The Justice League Rewrite (Part 1)

Justice League was a disappointment. Critically. Financially. Creatively. It wasn't great.
And I don't think you can make one small change to fix it.
I think you need to make A BIG CHANGE.
So, this is Part 1 of my Justice League rewrite. I'm taking the whole movie apart, beginning to end. Some things will stay the same but a lot of it will be different but hopefully it will accomplish everything the original Justice League was supposed to accomplish and embody the spirit of the movie we all wanted it to be.
Part 2 is coming soon.
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[@logancox9280]

Nando “I’m in no way saying that I’m a better writer than these guys” Proceeds to be a better writer

[@michaelsayavong2656]

He’s not saying he’s better, it’s just implied.

[@logancox9280]

Axtwyt Starkiller hindsight’s 20/20

[@Gomenred]

I Make Content Sometimes but Is it really hindsight when he's pretty much taken the movie in an entirely different direction

[@blackmanwithcomputer]

Hindsight makes everyone better, yo.

[@notstorm208]

You really didn’t understand why he said that did you?

[@JustKrin]

At least this Justice League will have a part 2

[@ChevyChase301]

Earth Fire Water oof

[@hunnibuttr]

Nice

[@jeanleon3537]

Earth Fire Water best comment

[@epm1012]

Earth Fire Water And Probably a Part 3.

[@wisdommanari6701]

Lol

[@your_dar_ling]

Nando: oh no big Villains *Literally 3 seconds later* Nando: So we got DEATHSTROKE- *IM SORRY WHAT?*

[@thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527]

dar He’s not a “big villain” in the sense that most non comic book fans or DCTV fans wouldn’t really know much about him

[@nynjanyck]

@@thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527 Dctv fans would know about Deathstroke

[@unamandlaxulu5840]

Lol XD! I was literally like, "No big villains? Are we just gonna ignore the fact that Deathstroke could probably destroy Batman in hand-to-hand combat?"

[@sarasamaletdin4574]

Unamalda, I am sure he means by name recognition not power. Besides there are more powerful villains too.

[@aaronxiaofj]

UnamandlaS Xulu well to be fair if it’s one-on-one, Batman would win easily

[@thejoshbrown95]

Screw the Snyder Cut, I want a Nando Cut.

[@kerberb5994]

I think we’ll need more than a cut...

[@toytoonz1421]

I think I can make the Nando cut. I'll report back when I'm finished.

[@Sentryman002]

@@toytoonz1421 Work fast, my friend.

[@toytoonz1421]

@@Sentryman002 I will try.

[@Sentryman002]

@@toytoonz1421 I know you will friend. No pressure from me.

[@Relfar2]

I cried. 20 minutes of better content then the whole actual movie

[@officialtrailers9075]

Jesse Harrison I cried. 500 likes and you couldn’t bother using the right than/then

[@matthewcrane5294]

Tortanus The MegaCarrier 💀

[@mik3y448]

@@officialtrailers9075 its just one grammar mistake get over it

[@SomeGlasses]

@@officialtrailers9075 truly heartbreaking

[@thepubknight6144]

one thing ill add is clayface also was in the batman animated series and his arc was one of the best of the series...but i love his addition here since hes a batman rogue villian

[@michaela.webermann4141]

Holy crap. Not only is this such a better premise for a Justice League movie, but it’s so good that I truly thought the video had only been six or seven minutes when the 20 minutes were up. I was actually edge of my seat gripped by this plot. I can’t wait for the follow ups!

[@NandovMovies]

Thanks! Part 2 is fun.

[@patrickparadis9038]

can;'t wait! i missed the part about how this was only part 1... biggest cliffhanger since the snap...

[@AffectiSaVerb]

I totally agree. Isn’t a movie supposed to be riveting? Edge of your seat excitement. I don’t get it wouldn’t you make more money on a movie if it was an awesome, repeatable watch rather than a built in audience? Wouldn’t you make more money by having twice as many people go to see the movie and see it more than once than hitting a number?

[@lebronjim1582]

Nando v Movies When is part 2?

