 4 жыл бұрын
@@amyclark7685 Yeah that`s really not my biggest problem here !
@amyclark7685
@amyclark7685 4 жыл бұрын
Boa Hancock well I was letting you know for when you revise it and can’t figure out why it’s not coming up 😴 be grateful
@amsa12378
@amsa12378 4 жыл бұрын
@@amyclark7685 Thanks a bunch!!
@lydiamorris6668
@lydiamorris6668 2 жыл бұрын
I was revising watching this video, and next minute I fainted, lol I have to go the the hospital ahaha no joke !
@hamsnub
@hamsnub 2 жыл бұрын
16:11 he wrote macbeth instead of shakespeare 3 times :(
@BobBob-me8gt
@BobBob-me8gt 3 жыл бұрын
Yr 11 Mocks tomorrow ✌️😘✌️
@asiah125
@asiah125 3 жыл бұрын
for your mocks, did u get 2019 papers?
@sohaibmirza4609
@sohaibmirza4609 3 жыл бұрын
I'm here at year 8 but you are really helpful and I can't thank you enough.
@Jibi8z
@Jibi8z 2 жыл бұрын
continue like that and u will be the next sanjay unlike me 😭😭
@brokenoob3797
@brokenoob3797 Жыл бұрын
@@Jibi8z anything’s possible if you put your mind to it
@brokenoob3797
@brokenoob3797 Жыл бұрын
If you really cared you would have written 10 essays in a day it’s possible I did it once
@spytro4243
@spytro4243 4 жыл бұрын
Hi sir, please can you make more videos on English language paper 2 when you have time?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
I have loads
@idkwhatthisis7319
@idkwhatthisis7319 3 жыл бұрын
Will this help with the exam board WJEC EDUQAS 9-1?
@Toyu67
@Toyu67 3 жыл бұрын
Hi sir, just got my mark back as 20/160 im so proud of myself.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
?
@abz7800
@abz7800 3 жыл бұрын
loll you must be joking right
@georgie3528
@georgie3528 3 жыл бұрын
ouch
@chillx656
@chillx656 2 жыл бұрын
Toyu WTF? how did i found you lmfao 😂😂😂😂😂
@marioduvi8643
@marioduvi8643 2 жыл бұрын
bro....
@isabellecrabbe9992
@isabellecrabbe9992 2 жыл бұрын
Do you need to conclude? My teacher told us that it’s not necessary?
@sophiemae4119
@sophiemae4119 2 жыл бұрын
hi sir, i have got my essays back for my mocks and for my macbeth essay i got 28/30, and on my jekyll and hyde essay i got 18/30. i honestly don’t know how i lost so many marks on my jekyll and hyde essay. throughout the whole essay i was getting level 4 AO’s and i didn’t get into level 5 or 6 at all. i really don’t know what i was missing in the jekyll and hyde essay and i don’t know how i can improve it.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
Ask your teacher for 5 ways to improve it, then do so, and hand it in to be remarked. You clearly have the subject knowledge, so it will be small adjustments
@user-ic7rj2gv2z
@user-ic7rj2gv2z 3 жыл бұрын
I am new to the UK, I was wondering if you can choose your Shakespearean play for paper 1 or if it is assigned to you by the exam.
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 3 жыл бұрын
Each exam board offers a range of about 3-5. Go to their past papers to find which.
@shekhinahasumah1234
@shekhinahasumah1234 3 жыл бұрын
Your school chooses it
@user-ic7rj2gv2z
@user-ic7rj2gv2z 3 жыл бұрын
@@shekhinahasumah1234 when you school chooses it, do you mean they choose the specific play, or like the comment above, do you mean the exam board will choose 3-5 specific plays and then you get to chose one of them
@shekhinahasumah1234
@shekhinahasumah1234 3 жыл бұрын
@@user-ic7rj2gv2z yes the exam boards give options and you school from that
@user-ic7rj2gv2z
@user-ic7rj2gv2z 3 жыл бұрын
@@shekhinahasumah1234 does that mean you only need to study one play?
@aaronthomas6433
@aaronthomas6433 4 жыл бұрын
sir i dont know how to get my language as good as this
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
Start by stealing some of it, and then use it in class, or for some revision answers - give it to your teacher to mark.
@aaronthomas6433
@aaronthomas6433 4 жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thanks Sir!!!!
@TheSafeSword
@TheSafeSword 3 жыл бұрын
This is wholesome, Teacher to student relationship
@mrpineapplebro7964
@mrpineapplebro7964 11 күн бұрын
does this essay talk about how Macbeth changed throughout the play
@abraarmotara5042
@abraarmotara5042 3 жыл бұрын
hi sir i have a question. in the essay sanjay said the nonchalant tone symbolises Macbeths 'human kindness'. could anyone please explain to me how a nonchalant tone could symbolise someone's kindness. reference 15:29
@NihalKakde
@NihalKakde 3 жыл бұрын
if they are described as nonchalant then they are seen to be calm in every situation which basically connotes to a kind person as you wont see them being influenced by their rage and would be acting wisely
@abraarmotara5042
@abraarmotara5042 3 жыл бұрын
@@NihalKakde thnx
@farhaanahmed8924
@farhaanahmed8924 3 жыл бұрын
What was the question though, Sir?
