"My Friend Has Been Living in an Alternate Reality" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@WerberDoogyBoogi]

Love how this guy still manages to keep his journal after everything.

[@user-nl7td3bt7h]

Werber fr

[@WALKUREX]

It’s called “hooping”. It’s what we did in prison. Look it up.

[@f1sh26]

That profile pic tho.

[@roarrman]

“I’m a guard stationed at a secret government prison” is apparently something that’s going around as a possible “sequel” definitely will listen to that as well

[@fubar2090]

In that situation what else do you have of value

[@justfriends7581]

Idk if it was intentional or not, but I love how the author kept going back to the theme of getting complacent. No matter what shit show the character was in, he fell back into a routine every single time.

[@AliRazaiamaliraza]

"It isn't an alternate reality, It's our own", 2:33:00

[@justfriends7581]

Ali Raza what do you mean? Why did you quote that lol

[@blockblockleton9803]

I kinda noticed this. I’ve found that the story and world are super interesting but the main character is pretty dry and not very fleshed out.

[@justfriends7581]

Block Blockleton i agree too. He rarely even showed emotion. Besides the whole falling in Love part.

[@blockblockleton9803]

Just Friends i just think that the characters are written pretty lazily. It’s a good story and a fun and interesting world but the characters are so dry

[@vincentreisdorfer9524]

I love the fact that Clint went from young, just trying to survive to a power house that solos the Warden by himself. Talk about character progression.

[@9iineClips]

did he solo?

[@st.petessavior6055]

​@@9iineClipsyes. In the "I'm a guard in a secret government prison. There was a breach" story. It's the 4th story. This is the second.

[@WeaverOst]

@@st.petessavior6055what’s the third?

[@joshlyerla6991]

@@st.petessavior6055do you happen to know the order?? I’ve listened to this one the prison one and the one with the school but idk what order they go in

[@repetitiveroutine7051]

This is one of my favorite series, alongside Tales from the Gas Station and I Dared my Best Friend to Ruin my Life. This one is just plain masterful in its writing and world building. Edit: Wow! 1 year later and I'm still getting notifications from this. Love all you guys, love the writers, and of course, love MCP and Myuu

[@philipcrews3897]

Seriosuly all three of those are my favorites

[@repetitiveroutine7051]

@@philipcrews3897 That's because they do such a good job in some way, Tales from the gas station gets you into the story by getting you to laugh at the absurd events and then relating to Jack in his complete lack of caring.

[@repetitiveroutine7051]

And then I dared my best friend to ruin my life gets you feeling like YOU are Xander by getting you to imagine these things happening to you, and getting you to personally hate David King. They pull you in just like Alternate Reality in they way they craft their story. It's just plain beautiful

[@Tiberius_Productions]

Listen to Penpal, On A Hill, and both Psychosis and Asylum! If you like these longer stories, you’ll probably like these ones too!

[@repetitiveroutine7051]

@@Tiberius_Productions If I listened to those one more time I would be able to recite them from memory! They are definitely good, as well as Picture This, but I think we all know that Vincent V Cava can do no wrong in the creepypasta community

[@josephwarren5127]

When the teacher asks how your spring break went.

[@christineoxenberg8449]

Great imagination! Oh wait... ...who is that lady with the gaping holes for eyes and a mouth standing behind you?!? Ignore her!!!! Dont look at her!! ...BUT WHO IS SHE...WHAT IS GOING ON?!?! NOOOOooooo..... ..... 😱🤯☠⚰

[@RobertMcBride-is-cool]

​@@christineoxenberg8449 I have never seen these two emojis before 🤯⚰.

[@christineoxenberg8449]

@@RobertMcBride-is-cool fun aren't they?

[@theRPGmaster]

"It's been 7 years, man"

[@sc-ek6qz]

"Just...i dont know"

[@Chunkalunka68]

The same author also wrote "I'm a guard stationed at a Secret Government Prison" and you can find references to Clint himself and the Warden in the story. Please, guys, go check it out if you already don't know about it. Its worth the read

[@Rufio2003]

References? Nah Clint and the warden are straight up in the story

[@seangolding7871]

That’s crazy, I just got to the the introduction of the warden. I thought back that story.

[@judgemental9253]

IIRC they even mention paradise x by name

[@jaydensmith443]

My friend is living in an alternate universe, Im a swat officer, im a guard stationed a secret government prison, and this story are all linked

[@plugshirt1762]

@@jaydensmith443 I have to say as much as I live all those stories the guy really has to come up with better titles lol

[@BlackJack-mw4ik]

I demand this be made into a movie

[@plorgiestflow4222]

Ean G. It was it’s called Annihilation even though I’m only like 50 minutes in but it probably is extremely similar

[@bobislv5204]

@@plorgiestflow4222 annihilation is whole different movie

[@whalies7548]

Omg I agree that would be AMAZING

[@Petey.free9]

FACTS

[@NS_MeatFarm]

Nah it would make a much better tv series .... season 1 would be these....and further seasons what happens after the final diary entry.

[@smallredboy9138]

"You guys like long videos-" "oh how long is it?" *FOUR HOURS*

[@sarahgraves6759]

Yet it's not just some stupid song or sound on loop... 4 HOURS of actual content. What the hell is Audible?

