There's umpteen different spellings of Koresh's Nam and of his species name too. Try better next time. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤔🤔🤔🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴🏴
@adwood201Ай бұрын
The story has good bones, just a little polishing. Perhaps the start of a series?
@UpcountryturnerАй бұрын
I enjoy your stories but you often contridict yourselves and also your narration is great but your transcription engine needs some work. it spells the same word several differant ways or uses the wrong words and also out of context but still i enjoy your stories and the narration.
@Johnny-n2oАй бұрын
I don’t enjoy your criticism not that you couldn’t do it better? Just seems that those of you that do this aren’t able to do anything?
@dracodominus2800Ай бұрын
@@Johnny-n2o constructive criticism isn't about "I can do better" it's about helping a person do better by pointing out faults that were left in. Without criticism (either by one's self or someone else) no one would improve.
@toilmonkeyАй бұрын
Criticism of AI generated content is neither helpful nor hurtful. Chat gpt doesn't have feelings
@grantgunzАй бұрын
To defend: this is the pact. But when life loses its meaning and is taken for naught, then the pact is to avenge! 4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
@pauldavis9387Ай бұрын
There is no mention of when the Cethren realized it was humans.
@marinesgt8048Ай бұрын
Good story. 👍👍
@lightlegion_Ай бұрын
You’re incredible at what you do!
@eblkii6314Ай бұрын
How can it be a newly revived fleet if they had been perfecting it for centuries?
@JR-tr1dfАй бұрын
I like pizza
@strategicprepper2648Ай бұрын
How many times are you going to say that humanity has been quiet long enough ? I stopped watching at 6:21 because you said it one time too many.
@SchentonАй бұрын
It's a AI generated story or a really bad writer. I listen to all of it and it didn't get better. The galaxy is fucking huge and 2 fleets fight over it!!! With the amount of ships in this engagement this should be a small skirmish in a smal corner of the galaxy not the fight for the galaxy. If you want to take over the galaxy you need billions of ships in millions of fleets to do so. This was a crap story.
@danielpudvay1486Ай бұрын
I’m sorry, but the author has no idea of the scale of the galaxy. Less than 50 ships is not even a blip when there are over a 100 billion stars in the galaxy
@bosoerjadi2838Ай бұрын
I like listening to these 'stories' because I'm curious after the progressing state of quality of AI-written prose. I'm not impressed yet. The 'stories' are still as if written by an average 9-12yo boy. .. so there was this reptilian race's fleet conquering the galaxy, but then the human fleet showed up. And the human fleet was invincible because the humans were smarter and better at everything than the reptilians. So the humans completely destroyed the reptilians and the humans had won and the reptilians were confused and angry.. The 'ztories' are often just a description of a battle. I understand that the instructions given to the AI dictate the outcome.
@goodsoup6085Ай бұрын
I mean the rest of your points still stand but humanity kicking ass is the point of a hfy story.
@ashliselberg5444Ай бұрын
Why would you help if they decided to push them away? Why is being stupid enough to allow people who say they are taking advantage of you take advantage of you being portrayed as some great act?