[@Eccentrick218]

"It's the Legion of Doom." The moment you said that, I realized everything that should've been didn't happen. It would've tied the whole DC cinematic universe together in one scene, without having the need to retcon anything at all. An apocalyptic villain never feels like a true threat, because no one on a meta level is ever afraid of the world dying. But seeing the Legion of Doom show up? That would've left fans desperate for more.

[@stevenirizarry1304]

The legion of doom is unique

[@thepubknight6144]

@@stevenirizarry1304 or the intergang since theyre also founded by darkseid ...also it could of been man-bat since he also fights batman on rooftoops plus it would fit with the whole "meta humans" reveal nando pitched

[@adammuniz4149]

I didn’t have a problem with the casting of aquaman

[@mikemike7326]

Same, its a rarity to see someone disagree

[@Sentryman002]

I agree.

[@isaiahmaldonado349]

I love Jason Mamoa as Aqua Man

[@princesoulger999]

I love Jason, but he looks like Lobo wearing Aqua-Man's costume

[@sdprz7893]

@@princesoulger999 The original Aquaman look is very basic, typical blonde blue eyed guy. I like the new spin, it makes him way more memorable and unique.

[@acopella431]

10/10 would watch the Nando Cinematic Universe

[@leisurelyindex]

Amani Jones that has a great ring to it.

[@SimonCleric]

yes please

[@sephikong7880]

Amani Jones 9002/10

[@Modification102]

Rolls of the Tongue far better than "Sony's Universe of Marvel Characters"

[@abdullahx4908]

How about Nando Cinematic Interconnected Universe or, drumroll please,..... NCIS

[@ross396]

This guy... started the movie off with Clayface? Omg. I'm like... speechless.

[@bobwilson679]

In a good way or a bad way?

[@jokerstein627]

Still waiting for a response...

[@kryptonian56]

I've said for years that clay face fight/ chase would be great for a opening scene.... Awesome!!!!!

[@anglozombie2485]

I think they would fuck up the cgi on clay face though

[@iainarlt7668]

@@anglozombie2485 I don't think clayface needs good CGI the more abhorrent and unnatural the better right? Correct me if I'm wrong I don't know much about CGI.

[@Sephern]

I'm really glad you added that you're not trying to say you're a better writer. That's super respectful, and it's awesome you acknowledged that there are so many reasons a good writer's work can get ruined by someone else in a production. I may not like entirely where your changes are going, but I'm really excited for part 2. :D

[@RadinV1]

"Justice league was bad. I mean it was fine, but it's fineness makes it bad." -Nando v movies, 2018

[@tomatoanus]

not enough forehead tattoos, the studio would never sign off on this

[@That1BlkDude]

tomatoanus why hello there

[@thisisfyne]

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

[@fehzorz]

damaged

[@onekthmatt]

When Bruce unmasks, it'll be revealed he tattooed "I'm sorry clark :(" on his forehead.

[@antjack6192]

How about start off with a younger Batman 25-28 years old, instead of a old seasoned Batman stupid idea

[@Marbletrain60GR]

Batman in traffic, now that’s what I wanna see

[@seandabest6353]

Batman’s just sitting in the bat mobile while car horns go off. He sighs. Sits there for a bit. Adjusts the seat position. Makes those popping noises bored people make, I dunno how to describe it. Turns on the radio. Radio plays the Batman theme (you know which one I mean). Grins slightly. Starts humming along.

[@box2122]

12:16 Well obviously I would have to say kite man. That's a no brainer.

[@franciscorendon2783]

#ReleaseTheGliderCut

[@liaminator4950]

@@franciscorendon2783 OSFIDPD0TFOFO THIS IS IT THIS IS THE BEST COMMENT

[@franciscorendon2783]

@@liaminator4950 hm but I stole it from a video

[@mik3y448]

condiment man is better

[@thedick009]

I like how you never even actually say it out loud, but your casting of Toby Jones as Toyman is perfect

[@bruce7068]

Imagine an after credits scene where Amanda Waller pays Slade a visit in prison offering him a place on Task Force X similar to the post credits scene in Arkham Origins. Presumably teasing a decent Suicide Squad sequel.