[@milkymoo4204]

Its so worth it tho

[@pierreemad2220]

@Yes and no he read each part on its own on separate videos and compiled them together I think

[@Im_Not_Loss]

You should see 'tales from the gas station,' watching that one is among the best ways I can think of how to spend 8 hours. While you're at it, you should take a look at 'My property isn't normal' and 'Accounts from a lonely broadcast station' too

[@richard6234]

I’d like you to see Tales From The Gas Station. About 9 hours with Season 1 and the Christmas and Halloween series

[@skeelar1420]

This is one of the BEST stories I have ever listened to. I could imagine the setting and what was happening. It is hard to find a good and long story like this. This is literally one of my absolute favorites and is definitely needs to become a show.

[@StrawanaCGC]

Try the “infected town case files” thats one of my favourites.

[@zl7568]

I agree, I recommend you check out the whole saga made by the author (mr_outlaw). Great stuff

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

I’ve listen to it a few times now since it came out and it is still my favorite pasta story ever

[@thatoneannoyingtornadosire8755]

Was just about to make a comment like this. This story is just so gripping... you can FEEL and imagine everything that's happening. And the narration only completely enhances it. I come back to this story every couple of months and it never loses its effect.

[@gave1797]

@@zl7568 where can I find a place to read it?

[@odin3141]

Damn, this guy really be writing journal entries apparently even in mid combat. His writing speed must be fucking legendary

[@chriscanfly6386]

No, I dont know how you got that from the story, but its always clearly written after the incidents.

[@odin3141]

@@chriscanfly6386 I watched it 10 months ago so I don’t remember clearly, but one of the journal entries ended saying that he’s currently under fire. Something along those line, idr

[@Greyjustine]

Yooooooo

[@ntlasanga4267]

And he has the handwriting of a doctor

[@ntlasanga4267]

@Shin Splitter of course he can he's... Clint..Rockwell

[@dafall6450]

This series was great, i wish it didnt end so soon. I mean i know its 4 hours but still.

[@pulsespear9914]

Was hoping for another Gas Station, weren't you?

[@dafall6450]

@@pulsespear9914 oh defninently, either that or more finding vanessa

[@grim-kf8wv]

Or to finish Madison and What I've Seen.

[@SilenceIsHerWeaponO]

Dafall it could be a petty lit tv series imo

[@dafall6450]

@@SilenceIsHerWeaponO oh shit i know id give both my kidneys to see it as a series

[@phantxmclique489]

When Kagernori said "This isn't an alternate reality, this *IS* reality" I felt that

[@williamemerson3249]

Who is kagernori?

[@DRSTCMSUR]

@@williamemerson3249 listen to the pasta bro you'll understand

[@partysuvius]

@@DRSTCMSUR it was a joke abt the misspelled name “Kagenori”

[@Jax2248-s1k]

Dude… so my career is welding and I was literally hood down, and mid weld when he said that I completely fucked up what I was doing

[@Jax2248-s1k]

Maybe and overreaction but I was in shock

[@Anonymous-ko5wi]

This story needs to be made into a Netflix series

[@priscocastillo3940]

Channel zero bruh

[@Maulstrum97]

Netflix ruins all stories they pick up. It needs to be animated or filmed by an individual studio. So they can turn it into a masterpiece.

[@samuelhildebrandt9074]

@@Maulstrum97 framed pictures needs to make this into a 10 part web series, and see if they could get the writer to make a sequel, I would pay to watch that. Especially seeing the quality the made the Russian sleep experiment into

[@427skies]

Idk what kind of viewing this should be made into nor do I know who should pick it up, but it is good and they need to do it. This would be amazing.

[@Karim-rf5go]

Netflix the way they film and make cgi seems like low budget stuff we want real companies like Sony or something like that but the movie won't be so great then cuz they have to compress it down to 2 hours...

[@lilmortis9634]

"The creatures that dwelled within Oblivion" *Elder Scrolls 4 music begins playing *Todd is laughing in the distance

[@RuSosan]

_"It just works..."_

[@CookiePieMonster]

*Oblivion NPCs Real Life Conversation* If you haven't, watch at least 1 vid. It's pretty funny imo anyway.

[@sorrenblitz805]

Spoiler warning the alternate reality is just Fallout 76

[@indianinja420]

@@sorrenblitz805 Now that really would be a nightmare

[@WerberDoogyBoogi]

Hey, you’re finally awake.

[@PeppernTheCook]

I've lost count of how many times I've listened to this story. It's my absolute favourite. 2nd favourite is the prison story with the voids where Clint shows up and saves the day.

[@jackharris1450]

Apparently this is the second story the fbi school story is the first and the prison story is the 4th I haven’t found whag the last one is tho

[@PeppernTheCook]

@jackharris1450 I read somewhere it's the story called" The part of the Internet we're not supposed to see" or something. Can't remember, it's not as good as the other ones so I only listened to it once.

[@taylortroy55]

The Warden was the ultimate neckbeard trench coat and master swordsman

[@flare9757]

The Ultimate Armchairs Medieval Historian.

[@awesometown1000]

Either that or Wesker from Resident Evil

[@anzerupnik1442]

My first association was Magelan from Impel Down.

[@naotsue9990]

@@anzerupnik1442 I love you for that.

[@LegacyFTW-_-]

Ultimate anime character

[@Drewseph46]

This isn’t creepy pasta, this is art

[@darzimus]

agreed.

[@jeremychandler2302]

😳 for real

[@nicegoatdoctor8224]

Creepypastas, by definition, are fictional stories. Fictional stories, by definition, are art. Therefore, creepypastas are art. So...

