“Rachel wasn’t like the other girls. They all wore their cute little pink dresses and high heels. Not Rachel though…She preferred jeans and tank tops over uncomfortable dresses. Despite her, carefree style, every boy wanted her. They would claw at a iron door just to be with her. She didn’t wear makeup but her beauty was radiant, gleaming. Her smile lit up a room.” “She usually hated parties. She preferred to go home and read a few novels. Tonight though, was different. She was feeling wild that night. She walked into the party and all eyes were on her. Her blue orbs scanned the room, trying to find a quiet spot to settle down into. Her blue orbs land on him. His beautiful hot chocolate colored hair and bright, green orbs. She could help but let out a gasp. “Who is that man?!” She thinks to herself” Stop bc I can’t finish writing this I’m crying 😭
@astrostone5739 ай бұрын
Can someone get you an award
@chubbydinosaur91489 ай бұрын
Rachel wasn't like other girls, because she was an autistic lesbian.... therefore she was actually like a lot of girls.
@JoJoM20099 ай бұрын
The completely accurate usage of "orbs" 😂😂
@MissEynah9 ай бұрын
I'm gonna help you: "Complete silence fell over the room. It was, like they were the only persons existing in the room. Everyone stared at them. Until suddenly a girly girl in a pink girl-dress approached HIM and tried to offer him a drink in a pathetic attempt to gain his attention. Did she not realize that he was Rachel's soulmate? To show how totally not jealous she was, Rachel turned. The place was crowded but once she passed a table, three guys stood up and offered her a seat. She smiled and wanted to take a seat, when suddenly an orgasm-like feeling stroke her. It came from a hand lying on her shoulder. Rachel turned and saw HIM again, right in front of her. He asked: "May I ask for a dance with you, my lady?" His manly man-voice vibrated in her breasts and she nearly swooned. She laughed like an angel and threw her long, golden, silky hair back. Six guys in the background passed out. Only HE - a real alpha male - was able to withstand her strong feminity." I'm sorry. I had to write a second part. 😂😂
@OIOIOI2039 ай бұрын
@@MissEynah STOP 😭 I’m sobbing right now my stomach hurts so bad 💀
@ananyanyan Жыл бұрын
The "tugged away like puppies on a leash" genuinely put me in physical pain. Ouch
@teacherverina10 ай бұрын
I have the urge to ask men who write things like this if they've ever seen a woman's breasts try to do this thing because omg she saw a real man. Not because it isn't possible, but just to see the devastated look on their faces as they realize that according to their own view of women's anatomy, they are not the alpha/a real man/whatever they think they are.
@ava468910 ай бұрын
Dont you know us women have magnet like nipples that guide us to the Alpha Males? Lmao.
@camaybeckford398110 ай бұрын
YT said this has 2 replies. it's either 1. Replies were NSFW, so they blocked it 2. YT is taking drugs, AGAIN I also internally felt the pain. I'd rather jump down a flight of stairs and lend upright with no bra than actually feel any of the two horrific experiences this author has bestowed upon us.
@pixelzebra844010 ай бұрын
HELP 😭
@pixelzebra844010 ай бұрын
EEWWWWW
@Ashykitty10 ай бұрын
"Her body tries to tear itself apart, reacting to the bad writing."
@theaccountshandle10 ай бұрын
*Gold stars your comment*
@SweetLilScribbles10 ай бұрын
FR
@Avocodo10 ай бұрын
Yes!
@RandomPersonTeehee10 ай бұрын
"Sal gasps in shock and nearly faints, until seeing this funny comment. Although, after laughing, he then faints." (I'm sorry I had to)
@YouWillBeFound_50610 ай бұрын
THIS
@PuppetIsTheBest5 ай бұрын
"worse than any period could do" yes im calling the ambulance rn girl!
@mask9384 ай бұрын
Get the defibrilator!
@Just_me5092 ай бұрын
Too late she's probably already dead
@mask9382 ай бұрын
@@Just_me509 Then the defibrillator won’t work! BEGIN CHEST COMPRESSIONS!!!
@ruhinaresh74102 ай бұрын
That's when she realised that her uterus had prolapsed.
@mask9382 ай бұрын
@@ruhinaresh7410 WHERE THE HELL ARE THE PARAMEDICS?!?!!?!!!
@koda450510 ай бұрын
You know it's a good skit when it makes you feel violently ill 😭
@silverknight1966Ай бұрын
The narrative is a parody right? Cringe
@calla211 Жыл бұрын
Holy shit you found my friend's manuscript
@steph_matarazzo Жыл бұрын
😮😮😭
@ms.blooddiamond385710 ай бұрын
Stfu this is too real😭
@shannonhensley294210 ай бұрын
If thats your friend he's in a cult run.
@LittleMaitea10 ай бұрын
Is (or hopefully just was) he a „Women are lying about their pain and experience! I know because I’m a real Man! An Alpha Male Who knows everything!“ -Guy Aka a „The world needs to follow my delusions or else I feel dumb/powerless“ - Guy
@ms.blooddiamond385710 ай бұрын
@@LittleMaitea Mine mercifully isn't. He's got a big heart & means well. He has a smother mother, which is awkward because she's kind to our family but hovers over her son like he's an unarmed soldier, & all places except school & home are enemy grounds. He himself is a great friend to me, but he's pretentious (especially around his mom), right-wing, & (it seems) anti-abortion. He's also just the least self-aware person in my life. Situation is absolute bananas
@Urfunieeeee10 ай бұрын
The “Evolutionary recognition of the protector” had me truly dying 💀
@Iamdesperate9 ай бұрын
I first read and thought she was gonna say "Predator"😭🤌
@Velvet-Of-Erion9 ай бұрын
Why are so many men obsessed with that idea lmaooo
@katerihensel32349 ай бұрын
It sounds like those "alpha wolf" smut intros 😂💀
@andres_david259 ай бұрын
@@katerihensel3234 This gave me "El lobo siempre cuida su loba" vibes, and it made me cringe so hard 😖
@katerihensel32349 ай бұрын
@@andres_david25 yesss lol those 🫣😭
@dragonbaby6357 ай бұрын
"worse than anything a period could do" So she's just completely knocked tf out from the pain then
@MarfansGoth6 ай бұрын
Yea no she's dead.
@dragonbaby6356 ай бұрын
@@MarfansGoth Fair point!
@mask9385 ай бұрын
She's on life support in the hospital because of that pain.
@RayF61264 ай бұрын
That just means the guy could catch her.
@mask9384 ай бұрын
@@RayF6126 And then she immediately passes out from the excruciating pain and they have to call an ambulance.
@froggyvibes302010 ай бұрын
“Worse then any period could do”- My god how is she still standing!?
