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Hello Mr Salles, this video was very helpful, thank you! You saved my grades when I was doing my GCSE English Literature exams with your predictions! I was able to focus solely on certain topics and disregard others, which helped a lot! I was wondering, do you know why there’s no sort of predictions for the A-level papers? I’ve been searching all around, in need of the type of help I got from you during my GCSES but there are none. There’s barely any predictions/ advice for edexcel a level eng literature and my teachers don’t offer much help, either. Do you know the reasoning behind this? Is it just in general harder to look for patterns? Do you have any websites/ channels in mind which cover A level edexcel eng lit? Thank you so much!

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hey mr salles, any predictions for power & conflict paper this year?

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[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Thanks!

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MR SALLES sir could you do Edexcel 2.0 English Language videos there are barely any past papers and resources on online please could you do edexcel

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I was wondering if you could make a Macbeth guilt video, people are saying it could come up and I find your older guilt videos don’t really address the actual guilt and I find them hard to link to guilt

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what do the Levels equate to in relation to GCSE grades please? Is a Level 2 a 4?

[@Falconer7]

Hey Mr Salles, I used the website because I was wondering about purchasing it and sharing it with your referal code however I recieved 2 vastly different judgements. My teachers decided that I had a level 3 answer scoring 15 marks whereas the website said I was level 5. I feel unsure about this website and was wondering if you could verify which of the two is more accurate so I know whether to purchase it or not.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I have tried about 10 literature essays and it has been spot on, except with level 6 (which it does not like to give). I would trust it more than your teacher! However, does the advice look right? That is what you are really paying for. Is it as useful as your teacher’s?

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@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish What about for english language is it good for that?

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Is there an option for Cambridge IGCSE, AS and A Level?

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lol. been a year since i done my gcses. i was very stressed this time last year, because i thought i was going to fail language. anyways i watched mt salles videos day before got a 9 in language and 8 in literature. thanks man. im doing my alevels and im finding it very less stressful than worrying about failing english Lang 😅😅😅

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That’s great to know

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Did you use the 1 explanation per mark method? I am unsure how to do well in english language

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@@gagnastabobuk i don't remember at all, sorry.

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For English literature if I have high level analysis and good knowledge of context will that help me get a top grade?If not,what should I do to improve in the month I have left?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

That will help

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If you can't remember the name of a literacy technique what can you write?

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how do i revise poetry (i do love and relationships)

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mr salles you have TONNES of amazing videos for aqa english language BUT now i’m stuck to know which ones i should actually watch for revision, bc i definitely don’t have the time to sit and watch every single one. do you have a playlist or just a list of the only videos you need to watch for all of english lang? e.g. watching all 12 videos just for paper 1 q2 seems a bit much 😭😭

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I might make that playlist.

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MR SALLES IM SO ALL OVER THE PLACE I TRUELY DONT KNOW IF SHOULD JUST ONLY MEMORISE THE 10 QUOTES YOU USUALLY POST FOR EACH BOOK 😔

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Start there and extra if you have time

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I'd say, more is always preferable but do not try to cram any and all quotes if you have no clear ideas for how to link them to themes or if you feel it's too much to remember.

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Scores are randomized and feedback is usually wrong, i woudln't reccommend until the AI improves. Has potential though.

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sir i wanted to say how can i use this site for free to revise and see where i struggle at in terms of english

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Please do a macbeth 2024 prediciton 🙏

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Tried this and signed up immediately (using your special code)

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Glad you liked it!

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can you please make a video about kingship in Macbeth with quotes maybe a youtube short

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Quick question: should I plan my thesis statement before the exam or have a few ideas of the writers purpose and then pick which ones to talk about once I know the question?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I see both as the same thing

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But for example, if I write my thesis statement before hand then the things I say about the writers purpose, I may not be able to relate to the question.

