Really unlikeable characters and didn't enjoy the story but great voices and production as always.
@ShatteredPsyche9 жыл бұрын
People like the character of Brad in this story infuriate me: they are the worst of society, the make life less enjoyable for everyone with whom they interact, and yet, if I set them on fire, *I'm* the bad guy. Stupid anti-flamethrower laws...
@sarahjustsarah36409 жыл бұрын
This is why you feed them to plant monsters... or wood chippers. Either way, less evidence.
@WiiVampire179 жыл бұрын
ShatteredPsyche except brad had a reason to be pissed....the main character was betting his life and the lives of everyone else on some random article he read....and in the end everyone died because the main character thought this would be a neat way to earn some cash....if you don't know how the hell you are gonna get out of some mysterious place that nobody's ever gone to and nobody knows a thing about....why even go in the first place?!
@ShatteredPsyche9 жыл бұрын
Austin Cooper The protagonist *knew* he'd fucked up; what exactly did Brad berating him accomplish? Fuck all. People like Brad may be justified in their anger from time to time, but whenever they vent it they are *not* constructive, they do *not* help, and they succeed only in making a bad situation even worse. I guarantee you Brad gets equally angry at a barista who screws up his coffee order as he did during this story. I have met people of this ilk, and they have only one mode: "insufferable cunt".
@WiiVampire179 жыл бұрын
it's hard to be constructive when the guy you are following barely gives you a reason to trust him
@WiiVampire179 жыл бұрын
but we're talking about a modern age and taking advice from a newspaper that uses the word "Predicted" when it comes to finding a way out is a quick way to die....
@jerimcmakin615410 ай бұрын
Just the hands down best voice acting. Thank you for your passion and excellence in delivering these stories to us😊
@ShatteredPsyche9 жыл бұрын
So, I thoroughly enjoyed that story, and I certainly understand its selection as the best of this competition. That said... *SPOILERS FOLLOW* I despised the ending: had it ended with the creature saying "no one comes up here", that would've made a fantastic, impactful climax; but as it stands, with a character narrating their own demise from a first-person perspective...that is simply awful, and requires just a touch more suspension of disbelief than I was prepared to provide.
@a1be31s8x99 жыл бұрын
ShatteredPsyche I like your idea of ending on that line
@Athen2399 жыл бұрын
I agree as well.
@ShatteredPsyche9 жыл бұрын
Thank you both. As a writer, such praise means much.
@UnkemptCube9 жыл бұрын
ShatteredPsyche Yup, would've definitely been a more impactful climax. I never do understand how a character could write down their own death.
@wreathofpalmaria9 жыл бұрын
***** WE are our minds. Our mind is us. what our minds "make" us do is what we "WANT" to do.
@sarahjustsarah36409 жыл бұрын
For a minute there, I thought the main character would survive because the beast wanted to make more little monsters with him. But this was not the case, which makes the title take on a new meaning for me. Pervy puns aside, this one was fun. The narrator has a lovely voice, and I love it when a story has more than one voice actor involved.
@therealsmalk9 жыл бұрын
I would give this a 6/10. The first three-fourths of the story were pretty good, but the ending was a major disappointment. If it had ended with something like, the creature smiling and saying "Nobody comes up here..." might have been good. Otherwise, I enjoyed this.
@therealsmalk9 жыл бұрын
***** Yeah, that could have made it more interesting.
@Athen2399 жыл бұрын
***** I was thinking that too!
@jasonscarborough949 жыл бұрын
This guys' a real Lovecraft protagonist, in over his head, and to busy trying to describe the indescribable to save himself.
@bruggeman6726 жыл бұрын
Maybe because he knows that is all he is leaving behind.....
@rewatteefroimchuk85895 жыл бұрын
The story was very fast paced and i enjoyed the performances, thank you CTFDN!💐💐💐💐💐💐
@cpthetas4888 жыл бұрын
in the begging he's like "why did we come up here If you don't know the way down" I'm like why did you come with him in the first place if it's such a bad idea? honestly it was kind of annoying
@flutter7bee9 жыл бұрын
I listen to your channel for bedtime stories
@kimmoxie21609 жыл бұрын
Same! :)
@osaniss9 жыл бұрын
Kimberly Howard me too :D
@Seth-ng5oy9 жыл бұрын
Åsa Persson Me Three =D
@DarkState29 жыл бұрын
same except I keep listening to these stories and never actually get to sleep lol
@catsngigz23 жыл бұрын
WOW. I was 17 when all of this happened 😭😭 Was taking a trip down memory lane and came across this. Can't listen to it all the way because I cant stop cringing 🥲🥲 And yes I agree with the comments here about the ending. Dont know what the hell I was thinking when I added the last few sentences in the spur of the moment. We live and we learn!!