@itz_Raine_Official9 ай бұрын
I would pass away my cramps are BAD so I would just sit down immediately
@_soybeanss9 ай бұрын
copied comment 😔😔
@Lunarflare729 ай бұрын
Frfr
@User-NicosLittleSister9 ай бұрын
Omg howwww??? My periods sometimes have me curled up in bed CRYING.
@arriannaniv9 ай бұрын
Ya I’ve had bad enough cramps to where it put me on the floor and I almost threw up… thought I was gonna pass out and everyone around me thought I was dying and should go to the hospital… Still wanted to get through the school day because “fight through the pain”
@teamblack204 Жыл бұрын
These descriptions are supposed to be seductive, but why do they sound like Nat Geo Wild?😭
@ChibiGentlemen Жыл бұрын
FR
@mrspicolli Жыл бұрын
Is that the kids version of Nat Geo? because that makes total sense
@anarchyandmaybecake10 ай бұрын
@@mrspicolliI think it might be a nature documentary series but could be wrong, I mostly read the History magazines
@hello-lz4xj10 ай бұрын
IK LOL it's like they're describing her wild behavior
@AutieZo10 ай бұрын
The feminin-iasha waltzes into the field, fanning herself and showing off her meticulously prepared game-face. She has but one goal: Find a compatible strong male, to last for the winter nights
@lovelynorah256 ай бұрын
"her breast get heavy, like puppies pulling on a leash" ...😭💀
@arandomuser35003 ай бұрын
Oh my lord, I read it as “Like puppies falling on a leash” 😭
@lovelynorah253 ай бұрын
@@arandomuser3500 😭😭😭
@rezphilosophyАй бұрын
id love to read something like that lol
@thebookgeek3546 Жыл бұрын
I think my insides just flinched holy shit that was brutal
@steph_matarazzo Жыл бұрын
😅 I apologize
@thebookgeek3546 Жыл бұрын
@@steph_matarazzo no it’s fine it’s a good video it’s an accurate representation of some male authors’ writing prowess
@15.dhritiagrawal56 Жыл бұрын
@@thebookgeek3546 maybe you found the *right* man lmao
@thebookgeek3546 Жыл бұрын
@@15.dhritiagrawal56 I’m a lesbian so no thank you actually
@15.dhritiagrawal56 Жыл бұрын
@@thebookgeek3546 it was a reference to the video lol
@ajr72610 ай бұрын
“worse than any period could do” oh my gods how is she alive-
@WillSolaceIsASwiftie10 ай бұрын
Hiii PJO fan
@ajr72610 ай бұрын
@@WillSolaceIsASwiftie Hi😃
@WillSolaceIsASwiftie10 ай бұрын
@@ajr726 I love ur pfp
@ajr72610 ай бұрын
@@WillSolaceIsASwiftie ty, I like yours too
@carcrashheart10 ай бұрын
@@WillSolaceIsASwiftie Hiii fellow Percy Jackson fans
@IcemanCT Жыл бұрын
I always look for that tell-tale sign of the breasts getting heavy in the shirt, so I know when a woman is into me.
@strawb3rry_kisses10 ай бұрын
is that why you're always watching 📸🤨
@lxmon_65410 ай бұрын
remember, if you see a girl clutching her uterus, she is in love with you! immediately start kissing her and she will be relieved of her pain 👍
@timbuktu806910 ай бұрын
What's really amazing is if a girl happens to be standing on a scale when it happens. You can actually see the weight increase.
@aspenisthebest10 ай бұрын
you must be really looking hard
@lxmon_65410 ай бұрын
@@timbuktu8069 yess I've done that it is actually so weird 🤭
@Meemus_Tree_Frog6 ай бұрын
"Ow my uterus-" "SOULMATE."
@mjmoffatt6097 Жыл бұрын
That dog on leash one made me uncomfortable
@steph_matarazzo Жыл бұрын
That was actually inspired by a real book quote 😭
@thepinkelephant2520 Жыл бұрын
Same 😭
@rosepuppy198410 ай бұрын
@@steph_matarazzoI’m sorry WHAT‽ Tell me which book so I don’t have to read it.
@waffleaffle23110 ай бұрын
@@rosepuppy1984 it really is, I've seen it in a book but I don't remember what it was (my brain decided to forget so I don't have to suffer knowing it exists)
@echomikoart10 ай бұрын
@@steph_matarazzoWHAT 💀
@HangryOnPaws9 ай бұрын
Alternative ending "but little did Amex know, Ellie was infected with a terrible curse that caused random body parts to come to life, often kicking her or trying to run away. And she intended to transfer her curse onto him, guided by her wandering boobs."
@nadiarey41969 ай бұрын
Quality plotwist 😂
@julian_games_229 ай бұрын
i think amex meant american express
@SakuraMoonflower9 ай бұрын
Guided by her wandering boobs! 😂❤🎉 That's so funny and tongue in cheek!
@benhagstrom21859 ай бұрын
@@julian_games_22 same, but I like this version too😅
@zoraackerman16849 ай бұрын
Oh my God. 🤭😂😂🤣🤣🤣
@shr00m6610 ай бұрын
The men heard women have intuition and took it the wrong way 💀
@schuylergeery-zink19239 ай бұрын
Don’t you get intuition from your uterus and boobs, too? Oh uggghhhh just meeeee? 😭
@mae10629 ай бұрын
😂😂😂😂
@moubhattacharyay68919 ай бұрын
Yeppp..👍🏻
@NCXitlali9 ай бұрын
I've seen far too many women stick with, and even defend, their abusers so I already know this is bullshit. I'm in a relationship and she responds better when I'm an asshole. When I am nice she thinks less of me. It's really annoying. I just wanna be able to be nice to her have her give me attention for it instead of being a jerk and her responding to it!
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
@@NCXitlali Give him a chance to explain. He'll begin by explaining your exact situation. Then he'll give an example of how to express yourself without coming across as emotionally needy. It's not a big change in the way you express yourself - it just requires the tiniest bit of patience to draw her in to concern about you and your feelings. Dan Bacon - How to Make a Woman Treat You Well in a Relationship. kzbin.info/www/bejne/rYTEqWyXYtKbZ8ksi=MaT2HrFOEbUQ8Ubc
@HazelLevesque_Reborn4 ай бұрын
"Worse than anything a period could do" Oh so she's passed out cold then-
@GraceLynn_00910 ай бұрын
i stopped at the uterus part and go “IS SHE PREGNANT WTFFF- oh wait no its just the male author”
@KittyUnicorn56XD10 ай бұрын
Same! Lol
@hyde315510 ай бұрын
SAME
@Lippie-Lo10 ай бұрын
Amae
@HiYayWoo10 ай бұрын
iktr
@OliviaLove-lm7mf10 ай бұрын
Ikr like hol' up WHAT!
