Poetry in general, is an enjoyable thing. It should roll off the tongue, and appear to sing. But some would strain for an impressive phrase. And get an awkward line, and cause a haze. A little color is fine. But one would hope, That no line is turned into a kaleidoscope. When it's too bright, and not very clear, It gets hard to read, and hard to hear.
@lauraj83895 жыл бұрын
and too easy to fear! 😉 Well done! So true! 🙌
@melrose82136 жыл бұрын
Hi Campbell McGrath! I’m Melissa McGrath! I am a writer as well. Just stopping by to say hello :)
@gerardmcgorian70706 жыл бұрын
More than 40 years ago, one of my great poetry professors used to tell us, "If you want to communicate something, pick up the telephone... but don't make a poem." Someone should have taught this guy that fundamental fact of good poetry.