Be mindful of your thoughts - a cinematic poem

[@mariagraciamontilla5094]

oh Wow! loving the last shot.

[@monolithpoem]

Thanks for watching and commenting. What about the first shot?

[@dianagridina2588]

Amazing poem, as always. It feels very intimate, as if I'm there, in front of you and you are saying all these words straight into my heart. I'm listening to you so carefully, holding my breath. I can almost smell the ginger and lemon you had put in your cup that morning. You are right, our thoughts and words are not our own, but it's what you can do with them matters. The way you spin an elegant cobweb of letters, channeling your thoughts through a digital machine is a true art. The music is a great analogy to everything you've said - there are only ever 12 notes and it seems everything I improvise on the piano has already been written by someone… And yet, masterpieces will be created until the end of time.

[@monolithpoem]

Wow, what a nice comment. This is exactly what I want from this channel - to inspire people to write their own forms of poetry and to have fun with words. Thank you for this! (See you in the kitchen in a minute, ha).

[@BrophHouse]

Dope!

[@monolithpoem]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it 🙏🏼

[@wendyyoung5786]

Beautifully shot as always. I love thinking about the words you use in your poems. So thought-provoking. Also, the creaking sounds coming from (I assume) the ice were a really nice touch! 😊

[@monolithpoem]

Thanks, Ma. I’m glad you always enjoy these. The ice noise was created using a paper bag, then pitching it down. It’s not exactly accurate, but I was going for a certain tone and feeling.

[@MoreliaAustralia]

Very profound. You have a way with words. I liked when you spoke in another language ... it sounded magical whatever it was. I have a playlist of some very simple rhyming poems. I wonder if you would like to see some of them sometime? kzbin.info/aero/PLy1yOsNCtsxPfgxux_hqq5evbekET079q

[@monolithpoem]

I really appreciate this comment. Thanks for the kind words and for the subscribe! I’m excited to check out your stuff too 🙏🏼