Holy shit, this is a story for the ages. Hats off to the Author
@DrSigma24-74 ай бұрын
Truth. An outstanding narration and story.
@josephhyland89042 ай бұрын
Absolutely agree!
@EmmTshh4 ай бұрын
I really liked this one, I specially enjoyed that it wasn't an overpowered humanity that won, but a last effort flip of the coin.
@month324 ай бұрын
-So you are telling me that those things will come back, even hungrier than before, until we burn all their planets? -Yes. -And that they are unfeeling, violent monsters that just want to eat everything and everyone? -Yes again. -Someone has been reading Heinlein a lot lately it seems. -Who? -Forget about it.
@howardchambers96794 ай бұрын
Hahahaha! Best comment! I often wonder if today's sci fi fans have actually read the old authors. Someone left a comment about inconsistent science facts being distracting, i suggested they read some EE "Doc" Smith. But then I don't suppose reading an actual paperback is a thing for them anymore. Loved Heinlein back in the day. Still have a couple of his books that haven't fallen apart from rereading.
@Lupus_Indomitus4 ай бұрын
And the aliens ask themselves why they hear exterminatus music in the background all of a sudden
@month324 ай бұрын
@@howardchambers9679 Wait till they try reading Philip K. Dick...
@month324 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus The flesh is weak, but deeds are forever.
@mikkelnpetersen4 ай бұрын
Was thinking more zergs or tyranids.
@davidwilson96174 ай бұрын
As an epileptic, I find the idea that they practically seized the thing to death hilarious.
@WendiGonerLH3 ай бұрын
Not quite, they put it into a siezure and then shanked it to death while it was still twitching
@sleeping26964 ай бұрын
Our level of war far out classes our level of technology
@calumbutter612419 күн бұрын
Possibly tue best HFY I've ever read - and I've read thousands. This is also my fourth time reading it. Thank you author and NN.
@Nevir2024 ай бұрын
Ya, that sounds like humanity. Or more specifically Like Wesley from The Princess Bride. Win by poisoning both glasses and trusting you'll survive lol.
@krevor40954 ай бұрын
Wesley (The Dread Pirate Robert) didn't just trust. He prepared and built an immunity over time. Why? Just in case.
@Ben1117784 ай бұрын
Knowing more than I should, I'd have to say they had already secrety tested it on both people and one of the swarm they had somehow managed to capture and already knew while building the big bang how it would effect both species. The elites don't tempt Fate, but definitely try to control it!
@DrSigma24-74 ай бұрын
True; because if you don't survive, it's no longer your problem....
@anonymouspotato48994 ай бұрын
@@krevor4095 That entire bit was a joke. Iocane powder kills with even the smallest dose. Wesley won by building up an immunity. How do you build up an immunity to a poison...?
@TheBigMagnetАй бұрын
"Are you saying we are the only ones to ever win against these things?" I was expecting: "You are the first."
@wildwikedwanderer12084 ай бұрын
Just in time for lunch. Thanks net. You’re continued work is appreciated
@mikegann5514 ай бұрын
Would love to know what the humans were saying and doing. This is one of the better stories on the net! Excellent story!!
@stephenmcbride63594 ай бұрын
Great story. Love the human narration. It would be so cool to hear a group of you narrator's get together and do one, like an old radio play.
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
It's a fine idea.
@Ben1117784 ай бұрын
Wow! After listening to so many AI broken stories... this was a great one! Minus 1 point for the doubling up of almost the same sentence in the middle of the story... but this story actually had a beginning, middle and understandable end! It had continuity, character development, story telling skills far better than any of the AI stories I've heard!
@kebbitevoke-53194 ай бұрын
Yea net narrator does sometimes repeat himself but that's usually editing mess ups. He truely reads them out.
@srslothington4 ай бұрын
Net Narrator isn’t AI, he’s an actual guy. If you want another actual person reading stories I recommend AggroSquirrelNarrarates
@BBCTopgearfan2 ай бұрын
If you liked this one, you might like his Audible Book. I am a bit biased. But he has a teaser video of the first few chapters.
