This is absolutely much better writing than the movie we got.
@patrickstar84808 ай бұрын
For real, can you imagine the chills getting to see anakin talk to luke again?
@decades19128 ай бұрын
Amen
@AndrewDJones-me3lz8 ай бұрын
For The Last Jedi, they actually filmed the first draft; something that is NOT generally done.
@jeffryburns22068 ай бұрын
They should have hired you as a writer, this would've been 100x better than what we ended up with
@minakat3698 ай бұрын
I will always be so ashamed of many of my generation, Gen X, for being so harsh towards the Star Wars prequels. A lot of fans were so obsessed with hating them that they drowned out any positive feedback about the movies. This led many people to believe that the prequels were not real Star Wars movies. Disney didn't just disappoint the fans of Han, Leia, and Luke, but also Anakin. If they had included Anakin in any of the Sequel films to speak to his son or grandson, it would have made a huge difference in making them more appealing. Thank you for this amazing fan fiction. Your deep knowledge and love of this vast galaxy is undeniable!
@Skarbro8 ай бұрын
Wow! Excellent work! This is your calling, your destiny. This is definitely the next step in your journey. Next level. Bottom line, YES! I definitely want more of this from you. Thank you for keeping all of us subscribers entertained and excited about more of this to come. You’ve proven your love and dedication to Star Wars to all of us and we are behind you! 😎🤘🏻
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Thank you 🙏
@MartellJordan8 ай бұрын
You should pursue this more, you've got the talent for it.
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Thanks! 🙏
@Batty4Spuds8 ай бұрын
This would have made the movie more enjoyable, and I would have wanted to watch the next one to see Luke train Rey. It would have been nice to see Anakin also show up and help.
@ryplay088 ай бұрын
This was great dude. You should totally do a part two
@Dillan_Roberts8 ай бұрын
this would’ve easily been better than the actual movie! i would definitely enjoy more vids like this😄
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Wow, thanks!
@Ardi3377 ай бұрын
Wow. This actually brought tears to my eyes. Luke and Anakin working together to save the resistance, is a wonderful thing to imagine. Thank you for creating such a beautiful story. And, definitely keep writing! 👍
@spike_Burma8 ай бұрын
I want anakin invite luke to world between worlds as he did on his padawan ahsoka
@BobbyMoore2-mp8wb8 ай бұрын
May the force be with you
@darthkielbasa8 ай бұрын
Right the wrongs of the Sequels, Retney-wan. You’re our only hope.
@Ardi3377 ай бұрын
😂😂😂
@peterwilson21078 ай бұрын
Great stuff, man! Better writing than Disney lol 😂
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Thanks for watching!
@jcdieguez988 ай бұрын
This was awesome bro, you should def keep making fanfics
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Thank you, I will
@kevin-2.18 ай бұрын
This is a fantastic job, I was wondering if you are going to do more what if videos in the future?
@domingoquintanilla69808 ай бұрын
This was great! I vote you do more
@eminaslanozbek46398 ай бұрын
I loved it man. I hope many more fan fictions may be with us :)
@Apolonio-of8xf8 ай бұрын
May The Force Be With You Forever ❤️!!!!!
@sophiafisher-tp7ek8 ай бұрын
That was real good. I say you some more of these.
@kendrathompson52078 ай бұрын
Wow, if this had been in the film, then the top three Star Wars films would be: ROTS ROTJ TLJ
@speedyplayer12178 ай бұрын
Really good video, hope you make more of these fan fictions.
@aronmakan8 ай бұрын
Very good! You should do more of these!
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
Thanks Aron! 🙏
@nandiplays38758 ай бұрын
FANTASTIC What if this is! 👏👏 Yes I have subscribed please keep making these videos! 😀😀
@davidharmon57608 ай бұрын
Great to see you doing stuff like this THANK YOU.
@colethelin92038 ай бұрын
I really enjoyed this Fan Fiction on What if Anakin saved Luke in the Last Jedi. Can you please create a part 2 to the Fan Fiction Retney’s Holocron?
@Coolpsychnp8 ай бұрын
CONGRATULATIONS 🎊🎉🎈🍾! KEEP GOING !!!!!
@thepeskyone8 ай бұрын
The future will praise you with new gen sw fans and would love sequel content.