[@adam_de]

Wait I forgot that is was a creepy pasta

[@SomeGamer1111]

We must turn this into a physical diary and ensure it is never lost or destroyed. Just like our amazing friend Clint did for us

[@AnkitB97]

I miss days when every creepypasta was as good as this. Going mainstream has downgraded the quality for sure😢

[@hired6542]

it’s all rules now, I miss good stories like this. It’s like you could close ur eyes and see it

[@fluffyisyermom7631]

No there was plenty of shit stories back then too. Those stories about slenderman, murder Jack and a five nights at Freddie's were slowly replaced with more bad stories This one is just a gem. Don't equate it to the rest of the creepypastas. It is the exception, not the rule. Along with my property isn't normal, tales from the gas station. Stories like these are what keep me coming back, hoping the next story I randomly listen to will be the next big one that captures my imagination

[@chainbenwa2713]

@@fluffyisyermom7631yepp

[@DivineAdversity777]

@@fluffyisyermom7631Ok I think its a bit unfair to call the og CLASSICS shit stories…Pastas like slenderman weren’t TRYING to he these amazingly well written stories lol Creepypasta was still young back then and taking shape. It started as mostly VERY SHORT stories. Basically just quick things to read meant to spook ya as much as possible lol HELL some weren’t even centered around WRITING! Smile Dog is basically just a creepy photoshop with two paragraphs of writing 🤣 Is it top tier high quality entertainment? ABSOLUTELY NOT! Is it SHIT? ABSOLUTELY NOT. Thats just my opinion

[@DivineAdversity777]

@@fluffyisyermom7631Also Murder Jack sounds like an ali express Jeff The Killer 😂

[@macromondo8026]

so...we actually never saw Neo Civitus...who bets that if/when this story continues and we get Rust's side of the story he MADE it there? sounds like a great sequel idea!

[@MrCreepyPasta]

Mr_Outlaw_ posted that there will be a book to follow up and build off this series! We can only hope

[@theduke7539]

@@felizeumida4374 well the thing about neo civitas is that we actually see their technology. Everyone else uses tech that is about the same as our current technology. NC actually has energy weapons, force fields, teleportation, anti gravity, and advanced recon capabilities. Paradise X could project its power over the small island, NC could project its power globally. So it's likely NC is actually better than described.

[@theduke7539]

@@felizeumida4374 true, but does anyone in Detroit resemble shambling drones? Can you honestly say there's anyone in detroit who looks like they crawled out of a Nazi death camp like the people of Paradise X? No, imagine what detroit would look like if America had all that future tech and 100 million fewer people to worry about and lived in an area the size of Texas. Far less territory, far less people, far more technologically advanced weapons, automation, and social programs. Some economists think automation will lead to the the government putting everyone on a minimum salary regardless of work due to the fact automation is looking to put about 80 million people out of work by 2060, and I'm hear to tell you, we won't have NC level of technology till long after that. This world is likely centuries further along.

[@southeastindependentsocial330]

@@theduke7539 And we only saw a fragment of their abilities. That was a single 3 man recon team scavenging for resources. Imagine what a real invading force would look like

[@elizabethlynam8767]

@@MrCreepyPasta good narration that was a great story to be told, if there is a sequel I would love to see James being more involved and how the two worlds tie together or if that alternate world could be saved or rebuilt

[@nikoriranson3449]

I actually felt like I was there just because of the narration style The story was great by the way

[@jjju3]

Agreed, phenominal performance from the writer and the narrator, I almost passed out during the prison scene dkebdkebejd

[@crazybieberchic]

Your voice acting is so natural! It sounds like a real person telling an account of a real situation. It's hard, I think, to do a good casual voice. That alone makes me want to commit to this 4 hour video

[@jjju3]

Jesus christ that prison breakout. My god. The first story ive seen in atleast a year to give me genuine ADRENALINE! Like i was shaking by the end, felt like i needed to lay down. The combo of the phenominal writing and the great as always voice work. Goddamn! RIP Buck.

[@jjju3]

Took me a couple days but finally finished it God this was a good fucking story. Its insane. I started bawling my eyes out when he got back

[@arandomguy7367]

Rip Buck, the absolute maniac. He will be remembered

[@finnjake2896]

These creepy pastas keep me coming back I’m a tattoo apprentice and while I tattoo/draw I get lost in these stories I love them so much this story borascka, my property isn’t normal, tales from the gas station, search and rescue stories, finding Vanessa, are all so intriguing. I always slip away into the world and can see everything

[@Cryinginthecloudssss]

My dyslexia thought this video said 40min not 4 hours but I'm already into the story.....

[@natsuki4021]

Pft same. Didn't even realize how long it was until about 20 minutes in lol

[@AnneQuiet]

Ill think thats the best surprise ever.

[@thelikebutton4405]

Same here

[@strangerfromafaroffland2496]

Same here man

[@unclebean5821]

w̸͚̄a̴͚͆i̴̥͗t̴̤̑i̶̛͚n̶͊͜g̷̻̒ ̷͈̓f̸͎͘ǫ̵͐r̵̢̉ ̷̣̔y̷͎̽o̷̮͝ù̵͔ ̸̤̑ same

[@abdelarch8038]

Sounds like they've discovered Australia.

[@redapple360]

booooooh

[@santbot]

Actually tho lol

[@nealdalton1576]

Ha

[@foxtailedcritter]

I live in Australia and we'll I can't argue there.