@regiliok4 ай бұрын
now i want a part 2 where us and our new space buddy's rip these monsters a new one!
@spacedragon11754 ай бұрын
I want to see the swarm flee in terror
@regiliok4 ай бұрын
@@spacedragon1175 would be fun
@TheHighborn2 ай бұрын
there is part2 by the author on his reddit edit: this narration included part2
@Brjskdbeikaheus4 ай бұрын
Nice to find an hfy story that’s well written and edited. Great work.
@martypelletier71222 ай бұрын
I've listened to this story a few times here on this channel and it gets better each and every time. Every time without fail i get choked up hearing it, hats off to the author and to you sir for giving me the ability to feel something again even if its only for a moment.
@BreadGuy014 ай бұрын
Absolutely riveting story, if there's a next part, I'm all for it!
@isaacdouglas78263 ай бұрын
Finally, a good hfy that's not a show of bloated ego, but genuine determination (and a smidge of luck)
@darthrevan49333 ай бұрын
ONLY IN DEATH DOES DUTY END!!!
@ccrrey61214 ай бұрын
One of the best I ever heard, meant it. Kuddos to author, and amazing narration too👍👍💯
@scotthinger63974 ай бұрын
Thank you for NOT leaving us hanging!! Now where is the next part?! Please tell me it is comig soon!!!
@benandrew213 ай бұрын
I'm glad that for once humanity won because of an eleventh-hour ass pull rather than us being so uniquely brilliant/terrible that we just curb stomp whatever pissed us off
@ballroomdru4 ай бұрын
Wow, just wow. Such a good one shot story.
@erikjrn40804 ай бұрын
Well written, good voice narration, coherent story, a well executed literary narrator device and perspective that actually suited the story, and I could go on. The best storytellers are still human. They're just not being employed by Hollywood, which instead keeps making AI look good.
@vikingbanana24044 ай бұрын
Man this needs a part 2
@wesdavis80184 ай бұрын
Great story and great narration. Keep up the good work.
@theangrygermanlad13284 ай бұрын
The unyielding devourers vs the unyielding devourers. Only difference is that we can use guns, and they cant.
@dandrewtsinnijinnie45044 ай бұрын
We savor the win and fear
@ChildOfSisyphus4 ай бұрын
Thank You ... A wonderful story to come home from work to. 🌎🚀
@Seaside_Seanster4 ай бұрын
One of the best stories I've heard/read in a while.
@ded29204 ай бұрын
now this is a humanity fuck yeah story entire story had me on the edge of my seat
@your_boi_junior45312 ай бұрын
THIS IS GOOD!! amazing love these 20 min storys well still short lol 25-45 min aint short xD
@dashwhatchamakalit3 ай бұрын
Lol we won a flashbang recovery contest with bugs.
@norneaernourn82403 ай бұрын
So the Geneva Convention do not apply to these monsters... good to know.
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
Well, I do hope @Net Narrator finds the time to read the second half of this tale.
@Edmar_Thorn4 ай бұрын
Love it
@scout.08114 ай бұрын
Oh wow this story was amazing!
@rossdavies82504 ай бұрын
Cracking good yarn, matey. Keep up the good work...
@rust54273 ай бұрын
Probably what it's like during the swarm disaster era in HSR
@stevedixon9214 ай бұрын
Well narrated fellow human.
@mycroft164 ай бұрын
Extremely well written. That was a lot of fun to listen to. Actually, I would gladly pay to watch this movie. Being so far away really contributes to the helpless feeling.
@wesdavis80184 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@NetNarrator4 ай бұрын
Thank YOU!
@CitizenValve3 ай бұрын
Now….This is a badass story!!!! Bravo!….Bravo!
@MrZonehawk4 ай бұрын
Amazing work! Great tension and pacing!
@nicholasmunroe89893 ай бұрын
I hope there is a part 2 by the author! I LOVED IT!!
@Argon11153 ай бұрын
Good Story, good narration. I enjoyed this.