@chillingtalesfordarknights3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for stopping by after all these years, Sumaiyah!
@catsngigz23 жыл бұрын
@@chillingtalesfordarknights No problem! Still love your channel the same after all these years 😁😁
@chillingtalesfordarknights3 жыл бұрын
@@catsngigz2 If you're still writing new material, go ahead and submit it sometime! We'd love to see how much you've grown as a writer! www.creepypastastories.com/submissions/
@Mrabdullahmaw9 жыл бұрын
That's a wonderful story, a deserving winner. Congratulations.
@brittanyr94718 жыл бұрын
Hells yes. I don't know why, I can't explain it, but I love James Cleveland. I'm kind of new to CTFDN but I've heard him on the NoSleep Podcast and I've always loved his narration
@chillingtalesfordarknights8 жыл бұрын
+Brittany Rose He is quite amazing.
@kickster4u8 жыл бұрын
+Chilling Tales For Dark Nights So, do you come here often.
@ClaireSunshine7 жыл бұрын
Love how they wrote this story and all, AFTER they died.
@richmattshouseofhorrors.75058 жыл бұрын
I love these short horror stories they're great. I'd love to see some of them get made into feature length movies.
@WitchidWitchid6 жыл бұрын
Now children... Leave That one for MOMMYEEEEEEEE !!
@danielross67449 жыл бұрын
I like this guys accent . Great narration
@ashleytallman15248 жыл бұрын
that is GREAT I LOVED IT!!!! the narrator has like that scary tone....that goes with this story....and it makes it even more that scary.....great work....that is a damn trippy story.....
@projectvalkyrie45369 жыл бұрын
Amazing story, very chilling.
@adamheintz19907 жыл бұрын
Really? THAT won best story?
@bearlyevenhuman3 жыл бұрын
Round of applause. Genuinely enjoyed it
@hunterjackson81858 жыл бұрын
props to whoever wrote this it was pretty creative
@brandonbradley74238 жыл бұрын
James sounds like Ramsay Snow from Game of Thrones. Slight lisp and British accent perhaps attributed to it but it was fun picturing Ramsay trotting through the woods in this story.
@douwantsumfukincocaine65787 жыл бұрын
Awesome!
@YKOPDEKOY9 жыл бұрын
Read this one on the website... Great audio and narration.!! Awesome !!! Keep up the good work guys.
@mizzmini457 жыл бұрын
Finally a good story!!!
@oliverthompson35597 жыл бұрын
"I think we lost alice!" one minute later: "hey where's alice??"
@tonyromero30504 жыл бұрын
Great horror story through and through. This 1 ends like a horror story should end. I really like this story I don't know if I made that point yet. !lol
@karencomette27832 жыл бұрын
All my favourite actors in this one
@robsantana399 жыл бұрын
My brother won 2nd place in august 2014 contest. I liked his a lot more due to the Lovecraftian undertones, but I enjoyed this one immensely, minus the ending, of course.
@CaptainFrightNite9 жыл бұрын
Amazing job to both writer and everyone involved. Amazing as always. :)
@shanefinn52369 жыл бұрын
great story
@WALKUREX3 жыл бұрын
CCP approves of your narration and will not be censoring your content
@geoffreyfey33753 жыл бұрын
I've listened to this story for years and for some reason I always thought he was saying "Charnal Mountain" and I'd always think to myself--"Yeah, if you're going to someplace called Charnal Mountain/Slaughter Valley/Decapitation Peak I don't know why you'd be surprised if it was a dangerous place"
@dallasstar937 жыл бұрын
I just subscribed and this is spooky amazing!!^_^
@CherrykoRock9 жыл бұрын
It was a good tale except for the end. Written POV issues not withstanding it was oddly paced. Plenty of good build up and tension along with some nice atmosphere ultimately bogged down with what I feel is a rushed ending. Now that my plot grievances are out of the way the descriptions and actual writing were very well done and it was easy to imagine the location as well as character details. It's an awesome effort nonetheless and I hope they keep writing and improving their craft!
@ulyssesnorth68439 жыл бұрын
good listen
@johngalt9697 жыл бұрын
"There woz like masssiv number of trees ay." went a bit east end there for a tick. Ok, maybe it's not the narrator, but rather the writer who keeps dropping 'a'. A massive number of trees. Etc.
@stanleymk19baum148 жыл бұрын
awsome but... the ending. if everyone died where dose the story come from. hows it being told. messes up the submersiveness alittle but damn good job guys that was good work.
@uruku7779 жыл бұрын
How was he able to tell the story?