[@NandovMovies]

I actually have two post credits scenes planned and that may be close.

[@solidpython4964]

I feel like Deathstroke has been so depowered over time and given a backseat when imo he is such a cool villain

[@matthiuskoenig3378]

be is not a Batman villain tho, he is a merc and a titans villian that fights alongside and against most heroes, although he does go up against batman alot.

[@TStamp-lw4ku]

Bruce but then it would be copying Arkham origins

[@emc246]

SOLID PYTHON The Arrowverse used him pretty well.

[@Jesse-yo7uw]

I think scarecrow should be in the legion, it would be a great opportunity to get to know more about flash and cyborgs backstory while under the fear gas. It could also show of character conflict, say flash and batman are fighting some members of the legion and scarecrow is one of them, flash would think "oh this is just a regular guy in a costume, I can take him easy" and before batman can warn him about what scarecrow can do, flash is already running at him and ends up with a face full of fear gas. That would show off flash's quick to act personality and how he's not willing to listen to others a lot of the time. Just a thought, really enjoyed the video!

[@japple798]

legofett that is a very good idea actually

[@leisurelyindex]

legofett absolutely yes.

[@valdemar3181]

Great idea

[@snaake9389]

There’s one huge problem with using the Legion of Doom: Casting

[@userunknown203]

Holy heck when you said "Legion of Doom" I lost my shit because I've literally been saying they should be the Justice League villains since 2013. This is not the first time you've said exactly what I've always felt and it gets better every time. You're a dank fellow Nando

[@IAmGeorgeLucas]

When you're more excited for part 2 than you are for anything from the DCEU.

[@darksideofevil13]

Well Aquaman and Shazam look promising.

[@dustinviers4508]

Can I just say, I love your editing cuts of completely different, but related, media to help visualize the scenarios you layout. Like, eyes on that Weather Wizard shooting lightning at Wonder Woman transition. Just really smooth work, props earned.

[@NandovMovies]

Thanks! I'm glad someone noticed. Each video has one shot combo that I really like and that was this one.

[@Pants.69]

Dustin Viers completely agree👏

[@Ozziee420]

"Amanda waller" "Flag" "Hopper" A demogorgon should be the villain instead of Steppenwolf

[@Daydreamer1130]

How are you not a movie writer/director/everything, all your ideas are super intriguing and great changes to what were bad/meh movies

[@luciapando2668]

This is just.... this is AMAZING. It sounds so much more interesting than the original one. Also, you have a way of narrating the movie that just paints the action in my head. Love this! Amazing work!!!

[@redch.897]

Lucia Pando IKR

[@hoho121w]

I agree with you

[@fardawsfardaws2267]

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[@MrE_]

2:48 I caught that jab at BVS "...where superman fought Doomsday for a second..."

[@phone5579]

Kevin the whole channel is a jab at BVS

[@CabezasDePescado]

yeah he is an idiot

[@Ok-eg8dg]

@rice milk. It had it's moments tho

[@LjuboCupic1912]

rice milk. He said had it’s moments, not that it was good.

[@markreid6251]

Wait! You hate Wonder Woman's theme? I was loving everything about this video until you said that. Her theme is amazing and never fails to get me fired up even more in an action scene.

[@thepubknight6144]

i agree it fits her to a t

[@Im.myfuture]

It's a badass theme. The problem is it's a battle theme. It builds hype for when she's about to go ham. But when it's a cameo of her just assisting in a rescue or saying hi, it's...overpoweringly jarring.

[@TheYankeesUnited]

Imagine that issue alfred saying bring in the younger heroes. Batman saying no, not again. They are to young, I won't let something like this happen once more. Alfred goes its not the same Bruce, these young men can help. And Batman just yelling "I will not bring in another one Alfred, not after everything that has happend!" I would of loved that.

[@suspiciousmaninhat5941]

I was wondering today, “I wonder if Nando forgot about that big Justice League rewrite... OH SHIT”.

