I was a passenger on an overnight train. They had a strange set of RULES.

[@ImScaroused]

If only the protagonists weren’t completely and utterly inept

[@joelceda3500]

There have been stories like that and they were good. These stories sound more like ragebait.

[@05bastille]

At some point i was rooting for the train passangers to take amanda away and be done with it….

[@imfromheII88]

Goddammit Amanda! You had ONE JOB!

[@Martial-Mat]

"9 ridiculously contrived rules that we immediately ignored."

[@stormbringer2064]

painfully incompetent characters annoy me lmfao

[@zombies-r-us6095]

It would be cool if there's a story from the conductor's pov

[@nyandracook5144]

Same!!!

[@DaMoniable]

Itd probably be filled with 'Conductor, those two passen-' only to be cut off by the conductors heavy sigh 'Those fucking idiots... Ill be back.'

[@AvalonDreamz]

INSUFFERABLE! These two are the most insufferable, ignorant protags we have had in the "rule breakers" stories.

[@christophercardoza2872]

Realistically most people in that setting wouldn’t believe these rules because that sounds straight out of a horror movie. Even if they did take it seriously; most would overlook one random rule or just simply forget the specifics. You act like if you were put into that situation with no idea about these stories that you would follow them and not take them for a joke.

[@Octoberthedark]

The only tolerable character was the conductor 😭

[@timmelkoonce8609]

I can see your point however these 2 are a special class of stupid! After nearly getting murked by the fake conductor, saved at the last moment by the real one, yelled at twice and reading the rules 8 times-(4 times for each of them). You mean to tell me at the very next test of the rules they fuck up again?!! "Well the rules didn't exactly say we couldn't look at the person " WTF, MY GOD why can't they just follow what's on the damn paper?! Why is that so hard?!

[@bptherapy5667]

you deserve more, but this is all i can afford. thank you for keeping me calm ❤

[@bloodmooncomics2249]

I almost expected the last line to be that once the doors closed the narrator would realize it was the fake conductor.

[@MrCreeps]

LEROYYYYYY

[@alistairogilvy7696]

Ahh, he's there just after upload. Isn't up the top for some reason.

[@stacklv2024]

JENKINS!!!

[@morenoedmarjohn1120]

As the train's distance getting wider from us I hear the whistle like scream "LEROOOOOOOYYYYY JENKINS!!!!!!!!!!" 😅😅😅😅

[@PhilieBlunt666]

​@@stacklv2024 im so happy this comment exists 😁 thank you, best part of this by far 😂

[@Vasya_Onoshenko]

JEEENKIIINS!!!!!!

[@Angel-mi6qs]

Rules Rule 1: Passengers are expected to stay seated for the trip unless they are using the bathroom or buying a snack from the snack car. Quick Track is not liable for any injuries you sustain while riding. Rule 2: car #8 is the designated quiet car. Do not talk, whisper, or consume any food in this car. Absolute silence must be maintained at all times. Rule 3: Do not enter car #12, the last car for any reason. Rule 4: There is no station called Crystal River Station, if the intercom announces a stop there close your eyes until the train is passed it, if anyone on-boards at this station immediately move to a different train car. Rule 5: You may see a woman wearing a long blue dress in your car with dark hair and a lot of jewelry. Do not approach this passenger in any way, do not talk to her and if she talks to you ignore her, do not under any circumstances leave your seat to get away from her she will eventually leave. Rule 6: Pay close attention to the scenery outside of your window, if it does not physically match up with the terrain that you should be seeing according to the map cover up your window. Rule 7: Depending on your route you may make a stop at Smithson Junction, do not get off the train at the station for any reason, this is a service station and there’s no way to safely off-board. Rule 8: When the conductor comes by to scan your ticket make sure he’s wearing a red and purple badge with our logo, if he isn’t do not show him your ticket, do not answer his questions, do not look at him and do not let him know your final destination for any reason. Rule 9: Do not get off the train at any station other than the one printed on your ticket.

[@blackmound22]

Yeah if they have this many rules they could have easily printed out a sheet to give passengers. I would have never remembered all those super specific rules 😂

[@CorpsesB4Midnight]

​​@@blackmound22 They did print them out since they were in the back of the seats

[@jbrown7063]

I never seen rules so simple broken by people so dumb. Probably some of the simplest rules to follow and they still couldn’t do it.

[@Kres473]

Well, Look at US germans while Corona. Humans Here were Like: i dont wear that stupid mask . Fuck the Rules. So i can relate.

[@JustAShyGhost]

​@@Kres473 wasnt just germans, basically any western country had that

[@markcarpenter6020]

​@@Kres473probably because they understood they were worthless. You need a completely different type of mask to be safe from a virus than what people were wearing.

[@badatmagic5042]

@@Kres473it’s not like Covid vanished, why arnt people still wearing masks?

