Worlds in Danger Episode 1 REVAMPED

PLEASE READ!!!
Here's Episode 1 of Worlds in Danger completely revamped. Started by KingAsylus91 and finished by me. The old episode will be deleted shortly. Again, Worlds in Danger is on hiatus, and again, I have no intention of quitting. I'm not gonna pull an Alvin.
Oh yeah, I'm not switching back to the old intro just so you all know. The reason I used the old intro is because... uh... darn, I know what the reason is, but I can't put it in words for some reason.
Also, any grammar errors are leftover from when I proofread the script that KingAsylus91 wrote.
Anyway, enjoy!