[@PortgasDAce-us3dg]

Australia is where it’s at my bah 💯👌

[@shadic971]

The story was phenomenal overall but the side characters all got fucked over so badly. They all seemed to have the same miraculous luck he did until the story didn't need them anymore

[@encycl0pediaman]

It seems that way, I feel its likely the writer wrote them out as they weren't needed but it's not necessarily true they all died, from what I could tell the side characters that could have survived are the guy who lost an eye, that one guy who kept smoking, "dart" was it? And possibly rust (sorry I couldn't remember the names) I was hoping that "clint" I think his name was may have survived or that girl that was apart of the original team but I think it's safe to say they didnt make it. Its unfortunate but how I see it is the protagonist got separated from the few that could have survived that purple sphere teleportation bomb. Sure it's somewhat a trope to write out characters that are no longer needed but at least the writer didnt fully insinuate everyone he knew along the journey from start to finish had died in one way or another. Other then the lack of explination for the missing ones though and maybe an easy escape back to the real world to wrap things up. I think it's one of the best things I've been able to listen to. The few flaws the story has even have their own pluses, sur ethe ending could have been different but I still enjoyed it. Long story short, overall a great story and I wish I could listen to it again for the first time.

[@calicharron7429]

@@encycl0pediaman actually he Clint did! Listen to “I’m a security guard at a secret prison” it’s a sequel

[@Blake-ld7mx]

@@calicharron7429 the fight between the Warden and Clint in prison guard one was epic..the end he gives the crystal to Clint which Clint used to fight against the Warden

[@Raìjíŋ1378]

@@calicharron7429 is that still up? And link the video?

[@ivanvelazquez1783]

Do you mean Game of Thrones? 🤣

[@dressedmaniac]

Damn, self sacrifice is just so honorable! RIP Buck 😭

[@silentrage115]

You've got good pizza now that you changed the sauce. Good job buddy lol

[@chrizzycream]

😓

[@irishpanic]

I don't get why he didn't just use a shard

[@man-oy6pl]

Rip

[@Sandlchi]

@@irishpanic yeah those shards nearly ruined the entire story

[@FaalKoriim]

This is one of very few stories I wish would never end.

[@Liam-yk1ww]

Faal Koriim i wash there were more parts

[@playingwithtrainerspcmt6407]

Knuckle supper is a little better

[@NoPunchline]

There was a book with a similar concept it was called maleficent or something along those lines

[@darkvortex2753]

Neverglade Mysteries is another one I wish didn't end

[@Kainvainslay]

I to differ. I wish it would have ended after they found out what the fuck that device did, that caused everything

[@NeighborhoodDada]

I remember when this first dropped as a multi part story. Love this. This one. Penpal, showers. All bangers and all take me back to being a teen again. Now i get to share these with my 9 yr old and show her the magic of creepypastas at bed time.

[@knightmareco]

It never ceases to amaze me the imagination and creativity of this author, I'm loving his Universe, and if he puts all his stories together and write a final one wrapping them all it will be an amazing book. Also thank you MrCreepyPasta, I love your narration, it makes the story way better.

[@popoffrotmg981]

I've got a rough idea of which stories overlap, but do you know how many/which ones exactly are in the same universe?

[@christianschul5885]

@@popoffrotmg981 roughly 4, I believe. And I've been thinking the same thing abt how and when he can or even will tie it all up with a final story. It feels bigger than infinity war and endgame 😩

[@michaelmathern.303]

@@christianschul5885 so what are the overlapping stories?

[@scaraswife3896]

@@michaelmathern.303 here my attempt at recalling in order :1. Part of the Deep Web we Aren't supposed to see 2. My friend has been living in an alternate reality 3. I'm a SWAT officer 4. I'm a guard at a secret prison These are what I've listened to, but prolly missing some.

[@deznutznurmouth2]

@@scaraswife3896 how is the deep web one related?. It's been a while since I listened to it......oh and you missed one. I work at a secret government prison if I got the title correct

[@critcitymillionaire3296]

THANK YOU, I've been waiting for the story to finish so I could knock out the entire thing in one sitting. I didnt wanna accidentally listen to them out of order while I had KZbin on autoplay or something.

[@tanyalee5458]

I love your stories! I am a long haul, OTR woman truck driver. I love your stories, of which has me sitting on the edge of my seat. I listen to you from the time I get up until I go to bed. Your stories get through long days. Thank you!

[@derekspradling7452]

Wow. Probably hands down the best creepypasta I have ever heard. Most of them these days are usually meh. Some stand out from time to time as the best creepypasta I have heard in a while, but this is right up there with "Ben Drowned" "Godzilla NES" "Rusian sleep experiment" "1999" and stories like those. Probably even better. It kind of lost me a little at the whole "Island of the Dead" segment though. I was worried that the story was fixing to go zombie apocalypse with it, but even the whole colorless spirit concept added some freshness to that old concept. My favorite parts where hearing about all the creatures in Heaven's Curse. Most of them were very terrifying!

[@derekspradling7452]

@No Comment definitely. thanks! :)

[@justfriends7581]

Strangers too. Short but sweet

[@distrom-sc254]

@M R um what? Theres creepy pastas that make "actual literature" look like amature garbage. I dont know what youre going on about bud

[@mcr2dcr348]

You’ve probably read it already but borrasca is good

[@snhazzy3325]

Derek Spradling listen to ‘I dared my bestfriend to ruin my life’ amazing story

[@kylecarson4143]

Despite everything he went through the hell he survived he managed to get back to his own time and see his friend again.