[@Teknofobe]

Millennials?

[@Broski_Thatguy]

I thought at the 55:52 end it would be the false train conductor who convinced them to do that

[@DD-jr3mq]

This episode should have been called "two idiots on a train"

[@ChristopheRobyn]

These two are completely incompetent

[@Nartanek]

I know right, that story is so infuriating to listen to. They truly are made for each other.

[@articusramos808]

Look, even if we got a cast who follows the rules people will hate that too. So make up your minds. Damn if we do, damn if we dont.

[@Nartanek]

@@articusramos808 More like we wouldnt even have a story in the first place actually lol

[@articusramos808]

@@Nartanek either or, people will take issue. Doesn't matter if some guy follows it all and makes it out or someone who doesn't and barely makes it.

[@devonbrown4422]

⁠@@articusramos808 I like when the mc follows the rules and the entities get smarter in those good ones. This one isn’t bad, it’s just that why does the mc have to mess up every step of the way. At that point it’s us listening to two dumb dumbs stumble by just on plot armor alone while they didn’t seem to try at all and proceed to break every single rule.

[@ListlessAnachronisms]

Taking a train instead of a plane, and then saying that $120 was dirt cheap is crazy.

[@jasonshepard3525]

A bus ticket can be even less

[@markcarpenter6020]

​@@jasonshepard3525haven't ridden a bus in years but there was a time you could go across the country for less than a hundred bucks

[@fredg.sanford634]

"Keep your eyes on them for a second..." "That long?"

[@kaylanegron6484]

I just want to thank you for always being able to settle my puppy down and put him to sleep. We are only 14 minutes in and he is already snoring next to me ❤

[@HawkTear]

Aaawww 😍

[@kaylanegron6484]

@HawkTear it's super cute, as soon as he starts talking my pup comes running with his stuffed animal, jumps into my bed, and I put his blankie on him, and a few minutes later he is fast asleep. If I don't put on one of his videos he will whine at me until I do. I've tried to see if he will fall asleep to other narrators but nope.

[@Afro.G.]

I wish there were more Creepypastas that ended badly for protagonists this stupid. It's tiring when you're 15 minutes into a story and realize that the characters are brainless.

[@LeeroyPorkins]

Tune in next week for "The Quiet Ones Are Only Dangerous If They're Wet."

[@danthesausage1235]

I will protect you sir leeroy

[@LeeroyPorkins]

@danthesausage1235 Thank-you

[@Coyote_Bongwater69]

Tune in next week for "LeeroyPorkins isn't allowed near children, it's obvious why."

[@Coyote_Bongwater69]

​@@danthesausage1235 Tune in next week for "Danthesausage got caught on his knees with LeeroyPorkins, we know what that means."

[@Badwolf222]

George Carlin would say a loud one will come up and mess you up while you’re watching “the quiet one”

[@gmanbelieves6513]

Boy needs a new girlfriend, she couldn't follow the RULES

[@kentworch]

Thank you Mr Creeps for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always, and I definitely loved this one. Thank you for making my night.🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@redpearlmermaid1]

Why is it so hard for them to follow the rules?

[@Slickrope1924]

Amtrak mechanic here, this is literally just a normal run to Boston.

[@louie22942]

Leroy I’m waiting

[@LeeroyPorkins]

😂

[@Coyote_Bongwater69]

LeeroyPorkins is in your kids closet

[@MartinWilhelmjr]

Leeroy is the goat of Mr creeps comments 💯

[@RandallBalls]

For those who don't know, Leroy is going through a pretty tough time in his life. I'm the king of not giving a fuck about strangers, but give Leroy a break

[@DuckAHoy]

leeroy the goat

[@Bender_Bending_Rodriguez_2996]

Amanda is such a klutz

[@lisas8614]

Not only 1 stupid person like usually in these stories, no there have to be 2 of them. I like rules stories but can we please make it a trend that the protagonists aren't stupid and actually follow the rules and don't stupidly panic.

[@avamtippery5686]

"Oh, forget the rules!" *nearly dies because they didn't follow the rules* "Oh, forget the rules!" x2 Also they never even considered just staying in a vestibule. The rules never said you have to be in a train car at all times, yet they immediately broke a rule instead of considering other options.

[@lauffytaffy1158]

The woman in this story is effing annoying! EDIT: Now its the man being annoying lol

[@Badwolf222]

Are we doing a math test 0:15

[@Badwolf222]

How fast was the train going if it was in reverse

[@omegadubois6619]

If train A left Whatever station at noon on a rainy Tuesday, and train B left wherever station somewhere in BFE in October, what does the color 9 smell like? Allons-y!

[@Badwolf222]

@ hahahaha allons-y Alonso

[@longsalad5334]

That was really creepy man.. well done Blair!