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[@tharulideviyagahage9546]

Hello Mr Salles! I'm writing Edexcel Igcse Literature next year and one of my biggest issues currently is - I find it difficult to strongly link my ideas to each other which makes my answers seem like its jumping from idea to idea. My school teacher's not really helpful and I don't really know how to fix this. Any help from anyone is appreciated on how I can tackle this issue!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Type your ideas into Gemini or ChatGPT and ask for ideas on how to link them

[@itscandy9987]

How would you input answers for English language?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

In the same way. I haven’t properly tested language yet

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is level 5 good?

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what do the levels mean? (i.e. how many marks is a level 5 essay?)

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This is the mark scheme for a 30 marker (e.g. poetry) level 6: 26-30 level 5: 21-25 level 4: 16-20 level 3: 11-15 level 2: 6-10 level 1: 1-5

[@yoonaxflora]

hi mr salles!! i subscribed to the web and i got a level 6 in my work on An Inspector Calls, but my teacher at school marked it as a level 5 (22/30), what should i do?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Send me the marked one as a comment or via the ‘about’ section of my channel

[@yoonaxflora]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Feedback is at the bottom labelled as 1,2,3 so it may be easier to read this way (I personally think i deserve a level 5 only, and also your website in 'about' is not quite working im afraid) 1 As a socialist, Priestley uses the Inspector as a mouthpiece to point out the variety of problems led by the power imbalance and injustice in the postwar society. The Birling family is an example of the capitalist upper class, especially Mr Birling, who believes strongly in the ideology of patriarchalism and the importance of individualism. Their exploitative behaviour, whether intent or reckless, further shapes a harsh hierarchical structure in society which is based on their family background and social status. Their prestige and prosperity may satisfy their wants and needs, but their ignorant behaviours are the roots of all the corruptions and hostility in the society. Thus, Priestley tries to convey the idea of equality and social responsibility, trying to breach the rift between upper and lower class closer, and so to disprove the concept of capitalism. 2 The Inspector, as a proxy for Priestley, symbolises socialism and enlightened the potential that the younger generation could possibly step up and change, through “We often do on the young ones. They are more impressionable.” The way Priestley points out at the pronoun “we” suggests that socialism could possibly be a ‘prominent leader’ amongst all people, which indicates that socialism is the only way the society works. The lower class will not have to climb their way up, instead everyone has an equal opportunity and gains their fundamental human rights. Priestley also focuses on the younger generation, meaning that they are the group of people who are more open-minded and susceptible to take up socialist ideas. Here also suggesting that capitalism is already "old-fashioned", only the eldest would stay in their rigid and locked mind. And ironically, Mr and Mrs Birling, on behalf of the whole working demographic, is in fact the most experienced and sophisticated group of people, yet they seem to be incapable of being the leader for the majority of the generation. Simultaneously, Sheila and Eric, who seemed to appear immature and sheltered, realise their wrongdoings. They challenged and rejected their capitalist parents, instead helped to express that only socialism can pave our future as to enhance people’s minds. In Act 2, Sheila shows her dedicated petition for her change through “He’s giving us the rope - so we’ll hang ourselves.” The idea of a rope is perhaps indicating a tool which would help people to escape from struggling situations, showing that the Inspector is giving them opportunities. In spite of that, neither do the capitalist members grasp and comprehend his words, yet proceed to be resistant to change their beliefs. Consequently, it is referring to a way where they will eventually “hang themselves”, resulting in death equivalent to Eva Smith’s suicide. This also implies that the lower class do not deserve to die out of the lack of help, and that the upper class's unconscious actions can be implicitly and gradually killing the innocent ones. Priestley again brings out the importance of social responsibility, and attempts to shape a heroic side of socialism, suggesting that welfare of the poor is everyone's responsibility, and that businessmen shouldn't grow rich on the poverty of their workers. 3 In addition, at any time capitalism is mentioned, these ideas would be stopped by the interruption of the Inspector or even the stage directions, like 'the sharp doorbell'. These are significant because the Inspector is always shown to be powerful and is constantly knocking over to the concept of capitalism. Priestley uses the character of the authoritative Inspector to imply a distinctive aura around socialism, indicating that the capitalists show no sympathy and willingness to bother. Priestley uses these brutal acts to persuade his audience that capitalist belief is misleading. In a broader perspective, he directly addresses to the upper class as a whole that they shouldn't control the poor by using manipulative means under their prejudiced mind, they shouldn't profit from someone else's misfortune, as no one is deserved to be maltreated. The Inspector again reminds us of the importance of socialism at the end of the play: “We are all members of one body. We are responsible for one another." Priestley's final speech serves socialism as a lens through which he critiques the prevailing social hierarchies, and underscores the interconnectedness of individuals in the society. In a broader perspective, Priestley attempts to educate the upper class in the Edwardian era through this didactic play, that it is not merely about advocating for economic equality, regardless their social status, collective responsibility and compassion towards each other is what shapes an equitable society. Feedbacks 1 (This paragraph effectively sets the context for Priestley's use of the Inspector to critique societal issues. However, try to directly link these observations to how the Inspector suggests improvements to society.) 2 (Excellent analysis of the Inspector's influence on the younger generation and the critique of capitalism. Your use of textual evidence to support your points is strong. Consider exploring further how these ideas directly suggest improvements to society beyond the critique.) 3 (This paragraph effectively highlights how Priestley uses the Inspector to disrupt capitalist ideology and promote socialism. The analysis of stage directions and the Inspector's final speech is insightful. To strengthen your argument, consider discussing how these disruptions and reminders serve as direct suggestions for societal improvement.) Level: 6 Overall feedback: Your essay demonstrates a thoughtful and detailed understanding of how Priestley uses the character of the Inspector to critique societal issues and suggest improvements through socialism. You've effectively used textual evidence to support your analysis and have shown a clear grasp of the play's themes. To further enhance your response, focus on directly linking your observations to specific suggestions for societal improvement made by the Inspector, and consider exploring the implications of these suggestions in more depth. What went well: Your understanding of the play's themes and your ability to support your analysis with textual evidence are strong. You've effectively identified how Priestley uses the Inspector as a vehicle for his critique of capitalism and promotion of socialism. Even better if: To improve, ensure that your analysis directly ties back to the question by explicitly stating how the Inspector suggests ways that society could be improved. Additionally, delve deeper into the implications of these suggestions for societal improvement, considering the broader context of the play's themes.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