[@NandovMovies]

I heard that, so I was decided to put this out today.

[@ColinDakotaKelly]

Nando, I've watched all of your videos, this is absolutely beautiful! I fully respect your hard work and all of the effort you put into these videos. Let it be known that your hard work does not go unnoticed.

[@Cadambank]

In comics / cartoons, the legion of doom was created as a reactionary mechanism to formation of justice League. It is interesting that here Legion is first formed then followed by justice League.

[@francisjomergallardo4593]

The Nando cut is still better than the Snyder Cut. #ReleaseTheNandoCut

[@sfdko3291]

So I'm guessing the Egyptian artifacts are for Black Adam or .... maybe Dr. Fate? Can't wait to see where this goes.

[@kingcole5977]

It's the Egyptian God Cards! That's why the book was about Ra. haha

[@lenwezzyman]

Why not Vandal savage

[@RickyLiveOG]

I'm thinking they will be trying to resurrect BA and the Legion will be defeated by the JL, but not before setting in motion the resurrection anyway in a post credit scene, leading into Shazam.

[@purpleglasses4511]

R C Why can't WB writers think like this, what kind of shit do they imagine smh

[@shriramprasadvenkatesan5459]

Or could it be the Hawkman/Hawkgirl? Maybe evil thanagarians?

[@logan_was_here_3382]

p-p-p-p-p-part....1...? *AND ITS 20 MINUTES?? YESSSSSSS*

[@filthy.kasual]

AqUaM_CaPaciToR and there’s going to be 4 parts lol

[@RicardoHipper]

Filthy Casual All those parts pretty much make up a movie

[@frankteng]

AqUaM_CaPaciToR and then you realize the 20 minutes have just past

[@CL12356]

Love it! What would you think if at the memorial service, the final person to speak is, of course, Lois Lane. She begins the speech honoring Superman and the all the good he’s done for mankind, but then turns very dark, saying mankind let him die: “You let the Batman kill him. You killed the only god willing to protect your pathetic lives, and now there’s no one left to save you,” as she turns around and pulls out a gun on the president. Batman throws a baterang, which not only relieves Lois of the gun, but also her hand. Batman jumps to the stage as the secret service takes the president away. Lois, in “pain” screams at Batman, “Look at what you’ve done. You destroy everything you touch, everyone around you...” Batman is distraught, taken aback. Then Lois holds up her hand, which is not bleeding, but dripping clay. Batman realizes who he’s dealing with. The fight ensues, and Lois is later discovered to be held captive by the Legion of Doom. This allows Clayface to show off his infamous acting skills and it makes sense he would impersonate Lois, since she is the most unassuming to get closet to the president. Clayface also gets a stab at Batman’s insecurities of letting down both Superman and Robin (further fueling Bruce to work alone) and it turns the public’s attention on the role Batman played in Superman’s death (which is later escalated by the media). And his mentions of “gods” can allude to the possible agenda of summoning and evil god in the absence of Superman, if that’s where you were going. Thanks for reading all of this if you did!

[@CL12356]

AnHeC she wouldn’t actually be Lois Lane, she’d be Clayface incognito. And the whole thing isn’t about killing the president, it’s about creating a distraction and drawing mass attention to Batman’s role in Supe’s death

[@Sentryman002]

Wow, I TOTALLY like this!

[@Sentryman002]

My friend, this is chilling. I like it!

[@Sentryman002]

Buddy, this scene is chilling. I've already added it in my head!

[@ThatOneDude521]

That’s… incredible

[@soldofpol7026]

Hey there bud, don't hate on Jason Momoa as Aquaman...awesome casting there But actually, great job, you should write movies

[@TickleMeElmo55]

Jason's casting was a bit inspired. Whole Aquaman movie needed a better script. The actress who played the love interested needed to be replaced. She was mediocre.

[@rejachemno]

Nando making Justice League great again.

[@aliidris657]

Omg Jordan! Big fan! Im sorry you have to put up with Conan 😂 Have a good one!