[@msshellie365]

Good lord the protagonists are just down right dumb. Maybe the conductor should have let them meet their fate 15 minutes back 😂

[@ladycreeps6739]

When Amanda fell in the Quiet Car… Me: f**kin Amanda!

[@Coyote_Bongwater69]

Tune in next week for "Diddy had a freak off with LeeroyPorkins and lost."

[@Spooky_Platypus]

💀

[@alexandergaytan]

😭

[@ChriissRY]

@Coyote_Bongwater69 > LeroyPorkins

[@indigovae3579]

The whole time, i was thinking "I'd be scared shitless, too, but I'd still follow the rules" I'd follow the rules because I'd be scared of what would happen if i broke them

[@dimasakbar7668]

listening this during my train rides, immaculate vibes😚

[@ginoprimo5605]

Broke a bunch of the rules and still survived?! Lame!

[@NovaWolf01]

Once they said forget the rules I knew it was a wrap. To get a CONTINUE from the conductor after that and then mess it up again. Brought it on themselves.

[@Loubear23]

Ahhhh! Thank you! Needed this today ❤

[@alfrescoAllegory]

44:40 The woman after breaking the rule to be quiet by being clumsy when its necessary to be careful, unleashing all those beings to follow them, then suddenly saying, "OH, FORGET THE RULES" after all the evidence and consequences they saw, she says that, is she dumb, is she really wanting to die so badly?

[@HawkTear]

Thank you for making my days spookier and my sleep better. And especially now when I'm sick. ❤

[@JordanMayjor3p7]

Across. Not "acrossed". Every. Single. Time. LOL

[@deadhead309]

Had to click on the video upon seeing it popped up in my feed within 45 seconds of dropping didnt even read the title😭😭but im hear for whatever story

[@Shadowlaw331]

I did the same

[@bptherapy5667]

please do more existential stories, it gives me a feeling of deep comfort.

[@mxyptlkzy]

Literally broke the 1st rule by not going to the snack car.

[@Palladian-1881]

Immediately after hearing rules like "the landscape outside might not match what it's supposed to be", the protagonist is like "meh I've got more important worries like inlaws liking me" :/

[@ebonig3]

Now this was a really great scary story I absolutely love train horror stories wish you can do more will appreciate it 💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

[@KatieMarie1030]

Man I love a rules video. ❤

[@tripwire3992]

Oh i just had to watch its a rules story

[@Octoberthedark]

The conductor was the real MVP

[@Starsforever38]

"Then the unthinkable happened, the lights went out" no actually that's pretty on brand for this train

[@razaalikhan7773]

I love this channel, I really do I have been hooked to the stories i walk like 6 to 7 kms and listen to these, i walk through wilderness around 12 to 1 am in the middle of the night, I love these stories I really do!

[@carrieshafferman5313]

Love these videos 👍

[@JordanMayjor3p7]

Do a shot every time you hear the word vestibule.

[@user-mp5ww2bt7q]

Hell no! 26 minutes of my life I will never get back! That was too long, too boring too uneventful to finish.

[@lauffytaffy1158]

I love the train video playing the whole time 😁

[@trentonsanders4059]

Heyyyy everyone 👋🏾👋🏾👋🏾

[@HON3YLAND1]

This is such a good one. I've listen ed to it twice.

[@UnknownPerson-lq8gy]

That was an interesting ending, in a good way. I’d use a term to describe it but I wouldn’t want to spoil it.

[@koofendorfin5871]

3:47 talk tuah 😂😭🙏

[@Ninjadude87534]

Probably your best video so far

[@kaliabana4598]

Nxt week: We have one rule. "Don't be late at school"

[@gaboonjah]

RULES RULE

[@priscillaromero2305]

Oh , that was nice!!! I so enjoyed!!

[@KankleBandit609]

When I hear onamonapeia in these stories I like to think the sound the narrator describes is what it actually sounds like. "In the silence I started to hear...drip, drip drip"

[@bobbyjenkins7946]

Those two should not be together, and their parents were right

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

If this was a horror movie I totally watch it it would be epic.

[@behindthebluecurtains4344]

slaying the horror narration community

[@yaboifyah3055]

"I was the late night rizzler guard at the Skibity Ohio Factory........They have some strange rules......" ngl really getting sick of all the "i got a rule list to follow" stories.

[@ivanrubiomorales2759]

Well well well

[@avmelidor]

Not jumping on any train anytime soon

[@Afro.G.]

These characters are absolutely dumb as rocks. Why do they question everything so thoroughly. It was such a short ride and the rules were incredibly simple. Literally one of those stories where the characters don't really have to do anything other than sit there and shut up.

[@tailedgates9]

That freaking group from silent car that move like wheeping angels and the fake Amanda encounteer messed me up. X_X

[@h1ckjam3s]

MR CREEPS FTW!!!