@crimxe10 ай бұрын
“her skin was like chocolate, but not the brown kind because she was white”
@nadiarey41969 ай бұрын
Ouch. Could it be? You just made it worse. Good job! I didn't think it was possible honestly
@srehtodnacipE9 ай бұрын
"An *abundant* amount of freckles, but *not too much* because her skin looked & felt like the appearance of c r e a m"
@crimxe9 ай бұрын
her hair looked like the sunset, but not orange or pink because she was blonde.
@cringeismyfavouriteword9 ай бұрын
LMFAO
@arundhatidubey93349 ай бұрын
Cause she was white chocolate
@nininyoko1310 ай бұрын
you know shit's getting unrealistic when they try to compare anything as worse than period pain 😂😭
@TheCumberCoIlective9 ай бұрын
Exactly 😂 Though tbf this last period didn't have me writhing in pain on the floor. But check back in a couple weeks because my ovulation comes with enough pain to drive any man insane 🙃
@GleamDrawz9 ай бұрын
@@TheCumberCoIlective Yeah, I haven't had mine since October of last year, and I suspect that it's building up.
@kateflanagan93559 ай бұрын
I was in the middle of a hike once when some of the worst cramps ever started. My younger brother could not for the life of him comprehend why I was falling behind. I wanted to yell at him "how about I kick you in the crotch once every couple of minutes and see how fast do you make it up this mountain" Something worse than that suddenly happened while I was at a bar I wouldn't be looking around for a man I'd be in the bathroom crying and vomiting.
@plant_129 ай бұрын
Fr😭😭 like yeah I haven't had anything worse than that one migraine I had once, but even that one wasn't worse than my sister. Literally the only thing that stopped her from calling an ambulance once was that she physically couldn't speak
@MacabreIngenue29 ай бұрын
Couple of periods back I full on fell to the floor. Apparently from anemia.
@Just-An-Internet-Gal4 ай бұрын
THIS is the way a womans body alerts her to the right man **Audibly frog eye blinks**
@nananutdreamers464410 ай бұрын
My favorite male writer senerio. "Her stomach was in twist for the high school football captain. But what was this feeling. Anxiety? She's never felt that before" it made me laugh as a freshmen especially since the girl was a senior.
@turbokirboz9 ай бұрын
proves the writer dropped out of high school 😭
@pluviophile19889 ай бұрын
Scenario
@Ari-gd5bg9 ай бұрын
"In twist"
@addyshorhnr35449 ай бұрын
What drugs had that girl been on cause I really need them
@nananutdreamers46449 ай бұрын
2/4 in support. The other two might be as well but I think I've confused them since I wrote with bad grammer.
@Her_Woods_10 ай бұрын
This is also almost all werewolf romances.
@notamoose207010 ай бұрын
And those are normally written by women, weirdly enough... I blame Wattpad =/
@rattling.casket10 ай бұрын
@@notamoose2070 It's because they've literally never experienced life before and all they know is Movies 😭😭
@multifandomharlot10 ай бұрын
i hate that universe/genre of books with a passion; why are the alphas always so mean to their bonded "mates"!? why can't they just meet them and be like "cool, lol, you're the one". They gotta assert dominance and shit and embarrass them 😭 ugh, IIIIICK.
@notamoose207010 ай бұрын
@@multifandomharlot this. Honestly, as a writer of supernatural fiction myself, the fact that stories featuring werewolves are still using the 'male alpha wolf' concept when canine behaviorist consider it to be outdated is already annoying enough. But adding the 'fated mate' stuff on top of that? It makes me genuinely hope those damn books are being written by AI or pre-teens.
@multifandomharlot10 ай бұрын
@@notamoose2070 I haven't read one werewolf universe book with this "alpha male" concept, that I've liked. They're all trash. Maybe there are a few gems out there that I haven't read yet, but so far it's all been hot garbage and I refuse to read anymore of them.
@GryphonicDiscord10 ай бұрын
Im pretty sure my uterus is hiding behind my liver thanks to this one 😂
@knoxthecat805110 ай бұрын
LMAO
@elenalizabeth10 ай бұрын
Don’t worry I’m sure the male author will find a way for his male characters 🍆 to “rearrange those organs” (because that’s just how women’s internal parts work apparently)
@Isntmycatcute9 ай бұрын
Same, I couldn't continue this to the end 💀
@ZeroxfishZain90479 ай бұрын
BRO AS A BOY IM ASCENDING TO THE HEAVENS
@skybunny62589 ай бұрын
@@IsntmycatcuteI wish I could have as much self-respect as you do. I finished it, and as a woman, I hope I can forget this feeling as soon as possible. I even feel bad for the girl who made this. Imagine posing through all this torture
@AugustRxАй бұрын
This is legitimate how fanfics that go mainstream are written except they're by women for women
@Mx.muffin10 ай бұрын
"worse than any period can do" IS SHE HAVING A HEART ATTACK??? KIDNEY STONES???
@arianekelly26339 ай бұрын
I straight up thought uh oh that one night stand for free drinks was a little more than she bargained for. Lol😅
@AS-kf1ol9 ай бұрын
LITERALLY. DO THESE MEN KNOW WHAT A PERIOD IS?? 😂
@kattie21859 ай бұрын
@@AS-kf1olit’s astounding to me how some men think a women’s body is some supernatural thing that has bizarre things happen like it’s a regular thing… like I know we’re different but women’s bodies aren’t that hard to understand 😅
@SaraRankins.9 ай бұрын
Actually some periods are more painful than heart attacks, which is one of the reasons why women don't go to the doctor for hearts attacks as much because "it wasn't that painful"
@kiraoshiro92519 ай бұрын
@@SaraRankins.I do think that was their point. I also believe females tend to have more severe pain than not, but the fact we all gotta act like everything's ok in public when on our periods might give other females around us the idea that they're abnormal if their pain is severe.
@justjade2568 ай бұрын
Its always the breasts being described in the most outlandish ways that I find the most hilarious.
@soph_learns_ASL8 ай бұрын
“Her breasts stared at me through her dark blue dress” Like no, I think you’re staring at THEM
@Iflie8 ай бұрын
I'll never forget the one where they "bounced boobily" . Thank goodness I didn't read that book myself. But some male writers really have women look in the mirror and give measurements and act like the woman is turned on by herself.
@rebeccasam34347 ай бұрын
I don’t know what you’re talking about, this is DEFINITELY how my breasts work! 😂
@auiak76897 ай бұрын
Fr tho like what 😭😭😭
@Percy_jacksons_girlfriend7 ай бұрын
Fr
@Ilikeandwantmorecatsplz10 ай бұрын
"This IS the way the women's body alert her to the right man!" I can't 💀✋🏼
@TheRawrnstuff9 ай бұрын
Fantasy is such an under-explored genre. It's always dwarves and elves and dragons and shit, but uterus-based proximity detection and alpha-seeking puppy-titties? That's the good shit.
