I Was Sleeping With My Tool Out When My Alien Maid Entered The Room | HFY Story

[@damonhill4909]

Amusing story! Thanks! 😊

[@AdultGalacticStory]

Our pleasure!

[@graydeath9755]

Plot twist he is patient zero for space herpes.

[@John-x7r7p]

A fantastic story.... I enjoyed the romantic aspects of the adventure....

[@AdultGalacticStory]

Glad you enjoyed it

[@tuusita]

I like the story itself... but since the title and the thumbnail are misleading you get no like from me. Sorry. 😕

[@PaulBrannan-mb8wv]

Typical. She gets her rocks off and he gets blue balls 💙!

[@MrEddienoe]

I agree

[@RobertMiller-tq4lk]

Most of everything on here is misleading so it’s kind of like playing Russian roulette

[@steelsquire2153]

Yeah the thumbnail, and title make you think it’s going to be one of “those” stories. Not saying the story sucks because it’s amazing, but the clickbait is a serious bonerkill.

[@Colin-wo3bq]

T'pul &Trip from Enterprise.

[@StooFras-TheFiresofHell.]

Jack appears a bit dippy, most men would know exactly what to do in such circumstances.

[@GunnersRange]

I can live with the story, but the worst part is the voice narration. Either the human narrator or the AI narrator doesn't have a clue about the proper use of voice tone and dialog to make the story better. It raises the voice tone at all the wrong times and can't seem to understand when a lower voice tone is better. Either hire a better narrator or train the AI about voice dialog!!

[@Savrollo]

I want to believe it is AI. Otherwise... Dear God, voice acting is horrendous. Still finish the story, though

[@mechticulous8202]

False Advertising 😅

[@AdultGalacticStory]

😂😂😂😂

[@PaulPheby-y3f]

A now you can't stupid smile of your face

[@frankmueller2781]

Not only false, but should be titled "How to stretch a three minute story into a forty minute one."

[@timothybuchanan5373]

What is wrong with Disney’s writer? They can’t come out with a new ideal. You have to keep reproducing the same old ideals like your brains don’t work.

[@scottp.2995]

Idea ?

[@RovingPunster]

A decent story, but one that's undermined by clumsy and unimaginative dialog, and a curse that makes ZERO sense. Needs a do-over. -1

[@javabeanz8549]

The captions are horrid! Audio "Jack asked" Caption "Jackass" and Xylie/Sally, and several other versions of the maid's name...

[@vincentantonielli]

IDK, "jackass" might be the best thing about this one...

[@richardprobst7885]

Can i do it to

[@tamatirogerson6421]

Nice stories but you don't know how to end. You just stop 🤦‍♂️

[@AdultGalacticStory]

True story

[@tamatirogerson6421]

@AdultGalacticStory 🤷‍♂️ so fix it 🤷‍♂️ copy a format if u have to

[@steelsquire2153]

Not going to lie great story, and all that, but needs better narration, better caption or no caption at all, and if you’re advertising a sex story. Provide the goods don’t just say he gave me the back breaker supreme, and all we get is we got close it, then we just played candy land. Don’t say this is playboy, but there is little kids coloring pages of rabbits in there. I’m not a very good writer, or experienced but even I know that tid bit.

[@ThisGuy-79]

To much fail, boring AI putting me to sleep...

[@Savrollo]

Dear God, voice acting is horrendous. No like and no sub from me... still finish the story, though.

[@PaulBrannan-mb8wv]

Sci fi sex fantasy

[@francisvantuyle]

Oui

[@TheVampireAzriel]

@@francisvantuyle and no actual sex

[@robklinky6474]

Xily, Sally, Sily, Ziley, Zylie, Or Siley.....how many alien maids does this guy have. Pick one spelling and stick to it! It's so annoying.

[@LUCKYPUCK-007]

Bad read, no emotions, no inflection in the voice.

[@terrisommella720]

Very nearly the most pointless story ever with a clickbait title and thumbnail.

[@marshaldotson1776]

Lame