[@ChevyChase301]

Jordan Schlansky again?

[@alejandrobonfil2818]

Wow

[@michaelkim4691]

Jordan, All I can say is BOI

[@marlowemitchell3557]

Y'all are dumb if you think that is actually Jordan schlansky

[@saj-manthesonicfan1893]

20 Minutes?! Part 1!?! JUSTICE LEAGUE!?!?!? All my dreams are coming true! Love your channel, love your ideas, can't wait for the 2nd and 3rd act! I absolutely agree that there should have been supervillains throughout the film and Superman should have stayed dead for a while longer. So glad you brought that up! C:

[@TybudX]

It is a great solution to that mustache problem.

[@saj-manthesonicfan1893]

Tyler Desrosiers; YES, EXACTLY!

[@codymaple8959]

Can't wait for parts 2 and 3

[@saj-manthesonicfan1893]

Cody Maple; The anticipation is killing me! >.

[@codymaple8959]

SAJ-Man the Sonic Fan I know right this was the first video of his I saw I submitted to him and watched his old videos

[@herbertdiesoe1124]

You are one of the two only KZbinrs that does these kinds of videos while staying humble, other so called "film critics" will simply pander the filmmakers without having any idea about the process of making a blockbuster while managing studio interference. Great video!

[@zap4th368]

i am so glad you added weather wizard. the flash weather wizard is the best example of a glass cannon i have ever seen. no stronger than a normal person but can tear buildings apart without effort

[@cam3rian]

This is so much better definitely gonna listen to your podcast

[@sambennett1757]

When you get the time I would love to see a DC based Nando Cinematic Universe

[@luislima3476]

Instead of the Legion, it could be the Cryme Sindicate. With this, the “they don’t know which villain they want to use” wasn’t really a problem, since they would be used just for this story

[@CarlosGarcia-zo1vm]

“I’m not going to change the movie much” Completely changes the villain, premise, and base story.

[@viatic5878]

The only positive thing I can think about the DCEU is that Nando is gonna come out with a video with something better

[@kingcole5977]

It's like how 'Something Witty Entertainment' abridged 'Sword Art Online' from dirt to gold.

[@evolvedturtleproductions7600]

Only to be even more disappointed because it isn’t the real thing.

[@marc5533]

I'd pay for a Nando Cinematic Universe

[@JaguarBrickFilms]

Would you mind if I used this to make a Lego film?

[@TrackMaster844]

I'd watch it

[@silverdays2909]

Me too

[@shreeeeeeeeeeeeee]

DO IT

[@pedanticat9479]

Man, this act alone is a million times better then what we actually got

[@thepriorstone4064]

But...why NOT have a Nando v movies universe?

[@keith1984rich]

The PriorStone Agreed.

[@neccodealer]

Since I haven’t seen Justice League and I’m not planing to, I’m gonna pretend this is what actually happened.

[@kingcole5977]

I reject your reality and substitute my own!

[@DeclanCorey]

"Outside of Turkish Airlines of course" *I'm suing you for giving me a heart condition*

[@Theolppoman]

Yeah, this is definitely better. Even with your fairly vague descriptions of events, I was absolutely hooked. Can't wait for part 2!

[@HxH2011DRA]

Now *THIS* is gonna be fun (btw I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED a Nando Cinematic universe series. Get artist and do whatever else ya need to do to make it happen)

[@mr.e3768]

Love this channel, everything is so well thought out and well written...

[@NandovMovies]

Thanks!

[@mr.e3768]

Keep up the great work man! I always look forward to new videos from this channel... Btw would you ever consider doing another video on improving Thor 2? Or maybe a video about how to make Thor Ragnorak better as in less silly and fit the tones of the original more? The first Thor I've always felt was really underrated and really similar to a Shakespeare drama...

[@cadenpresley3674]

Something I disagreed on: WW's theme. Her main theme is badass and catchy. But to each their own. Otherwise, I actually love your version of JL. A much better premise than what we saw. As you mentioned, they should've used the roster of other DC characters to their advantage since they own the rights to all of the DC characters.