@createityourself64499 ай бұрын
@@TheRawrnstuff Dude- 💀 😭 Take my like and leave...
@krisf22689 ай бұрын
@@TheRawrnstuffLMAOO
@Daelyah9 ай бұрын
@@TheRawrnstuffClosest I think we've gotten is the vagina portal to a demon dimension, in one person's book. Forgot who the author was, though.
@TheRawrnstuff9 ай бұрын
@@Daelyah "When a living corpse climbs out of her during an awkward night of sex, Stacy learns that her vagina is actually a doorway to another world. She persuades [boyfriend] Steve to climb inside of her to explore this strange new place. But once inside, Steve finds it difficult to return... especially once he meets an oddly attractive woman named Fig, who lives within the lonely haunted world between Stacy's legs." - The Amazon Kindle ebook description, _The Haunted Vagina,_ by Carlton Mellick ||| 4/5 Stars, by 1414 reviews.
@casey_shroomz123510 ай бұрын
Women writing women: “Okay so I want this badass chick with guns”
@Grace-q5n10 ай бұрын
I a fellow woman also want a badass chick with guns. Also ladies with swords thats good too.
@kairicanessa353310 ай бұрын
Yes!!!
@rainfall680510 ай бұрын
Yess! Honestly the only right way to write fmc’s
@cleliacarolinaguadarramaor313210 ай бұрын
Its like that, or a character that has absolutely no personality trait besides "Im in love with that dude, but I cant be so obvius" and then procedes to be that obvius hahah
@Wehwehmf10 ай бұрын
But then she can be feminine AND strong or just completely badass. That’s what’s good about women describing women it’s way more realistic 😂
@DanielIsaac-y2t5 ай бұрын
As a man and a writer, i was laughing while slamming my palm against the wall, amused for no reason
@GlowingAmberRaiinYTT3 ай бұрын
Please tell me you don’t write like this 😭
@DanielIsaac-y2t3 ай бұрын
@@GlowingAmberRaiinYTT I don't, but I might or I might not
@nancyfancy98252 ай бұрын
@@DanielIsaac-y2t don't...
@n30ngl1tch2 ай бұрын
@@DanielIsaac-y2t please, spare us
@dark_warrior272 ай бұрын
@@DanielIsaac-y2tpls don't I am laughing and crying 😂😭
@michaelwhalen58368 ай бұрын
"like puppies pulling on a leash" HAHAHA
@Nerdy-By-Nature8 ай бұрын
I died at the accuracy 🤣 As someone who has written literary RPGs, I have had other writers godmod and write nearly those exact thoughts into my character's head (also the exploding uterus ... like why).
@TheGecko2136 ай бұрын
Cow udders
@ThatOneGoshDamnBudgie6 ай бұрын
@@TheGecko213😭 What??
@SethstarSlayer4 ай бұрын
@@TheGecko213 the *WHAT!?*
@kittylady20054 ай бұрын
This had me rolling 😂
@JacquelinElizabethWrites10 ай бұрын
"Worse than anything a period could do" PICOs enters the chat.
@RainbowGamer7019 ай бұрын
What's that? Please enlighten me.
@arathecutie9 ай бұрын
@@RainbowGamer701 PCOS. It's a common disease it makes period irregular
@TheSnowconeMachine9 ай бұрын
my endometriosis made me experience severe blood loss and paralyzing pain for 8 years before i finally got treated, was told i was faking it and that painful periods were normal. For peeps with endo, periods can be more painful than heart attacks and literal childbirth. Unfortunately it puts us at risk for untreated heart attacks because of that, because we don't realize we're having a heart attack.
@justabout69799 ай бұрын
@@TheSnowconeMachinewoah, I never heard about the heart attack thing. ❤That must have been the absolute worst. Sending love.
@TheSnowconeMachine9 ай бұрын
@@justabout6979 thanks so much for the kind wishes! Thankfully, it's easily treatable- once i went on birth control I went from soaking my pads with heavy bloodflow for a week straight and having debilitating pain, to very mild bleeding for just a couple days and barely any cramping! the difference was really like night and day, and I will forever regret going so long without being treated. So many years of being too sick to go to school, and in so much pain i wasn't able to move...
@thesensationaladventuresof115010 ай бұрын
My whole brain currently hurts.
@ΣνεηαΣικδαρ9 ай бұрын
Mine short-circuited at the uterus part. 😵
@zillasart72229 ай бұрын
How to delete someone else's video
@Trilibili5 ай бұрын
"This IS the way the womens body alert her to the right man!" Now i know why im still single.
@jadedcitiesofgold9 ай бұрын
"her breast get heavy in her shirt trying to escape and run to him-" made my skin turn itself inside out I feel burning
@emstink9 ай бұрын
The way it's an actual Stephen King line too lmao
@maremsamy48509 ай бұрын
Wait really what book ??@@emstink
@pinkhotchocolate29779 ай бұрын
GIRL NO WAY@@emstink
@kattie21859 ай бұрын
@@emstinkStephen king doesn’t know how boobs work my man seriously thought they stayed upright pointing to the ceiling when a women is lying on her back lol
@pidusredlah9 ай бұрын
Puppies!!
@katerinakralova729210 ай бұрын
I never thought that a video could physically hurt me, I was wrong
@cristaltophat10 ай бұрын
More than what a period could do?
@CB_202010 ай бұрын
😂😂😂
@amybarthwick49759 ай бұрын
I didnt know my uterus could be a potential WINGWOMAN!!!
@beetleorangejuice9 ай бұрын
WINGTHING*
@DCc-s1q8 ай бұрын
imagine if she was actually at the bar, but she never got a bar to produce, oh the simp men, no where to be found, the dream guy wasn’t in her room with her because the man of her dreams she had to meet at the bar
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
Can I borrow it? My prostate stopped alerting me to the presence of alpha women, and I'm utterly clueless of whose heels I should fall at. But my book about her is coming along great. (satire - not serious😋)
@SouvenTuduCODOH8 ай бұрын
😂🤣
@LostUkraineGirl8 ай бұрын
Get bigger
@Doughtnut3 ай бұрын
"WoRsE tHaN AnY pErIoD-" LIESSSSSSS PERIODS HURT THE MOST
@ozzyiscat12502 ай бұрын
So hypothetically speaking, you're telling me period pains hurt more than being boiled alive
@Doughtnut2 ай бұрын
@@ozzyiscat1250 yes 😔 (joke plz don't come at me)
@Fawn_InFlora10 ай бұрын
"A kick in the uterus harder than any period" Excuse me, WHAT? Is she OKAY? If this is how you find love, you may be in danger.
@qualinseler9 ай бұрын
omg the complete cluelesness about the female anatomy and complete confidence in decribing it are so on point 😂
@matthewatwood86419 ай бұрын
Yeah, because she made all that up.