[@Artemis_jay]

And I can’t even get a text back lol

[@SomeGamer1111]

True friendship is hard to come by. This is above and beyond lmao

[@thedayidied]

This is one of the most incredible odysseys I've ever heard in all my time using KZbin. I can't even describe how wonderful and absolutely and utterly captivating it is. Also, it's funny, the story begins and ends at Caltech, which I live right next to. If anyone would invent a way to go to an alternate timeline like this, it'd be students there lol.

[@doc_s1krr751]

Listened to this on a 10 hour trip. Just finished. I was not a fan for the first 30 minutes, but I stuck through it and am very glad I did. I love how it doesn't end with all loose ends tied up. Works very well for this kind of story

[@paradoxplains9704]

I appreciate the fact that he uses the monsters mentioned in the beginning back for heavens curse

[@LilBearZen]

I appreciate that your voice isn’t completely flat; you’re a genuine voice actor. Not to say I don’t still love the more flat narrators but, for stories like this, you add some real energy that got me at the edge of my seat.

[@rindademon3339]

Warden and Buck were my fricking favourite characters, I wish we got to see more of them.

[@aaronayers1873]

I was a guard at a secreat prison. Thank me later

[@arthurcosta1657]

You can

[@yesboiiii]

@@aaronayers1873 bruh that was a good story

[@calicharron7429]

Did you check out “I’m a security guard at a secret prison” ?? Got one of your favs

[@artemisarrow179]

*flies into wormhole* *black* “Hey you. You’re finally awake. Got caught trying to cross the border huh? Walked straight into that imperial ambush.”

[@smurfmaster2644]

🧑🏻‍💻

[@troostan2776]

This story reminds me a ton of a novel called "The Transall Saga" by Gary Paulsen that I read a while back. Both are about people getting sent to strange worlds and trying to survive, soon coming into contact with other civilizations. There's even a twist that is very similar to the moment with the chicago cubs tattoo. I'd highly recommend people who enjoyed this story to read that.

[@KevinMay71]

I really enjoyed the transall saga.

[@nicolithepoet7777]

I need to finish that saga.😫

[@100kaner]

Genuinely sad about Jolie... Absolutely amazing story though, I was engrossed from start to finish

[@JagEterCoola]

Yeah. I knew It was gonna happen but still, damn.

[@silentrage115]

I wish he would've elaborated more on Clint's thoughts and feelings after she died. It kinda felt like he didn't care that he lost the love of his life, because he just moved on like it was just another thing that happened to him.

[@deutsch-amerikanisch8281]

@@silentrage115 apperently this story was rushed and character development was left on the backburner. The author said this story was supposed to take about 2 or 3 years to finish but, he rushed it and completed the story in about a year.

[@applemacigharas686]

@@silentrage115 I think it was fine. I mean, the man has been molded to survive. You could see it as him repressing the emotions. It happens. I bet that once he's in a peaceful environment he'll start breaking down.

[@flare9757]

Apple Mac Igharas You mean like a soldier with PTSD right after rotating home?

[@mybackyard1030]

All my friends must be in an alternative reality too because I don’t have any in this one

[@silentrage115]

Damn...same here...life is lonely...

[@bejited6932]

Mybackyard relatable

[@flare9757]

My only friend is my Saber....

[@daryanquanappolisschmitt34]

Bruh moment

[@lanceoswalt9727]

F

[@SquishyAbby]

I come back to this masterpiece every year. It’s such a fantastic story i love it

[@malaizze]

The prison is literally just the movie holes in a fantasy setting.

[@fareeda1970]

false name exactly what I thought

[@barnacle-]

I finally got a good look at the warden... it looked like... Shia LaBeouf...

[@FLMKane]

@@barnacle- actual cannibal

[@yootbaggoot1681]

Yeah including the 8 foot tall man and the indescribable monsters in a giant hole

[@cookiethief114]

Oh my god it is

[@jacoboliver2327]

This sounds like it was an epic D&D game

[@supreme_leader_of_the_internet]

alright time to start planing

[@blueicefiredemon3265]

can i be a bard?

[@supreme_leader_of_the_internet]

@@blueicefiredemon3265 Totally

[@sigisoltau6073]

It does. Just some points could have done better. Like with that bomb's location. First it was said it was in the Pacific. About 5 minutes later it's in the Northern Atlantic.

[@MT-lw6yh]

Hey! Forever DM here, I've been working on this for a while! I'm actually basing it around the Call Of Cthulu game though because it allows so much more hopelessness in the game.

[@edwardicus4]

Darn you Mr creepypasta and Mr Outlaw. I started playing this with the intent of going to sleep to it. About an hour later I'm like "well, just one more journal entry". Another hour goes by and I'm like , "Ok - ONE more entry and I'll go to bed"... Its dawn now...

[@SkullSkillsParkour]

I feel like this would work great as a graphic novel, or even an mmorpg with all the monsters. If it isnt adapted into anything else the author just created an interesting, hellish, and potentially deep universe for one story.

[@freefromtoast2034]

4 Words Survival game

[@tenx4512]

Freefromtoast 20 That’s two words. Do you mean syllables?