[@FirstLast-kp9jx]

I also don't like it. I'm not saying it's bad, I just don't find it to be badass or catchy.

[@jayjaysink1828]

and that's where you are wrong my friend

[@Sentryman002]

I like Wonder Woman's theme too.

[@InoMercy]

It doesn't really work for a Wonder Woman theme. It's catchy, I guess. But it doesn't really convey the grandeur or legendary status of a woman literally created by the Gods. Other than the obnoxious guitar riff, it's just an uninspired orchestral piece.

[@theperson101ful]

Love this! And not having Superman in this movie means no moustache contract, will miss the Superman vs Justice League fight tho, thought that was the best part of the movie.

[@BakaryD]

Everyday we figure out a little more how bad the DCEU is.

[@no-vd2rh]

Yusuke Urameshi warner bros*

[@juanmanuelcardona19]

Warner Bros has become a mediocre entertainment company now a days, it used to be Disney’s rival but now they are below mediocre

[@gkay8889]

Bilal Ahmed no..DCEU*

[@Leon-xo4wl]

True

[@mckenanbundy3578]

I love it

[@dojomojo5085]

I still don't know why you aren't a writer at Marvel Studios or something.

[@knallekalle9920]

Because that would probably be overkill for the DCEU, which the Justice League is a part of...

[@getschwifty5537]

To be fair, while Marvel has a few misfires and Nando would have made a much better Age of Ultron, MCU is doing fine without him. DC/Warnerbros need Nando the most.

[@rayshiotile9487]

let's be real the execs would meddle to much and ruin his great script because of "the charts"

[@ghost_pl9259]

David Lopez That Age of Ultron rewrite of his sucked in my opinion. Defenders one wasnt so good as well.

[@frogholdingmachinegun377]

DOJO MOJO! He's good but calm down there, kiddo.

[@lucavincenzo5526]

Nando: "And I am in no way saying i'm a better writer than these guys." Me: *Reaches through screen to snap Nando out of it.*

[@PapasKino]

They should call themselves the Society and the members are, Toyman, Gentleman Ghost, Copperhead, Sportsmaster, and Tsukuri. Later on, in Justice League 2, the team will fight the Legion of Doom, led by Maxwell Lord.

[@DCMarvel2009]

Lol Toyman played by Toby Jones...THAT WOULD LEGITIMATELY WORK. Also, LOVE the Legion of Doom idea. Great work Nando!

[@venomissocute3448]

Step 1: Give other characters such as Flash and Aquaman movies BEFORE Justice League. Step 2: Remove the ‘Big Red CGI Fight’ Step 3: ?

[@user-os9bv1mi5m]

BookTardis394 profit

[@jesus_dc]

I'm loving your proposal. Personally I also like to perform this kind of experiments in others work and my own, and this is helping me a lot with better understanding screenplay structure and the purpose of each element. Thanks!

[@blindreddragon]

Literally going to rewatch these videos for a third time, I love your version of the Justice League so much more than the actual movie

[@Jun-bm8ly]

this is actually great, definitely better than JL. but can you change the "collect some mcguffins" part to something else? "collect the mcguffins" trope in superhero movies is getting pretty old now (same goes for Villain "hunger for power". "world domination" and "something shooting some/a giant hole into the sky" trope)

[@NandovMovies]

Thanks and to that I would say, I have a feeling you're going to be cool with the Mcguffins. Give me a few more videos.

[@Jun-bm8ly]

senpai just noticed me :o .. jokes aside, your explanation on how character in DCEU should behave is really on point and great!! I hope those hacks behind DCEU should atleast learn something from you.

[@ELFanatic]

It's a common mistake to think mcgruffins make a movie weak. The problem is too many movies misuse mcgruffins. Paychecks are a mcgruffin in our real lives. How do we choose to make our paycheck, what do we do with our savings? Do we have aspirations? nest it in fear of the future? How do we survive the hard times? What do we put up with at work to make that paycheck. Put that in a story and it defines your character, it motivates them. A mcgruffin is a thing you need. When the story's end goal is just getting the thing you need, it's weak. but when the thing you need is a tool to define who your character is, what their ambitions are, and how they handle not having it. Who are their during hardships. That's where the real power lies.