@beckiehubley57989 ай бұрын
@matthewatwood8641 some guys writing women really are that clueless. Then there are cheap romance novels that are this cringy regardless of gender of the author.
@matthewatwood86419 ай бұрын
@@beckiehubley5798 You ain't kidding. They're called sh*tty authors. There are women who do a terrible job of writing about men and women who do great with it. It isn't something that specific to gender. Some people are good at writing, others not so much. The male author she was mimicking sounds like he swallowed a whole bottle of red pills & then vomited it out through a word processor.
@pythondrink9 ай бұрын
Are those claims about female anatomy in the video that yk to be false? Couldn't find any.
@niceperson40869 ай бұрын
@@pythondrink "Worse than any period could do" nahh periods can hurt more than a heart attack.. also "Her breasts get heavy" 💀
@lost_l0ser1548 ай бұрын
“Worse than anything a period could do.” GURL IS SUFFERING
@OlliveaD_6 ай бұрын
Fr
@TinaTomassen6 ай бұрын
Worse than anything a period could do = worse than an actual heart attack according to some research! Wtf! 😳
@yurigolden80286 ай бұрын
Nah she is giving birth
@Dragonia-co7yp6 ай бұрын
Realistically she’d be dying on the floor
@kraziecatclady4 ай бұрын
All I could think when I heard that was how many men seem to think period pain is imaginary and probably wouldn't write that. My mom's boss told her that it was all in her head. I rarely if ever get cramps, but I know more than a few women with serious cramps that interfere with daily activities.
@CookieMangler4 ай бұрын
“Writing a female character is easy, simply write a Male character that has no personality, then identify them as a Woman.” -Current Star Wars writers
@jamesalexander81932 ай бұрын
Your missing make them perfect at everything and she needs no training because she always wins
@useraccount32072 ай бұрын
You forgot the most important ingredient, never have her take responsibility for her actions.
@udhayveersingh18552 ай бұрын
It's about the sex or the characterisation?
@matthewkjames44982 ай бұрын
sounds like a description of you
@CookieMangler2 ай бұрын
@@useraccount3207 She feels threatened a lot. 🤣
@G.Alli12128 ай бұрын
Amex?!?...she wants a guy whose card won't get accepted anywhere?🤣
@usul5738 ай бұрын
It’s accepted more and more haha
@rubensifuentes7497 ай бұрын
Facts. The only truth spoken here.
@clutchinson74387 ай бұрын
As an Amex holder ...brutally funny comment.
@sesaarinen7 ай бұрын
Black Amex. Cause he's the alpha and sigma at the same time.
@mask9386 ай бұрын
People use Amex?
@joeym1230 Жыл бұрын
I cannot count the amount of times I described a male character as strutting lol
@WooperSuper10 ай бұрын
MALE CHARACTER STRUTTING? IS THAT A "[Giovanni struts over to Mera's unconscious body, leans down, and takes the Arsene Amulet from her. The battle is over.]" REFERENCE?!?!? /J Go watch/read Epithet Erased, it's really good and funny. Giovanni canonically wears skirts, too. He knits, sews I think, cooks, bakes, has soup powers, makes soup for his boys [his evil minions, he calls all of em boys, even the two girls, Molly and Spike, if one didnt like that, he would stop], commits crime, loves each and every one of his minions very much [some of em even love him back, like Crusher, named for his crush on Giovanni, and Spike], loves villainy and dinosaurs, or villainy dinosaurs, sleeps in a race car bed, he has two moms, and his favorite color is Hot Rod Flames.... and pink. He also is the love interest for the antagonist of the sequel book, somehow. He's kinda too dumb to realize she has a huge crush on him, tho. :skull:
@arianahanewinkel472710 ай бұрын
Fav color: Hot rod flames (and pink) actually
@completexidiot77429 ай бұрын
@@WooperSuper I need to read this book. What's it called?
@WooperSuper9 ай бұрын
@@completexidiot7742 There's a show, which is where the Giovanni strutting line is from, that's being written as two books rn! and there's a sequel book. Epithet Erased: Prison of Plastic is the sequel book, ebook and audiobook only rn but getting a hardcover in march! The show is called Epithet Erased.
@WooperSuper9 ай бұрын
@@arianahanewinkel4727 if you're talking about me yapping about giovanni, that was in my message originally, dunno where it went
@HkFinn838 ай бұрын
Female author writing men: ‘the billionaire philanthropist scientific artistic genius self made world king decided what he really needed was a frumpy, painfully average woman with a feminism degree. And he realized he was lucky to even be in the same room as her. She was, quite liderally, a goddess’
@daveyalbert48398 ай бұрын
Delete every other comment This is the only comment that matters 😎
@Dopamine_CHaser8 ай бұрын
So many languages in this world and yet you spoke only one... the truth x)
@mikekasich8368 ай бұрын
@@daveyalbert4839agreed
@mikekasich8368 ай бұрын
Don't forget that he's also 6'5 with a ripped six pack and despite working enough to be a billionaire plus all his other hobbies plus spending all the time at the gym He also devotes every waking second to her and her needs and waits on her hand and foot like a hot butler never putting his own needs even into the equation but only caring about what SHE wanted
@mipmapp52078 ай бұрын
... and the frumpy average woman suddenly blossoms into an incredible beauty after spending a summer with her aunt in the country. This, of course, makes the men who had ignored or who had teased her in the past suddenly become infatuated with her, all wanting her attention. But the billionaire is the one that truly knows her. He lets her flirt with whomever she wishes, because he knows he cannot tame who she is, and she should be free.
@MrMaguire221b3 ай бұрын
"She suddenly feels a kick in her uterus." Sounds like they've previously met then 💀
@dark_warrior272 ай бұрын
I thought she was pregnant 😂
@JustLori1410 ай бұрын
you know you found A good male author when this is not how they describe the women in their books
@Scrump59410 ай бұрын
Rick Riordan, his first description of Annabeth was just iconic. "You drool when you sleep" was her first line in the book!
@ariadna.55610 ай бұрын
Even Dostoievski does😭
@seaweedbrainsss10 ай бұрын
@@Scrump594 YOO! PJO fan! Demigods assemble!
@Scrump59410 ай бұрын
@@seaweedbrainsss LET'S GOOOOOO!!!!!!
@Starsless10 ай бұрын
I was looking for this comment@@Scrump594
@tiredghostlol10 ай бұрын
*sobs uncontrollably* how could you. i was having a good day. THIS IS PAIN. *PAIN*
@Plan__Z7 ай бұрын
“Worse than anything a period could do.” And she *didn’t* collapse on the floor? Yeah ok, likely story.