@HisDudeness20206 жыл бұрын
Great story! My only question is, if the narrator was eaten, how is he telling the story???🤔
@tmrezzek57288 жыл бұрын
Good story for ages 5 - 8. However, for Walking Tree entertainment, I highly recommend a movie called 'From Hell It Came' (1957) which has a MUCH cooler tree, because in the movie the tree is not only radioactive, but ALSO tosses people into quicksand while lusting after a female scientist.
@slapstick201249 жыл бұрын
There goes my want to go hiking ............Thanks
@HiggzWasHere9 жыл бұрын
The reading was good but the story itself is lacking alot in my opinion.
@viciousservant51519 жыл бұрын
What a nice story ;u;
@skylermaves72729 жыл бұрын
Take a shot every time the narrator says 'I noticed.'
@syntaxterror94799 жыл бұрын
James sounds like Moss from IT Crowd. :p that's who I keep picturing for this story.
@KDB3499 жыл бұрын
"brad if you don't shut up I'll throw you down the cliff." weird i caught myself thinking the samething lol. then again i wouldn't be stupid enough to involve my friends and myself in that situation, especially not for money.
@davidzamora75169 жыл бұрын
that was definately different well done
@RustyNail58568 жыл бұрын
You guys are very good , you sound like a move theater , it sounds great , I wear headphones with a nice bass to them. you can hear so much better of all the sounds that are there in the background . love the video, it's great. take care.
@helema238 жыл бұрын
i heard them without the head phones.... i paused the video several times before i realized it was the video!
@tashareally39596 жыл бұрын
Super creepy fragilistic extra hellish dopeness
@ginamadison84128 жыл бұрын
i put "walk outside" in the background of this and it was hilarious, by the way love this narration
@helema238 жыл бұрын
the milo and otis one?
@wadejohnston4305 Жыл бұрын
Okay Brad and EVERYONE else went up WITH MC KNOWING no ones been up there and that finding a way back down would be hard but they wait until THEYRE AT THE TOP to start voicing concerns😂😅
@jodystande-robbins52787 жыл бұрын
creapy good story
@DoctorKandosii8 жыл бұрын
Damn, I'm really peckish now.
@Derskorpion857 жыл бұрын
Nice music
@michelleb46837 жыл бұрын
Brad sounds a bit like Dan from Dan Vs.
@johngalt9697 жыл бұрын
Well. That was definitely a crappypasta.
@shandathegreatandpowerfulo48226 жыл бұрын
Her tummy gets really good wifi apparently 🤣🖤
@jhart199639 жыл бұрын
I was thinking. Do you think you could get TJ Kirk(TheAmazingAtheist) to do a CTFDN'S narration? He seems to have a very interesting story teller voice.
@luciusiluvatar73579 жыл бұрын
Don't feed the trolls, mate.
@Foxiepawstotti9 жыл бұрын
Another creepy background shot, I know I said it was the insomnia, but this one has creepy 'faces' too! LOLZ!
@cindydroste49698 жыл бұрын
MY NAME IS JACKSON YEEEEEESSSSSSSS FAV VID NOW
@notoriouswhitemoth6 жыл бұрын
"mountain with a flat top" ...so a plateau? I mean I think they're usually called something rock, not something mountain, but...
@moralityisnotsubjective59 жыл бұрын
That thing kind of looks like the Cloverfield monster.
@thepumpkinlord6439 жыл бұрын
Yeah it does
@johngalt9697 жыл бұрын
A rolex? Really? THat's the most unbelievable part. Why would some kid be wandering in mud with a watch that costs as much as a sports car? This is dumb.
@kentuckywildcatgobigblue71909 жыл бұрын
I agree. It would have been better if the person saw the death of another.
@jupiter55845 жыл бұрын
BRAD IS MAKING ME LAUGH 😂
@KiRiMa646 жыл бұрын
It would 've been hilarious if one of the tree children said in a mocking voice ". I am Groot!"
@cindydroste49698 жыл бұрын
Yes IT IS JAMES CLEVELAND I WILL LIKE NOW
@DennisTate9 жыл бұрын
The narrator sounds a little like Richard Ayoade
@thepumpkinlord6439 жыл бұрын
Am i the only one who has noticed that the pictures are moving? Because when i heard mr trenchfoot and the eyes blinked i got scared shitless
@Squashylemon7 жыл бұрын
The main character sounds like the guy from the IT crowd.
@mrelite85197 жыл бұрын
"Save this one for mummy" And if we refuse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????