[@slendiebendy]

@@tenx4512 well technicaly it was 3 words and a number

[@echodec]

@@freefromtoast2034 are you including the "4 words" in the 4 words

[@bryanhavens4650]

DnD campaign

[@stalkersock]

"I failed a geometry test, to be fair I didnt study but." "Yeah i was that a**hole"

[@RameyFTW]

sounds like when I was in school

[@randomgamer2955]

@@RameyFTW same tbh

[@arielamaro2138]

i remember reading this during my walk home from HS... it has never left me. i forgot who made it, but i remembered the title so brightly, i literally felt a shock fill me when i saw this videos title. i have nbever been more equally happy, and another feeling i cant explain, nostalgia with a mix of horrid and beautiful.? its like watching a video of yourself in 2016...

[@aaayjay]

I agree, this story sticks with people it seems

[@ariw9405]

Wow this was absolutely amazing. I wouldn’t disrespect this by calling it a creepy pasta this is a work of art. Kudos to the author I agree wit others this needs to be made into a movie

[@randomgamer2955]

So agree omg I couldn’t stop listening

[@kevingipe702]

That’s not Paradise X, that’s just Detroit

[@thatsnodildo1974]

*THEY TOOK A MY WHOLE ASS CONTINENT. CANT HAVE SHIT IN DETROIT*

[@jcrow5858]

Fuckers took my journal Can’t have shit in Paradise X

[@Lilmsjaymo]

I'm from Detroit😭😭😭😭

[@Emiliofy]

@@Lilmsjaymo is it really bad there ?

[@Lilmsjaymo]

@@Emiliofy there's good and bad ppl every where Detroit is no different. The lack of opportunities (schooling, jobs, housing, ect) plus gentrification (watching the govt pour resources/tax dollars into only these white pop up neighborhoods while the hood is still a mess) really has made this a shitty place to live since like the 90s

[@RoboticAbyss95]

Man, we just need a full run-through of Mr. Outlaws stories. This guy has done such an insane job of putting everything together

[@MimiUsagichan]

Cant wait to draw for hours just for listening to horror

[@AnneQuiet]

Mieko A. Pendragon that's a great idea too! I need to get back into drawing.

[@SamWeltzin]

Oh you too? Awesome. :D

[@black_horse_lover2655]

Yes! Definitely!

[@judanstein802]

what i did

[@black_horse_lover2655]

@Ash Fell Good luck on your mask!

[@amandahuddleston7070]

This... was by far the most amazing story yet... The part when they were escaping the prison? Absolutely amazing.

[@Therex3232]

This journal has more survival instincts and sense of self preservation than most people I know.

[@zoeylovefood3635]

Tbh, he should be thankful he didn't get a response to that Facebook message

[@titliroy4713]

Exactly!😂

[@Grand-Blanc]

2:37:00 Im listening to a youtuber reading the story of a man, whose reading the journal of another man, whose telling a story from another man POV

[@majesticrice4874]

Lil' Tater whats the video called?

[@SummerMAYismyname]

Omg no! It hurts!😂😂

[@spook448]

Meta

[@user-rw9wm3hm1q]

im listening to a geeza whos reading somting bout someone whos writing somting about somting someone said about someting he read i think?

[@EasierHistory]

And I can’t read...

[@LemonLimeSkull]

I always come back to this story, I love its mysterious and over the top alternate universe vibe.

[@lxReo89xl]

The fact this man kept the journal and something to write with through out all this crazy mess amazes me

[@zzz.p9]

the true mystery for the matter lol

[@Learn.The.Hardway]

Dislikes before you could have even listened to the whole story? Some people's kids these days...

[@leannachapman6234]

I say the same thing all the time... Some people should have never been able to breed...

[@BakkuIa]

Nothing wrong with disliking something before you finish it. I skip songs and put down books just from how they begin all the time, and I'm sure you guys do too. but i mean yeah you don't have to downvote the dude's video lmao (even though there's only 16 dislikes atm)

[@black_horse_lover2655]

M R How the heck is that even comparable.

[@flare9757]

M R How would you like to be thrown out a window by some lightning for Treason?

[@awesometown1000]

You don’t have to finish a meal in order to know if it was seasoned correctly or not

[@blackoutunfiltered]

This is a long shot. Who wants to make this into a low budget movie. Something that the viewer can complete in their minds like a book, no need for vfx etc. who’s in?

[@ashleyross5509]

Mr_Outlaw is by far my favorite "creepypasta" author. He is so fantastically and amazingly talented! And MrCreepyPasta does a phenomenal job with the narration! The combo of these two is absolute perfection in my opinion. 😄

[@isaacschumacher130]

Do you know any other storys that connect with clints storys? Or just in general good storys you can name by him? This and his guard story is the best storys I've heard from pretty much anyone

[@isaacschumacher130]

Lol 8 months ago damn hope you respond

[@ashleyross5509]

I do, I just have to remember them!

[@Azrael_Equinox]

@@ashleyross5509 I see its gonna take 8 more to remember them lmao

[@Amber-me2wz]

@@Azrael_Equinox Possibly more than that, I don’t man it’s been more than 8 months I know that

[@jaylovelc2980]

One of the best I’ve heard. I’ve listened too 5 min ones and 5 hours ones. Time makes no difference here. It incompasses so much stuff it’s crazy. Supernatural plus some. I like it.

[@turtleanton6539]

Its real cool

[@morgankingsley4992]

Thank you for posting this masterpiece on here

[@smashmoop6402]

It’s about time this series was one video, this is god tier narration

[@flare9757]

Raymond Serbentas There were maybe one or two spots where he had to repeat himself, due to the tone not quite being right. But, for this length of a clip, and only one, maybe two mistakes? Extremely impressive.