@beatricekrusemark42606 ай бұрын
How women write female characters: she walked into the bar and thanked the guy who paid for her drink because that is nice 👍
@xenomorph73311 күн бұрын
How women write male characters cringy Edge Lords or broken men only they can fix and with the personalities of rocks and lots of Vampires for some reason
@BABY..MARS..10 ай бұрын
It’s supposed to be satire but this is honestly,so devastatingly,accurate
@bonniedykstra67227 ай бұрын
How though, I’ve never read anything written by a man that describes women this way
@benjamindominish43497 ай бұрын
@@bonniedykstra6722 Web fiction. Web fiction has male "authors" with a clearly heavy incel slant... Published books also have a male fantasy of lots of women wanting a main male character... Male authors tend to write emotional men as showing love, lust, anger, and resting bitch face, but they write the female characters as portraying those plus a gambit of possible histrionics and hysteria... If you look for it, you see it, and you realize few male authors write realistic characters, and most write fantasy male (of their ideal self) and fantasy females (with stereotypes for lawlz "realism"). There are a few male and female authors who have very human characters. The readers aren't noticing and that reveals a lot about the audience too.
@akumakuroi9 ай бұрын
My immediate reaction to the boob thing was “*THATS NOT HOW TITS WORK*”
@Jasterouge9 ай бұрын
They do, you just haven’t met the right guy yet.
@akumakuroi9 ай бұрын
@@Jasterouge 💀💀💀
@Tao.14710 ай бұрын
Omg wait, I'm a male author and I was talking with one of the older authors and this reminds me of his books so much 😭😭😭
@Liandra249 ай бұрын
Learn from their mistakes and change the trend.
@SomadeCristal6 ай бұрын
The fact that this was a woman writing how men write women
@crunchypavement58929 ай бұрын
"this is the way the women's body alert her to the right man" 💀💀
@REALBeezle9 ай бұрын
69th like
@addyshorhnr35449 ай бұрын
We as a female with uterus, have quality man detectors, it’s why women hardly ever get kidnapped killed or sexually assaulted.
@peachge8539 ай бұрын
@@addyshorhnr3544😂😂
@keylanoslokj18069 ай бұрын
@@addyshorhnr3544women idolise serial killers all the time. What are you on about?
@rarescevei826827 күн бұрын
@@keylanoslokj1806I mean, I wanna say you're wrong, but it's disturbing to think there's even a minority that does that. There shoupdnt be any who do.
@Mr.MoneyBags110 ай бұрын
How Tolkien writes women: In the middle of the table, against the woven cloths upon the wall, there was a chair under a canopy, and there sat a lady fair to look upon, and so like was she in form of womanhood to Elrond that Frodo guessed that she was one of his close kindred. Young she was and yet not so. The braids of her dark hair were touched by no frost, her white arms and clear face were flawless and smooth, and the light of stars was in her bright eyes, grey as a cloudless night; yet queenly she looked, and thought and knowledge were in her glance, as of one who has known many things that the years bring. Above her brow her head was covered with a cap of silver lace netted with small gems, glittering white; but her soft grey raiment had no ornament save a girdle of leaves wrought in silver. Such loveliness in living thing Frodo had never seen before nor imagined in his mind; and he was both surprised and abashed to find that he had a seat at Elrond's table among all these folk so high and fair. Be like Tolkien.
@sketchbookgremlin10 ай бұрын
Tolkien was a legend
@leafyztar10 ай бұрын
I ain't reading allat 💀
@graces247710 ай бұрын
@@leafyztarthen what are you doing on the book side of YT 😭😭😭
@leafyztar10 ай бұрын
@@graces2477 just cos I write don't mean I read 🙃
@xenoverthinks_10 ай бұрын
@@leafyztar tht make no sense to me???? U gotta read to write man c’monnnn
@amandac88369 ай бұрын
“Evolutionary recognition of the protector” has me cackling like the Wicked Witch of the West 😂
@Wenixi9 ай бұрын
And why do these protector characters are actually just walking ambulance red flags?? Very demanding. Commanding. Erratic as fuk. Seem to have a personality disorder. Hiding all possible things, not reliable. Yes. Feels very secure as hell. Very safe and protected. But because the man is hot, looks masculine and gives good sex, he has to be alpha and secure. 🤷♀️🤷♀️🤷♀️
@Dashuyan889 ай бұрын
Its true though. Why do women want taller man?
@interiot28 ай бұрын
I love when people use the "it's basic biology!!" argument in order to cover up for their lack of knowledge in the area.
@Dashuyan888 ай бұрын
@@interiot2 its basic biology
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
@@interiot2 Never spoke to an adult woman besides Mom & Grandma. Read 3 books on evolutionary psychology and 4 on biology. Is now an Alpha Male. (jk satire lol)
@pandaperson19386 ай бұрын
"Her molten chocolate eyes" terrified me 💀💀
@thejato10 ай бұрын
Why are the symptoms of seduction literally sound like she's gonna get her periods tho.
@psychopathic_pineapple9562 Жыл бұрын
this is so underrated omfg
@steph_matarazzo Жыл бұрын
Thank youuu!
@Leispada8 ай бұрын
Im a man and even my uterus felt that kick
@objectshowsaretheloml7 ай бұрын
WHAT 😭😭
@mask9386 ай бұрын
Dear God, that kick was so painful that it made this man grow a uterus!
@diquesolomon19776 ай бұрын
😂😂😂😂
@safachaieb27256 ай бұрын
@@mask938😂😂😂😂
@natashafoster99694 ай бұрын
Props to her for being able to read that without bursting into hysterical laughter. 💀💀💀
@kinduvabigdeal8 ай бұрын
Wow as a male writer I've been out here interacting with actual women, asking them questions and observing how they behave in different scenarios to help me write realistic women characters and you just effortlessly grace us with this magnum opus. How am i supposed to compete with that?
@marcosteiner36198 ай бұрын
What do you mean compete? Doesn't the patriarchy make us win automatically just because we're men?
@avinatine7 ай бұрын
@@marcosteiner3619 that's not how it works and what it means, good god
@Flicker-zn4nk7 ай бұрын
Your funny, i like you
@CryptidCritter6 ай бұрын
@@marcosteiner3619 r/whoosh there, my dude 😅😅😅 You missed that sarcasm
@cesruhf26055 ай бұрын
@@CryptidCritter you're wooshing yourself bruh, obviously he knows its sarcasm
@Your_favorite_seasoning9 ай бұрын
"Like puppies pulling on a leash" WHAT 💀💀💀
@Hepheat759 ай бұрын
As a male writer who is writing a story with female characters, this is the last thing I would ever put into it to initiate a romance.
@mikekasich8368 ай бұрын
Is a great way to write female characters and Jack Nicholson in a movie said this: "First you think of a male character.. Then you take away reason and accountability"
@garfieldkater54698 ай бұрын
@@mikekasich836 Yeah, that's great advice from the sexist writing 101 class
@chupachuuups7068 ай бұрын
@@garfieldkater5469it’s true tho, accountability is kryptonite to many people, but especially women. Even more especially in romance novels written by women.🤷♂️
@garfieldkater54698 ай бұрын
@@chupachuuups706 especially to women? Based on what the fuck?