[@unstoppableExodia]

The average movie goer: Yeah hi I put me down for a mcguffin with fries and a sundae to go

[@samsulh314]

What about just collecting muffins?

[@matejas8433]

FINALLY. Do you know how long i have waited?

[@kaystarlo]

I am only 8 minutes into this video and already loving the direction! I am going to watch all of the parts of this rewrite now.

[@sleepwalking4301]

whenever i’m craving some justice league content that doesn’t make my eyes, nose and ears bleed i watch part 1-4 of nandos rewrite

[@youmnasherif9424]

i'm calling it, you're definitely getting hired by some big company real soon

[@ubayyd]

Sounds good but not necessarily

[@lucmorris9183]

How the heck can you fix the unfixable mess that is justice league? Edit: oh nando just answered my question

[@goldlight1322]

Stop letting the competition with Marvel take center stage over making a good movie franchise.

[@thaisolomon9519]

He just did

[@lucmorris9183]

Gold Wade who said anything about marvel? Justice league is a generally bad movie.

[@leonardodavi2695]

How? Did you not watch the video? Nando just described a first act that is goddamn eons better than the movie's.

[@MrDman21]

I wanna see Nando fix the mess that was Age of Ultron.

[@mruv5944]

It’s funny cos you mention the MCU not yet capitalising on a Villain team up, yet if you take a closer look at Phase 4... that could be what’s coming next!!

[@pizzachef3358]

5:36. in the scripts i write i usually start them with someone dying

[@Maggoz777]

#ReleaseTheNandoCinematicUniverse

[@alexanderaljabbar7773]

I have been waiting for this video for such a long time. Thank You for making it. The DCEU is such an interesting universe with diverse cast, and You have fixed some of the movies. My favorite video of yours is The wonder woman series. Please keep making these kind of videos.

[@smartalec2001]

This Egyptian scroll thing, are you going Black Adam with this? I approve.

[@strawhatweez]

This is a fantastic rewrite to the first act. Can't wait to see where you take this.

[@sfdko3291]

You have got to stop doing this bro. You're way too good to do this for youtube and get nothing out of it. If you're good at something, never do it for free.

[@magic75450]

SergioTov He gets money from it if he has enough subscribers and viewers. Not a lot, but still.

[@kingcole5977]

Hop on his patreon boys.

[@loonaticzack3447]

I understood that reference

[@AnastasiaIoppolo]

Hafiz Rafiee sorry, what was that? I was playing galaga

[@connormagee9858]

Alright, you say your not a better writer than the staff of justice league, so let me say it. Your a better writer than the staff of justice league and I honestly think you could show a producer one of your videos and get hired like that

[@shawnk6736]

if only the film industry were built on merit...

[@jessicacutsforth1412]

Omg I just found your channel and I’m obsessed, your arguments are so logical and well thought! Definitely binging your whole channel hehe

[@reggiereg42_]

All of your videos are great, and I love your opinions on how to make these movies better. I could really see you being the writer for a movie one day. Keep it up.

[@etnisanches2564]

Ha! I love it! If this video was 1 hour long, I would watch it completely with a smile on my face! Love the changes, love how you turned the Batman/Alfred more Batman/Alfred. And I love how you'd construct everything.

[@kingcole5977]

He even set up a good mystery in act one, super hyped for more! Think you've made a typo, @Etni Sanches.

[@Luismanuel77777]

Can you imagine Nando's Vision of this movie adapted into a comic book series, maybe something called "Justice League: Year One or Year Zero". Have this whole video be like the first issue, Then maybe make like the last issue brings Superman back in the end or something. I would honestly pay for that!

[@Luismanuel77777]

or even a short 8 episode series......... I just want Nando to write or direct something lol

[@Rinchen8192]

Why does Clayface need to plow through a crowd? he can just shape shift into a police officer or a journalist, or maybe even a President's special security guy if he's part of some team that is planning stuff.