[@duffinthemuffin5792]

Its been a very long time since ive been here. I still remember how good it was, weird to think i was just 17 when i first watched this video.

[@assassinkillerelite]

Alright so one of my new top favorites next to borrasca, the spire in the woods, and my best friends is trying to ruin my life. Love them all and amazing narration. Honestly ive tryed to listen to other creepy pasta but i just dont get that same feeling and vibe you put off so thank you for doing this for everyone and keep up the amazing work

[@joshuacarpenter7447]

Pill Mills and Knuckle Supper on Chilling Tales is pretty good

[@afluffyboi4093]

When he came back to earth a tear rolled down my cheek not even kidding

[@clock4883]

same dude, same

[@nicegoatdoctor8224]

Wimp.

[@gabrielacevedo5315]

Love revisiting this every year or so!! Amazing world building and super engaging arcs!

[@wakeup9712]

I would love to see this put into a movie or show. Seriously dude this needs to be a screen play. It’s amazing. Absolutely in love with this.

[@DonkeyDongs]

Woah. What in the actual fuck. This was beautiful. The imagery, the writing, and the narration was phenomenal! This is truly a peice of art. Wow. I was transported through literature. This would be such an awe-inspiring high-budget series. Just fucking WOW. I felt afraid, happy, sad, and kept wanting more. Incredible!!!

[@sarahdawn5626]

It was amazing. Its hard to find content this good, Hollywood has NOTHING on this!

[@KrisLovesAnime200]

Fucking same dude, I mean I feel it needs to be refined just a bit but definitely this needs to be a tv series or a good trilogy movie. Perhaps this can be spread around until someone interested picks it up and actually invests in it, just so long as it stays very close to the source.

[@owengonzales53]

Second time listening all the way through and just as amazing as the first. The world building is absolutely phenomenal and I could vividly see every setting. Such an amazing feeling after listening to this. Damn I was so invested into the characters too, wanna know so bad what happens after

[@silentrage115]

@@owengonzales53 All of them but Rust and the main character died. Most of them died in Dusk Blue then the last 2 died when the Neo Civitus soldiers attacked the settlement.

[@katrinaturtles970]

I could imagine the details from the narration and the details of story. It's amazing

[@Sytheological]

i still come back to this video to watch it over and over. this video is severely underrated

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

Lol same. I’m doing it again now for like the 5th time

[@sadv0m]

This was seriously incredible. Holy shit. This was like some Avatar/Fallout/Steins;Gate insanity. The idea that someone just thought this up is utterly mind bending.

[@andrewbrooks7122]

Add some stranger things pathfinder/D&D doctor who stuff as well

[@Emmz3y]

Wow I can not describe how amazing of a story that really was. It inspires me, really. I would love to create a world so expansive and bewildering like this one. Truly brilliant.

[@Hanjhob]

Wow. This was awesome. Can’t wait to revisit this and listen to it again in 6 years.

[@oscarthegrouch2397]

Nah cause I dead ass watch this coming out and re watched it just now a total of 5 years later 😢😂

[@paper_boi5433]

Same here

[@flame-assassin4384]

This was a amazing story. It felt like being there seeing what he did and just thinking. Im happy you did this a long one since it doesn't take away from the feel of the story trying to find another video on it. I hope you do another one like this really is a good one.

[@javiersalas249]

make this into a movie, RIP buck a true hero

[@LoneWolf-mh6cw]

For those of us who are aware of mr outlaws extended universe and has a playlist put together for it, we can all agree that Clint is definitely the "Iron Man" of the MOU

[@chrischancellor7123]

This creepypasta needs to be made into a movie

[@TheRealNewWhirledOrder]

Livestreams of creepypastas don't do me any good since I usually listen as I'm falling asleep. I also usually fall asleep before the story ends so I need to be able to rewind them. It would also make it impossible to keep track of which stories I have already listened to. Might be good for some though. Anyway, thank you for this video though.

[@toadflaxflower]

Favourite line: despite all that, he was holding a lARGE FUCKING ROCKET LAUNCHER

[@soontir_fel1816]

This needs to made into a tv show right now....i need more of this. I have so many questions, i need a sequel. This series was fantastic

[@turtleanton6539]

There is a prison sequel story

[@drinkerofpaint]

I love listening to these while drawing. I always need something to listen to to keep that side of my brain entertained while my eyes and hands are working on the drawing, otherwise that side of my brain gets bored and I get destracted/bored and do something like video games instead Working on character sheets for uni while listening to this, it reeeeeally helps me to get a significant amount done

[@Purpleglucose]

Agreed helps me keep doing my needle work

[@eemansuhail]

Same!! I'm not good at it but its so much easier to draw while listening to something.

[@randomgamer2955]

I’m going to draw the characters and monsters from this story. I like to do that to make a bigger impression of visuals

[@tyregz9334]

That's why you never say: It can't get worse. Here it always gets worse!

[@ahamilton3435]

I can't believe I've literally spent 4 hours straight on this.. was it worth it? YES. I don't even know what genre this particular pasta would be but I never thought I'd love it!! This was so damn depressing though, like I felt like giving up on life whilst listening as if I were there myself!

[@lucass5980]

I listen to this story at work a lot, and every single time the entire 4 hours is genuinely worth it and enjoyable.

