The Wall in the Dark (r/HFY)

[@cptncutleg]

"So we have a ton of nukes but... need a hug?" - Humanity, probably

[@prussiankingdom1693]

"I was going to turn you mush... but i got a case of beer, wanna talk about it?" - probably a southern

[@Zren89]

The music is good? I am trying to add some more texture and production to these. What do we think? Love you guys!

[@daviddawen1825]

LOVE IT!!!

[@Satsaru]

Music was well balanced and everything, very much improved the video. Would like to hear more of it in these

[@humanmonk7187]

👍

[@CoacoBudder]

i’ll miss the relatively low quality of earlier videos but i won’t complain about new and different. nice video; good job.

[@Graygor.]

@@CoacoBudder oh i can do low quality. Dont you worry. We got lots of low quality in here! Just say the word and i'll have zren sounding like hes on an originally xbox era mic and can you say feedback? There'll be so much feedback that zren wont be able to open his front door due to all of it.

[@russofthefrozennorth]

I think this is my new favorite video of yours. Not only the story, but the voice acting was superb. I can hear the emotion in your voice. The music added a quality as well. I am unsure if it intensified my emotional connectiveness to the story but my money is on yes.

[@Zren89]

Thanks man, that means a lot. I hope to only improve, you are the best.

[@Inquisitor-Yog-Sothoth]

The Back Hand that was heard across the Universe

[@jackr2287]

That was one of those that felt too short.

[@Zren89]

Agreed, could use some more.

[@lazerwing3022]

if you get down on that planet, they will not be trapped on their world with you, you will be trapped on their world with them.

[@KiaraDex]

Yeas love it

[@Zren89]

Thank you!

[@tzortzinis1]

Love it Zren! I could hear the emotion you were putting in there at the end. Wonderful narration!

[@Zren89]

Thank you so much!

[@darkwater3309]

Bra how long did it take to sound so defeated and remorseful

[@Zren89]

Honestly...first pass on this one. Sometimes it can take a bit to get in the emotional headspace for things like that, but this one just...hit different.

[@Graygor.]

I liked this one partly because it reminded me a bit of Roy Batty's monologue at the end of Blade Runner and mostly because it was easy to edit.

[@Zren89]

Like Tears in Rain...time to die... :D so good.

[@draconus15]

This is one of my favorites even now and I've listened to alot of hfy I'm talking hours a day for the past 2.5 years

[@igkslife]

We need MORE stories like this.

[@richardrosenau9292]

This does sound like an interesting storyline, thank you

[@Zren89]

Yeah, I like it a lot. Thank you for listening :D

[@RibbonThe]

This one must have slipped under my radar. A good read and a good story, thank you.

[@thirg424]

Great job. Keep up the good work. I'd like to think we'd be that magnanimous in victory.

[@Zren89]

I hope we would be. I hope.

[@Texsoroban]

back in the early 1900's there was a Wrestler named Frank Gotch, considered the greatest of all time. in India there was a man by the moniker of The Great Gama. he was never defeated, you had to beat his second before you could wrestle him, and the second was only defeated 2 times. Gotch never fought Gama, he never even fought his second. this reminds me of that , a bit.

[@asgardianblacksmith464]

Damn good work, the music really adds to the ambience, and your voice work was top notch on this one!

[@Zren89]

Thank you, thank you! More on Friday :)

[@MazzaAzi]

8:15 I completely agree

[@Zren89]

😃

[@wgkgarrett]

Beautiful story, fantastic reading, thank you.

[@darrinkirchner6026]

Another great one..keep them comming .I've missed your narrations..

[@Zren89]

Always happy to hear from you man!

[@joshfinch7041]

The story reminds me of first contact that I listen to over on a different channel and a proud mother and yea the duality of man

[@tahakumonsonoa6026]

Just noticed this, so It’s a great start to an early work day.

[@Zren89]

Glad to help you through :)

[@DEMONOFLOVEANDDEATH]

For the Narrator

[@Acorein]

Keep it up zren!

[@omrihooker7992]

I love the new profile pic

[@Zren89]

I'm so glad, trying to take your guys' constructive comments to heart!

[@zeldaadlez3377]

Good stuff man

[@peterwall8191]

There is no duality. We need to establish the rules of conduct first, just so we all know who's turf this is, then we can talk. We are territorial, we do not like interlopers, but if you want to be one of us and respect our rules, we 'll share and share alike. Of course we'll share the pain and hardships as well, we can't keep all the good stuff to our selves, and we may be stingy in sharing the rewards at first, but eventually, we'll forget you 're not of our own ,and treat you the same as we treat each other, like shit. After all, what are friends for?

[@Graygor.]

After listening, can the ending music be left off until after you finish the story and do the outro. I know i cant be the only one who rips these for offline listening. Yes i have the raw audio but if i didn't it'd be annoying to my binging. Just my personal opinion. I dont know how others would feel.

[@Zren89]

I want to talk about that actually, maybe we can finally set something up for certain tier patrons where they have access to all of the redone audio you have?

[@shinigami-man5727]

So good!

[@Grim-HEX]

Nice really enjoyed this story

[@polasamierwahsh421]

Very nice

[@calvillo635]

I loved this story!

[@MrJpc1234]

So this wall is it actually protecting humanity......or protecting the universe from humanity

[@overlordinquisitor6565]

Yes.

[@Manypersonalities7]

I support this. Will you be making/finding screen saver like backgrounds for all of your videos?

[@Zren89]

I think so, at some point I may even try to insert clips where I think they're relevant to add some visuals for the story. When I manage to save for an actual camera I will try to maybe add a live narrator character.

[@Manypersonalities7]

I wonder if you can use G-mod to your advantage to find models close to the alien/human described. Posing them in that isn't hard as long as you stay away from facial features.

[@jonathanhamilton6190]

Uwu what’s this

[@Zren89]

You win the spaceship at the beginning of the video! Congratulations, please step into the computer to claim your prize!

[@allencovington8485]

Love the shirt but i could never wear it. I don't warn people i have a gun on me😊😅😂

[@larstollefsen1236]

The Shadrach? What happened to the Meshach and Abednego?

[@tyreecebaker6600]

👍

[@Salt_discriminater]

Damn that was good

[@tmrdc2692]

Who the hell disliked? Fight me!

[@Zren89]

Hey, we gotta let people have their opinions....even if they're wrong.

[@ApocryphalDude]

Waaaaagh energy

[@TheMonk72]

Ork Boys! Waaaaaagh!!!

[@darrinkirchner6026]

Just don't make the music louder the the voicing..

[@Zren89]

Valid, I will do my level best.