Starlight, Are We Friends or Not? [MLP Grimdark Reading]

[@jaiden5941]

This GrimDark fanfiction reminds me of the final scene in the horror film "The Mist," where a father had only enough bullets to mercy kill all but himself in a group of those struggling to survive in an apocalyptic environment. Mere moments later, a rescue team arrived.

[@Sparrow9642]

That's what it's based off of. Good job catching the reference!

[@Alexandria87]

The first thought that came to my mind was "The Mist" when I heard the ending! Still gets to me to this day.

[@yrrosmi3303]

Ohhh I feel so bad for Starlight now, the guilt will always follow her now ;-;

[@Jeffthecreepyastafan]

All she had to do was wait...but her empathy for her friends pain ironically killed Trixie instead of helping her

[@MischiefHowlVA]

went from grimdark to river of tears... I wasn't ready for that

[@darkblightballas7445]

Perfect Cell :The great and powerful Trixie died as she lived. Gohan: fighting? Perfect cell: Alone

[@archeishere1]

Trixie:Are we friends?... Starlight:No... Trixie: :( Starlight:Were Best friends That what should of happened

[@leilanivaughan-williams3038]

I thought by the title it was gonna be Starlight trying to kill Trixie XD

[@leilanivaughan-williams3038]

But, this way, it's so ironic XD

[@Sparrow9642]

Leilani Vaughan-Williams Well, you were kinda on the right track, seeing she didn't kill Trixie, but freed her of suffering

[@leilanivaughan-williams3038]

I expected she was gonna just torture her for no reason, one of those stories XD

[@rosieblue1242]

Same

[@sarahkohl9648]

For some reason, I thought that too

[@RAC00NFANGIRL]

*cries* Great powerful trixie dead she could've been saved.

[@darkblightballas7445]

Shadow Force that is why it was so funny

[@trixiegamez8553]

@@darkblightballas7445 excuse me

[@animatedcheese6828]

Let it be known that....the day I realized that trixie is one of my favorite background ponies I find this story

[@Sparrow9642]

animated cheese She's one of my favs too, it's just that I like writing darker content

[@animatedcheese6828]

Agreed I'm working on one called predator instinct It revolves around how anon reacts going from a omnivore-a creature who eats both plants and meat To a herbivore He slowly loose his body strength and resorts to drastic measures of survival

[@animatedcheese6828]

Sparrow 9642 heeeeeeeey Look it's the first time we ever talked Wooooooo...... I'm very bored

[@Juju_Invokation]

When Twilight mentioned it was very curable my heart broke even more..

[@hedgehogwithrabies6680]

“Rash Of Horse” HA! funny c:

[@JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing]

This is probably the scariest audio reading I've ever heard (and no I don't typically listen to grimdarks or any extreme horror stories in general). Up until the part where the cause of the flesh-eating disease was brought up, I was assuming that you probably based it off of a flesh-eating disease that has plagued people in real life (boy would that have made the story more horrifying and probably a bit better if _that_ were the case), still everyone did a good job in this reading!

[@wondergirl2533]

I think you are amazing and i could listen to you for hours

[@Sparrow9642]

Wonder girl Awww thank you :)

[@wondergirl2533]

Your welcome

[@IcyFir3902]

A simple sentence. But powerful. A perfect symbolism.

[@ZGuy0fSci]

Was thinking "itching powder goes bad" but that also works I guess? Needs some grammatical work done where things are repeated repeatedly but as a whole is ok.

[@thestraywonderer]

I just remembered they can fucking time travel the great and powerful Trixie died for nothing

[@aidenpoketrainer9280]

.... maybe I shouldn't be eating whilst listening to this

[@nevaehlove5960]

I feel so bad for Trixie who agrees with me?

[@ellathecat4775]

I did :3

[@trixiegamez8553]

Yay

[@dariustucker1690]

I love how you put this horror story and I got to say I have to give it too you man your Awesome!!!😝🤘

[@notarealspy4090]

If you were to combine most mlp dark fics and creepypastas... everywhere would be in ruins

[@thinkwithvideos3310]

Trixie may have been the most selfish pony, but i dont want to see her die😢

[@starlightglimglam]

I know this is five years old but I'm sobbing my eyes out

[@OmegaFox09]

I’d love to see the next move of the MLP fandom, Animating any fanfics (well except clop fics 😒). I’d love to see this animated

[@josephrenshaw5609]

the back ground just reminded me of the comic with that coffee dog saying its fine

[@sweetstepstudio6069]

So sad! But this was really good!

[@Sparrow9642]

Thank you, the story was meant to be both sad and dark at the same time :)

[@PPEFwatch]

dude no, that's so sad. i'm about to cry

[@777Rowen]

Good lord poor Trixie & Starlight. :(

[@lordmagorius4091]

Ok, but that end was kind of funny. no? Just me? That is fine.

[@mrliminal6247]

the end is me rushing at stuff but it tought a great lesson

[@sonicgen20]

Well that was cruel. Bringing up the simple cure too little too late.

[@QueenMeowTigeress]

*grab popcorn* i am ready! *click*

[@1_What_1]

Were you ready?

[@wasilah.tusman3633]

Good as usual! I wish i can do fanart for you... but how does ur oc look? I may also be able to create OC faces for you with more detail and expressions that you can use in your videos, if you like.