[@buggy52]

Hello man how are you love your work

[@Vix2066]

Yesssss I LOVE train pastas there's so few of them!!!!

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

I know you did a 911 video but you should do a 911 Call Center video. Those ones can be awesome like ghost calls. If someone answers that they disappear. I remember someone to a story like that a few years ago. It was good.

[@theseedistheword3603]

Always a good time to get the Creeps!

[@z19savage4]

Love the video

[@MissSunriseDawn]

Watching in north Georgia. 😊 Hopefully you're all having an amazing day/ night!

[@helmetmcbaron]

Literally just sleep the whole ride and you would be fine, tbf the train should have curtains or blinds either way just leave the jumper on the window the whole time and you wont have a problem

[@notknightbean]

Bruh this person has never taken a train in a while. As a rail fan this kinda made me irk. But otherwise interesting premise

[@yudoku]

Why is there no piano music anymore?. I really miss it.

[@shangothunder1055]

Great stuff. Reminds me of another story.

[@TheReasonableLiberal-hn2rs]

(26:14) This is the moment he lost track of the real Amanda and the fake one took her place. If they weren't both idiots. I'd have felt bad for her.

[@lynxadink9412]

YESSSSSSS another rule story LEROYYYY

[@ZzZ-po9km]

The first thing you do in a rules story it to break all the rules

[@joaniecummings3465]

Love the rule and horror story

[@Teknofobe]

The only thing this pair screamed was, Millennials!!!

[@Yuki-oi1cs]

I think that once aboard I would have asked if I could find a seat in the car #8...

[@edwardkirby5225]

Good story.

[@TheMindAdept]

If we get off we die next stop is Trenton same diff tbh

[@MalcDat7]

Whoever wrote this clearly doesn't like my city!!...what you got against philly man 😂😂😂...Good Listen tho 💯💯

[@stormbringer2064]

facts philly all the way

[@JordanMayjor3p7]

I have zero interest in going to Philadelphia, Chicago, Los Angeles, Baltimore, Detroit, NYC Portland, Seattle ever again NGL.

[@ThePrblmKd91Xx]

Did this one really have to be tonight, Creeps? Especially the artwork 🖼️😪💔

[@Corrinecreates]

42:10 How the hell? They were moving SLOWLY :/ Edit: 44:37 Bruh, I forgave them for their idiotic behavior before, but there is literally NO excuse now. Edit,Edit: 46:58 If only you used your brain before you cornered yourself😒 49:00 And you two are surprised by this? You already know that you broke the rules.

[@juanitasuniverse1144]

9:08 DON’T DO THAT JUST LEAVE THEM ALONE JUST FOLLOW THE RULE AND IGNORE THEM 14:29 nah check your terrain 14:58 really? 15:08 told you 16:26 hey i lived near there!!!! 17:28 NO DON’T DO THAT JESUS 18:09 NO 18:48 NO 19:01 OMFG 19:33 OMFG PLEASE JUST USE YOUR BRAIN 20:44 get rid of her she clearly has no sense of self preservation 22:02 NO NO NO 22:30 OMG THESE PEOPLE 22:48 i give up these people are hopeless

[@juanitasuniverse1144]

23:37 idiot. idiot. idiot. 26:25 no. look at her. 27:52 jesus christ these uncultured idiots 28:23 NO SHIT 28:35 that’s all folks

[@juanitasuniverse1144]

29:32 yeah cause that always works 30:43 bc that’s not amanda 31:17 called it called it called it called it i FUCKING CALLED IT 32:14 this is all your fault at this point 34:11 the conductor looked at us with disgust. “you guys are fucking stupid. follow the fucking rules.” 35:09 NO YOU DIDN’T 35:13 LMAO 35:18 this 37:22 NOPE 39:33 and yet you stared 39:51 knock her over. 41:05 use your greek mythology 42:13 leave her. 42:53 didn’t they say not to be in the 12th car???? 43:48 yep 44:38 oh my god get rid of her 45:23 weak. 46:33 i’m ready for you guys to lose honestly. 48:49 i hope you’re their next meal 50:07 you guys have no sense of logic. give up 51:52 DON’T DO THAT 53:31 yes 54:23 he’s trying to save your life because you can’t be trusted to use even a single brain cell

[@ZarquawnMceachern]

Its like they only can find dumb and dumber to inact the scripts

[@CreepsintheNight.creepy]

These two are the most insufferable

[@amandafurnia5903]

I love the whole train idea and stuff but why couldn’t these people have followed the rules uhh 😅

[@ricardomora974]

Whoooop

[@PhilieBlunt666]

That was an absolute bullshit "ending"... that wasnt even an ending, thats like when you dont do your homework and try to hurry thru it before ckass starts and just have to turn in whatever you have done when the bell rings... 🙄😮‍💨

[@dianaburda5292]

Dude …. He’s the worst boyfriend! The girl has more balls than