@Mountain_bonker4 ай бұрын
Very nice. Just in time for lunch
@drewgilbertson4 ай бұрын
Zerg go Derp!
@ekhidna44 ай бұрын
This is top-quality stuff. Loved it.
@rumandroses25384 ай бұрын
First 5th dimensional entity
@halogeek64 ай бұрын
greetings mad one! how goes the euclid these eonce?
@rumandroses25384 ай бұрын
@@halogeek6 sadly it is very moist preventing my dimorphisis
@halogeek64 ай бұрын
@@rumandroses2538 sounds about right what with the elder hive crying all the time. i mean who makes tear ducts just cry a literal ocean? and for what it doesnt even feel emotion!
@rumandroses25384 ай бұрын
@@halogeek6 oh it's because if the horngus of the dongfish, gets dry the scungle that connects it to the dillsack shrinks which would make the heteromorphs manifest triggering the earth's bar mitzvah
@kdmbigpig2 ай бұрын
Hey, that's what she said!@@rumandroses2538
@wstavis31354 ай бұрын
Absolutely epic! Well done!
@45Mistuikeidentity4 ай бұрын
Time to rip and tear
@Lupus_Indomitus4 ай бұрын
Yep. Go full Warhammer on those biothings ass. They sound an awful lot like tyranids to me.
@45Mistuikeidentity4 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus and flood
@Questor-ky2fv4 ай бұрын
WOW!😱 Well done!😃👌👍👏🤸🏻♂️
@aquilifergroup24 күн бұрын
Great writing.
@JRRodriguez-nu7po4 ай бұрын
Excellent story and narration, thank you.
@greenleafnerfing47492 ай бұрын
certainly a story for the ages
@johnhenrix389429 күн бұрын
good story. I prpeared coocked and ate pancit and now sitting in my bed just as the final lines are said. Awesome
@ironwolfF14 ай бұрын
A most excellent story, true HFY in all it's glory. (...I'll accept it as an apology for that earlier story you posted...)
@Lupus_Indomitus4 ай бұрын
You mean horrors of first contact?
@ironwolfF14 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus No, the 'our children are so much wiser than us' ..... pan-sapien BS non-HFY story.
@Lupus_Indomitus4 ай бұрын
@@ironwolfF1 well, not hfy, but imo it was still better then the story i mentioned. but thats just my opinion
@fallennacht93054 ай бұрын
That was a incredible story
@carlmorrison97894 ай бұрын
This was a good short story. Kudos!
@jakobwranne3984 ай бұрын
Can’t wait for part 2!
@MogofWar15 күн бұрын
So Humankind invented the HALO and set it to "stun."
@lilsquire1434 ай бұрын
Cadia stands
@LHCB64 ай бұрын
This is fantastic
@savevsdeath4 ай бұрын
Moral of the story: Never give up your guns.
@45MistuikeidentityАй бұрын
This is a good one
@jordanshadows32532 ай бұрын
Damn this was a good one!!!
@waltergolston61872 ай бұрын
Now that was a corker!
@daavocadoguy57334 ай бұрын
its been a while since i heard this kind of story
@talyn39324 ай бұрын
That was excellent.
@donchichivagabond15784 ай бұрын
Now this is a story!!!
@jamescustodio30943 ай бұрын
Hey Netty, where's part 2! There is a part 2, I just checked the Reddit.
@NuggetGal3 ай бұрын
i bet the swarm landed in volgograd
@66Lynnie4 ай бұрын
Fantastic!
@ericr.palmer82006 күн бұрын
that was fun.
@eric391754 ай бұрын
Good story, well told! :)
@ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc4 ай бұрын
holodeck. well done.
@andrewerickson66904 ай бұрын
Someone started up haarp
@Corvidknows4 ай бұрын
I enjoyed this story very much. I can tell the author sweated blood to keep it as short as it was, it could have been a novel. Two thots: if the blob fed on planets with life, why did it gain an advantage when it engulfed the moon? Wouldn't that have sapped energy from it? Also, how does a probe outside a spaceship scan the brains of humans inside? But the hfy quotient was too high on this one to mind such details too much.
