The Alien Maid Desired More Than Just to Serve Her Human Guest... | Sci-Fi | HFY Story

[@kenwalker687]

Not the most realistic scifi short story line that I have heard or read. The picture of the blue maid is alluring, captivating & friendly.

[@lifelongconservative3338]

The following is IMHO: First: I noticed that the oratory was without the stupid pronunciations, a guarantee AI was involved, was refreshing. Never underestimate the "artificial unintelligence" to f-up the English Language. That alone has steered me away from many channels, not just the irritating pronunciation failures but the fact they don't care and keep putting out the same drivel one story after another. Second: AI produced stories always repeat part of the story, oft times adding more context within the repeated section. More times than not I bug out right there as it is something that could easily be fixed. Third: You picked a good place in the story to "pause" I say pause because the Resolution you chose to end the story doesn't pass the Litmus Test of a good story structure. I can only hope you take this pause and build on it with a Part 2 (or Part 2, 3, 4). OVERALL: I really liked the story. Please continue with at least a Part 2.

[@Astrofrank]

Seems to be written by humans, obviously narrated by a human, so no AI involved. I like that.