[@jasonbernard9012]

Did the energy bars remind anyone of snowpiercer? I imagined them the same exact way as they were in that movie lmao

[@smurfmaster2644]

Yessir

[@BernStoogin]

Exactly where my mind went lol

[@jasonbernard9012]

@@BernStoogin glad to know I’m not the only one lol

[@harleymoore441]

So glad there are others 😂

[@mrbloodbad]

Dude this is like important to my childhood, this is so nostalgic

[@odin3141]

Gonna try to use this setting in a D&D game, it sounds really interesting

[@encycl0pediaman]

You mad man.

[@feller_of_florida]

HBO or Netflix could definitely make this into a series And I REALLY think it would do well!. Who do I have to throw money at to make this happen?

[@josephleece682]

It gets better. This is part of an extended universe by this author. There is another story told from the perspective of a prison guard on earth at a prison essentially for scp. There are characters and other things in that story from this one including klint. As far as I can tell there are also other "connected" stories

[@feller_of_florida]

@@josephleece682 Just listened to it for the first time about two weeks ago, an absolute blast to listen to. Loved the connection to the Alternate Reality series. Can’t wait to see what’s next from the author

[@josephleece682]

@@feller_of_florida kid has a bright future with this content. Kinda reminds me of Steven kings dark tower and that was a hit in a literary sense and honestly could've been great if they had put it on screen in a better format

[@feller_of_florida]

@@josephleece682 yeah I see big things for him if he chooses to publish some of his works. Hook, line, sinker, other people will love it same as we have if they’re able to discover it and publishing it would help in putting him on the map more.

[@josephleece682]

@@feller_of_florida i think he'll find a way to grow certainly. The creepypasta community are pretty much zealots in regard to his works right now and although it's not a large community it's only a matter of time before it gets picked up by others as well especially if he continues producing quality content. Might be slow growth in that way but slow tends to last longer anyway

[@Birocosis]

Oo man. This was still just as good listening to it years later. Mr. Outlaw really has some of the best stuff

[@swifty-nine]

Quick question: will you cover the sequel to this story; "I'm a Guard at a Secret Government Prison"? I loved this story and your narration style kept me gripped, and while NaturesTemper's narration of the sequel was great, it didn't manage to capture the atmosphere as well as I think you could. It would be nice to hear you narrate the sequel to the story that got me into your channel. This and "My Property Isn't Normal" are my absolute favourite stories.

[@chillisk8]

Check out Dark Somnium's version of the prison guard. Highly recommend!

[@thatoneannoyingtornadosire8755]

Oh shit this has a sequel? Thank god

[@swifty-nine]

It doesn't seem to be a direct sequel/follow up, but more of a spin-off that take place a few years after the events of this story. There aren't many returning characters, but the Warden and Clint are in it.

[@spongemanicecone2736]

So you are telling me that there is a motherfucking sequel?

[@lyndonlewis1463]

The Dark sominium's version of the secret government prison is amazing listened to it about 3 times and still love it I highly recommend his channel too

[@phoenixmoody85]

Love this story, wish there was a continuation, there is a different story called "I'm a guard at a seceret government prison" that briefly brings up the Warden and the crystal shards in a fight to the death. Really cool. Keep up the good stories !!

[@killerdeathbat]

This seems like there’s a whole other story still waiting to be told. A lot of questions left unanswered. One of my favorite pastas of all time.

[@razor4593]

If you are familiar with @The Dark Somnium , he just uploaded "I'm a swat officer that was called to a locked down school" 12 hours ago and in the outro he mentioned that "the new swat" upload is in the same universe as the "secret government prison, and he believes its more directly related to My friends been living in an alternate reality" However he doesn't personally have the alternate reality uploaded yet, so I Figuered I'd come here and spread the news of more content relating to the classic creepypasta's lol

[@killerdeathbat]

@@razor4593 super funny coincidence, I just relistened to this story in the past couple of days. Thank you for the update! I will go check everything out

[@josephgaribay9228]

Got to love this it even continues on the I’m a guard at a prison. It’s a different story but I love how it crammed this story into it.

[@alondramoncerrathrodriguez450]

Which one????

[@rymadekkar6005]

@@alondramoncerrathrodriguez450 the one she’s referring to is I’m a guard in a secret government prison’ 😊

[@ellie-sk5ty]

OMG YH

[@jamesk5510]

It needs to continue dammit who do i gotta throw money at?

[@junkjunkie001]

Lol !!!

[@laudig1313]

Agreed

[@nathanialfowler1905]

Me?

[@flare9757]

A book to come after this is already in the works. Or so rumors say.

[@swiftchan8305]

Imperial Shocktrooper really?

[@hellboy67896]

One of the best creepy pastas ive heard. Wish there was more to it

[@MrJustinreese]

This is a perfect prequel to "The Mist" by Stephen King.

[@thatsnodildo1974]

I wanna agree but i think the creatures of the mist are in between dimension monsters.

[@zsrlabelle]

Is this the Netflix the mist or some movie ?

[@MrJustinreese]

@@zsrlabelle I'm a bit of a nerd and was thinking about the Stephen King short story upon which the movies are based.

[@aaronmarshall3940]

dang your right

[@chriscanfly6386]

@@zsrlabelle 'some movie' you mean the god damn cult classic original mist?

[@ericaheffington3404]

Love the longer stories... I listen to them in bed at night and it's nice to have something to play for a while instead of having to find another story every 20 min. Great job narrating!

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

Try playlists. That helps me