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OK, so I reached Kelly eventually, and was reassured. Phew!

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Does anyone know any websites which give you pastpapers and the text im struggling to find any :(

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Physics and Maths

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coming from a previous video on aqa language paper 1 Q4 can you say descriptive language is language device and will it score you marks?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

No

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@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Is everything actually imagery I have some doubts but you know better than me

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

In prose, yes, in poetry there is more directly connected to sound

[@JeremyOduorYear11]

Can you say something has connotations to something and will it count as using a language device?

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[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

£10 per month, but with my room code £9 for each of the next 3 months

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That’s great - thank you for recommending this website. Will help us so much, really appreciate it.

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Does this work for A Level?

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it gave me a level 5 does that mean grade 5 level or the top band of mark scheme

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes, the mark scheme

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My school marks my question 5s noticeably lower than this AI tool. Feedback is quite obvious and sometimes useless such as improving SPAG fo questions 2-3. Yes, it would be better to have good SPAG by why is that affecting my feedback so much? For me it doesn't worse £10 per month.

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Hello sir ,I am sorry but I did try this website with my English Langauge Paper 1 Q5) response which was marked 33/40 by my actual teacher and moderated but this website after marking gave me a response of Level 2 Surely there can be differnce in few marks but not a whole level . Honestly getting essyas marked by my teacehrs is the hardest job for me as tehy barely give it back , I was so ahppy with this video like this was my solution , Unfortunately I am just confused with it's feedback

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I haven’t tried it yet for language, just for literature- send your answer to me and let me see

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MR SALLES sir could you do Edexcel 2.0 English Language videos there are barely any past papers and resources on online please could you do edexcel