[@zap4th368]

Because he was supposed to make a scene

[@MrSircharles05]

@@zap4th368 attempting to assassinate the President isn't causing a scene?

[@zap4th368]

The true hero of Naruto it is if no one REALIZES you are trying to assassinate the president.

[@noahthompson2912]

@@MrSircharles05 he was distracting everybody for the legion of doom

[@NoThankYouToo]

This is really excellent work. Sound, editing, ... the ideas. All top notch. Great work, man.

[@jeremyliebe8732]

Idk if anarky is the best choice, while he is all about chaos(mostly) he's more of an anti hero. Maybe someone like the trickster would work better

[@NandovMovies]

Trickster would be fun.

[@jeremyliebe8732]

My thoughts exactly anyway keep up the good work man

[@magic75450]

Jeremy Liebe But he has no power. Even one hero can win easily. Mabye he can team up with someone.

[@Iritis-]

I would have gone with Black Mask and scenario swapped it to a bank robber instead of a terrorist attack.

[@DrakeVagabond]

I hope Slade is a part of a bigger picture, because Deathstroke with ambition is cool, but not his best. Still great video.

[@NandovMovies]

Oh. He is part of a very big picture.

[@DrakeVagabond]

sweet

[@kdrfcgaming7902]

Legion Of Doom? Finding Egyptian artefacts. Someone watched Legends Of Tomorrow 😂😂

[@randomknowledgeperson2872]

At first I was skeptical but after the part with the statue destroyed and it possibly being Batman got me hooked.

[@Sailn2Sunsets]

How do we show this to DC? I think one of the biggest things I took away from this is that the villains have to be just as *awesome* as their hero counterparts. Which seems to be a running theme for your DCEU fixes. Loved this.

[@purefatdude2]

This is amazing but studios do not have creative freedom. The sole fact that superman does not get resurrected will reject this proposal .

[@venomissocute3448]

This is more interesting than the real one, and this doesn’t even have visuals

[@leftybefty9766]

The Nando cut

[@JOVONO]

The person who recorded the Batman v Superman fight could have been the Riddler.

[@maxhydekyle2425]

You're not allowed to close plot holes! This is the DCEU not the DCAU! It's not supposed to make sense, it's only meant to look good.

[@kingcole5977]

Yeah, I thought one of his rules was to leave the film consequences the same, plot holes and all, haha.

[@Kuipoa]

I want a Nando cinematic universe

[@caiquemarlon5579]

So next year he's gonna make "Snyder Cut rewrite"

[@djgaben6187]

Impossible. The Snyder Cut was fantastic

[@SomeGlasses]

Well I mean he wouldn’t have to since this exists

[@whyequalswhat]

@@djgaben6187 The Snyder cut was horrible too.

[@djgaben6187]

@@whyequalswhat I personally found it far more enjoyable than the Whedon Cut, but I will admit there are a few points that just drag and drag

[@kdoggaming3289]

Love the Vids they always make me crave seeing your Visions actually happen as I feel they would make the movies better

[@TommFoolery]

This is just great, I love all your ideas, so glad I found your channel all those months ago!

[@marietheotaku94]

This is so good, it's making me feel embarassed on behalf of DC. I can see that it's very Batman focused, which I get, but what do you think would be the arcs for the other characters? Batman learns to trust the others, Diana rejoins the world? Cyborg would clearly clash against the Toy Man both of them being hackers. Flash is still a young hero so it might be like in the movie where he is learning the trade. Not sure what's in it for Arthur tho.

[@theliato3809]

Your ideas about the crime wave are spot on. I read somewhere that Diana could have been stopping inter-gang, who at times have ties to apocalypse.

[@morlath4767]

I've been doing a binge of your rewrite stuff, and I realised that you're seriously wedded to the 3-act structure/Hero's Journey foundation of writing. Like, _hugely_ wedded to it to where I think it's your go-to thought process when you're analysing and then rewriting media. While I respect that, I do think it's also a weakness in your creative process and analytical ability.