[@Sparrow9642]

Wasilah Usman That would be nice, and if you look at my more recent reactions, the pony in the corner of the layout is my OC

[@wasilah.tusman3633]

Sparrow 9642 k thanks

[@quintonjones2699]

Poor Trixie

[@littlepip4014]

so do you think twilight thinks starlight murdered her? or do you think twilight would have known what trixie asked

[@Mistymorning614]

Rest in peace

[@Thedragonlover95]

Kinda gives a Steven King vibe

[@Sparrow9642]

I can understand why it would. The ending was inspired by the tragic ending to "The Mist."

[@Thedragonlover95]

@@Sparrow9642 And it's pretty chilling yet interesting

[@screamingperson999]

The end had me like: O_

[@MobyTheMerpup1852]

Like if you cry every time.

[@MrMicrowaveGecko]

omg I have mixed emoluments I gaged cryed and it reminded me of msumfing

[@mauricemarsh5338]

so are you the one reading this fanfiction or is somebody else doing it for you.

[@mauricemarsh5338]

Snowdoll567 okay so what is this story about because I don't really did.

[@mauricemarsh5338]

Snowdoll567 so what do you voice act with a speaker or a microphone.

[@mauricemarsh5338]

Snowdoll567 what do you edit with.

[@Sparrow9642]

I edit everything, I use Audacity for all of the audio effects you hear in my readings.

[@mauricemarsh5338]

Sparrow 9642 so how did you use it.

[@mysterion9992]

I am extremely mad now why would you wait all this time to go talk to Celestia it's always at the last minute just like that one movie The Mist dude killed his friends and family just as help was right outside

[@Sparrow9642]

Welcome to grimdarks, where fucked up stories do dwell

[@kornellbrown3802]

Could you imagine?

[@РамильАхмедов-и6ю]

Is it me or its an alternative ending of a certain mlp episode?

[@РамильАхмедов-и6ю]

Me when i diidnt watch it:

[@РамильАхмедов-и6ю]

This vid i mean

[@zoewhitehouse5480]

I love this

[@joelcartagena953]

Hello I'm Joel and I think that this is the 1st time I've commented to you so Trixie not that well after all is she?

[@ForgottenDaydreamer]

Green and black? Is Trixie colorblind? XD

[@thunderhorse9974]

the ending was giving me the vibe of Romeo and juliet

[@goodoletomsmom3205]

What's the intro song? It's been driving me crazy looking for it for months

[@Sparrow9642]

It's my own mix made out of a musical piece I use for my readings, you won't find this on KZbin or anywhere else

[@goodoletomsmom3205]

Aw man :( thanks! Do you think you'd ever post it?

[@Sparrow9642]

No, because it's technically not anything of my own creation. Doing that would be disrespectful to the original creator

[@catvsdog224]

Sad

[@yuki_tsuki2000]

😥

[@archeishere1]

What caused her to rot?

[@candiwolffe2467]

Trixie sounds so reeal

[@kaletheshy9789]

Good story and sad

[@benoertlel3951]

Best Video

[@jhock775]

I am Fan of Trixie Lulamoon I like Trixie. I Don't Like Trixie Die. Trixie my Favorite Pony and I like Derpy Hooves. Starlight Glimmer. Trixie Lulamoon. Octavia Melody. Pinkamena Diane Pie and Limestone Pie. Marble Pie. Maud Pie. Obsidian Minkie Pie. and Igneous Rock Pie (Pinkie Father) Cloudy Quartz Pie (Pinkie Mother) oh and Dinky Hooves (Derpy Daugther). Doctor the 10th (Time Turner) (Derpy Friend). and LittlePip From Fallout Equestria. The Master (Doctor Friend) Vinly Scratch (Octavia Friend) Button Mash and Button Mom. this all my Favorite Pony. I don't like them to die. so please don't make story pony die try something else to other pony to die or princess celestia to die yeah try celestia I like her. so bye. good luck.

[@Sparrow9642]

joey hock You aren't my mother, this is what I enjoy doing, and if you don't like it, why are you here? It clearly says it's a grimdark

[@jhock775]

How! you know my Name?.

[@Sparrow9642]

Um... Are you on poison joke?

[@jhock775]

What? NO! how you know my name have we meet?.

[@Sparrow9642]

It adds your name to the reply option, plus it's visible in the comment section.

[@M.W.K6996]

Such a tragedy.

[@Sparrow9642]

M .W. K Yup

[@25_Hour_Productions]

Well, what did i expect from a Grimdark.

[@dogdog442]

That was so sad😞

[@RexWolf333]

Bro just give here some fucken Oxy or Dilaudid or something like that to help with the pain for a bit man

[@ourlittletribe4557]

No this can't be happening trixe no what she's dead crud crud crud crud 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

[@trixiegamez8553]

I... Just...

[@xXx_zabloing_xXx]

i was eating . . .

[@xXx_zabloing_xXx]

great video btw :D

[@Sparrow9642]

Adham Khaled Lol, I warned you

[@Sparrow9642]

Adham Khaled Thank you :)

[@bloodbatpony7570]

That wasn't really that scary. It is was just sad.

[@candiwolffe2467]

oml

[@jhock775]

oh and King Sombra I like King Sombra He the Best. and Discord is Cool. so yeah Bye again.

[@8milesthatway861]

HA HA HA!