@abraarmotara5042
@abraarmotara5042 3 жыл бұрын
Which year was this question given in
@jacobreid8889
@jacobreid8889 Ай бұрын
Is this of the theme of kingship?
@sameerahfarooqi5326
@sameerahfarooqi5326 2 жыл бұрын
Hi Mr Salles I thought its good when your ideas and points are unique from other students but it seems like if examiners arent familiar theyll give it a lower level. So shall we use ideas that are unfamiliar and sort of unique or not? Can you also do more videos on Animal Farm
@thatonekidonaboat1269
@thatonekidonaboat1269 Жыл бұрын
if they are unknown explain them well
@izzy-jw1jl
@izzy-jw1jl 4 жыл бұрын
Hi Sir, I am in the 2020 GCSE year group and need at least a 7 to do Lit as an A-Level. In my first mock, I got a 5 but in the second I got a 7. Do you think it's worth me continuing to work with re-taking English Lit in the Autumn in mind? Ideally, I would love an 8 or 9, but I am just not at that standard yet. Thank you so much!
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 4 жыл бұрын
izzy 88 I think there is a good chance you will get a 7 this year, and I have not heard of schools and colleges asking for a grade 7. If this is the case, and you are motivated, do the exam. Your highest grade will count, and the skills you develop in revising will help you at A level.
@tarronburrha4017
@tarronburrha4017 2 жыл бұрын
What was the question for this model
@hannahhazel2934
@hannahhazel2934 2 жыл бұрын
thank you so much
@revisionchannelsoyoudontge2999
@revisionchannelsoyoudontge2999 2 жыл бұрын
Is this applicable for all exam board sir or just aqa? If I analysed like this in ocr would it be marked differently?
@advaitpanicker7357
@advaitpanicker7357 2 жыл бұрын
no
@revisionchannelsoyoudontge2999
@revisionchannelsoyoudontge2999 2 жыл бұрын
@@advaitpanicker7357 no it won’t be marked differently or no it’s not applicable?
@advaitpanicker7357
@advaitpanicker7357 2 жыл бұрын
@@revisionchannelsoyoudontge2999 no it won't be marked differently
@imufv
@imufv 2 жыл бұрын
Sanjay my g , uve smashed it
@FireFitt
@FireFitt 2 жыл бұрын
He's not that good mate, like come on
@tobyford189
@tobyford189 3 жыл бұрын
One question, will the examiner use your plan at all when marking you?
@user.004
@user.004 3 жыл бұрын
probably not but they'll keep it in mind
@shulimiron6415
@shulimiron6415 2 жыл бұрын
what was the question that he was answering
@elizabethlewis3549
@elizabethlewis3549 Жыл бұрын
In order to get an 8/9 do you need to hit Level 6 on all the AOs?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Жыл бұрын
No
@elizabethlewis3549
@elizabethlewis3549 Жыл бұрын
@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish So if you hit Level 6 on just one of the AO's does that tip you into that level?
@BilalHussain-di6tr
@BilalHussain-di6tr 4 жыл бұрын
What was the question for lit paper 1 for 2019 GCSE
@keiralevene4946
@keiralevene4946 4 жыл бұрын
violence in Macbeth and something on Hyde.
@mhd.9391
@mhd.9391 4 жыл бұрын
I THINK it was Hyde as frightening outsider, or it was about mystery and tension.
@samknowles6713
@samknowles6713 4 жыл бұрын
Please do key quotes on pigeon English
@MELISA-00
@MELISA-00 3 жыл бұрын
What was the question for this essay?
@billbobert
@billbobert 2 жыл бұрын
This guy says that parts of the play are included to coerce the king into sponsoring Shakespeare's company of actors, but They became the kings men before this play was performed to the king
@user.004
@user.004 3 жыл бұрын
hi sir im commenting this while watching the video. i've noticed that the person who has produced this piece uses high vocabulary and exquisite analysis something i cant do right now. is there something you recommend to improve my analytical skills and vocab?
@milksky9876
@milksky9876 3 жыл бұрын
I don’t think it makes much of a difference as long as you have a strong and convincing argument ‘fancy’ words aren’t that important
@user.004
@user.004 3 жыл бұрын
@@milksky9876 oh thanks I’m just really bad at English and trying to find ways to improve
@Unndecided
@Unndecided 2 жыл бұрын
@@user.004 read a wide range of books not that it would help you considering the English literature paper two exams tomorrow But in one year have you managed to improve your vernacular
@user.004
@user.004 2 жыл бұрын
@@Unndecided Hiya I finished my GCSES last year haha x
@Unndecided
@Unndecided Жыл бұрын
@@user.004 how did you do?
@kettlezboiledofficial1296
@kettlezboiledofficial1296 2 жыл бұрын
thank u sooo much
@laurenm5770
@laurenm5770 2 жыл бұрын
How much more in depth would an a level english essay be in comparison to a grade 9 at GCSE?
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish
@MrSallesTeachesEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
I don't know how to answer that - 35%?
@Lauren-kj9ze
@Lauren-kj9ze Жыл бұрын
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