@AlleluiaElizabeth4 ай бұрын
There were defenders on the moon when it took it, most likely.
@krisgibbon21993 ай бұрын
@AlleluiaElizabeth Not to mention the loss of all the defensive emplacements.
@Neteruk4 ай бұрын
So you're saying they're perfect targets for our grey goo?
@chrisdufresne93592 ай бұрын
I'm doing my part!
@yormhammerson5304 ай бұрын
The sons of dorn heed and march!
@Logajam.4 ай бұрын
Im going to miss all the aquatic mammals and sharks. Who all drowned/sufficated when the disruptor was activated.
@Ben1117784 ай бұрын
Meh. An ocean with out sharks ain't that bad a thing. But the aquatic mammals would survive, being capable of holding their breath far longer than a himan can.. and the humans survived. The same as turtles, snakes, crab n lobster types, the aquatic mammals be fine.. the ones too small who can't would more than likely naturally float to the surface and automation take over as it's all sketched out, like humanity did.
@I.C.U-c7l4 ай бұрын
Now this was a great story.....
@dingopowell94364 ай бұрын
Very riveting
@chrisweiss63634 ай бұрын
Great story
@mattstrandquist21483 ай бұрын
AD VICTORIUM!
@doodlePimp4 ай бұрын
Pretty good story.
@chrisdixon70994 ай бұрын
If they just let us fight years ago we would have fought like this and our world would be different now.
@chaoticjester4584 ай бұрын
dude fought the Halo flood
@MogofWar15 күн бұрын
Apparently the Precursors could have saved themselves a lot of heartache if they had simply given the HALO a stun setting.
@beingsneaky4 ай бұрын
welp where is part 2 - 100??
@kinglito95693 ай бұрын
Is there a full story of this ? 😮
@-MeatsOfEvil-4 ай бұрын
#667, saved you from evil, you're welcome! 😉
@somethingsomethingtextings10014 ай бұрын
Aren’t the enemy just tyranids from warhammer 40k just weaker and less effective
@MidKnight_Sicario18718 күн бұрын
Is this Enders game?
@phxJohn20103 ай бұрын
Well that doesn't make sense. You can't just "adapt" to something like that. That's not how biology works.
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
I do not see how the swarm could adapt to attack there were no survivors, no communication to other swarm beings.
@krisgibbon21992 ай бұрын
In the reddit comments, the author explains it as the swarm is literally one collective entity. It would be as if your arm suddenly became paralyzed. You can't feel your arm, but you're still somewhat aware of what's happening to it.
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash4 ай бұрын
hmm ,but with that complexity of intelligence and self modification capabilities should not the swarm started to track the transmissions from those deep space probes back to the supposed 'dead' planets and got ..curious ? then agen , maby it was something like entangled or 'split' particles used for the remote control that not left any 'particle traces' though also , considering its not just a planet but a galaxy extinction situation having lost a couple of billions when hearing it more or lees was a bio version of the 'grey goo' scenario should have made the general rather go ''oh we 'only' lost a couple billions' ...and then pause the conversation to quickly inform all surviving scientists in those fields and governments so that the short term drafting of every able bodied person for combat and every baseline cognitive stable person for production should be extended indefinitely and a civilization wide swift information dispersion arranged for all to understand why , as the general return to the first alien contact diplomacy while others start design plans for generation ships and either meteor canons or flat out solar nova inducing catalyst warheads all while every factory not used to re-arm the current forces start supply a rapid reconstruction and expansion of the lunar base , but with equall frenzy also the deployment of armada of stellar raw resource harvesting and the foundries and orbital dry docks needed to build self sufficient migration war fleets to send out both as 'survival seeds' and also as vanguards of those tactical system strike generation ships before said general also bring news at least one species civilization where ready to form a pact of mutual survival and extermination with a complete share of all its assets and manpower how ever humans see wish to use it for the war doctrines and species quirks that provided the only victory ever vs the bio swarm