Mars Horror Story: "We Found Unknown Fossils On Mars" | Sci-Fi Creepypasta

[@lyndellrobinson3611]

Excellence!

[@buttknuckles8590]

Thank you goddess narratrix!!!

[@KieraRhodesVA]

You're very welcome loyal dark cosmonaut~

[@paulking6572]

I see you have reached 7k subscribers. I want to see you get to 1 million! Great team by the way.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thank you Paul, you kind sir! We've got a longggg road ahead of us!

[@FortunaeSD]

The reader was great. The story needed an editor. The six people chosen would have language to articulate what they experienced. Military people would have used the buddy system. There would be video, biometric, and audio connections to the control room. The system would have logged doors opening for the morning status report. The 4 would have prepped for departure while waiting for 2 hours since the plan was to depart when he returned. It is a good nugget of a story but overused things like "mere mortals."" But again, narration was top notch.

[@KieraRhodesVA]

Im really glad you like my narration! :D Thank you for supporting us!

[@jaredL18]

It's ya boy Jred finally catching on the vids. Keep up the good work

[@snowjohnson8095]

Ah Kiera's beautiful Voice back in action now i feel bad it took me 15hours to finally watch this duo to how tired i was...but now i can finally watch it altho it will look like a 5 minutes video...great video as always

[@KieraRhodesVA]

Thank you for your support Snow~ im glad you enjoyed the video!

[@バツニアルテア]

Extraterrestrial Fossil

[@mataiumuroa4129]

Yeeeeeeeeaaaaah EMPRESS KIERA ❤️💛💚😇🙏

[@KieraRhodesVA]

Hope you enjoyed!~

[@mjskinner9288]

Great story and smashing narration. Thanks to all involved in making this happen 👍🖤👽

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@KieraRhodesVA]

Thank you Mj!!

[@4thdoctor284]

they didn't have flashlights with them when turning off the generators?

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

😁

[@glorbojibbins2485]

I usually don't like female narrators but you did good. You weren't flamboyant and loud, thank god. it's a spooky space story, people are trying to sleep and chill to this stuff most of the time not be all jazzed up. Lol

[@KieraRhodesVA]

Im glad i could sway your opinion a little! :p i know alot of our viewers watch these to relax with in the background or to sleep, and Im one of those people who have to have something playing when i sleep too, so i try to be conscious of that ^^

[@missmiagi2147]

I have a hard time with female narrators also. I have no idea why, and it really bothers me! I've given many a female narrators a go, but it becomes intolerable after a little bit....same as a lot of male narrators tbh. It's just how it is for me, I guess...but I try! Pinky swear! I do, however, really LOVE this female narrator ❤ 👍👏😊

[@DarkKnightCap]

Another banger Headline I cant wait to listen on.👍

[@DarkKnightCap]

👽👽👽

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Enjoy, Kevin!

[@Dr.Chibbins]

Holy cats, you are a breath of fresh air

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Welcome to our community, Charles!

[@christopherjackson2301]

Cool story combing sci-fi with horror love it ❤️

[@tedytarrify]

Im not a professional writer but Oof that story needs some work. It reads like a skeleton of a concept of a story. Potential there though. Nice narration.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thanks for tuning in! No worries, I didn't hire this writer anymore :)

[@tedytarrify]

@@TheDarkCosmos1 the narration was good though. :-) subscribed

[@WindyBurns]

♥️👋 wicked

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

We appreciate you!

[@missmiagi2147]

Great narration! I really like her voice. I don't comment often, but I'm still around lol 😊 You guys are doing awesome! 💙❤💜

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Hey, welcome back! ☺️

[@Witch-King4666]

Yeeeehaaaw

[@gimmethepinkelephant3685]

I'm not sure I like this author. Some of the story just seemed a bit juvenile. Like the descriptions of the characters and even their names felt like something a child would have come up with. The narration was fine. But I just couldn't get into the story the way I've gotten into some of the others you've done. Sorry for the poor critique. But I guess they can't all be champagne and roses.

[@TheDarkCosmos1]

Thanks for the feedback! Not one of our best stories for sure :)

[@gimmethepinkelephant3685]

@@TheDarkCosmos1 I'm glad ya didn't take it the wrong way. Some people would. That's greatly appreciated.👍