@gradtonhair84047 ай бұрын
Yes make a part 2 of this please 😊
@bradgrand798 ай бұрын
I think if the last Jedi would’ve told this story, they wouldn’t be nearly as much heat for the Disney trilogy
@gradtonhair84047 ай бұрын
Are you going to make a part 2 of this? I like it 👌 😏
@angeliquaserenity50098 ай бұрын
That was REALLY good 😊😊❤❤
@decades19128 ай бұрын
Great work! More of this please, & consider making it 20 minutes per episode
@n_conway75717 ай бұрын
Always thought it was kind of a missed opportunity to have Luke die in episode 8.
@eazyecoheed168 ай бұрын
Part 2?
@LordGeekus8 ай бұрын
This is just amazing, truly, it is incredible. However, I do think it would be interesting for you to tackle Luke before he gets to this point in the movie. Maybe change the reason for him being in exile? Like he was learning about the Whills or how to become more powerful and wait to train Rey. (similar to Yoda) Maybe change the reason for Ben's fall? Maybe have Luke try and speak with him when he sensed the dark moments in his training? Or when Luke looks inside Ben's mind and sees all the horrors he COULD commit, instead of reaching for his lightsaber he falls to the floor in fear and realizes he must regain his composure and remain calm instead of acting on impulse. After all he is a Jedi Master now, not a 20 something year old jedi knight, but a master, who has learned over the decades to control his impulsivity and realize he must LEARN from his past failures of acting on impulse or bad things will follow.
@yusrashah11738 ай бұрын
so good!!!
@hcmv0078 ай бұрын
Great job! 👍👍
@dudley18 ай бұрын
I thought the others stories you make were also fan fictions. What is the difference?
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
No, the videos I usually make are official lore from the Star Wars books, not fan fictions.
@dudley18 ай бұрын
@@RetneysHolocronAnyways I really liked this
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
@@dudley1 Thanks for watching!
@matthartley84938 ай бұрын
I believe the most significant failure of the sequels is the way Luke Skywalker's character was written. It was not the Luke we fans have grown to love over the decades. The Luke portrayed in "The Last Jedi" was a coward. But that's what Disney gave us. I'm not a Disney hater, but this was definitely one of their biggest mistakes.
@lordextravagant4208 ай бұрын
This is better than the movie and I like it but as Anakin Skywalker fan I just don’t agree with the idea of the story because Anakin is the chosen one and I feel like him being a Force Ghost as we saw in Ashoka is essential to the will of the Force. But I love your writing and I look forward to see what prequel/original fanfics you do in the future because you have A Very Interesting approach 💙💚💯💯
@the.unhappy.mechanic8 ай бұрын
Better than current Disney Star Wars.
@reidtanner59788 ай бұрын
Can you do what if Luke saved Anakin in Revenge of the sith, while Anakin was on mustafa before battling Obi Wan.
@hound1221008 ай бұрын
This is what episode 8 should've been...
@daryljr53617 ай бұрын
Yeah more like this dude
@georgecostan32488 ай бұрын
Instead of the pointless casino scene, this would have added a lot to the movie. Ryan Johnson would have loved it, since it plays the subversion card which he used a lot in the movie. Unfortunately, we got ep. IX afterwards, which was terrible.
@marcusisgod25928 ай бұрын
What if darth vader went to darthomir to learn. New suit or perhaps more unique powers. Resurrect talzin maybe. what if Vokara Che became a mentor to anakin as anakin was being treated for bullying and trauma from being a slave. What if anakin fell in love with luminara unduli, serra keto or bultar swan. What if anakin was taught by agen kolar or sasee tin or adi gallia.
@gradtonhair84047 ай бұрын
Continue the story please 🙏
@gradtonhair84046 ай бұрын
Make more please 🙏
@danielharman5728 ай бұрын
Dude!!! It's brilliant and so you've got to write parts 2&3 to complete the story. Then when you're ready you can write another 3 part video to cover the rise of skywalker. But done your way. By the way your first what if story is better than that Disney garbage that they vomited up for us to watch.
@dboggamer67298 ай бұрын
yay
@jsantiago028 ай бұрын
Good try, but in my opinion there are only 6 star wars movies.
@realcuondaotherside8 ай бұрын
what if disney cannon is garbage?
@RetneysHolocron8 ай бұрын
I disagree. It has good and bad stories, just like Legends.
@santiagos838 ай бұрын
It’s incredible how these clowns at Disney completely destroyed the story.