Reading My Common App Essay! (Stanford, Yale, Princeton Accepted)

Welcome back to my channel! Today I am reading the Common App essay that got me accepted to Stanford, Princeton, Yale, Brown, and RISD!
In a few days I'll be making a "last minute college app tips" video so if you have any questions, leave a comment down below!
Check out my other videos for college app help:
• How I Got Into Stanfor...
• My Art Portfolio // RI...
My college decision reaction video:
• College Decision React...

[@hunl.919]

if you just wanna hear the essay 2:16 - prompt + first paragraph 4:28 - second + third 5:40 - the rest

[@supriyamanna8412]

thanks dude

[@leviosa5580]

Thanks

[@surendarmalai96]

Thanks

[@shreekarunagaran6194]

thank youu

[@user-bf8dp6jj9p]

Incredible essay! Your artworks gives some goosebumps for sure

[@allisonmae3445]

What an amazing essay! Probably the best Common App essay I've heard honestly.

[@nnoouurraa]

Aaah! I've seen the videos you made where u got accepted to mit last year and now that you finished a semester in MIT, I feel so so proud of you! You're amazing!!

[@kellychan7662]

Thank you so much for this! I've been putting off rewriting my common app essay, rereading other examples and doing research rather than focusing on my own writing. Your help-- the four minute rule and your essay (which was the same prompt that I picked) gave me all sorts of new ideas!!! Thank you, I've admired you since your first video because of your unique science plus art angle!

[@ronalds271]

One of the best essays I have seen. It is amazingly brilliant.

[@jeonginlee9314]

could you answer about writing "why this school?"essay? and things you wish you knew when you were applying?

[@skyblaziken4576]

I remember looking at the Science Ambassadors finalists couple months ago and 2 seconds in this video I thought you looked familiar. I checked and there you were! You left such a big impact on me that I remembered someone I watched for ~5 minutes many months ago! I really admire your passion :D

[@GlamourCat1920]

You’re brilliant! Thank you for sharing your essay.

[@AlleEsor28]

YOUR ART IS INCREDIBLE OMG

[@as.3612]

Organizing list of activities, adding life to essays especially why ones

[@worldwidevalerie740]

Hi Eva, I have pretty much read/watched/listened to every single essay out there, but yours is by far my favorite. Your essay feels the least gimmicky and exaggerated. I'm writing this because your video has helped me realize that a good college essay isn't about telling the most dramatic story... I just submitted my last application and I am super panicky, so I guess here I am again watching your video to calm down :)

[@tomcat1112k]

i liked your thoughts...it really helps...i should try too, to visualise a vision and describe it in my essay

[@mollychen9567]

Loved your essay! Do you have any tips on what we shouldn’t be including in our essays?

[@soumyasingh2526]

Wow! Your essay was beautiful.

[@pepsicola1039]

Thank you, it was amazing!!!

[@Nick-un2cq]

Great essay EVA! Loved every word of it!

[@c-weed28]

Nice essay! Do you think that one should keep the topics in their common app and supplemental essays completely separate?

[@fatimaalmisfer4352]

you should write books and novels,you seriously are one of a kind,you've left me in awe.love how you write

[@jared.porter]

This was great!

[@soup712]

wow!!!!!! you inspire me :)

[@jackholman5008]

i am simple kid that essay belongs in a museum

[@belelegualele6827]

Hi Eva! Do u have any tips for supplemental essays?

[@talk_no_jutsu3111]

I have a stupid question out here :D What if I write about two 4-minutes instances in my life that are closely linked and show how I shift from a point to b.

[@giraso_L]

Not sure if this is too late, but any topic works, as long as you show them how you grow

[@joelbeckles3490]

Any tips for the MIT essays?

[@as.3612]

Personalizing application to have fuller picture

[@triciam1314]

Hi! We’re you interviewed for any of the Ivy leagues when you applied?

[@immortalphoenix1752]

Can u share ur princeton supplements

[@S1mplesPvP]

wooh!

[@samaybhattacharyya1118]

Looks like a passage from SAT's History reading section 🤔

[@catastrophe2155]

What is your major?

[@annawolfe2006]

do a MIT dorm tour!!

[@wishIKnewHowToLove]

:)