Seem like they should have lead with the EMP. They wasted a lot of ordnance before the use of it.
@xkencx81918 ай бұрын
It's 300 in space.
@icarus7458 ай бұрын
This is TERRA!
@jennismith40418 ай бұрын
Swearing is part of life's little response
@riprapter63228 ай бұрын
I liked the story. Maybe there wil be a sequel to this tale ???.....
@vernonriggins18468 ай бұрын
I really like all your stories it’s a great story telling
@DBTL-impact8 ай бұрын
I like the story. Please keep it up
@wendymorrison58038 ай бұрын
Whole slabs of illogical. An EMP can stop the Empire?. Why do all the other stuff. BECAUSE ITS NOT A STORY. Then the EMP miraculously has no effect on the Rebel equipment. And if the Wolves arrived in hours via hyperspace, won't the Empire so that. The Armada could just obliterate the whole planet surface, why bother with one valley to battle. Bring out the DEATH STAR.
@Dimythios8 ай бұрын
AI generated.
@robinwright-vf7cl8 ай бұрын
❤
@daviaoliphant96868 ай бұрын
"I'll grind your bones to dust" it could be a good story if it would stop regurgitating the same old lines taken from age old stories. Every time I hope to hear some originality and then I hear the exact same lines. AI😢.
@OhioCruffler8 ай бұрын
"The author's fists slammed into the console, warping the plastisteel in his fury..."
@GrigoriZhukov8 ай бұрын
Reality recycles sucks to never learn that, she'll less prawn.
I had an English teacher explain that curse words are used by one who does not have a good vocabulary...f this and f that and f them. Next story, see how much trouble you have writing without the f word.
@jamesh23218 ай бұрын
Clearly you've never served on active duty, in law enforcement, or even healthcare. Swearing is a way to let off steam and even share camaraderie. Some of the most intelligent people I know are filthy mouthed salty sailors, cops, or nurses.
@robertwhitehead8671HMCS8 ай бұрын
Might be true but it my be done by a person who don't give a F what you say or think it's a free online story and when the Author gets paied he might change
@daviaoliphant96868 ай бұрын
Profanity is merely fluffed up pillows meant to imitate armor. Anyway, I'm pretty sure the author is a computer.
@JosephEllis-ep7sg8 ай бұрын
All investigations, surveys and literature looking into this matter say your English teacher was an imbecile. Those with the highest iq's and widest vocabulary generally use profanities a lot more often than the norm but also have the capacity to know when and when not to use them.
@royweyant6868 ай бұрын
I found the story entertaining. To quote Lenny Bruce it is the suppression of the word that makes it distasteful. Sadly people drop the F-bomb like they use “THE”. I don’t even hear it unless it’s every third word.
@bobwillett30238 ай бұрын
Hooah
@jimbaughman40058 ай бұрын
Your use of curse words inclines me to avoid any and all your posts. I hope when your mind considers weighty matters you don’t have to use profanity to get understanding.