@TheBlackDogChronicles5 жыл бұрын
I don't know if this story was written to be read on KZbin, but there are some challenges with the performance. The are times when a quality of the voices is described in the text, but not brought into the performance, like at 6:34, where a voice is supposed to come out "cracked and unconvincing" and simply doesn't. So, this is either a difficulty brought up by the writer unnecessarily forecasting the actor's performance, or the performers not delivering what the text is asking for. There were quite a few examples of this, so that I did not end listening to the conclusion. Also, I found the style too heavy in description and not enough development of empathy for the characters. The enjoyment in such a story is to care for what is going to happen. In my listening, this was not achieved. However, all credit for putting something like this together. It takes a lot of organisation and editing, not to mention the sound design.
@chillingtalesfordarknights5 жыл бұрын
We did what we could, with what we had, where we were at the time. Thanks for listening!
@colea2969 Жыл бұрын
@@chillingtalesfordarknights i like this story
@GoldenWolf1158 жыл бұрын
Brad reminds me of Mr. Green.
@0zmosis20014 жыл бұрын
God there's always a Brad
@chillingtalesfordarknights4 жыл бұрын
Isn't that the truth.
@ezekiellynn32149 жыл бұрын
The creature was so cliche it made me laugh. "Long limbs,extremely tall,unnatural movement". The whole story was pretty cliche really,mysterious news paper,doing something stupid for prize money,the whole "this place is creepy and wrong shit",stuff like that for example. The fact that the leader dies is bogus as well. If he died how does anyone know this story?
@storytellernylan91579 жыл бұрын
By description it reminds me of an old African species of demon know as a intulo, intresting story.
@GlitterGlitter9 жыл бұрын
Is the site down? I can't open it and read along.
@chillingtalesfordarknights9 жыл бұрын
Glitter Glitter It would appear so. We'll look into it as soon as possible.
@GlitterGlitter9 жыл бұрын
Ok, thanks. Still a great video but I just prefer reading along with them.
@livmcdeezy23738 жыл бұрын
When will there be another writing contest?
@frysause9347 жыл бұрын
kind of disappointed it ended so quickly. They didnt even get to the rodents of unusual size.
@Abbeynormal5559 жыл бұрын
I enjoyed this story. And what's wrong with a first person narrative where they die? Why does there always have to be a written account of events? The 'memoir/journal entry" theme gets boring. I say congratulations to the author and hope they continue to write.
@deathbycake76377 жыл бұрын
Lol at first I thought she was going to use him as a mate.
@yandereskitty9 жыл бұрын
I watched a film based on this
@jacktemple2072 Жыл бұрын
Sceptics of how a narrator who died posts his own story, this is easy obviously. The monster allowed the narrator time to write out and proof read the story, ate them and posted it online. Probably reddit.
@sirsciencealot87548 жыл бұрын
Well, that was dark AF. But that's why I came here, right ;) time for milk and cookies
@bombermanefx9 жыл бұрын
And that boys and girls why carry a boom stick whenever we go to unexplored location.
@richardbarker66157 жыл бұрын
The witch sent the story to the magazine.
@roy5al7 жыл бұрын
Rule number one of writing a creepypasta or the like, is to never kill off the narrating character. That was what ruined this story for me, because he can’t be telling his story if he’s dead.
@NoxForest9 жыл бұрын
It kinda reminds me of Coraline. The Other Mother.
@markodenbrett21635 жыл бұрын
At the end when he said he screamed as loud as he could it sounded more like he creamed himself
@simonjones91577 жыл бұрын
A good story although they reach the top of a long climb to archive their goal , within the first 5 mins they are fighting about how to get down 😆 lol well you climbed up turn round and climb back the way you came ? It’s a safe bet that anyone who goes on an expedition of any kind doesn’t expect to just call a cab home when they get there . I don’t understand how anyone could have told the story if they all died .
@hunterspence74327 жыл бұрын
All i could think of was Groot from Guardians of The Galaxy
@ranjira78936 жыл бұрын
note to self avoid corrupted Dryads .....
@ninelives47385 жыл бұрын
Brad's a pain in the ass. No one forced him to go along. He could have said No.
@iancuresesfernandez6587 жыл бұрын
i'm never hiking again
@larrybelk92069 жыл бұрын
What did she do, regurgitate him and send him on his way
@crumblers_wisdom64239 жыл бұрын
Can i find these on itunes?
@chillingtalesfordarknights9 жыл бұрын
ProPatria Studios Not currently. We are looking into it. Our own Members Area will be launching soon, though, as well.
@chillingtalesfordarknights9 жыл бұрын
ProPatria Studios Would you be interested in our Members Area?
@crumblers_wisdom64239 жыл бұрын
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights I'll think about it. What exactly does it invlove? Is it just an Online register or something different?
@SaintBrokenDay3165 жыл бұрын
I hate these “oh i died” stories CAUSE HOW ARE YOU TELLING IT TO US???!!!