@chupachuuups7068 ай бұрын
@@garfieldkater5469 in romance books/movies or shows; well just read/watch them. The FMC has the scapegoat of “oh, I didn’t mean it that way! I was just(for this example) finding mÿšelf! Now we can be together forever & I’ll be bettér girlfrîènd/wifé BECAUSE of it!” when it comes to chéâting. I’m not saying the convo goes down like that verbatim. Another example is just social media; a woman posting something negativè about a man or hér man, & the comment section is filled with womèń validating her fee fees & experience at the expenśé of the mân, regardless what the man déd or without hearing his side. But even then, they still condemń the guy & śîde with the girl. Sooo many comments by womèń also encourage the womâń to bréák up or divorćê the mân over the smallest, dumbéšt reasons.
@thestoik5440Ай бұрын
This is tragically accurate
@bradyinman907810 ай бұрын
Trying to escape her and run to him like puppies on a leash💀💀💀😭😭😭😭 I felt bile rising in my throat as I read that 😭
@samcook864210 ай бұрын
This excludes Rick Riordan tho
@ultimatebishoujo2910 ай бұрын
FR
@morttttttt10 ай бұрын
Yes uncle Rick is amazing
@daphnejohnson225910 ай бұрын
I love how we can just randomly find fellow Percy Jackson fans basically everywhere
@leovaldez595710 ай бұрын
@@daphnejohnson2259actually tho like randomly we pjo fans just gather up
@izarheriotza531510 ай бұрын
Love the Percy Jackson fantasy just everywhereb
@acesinger609210 ай бұрын
“It feels as though her uterus gets a kick” Tell me why my first thought was “Is she going into labor?”
@Potocalter2 күн бұрын
The Uterus: YES HE IS IN THIS ROOM, AAAH, THE TESTOSTERONE IS TOO MUCH, HELP, ITS TOO MUCH
@JustANerdyGal9 ай бұрын
“Worse than any period would” that’d be my sign to RUN
@amjthe_paleosquare939910 ай бұрын
I'm cackling. I'm dying. WORSE THAN ANY PERIOD??? How- is she conscious though... 😂😂😂😂
@Halske10 ай бұрын
I fear this. I’m going to go sob in a corner in fear for 3 years, who wants to join me?
@zayliepittman638710 ай бұрын
Me ✋🏼
@aethereall...10 ай бұрын
please take me with you
@HIYORI3110 ай бұрын
I'm joining even if you don't want to
@DND2010 ай бұрын
Me
@ΣνεηαΣικδαρ9 ай бұрын
Me. 🥲 I feel like I'm traumatized for life. 🥲🥲
@storyofthegrim18943 ай бұрын
Anyone find it funny how often female writers do this with men as well? 😂, there’s a ton rn
@xenomorph73311 күн бұрын
It's the edge Lord I can't stand oh he's so dark and brooding really women you think that's better
@justagirl67619 ай бұрын
This is what a robot understands when you tell it you have a "gut feeling"
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
I could imagine telling a robot that you have a bad gut feeling about something and it offers you the advice of nausea medication. lol "On a scale of one to ten-" ah hush lol
@Darkangl288 ай бұрын
As a male author who's published 24 books and written dozens of women, I can safely say I have never written any of them like this. Now I'm kinda thinking that maybe I should write a book like this, just for a goof. 😂
@I_gave_Felix_the_egg3228 ай бұрын
Noooooo !!😭 Drop that idea!!🤧
@pvp60778 ай бұрын
"Not all men" 🤡🤡🤡
@heliotype95918 ай бұрын
Omg and for the female lead take inspiration from the comments here that start with “women writing men”
@akani_banani7 ай бұрын
as kiran said: we got enough of those! Dont EVER drop to a level this low!
@furyberserk7 ай бұрын
@@akani_banani Did 50 shades sell though?
@booki70579 ай бұрын
"Worse than anything a period could do" im a man and even that made me snort LOL
@bamousafadma76964 ай бұрын
"A kick worst than anything a period could do" yeah sounds like a sentence a man will write 💀💀💀
@jellybrooks810710 ай бұрын
I think a good make writer that writes any female character in a story should have a woman read it before publishing
@moubhattacharyay68919 ай бұрын
Seriously! Agreed 😌
@sealdude55819 ай бұрын
Or just... write women like people. A good approach is to first write the character then decide their gender and, if that has any impact on the story at all, make changes where necrssary. Its honestly baffling why authors struggle to write characters of opposite sex. Its not that hard
@swvolleyball91379 ай бұрын
So many are offended by the very idea, 😂😂😂
@bossyboots50009 ай бұрын
You know, once I actually had a guy do this. We were on the same forum and I was unapologetically feminist in my posts. He wrote me privately and asked for input on how to write realistic women and if I could read what he wrote. I thought that was really cool. But also kind of funny bc it was a male-dominated forum so I was like the only woman he knew lol
@bossyboots50009 ай бұрын
@sealdude5581 that is exactly how I feel about movie scripts. It always seems like there are SO many characters that could have been played by women but were cast as men. I recently heard that Ripley from the Alien quad was originally intended to be a man. Would've been just another forgettable horror flick if it had. I wish producers would say, "OK, now make half those characters female" before a script could proceed.
@AvivaFanlol10 ай бұрын
My insides felt like they flinched this is like a wattpad fan fic 😂😂😂😂😂
@Yes_sai9 ай бұрын
Women writing man : "loyal, repectful, gentle but in touch with his masculinity." Men writing women : "HOT, SMOKING HOT"
@worthywill92949 ай бұрын
😂😂
@kit9229 ай бұрын
Unless it's Colleen Hoover then it's "horrendously abusive"
@MrReset949 ай бұрын
Were are these female authors writing males like that? Never seen one
@joycechacko82079 ай бұрын
@@MrReset94that's why it's called fiction! 😅
@swvolleyball91379 ай бұрын
@@MrReset94Look Mr. Obtuse, you know good and well that you don’t read books written by women. If you did, you’d know. So many men complain about how women write men as characters they can’t achieve in real life. I’m a writer and most of my male subs are written as decent men with flaws. You wouldn’t make the cut.
@Ace-ace-baby9 ай бұрын
Sweet mother of god when I heard “worse than what any period could do” I was so scared for the words that would come next 😭
@theevilbean9 ай бұрын
Love ur username 🖤👤🤍💜
@Huorfern9 ай бұрын
@Ace-ace-baby Horror novel potential
@EmeraldsFire9 ай бұрын
I thought she died and it was the start of a mystery... Amazing anyone could be so clueless! 😂🤣
@Ace-ace-baby6 ай бұрын
@@theevilbean tyyyyyy❤❤❤
@biggrayalien4791 Жыл бұрын
It's the one man not giving her his full undivided attention.... The other bartender is serving several people who are all demanding special orders. After taking down a few, he wipes his brow, and then attempts the first flourish. *CRASH!!!* Instant failure, glass shatters on the ground covered by a metal tumbler and several ounces of liquid. He bends over immediately to clean up the mess, trying to hide his embarrassment. *RRRRRIIIIP!!!* A loud tear echoes behind the bar, peeking just around the corner, Ellie could see the man's pants had torn perfectly down the middle, becoming simply just loose legs held together by a belt. The man jolted up, muttered something she couldn't quite hear from her side of the bar, and made his way towards the kitchen doors, which where right beside her.... I'd keep going on but I'm tired, basically he was tooting with each step, passing by her. He sobs lightly but just loud enough for her to hear. Maternal mommy instinct kicks in, milkers pointed like a magnet to his direction at all times. Just make her seem like a freak and make the guy be the embodiment of Murphy's Law without resorting to gore or death.
@squidpee10 ай бұрын
HELP
@biggrayalien479110 ай бұрын
@@squidpeeI completely forgot I wrote this, thought I was being genuine for a second, wondered what kind of deranged shit I could be on to write this nonsense, and then I watched the video and realized it was a "men writing women" gag I was going along with 😂
@squidpee10 ай бұрын
@@biggrayalien4791 LMAO
@FOLLOW3RSW0RD9 ай бұрын
I'M WHEEZING, DYING, CRYING-
@_magicmaze10 ай бұрын
YOU LOST ME AT THE KICK LMFAO
@todoroki_no_wifeАй бұрын
"Like puppies pulling on a leach" you just INSULTED them, justice to their humanity
@Da__goat8 ай бұрын
Women writing men: "His chocolate eyes mirrored the color of his dermis, the tapered charcoal he wore embraced him like an old lover, each step he took was done with purpose and care as if demanding that the entire room focus on him, and he could not be missed when the others came to his chin. Beneath the embroidered cufflinks was the glint of his omega and his pants occasionally provided her with a glimpse at his treasures. Everything about him was aethereal, and that made it all the more tragic when he passed her by for the woman next to her."
@pvp60778 ай бұрын
Ok, now this is actually accurate 💯💯💯
@ClaierBank8 ай бұрын
I don't think a woman would write a man like that
@davew49988 ай бұрын
His pants were showing? Oh, you mean his trousers...
@Dreamstrafe8 ай бұрын
B for effort and some accuracy. The man isn't cold and domineering enough and isn't simpy enough for FL... I sometimes partake in female romance, but it's really annoying how 95% all have a cookie cutter ML
@Trixie-the-rat7 ай бұрын
None of that made any sense😂
@Kaibabyyyy9 ай бұрын
This isn't just a male auther, this is a normal run of the mill wattpat story💀💀
@mperezmcfinn25119 ай бұрын
But isn't wattpad disproportionately female?
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
Oh dear.. the meh is too meh to meh
@Alwaystired85688 ай бұрын
@@mperezmcfinn2511yeah thats the point.
@mperezmcfinn25118 ай бұрын
@@Alwaystired8568 The point is that teenage girls write women as poorly as men?
@6alcantara8 ай бұрын
E.L. James
@ellymyths10 ай бұрын
My name is Elly, I’m incredibly uncomfortable with the descriptions in this video, that’s how you know it’s good!
@MyIneffablePonyyy10 ай бұрын
SAME OMG MY NAME IS ELLE TOO!! ❤
@kshietijdas52416 ай бұрын
The same goes for women writing men as well.
@fictionaddiction47065 ай бұрын
No, women writing men, give them character and way more scenes.
@ngastakvakis44255 ай бұрын
@@fictionaddiction4706 Funny
@pranavsutar69785 ай бұрын
Yeah , sure @@fictionaddiction4706
@whateverdude40745 ай бұрын
@@fictionaddiction4706yes yes *Robert put his 42 inch rod in me* so much emotions and drama
@stitch015 ай бұрын
certainly true for comics
@mischiefmanaged.9310 ай бұрын
the way “puppies on a leash” was for her tatas im crying
@SophiezBlogz10 ай бұрын
Naw bro your saying I can find my soulmate through my period cramps thank you for this information I’ll be using it😭😭😭
@fernandinaneptune65499 ай бұрын
Stahhhppp !!! Please !!! I don’t have any lady friends that enjoy reading enough to appreciate the comedic satire of this skit ! I am wheezing and hyperventilating omgoshhhh real tears at the AUDACITY & accuracy 😂.
@EmeraldsFire9 ай бұрын
Same! 🤣
@MagsGreenawayАй бұрын
“this is the way a women’s body alerts her to the right man” Bro needs to go back to biology😭
@H2SO4c0nsumer8 ай бұрын
‘Worse than anything a period could do’ she better be writhing in pain on the floor if it’s that bad
@NisJol9 ай бұрын
I’ve read enough fan fiction (predominantly written by women) to know that women aren’t any better at writing male characters
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
There are always exceptions who break the rule. I like exceptional women who break rules.😏
@KrishSingh-wd2yn8 ай бұрын
@@davidt1621there are none unfortunately
@balddog4708 ай бұрын
In kdrama, women wrote male lead character as rich, handsome, tall and living luxurious life, while female lead characters are poor, and rest of the male characters in the drama are like NPCs and literally male character's lapdog.
@davidt16218 ай бұрын
@@KrishSingh-wd2yn Sucks for you, because there are plenty.
@KrishSingh-wd2yn8 ай бұрын
@@davidt1621 Ik. Just wanted a beef,lol.
@mistress_of_the_dark38010 ай бұрын
This was painful but I endured
@jekyle1980Ай бұрын
What man has written a woman like THIS??? I thought this video was going to point out women like Ripley from Aliens, Leia from Star Wars, Sarah Conner, Battle Angel, etc. 🫤
@xXgacha_starXx7 ай бұрын
“Worse than anything a period could do” How would you know, men? 😂
@Th3BigBoy6 ай бұрын
Because some females used to be men sweaty.
@xXgacha_starXx6 ай бұрын
@@Th3BigBoy It's sweetie, not sweaty, and I know that. I'm not fucking stupid. You probably are, speaking as you don't know elementary school level grammar.
@RoseyStoleYourToast5 ай бұрын
@@Th3BigBoy Trans women can't get periods 😅
@mask9385 ай бұрын
@@Th3BigBoy Trans women can't get periods, genius. You need to have a uterus and ovaries for that.
@le_choco_alexis4 ай бұрын
@@Th3BigBoy 1. Trans women can't get periods even if they get surgery. 2. you spelt sweetie wrong 😢