Scholarship Essay: Format, Examples and Don'ts

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The Scholarship System

The Scholarship System

Күн бұрын

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@hello-nr2jz
@hello-nr2jz 11 ай бұрын
1. Get emotional, but not too much. 2. Meet requirements (aka word count, answer all questions, deadline) 3. Don't talk about overdine words (Percevierance, resilience, hardworking) 4. Don't use filler words. (Don't be wordy!) 5. Remove dead words like (Clearly, Obviously, Perhaps, somewhat, I believe, I think) 6. Remove unnecessary transitional words. 7. Proof read the essay. Yourself, and other qualified people.
@Fartun20225
@Fartun20225 9 ай бұрын
This helps thank, bt why do u think I have to remove dead word
@ericgol7
@ericgol7 8 ай бұрын
perseverance*
@Scrubsfordays_withMia
@Scrubsfordays_withMia Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much I've been procrastinating on writing a scholarship essay for this particular scholarship and these tips are super useful to help me just get started in general I have one scholarships in the past but for some reason this scholarship that I'm proceeding to apply to it's just very intimidating😂❤😅
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem Жыл бұрын
If you tell yourself that you'll work on the essay for 5 minutes, it won't seem so daunting. You may work on it longer, but 5 minutes gets you to at least look at it and brainstorm ideas. Once you create your first rough draft, it will be a lot easier to work with.
@Scrubsfordays_withMia
@Scrubsfordays_withMia Жыл бұрын
My essay don't is don't copy and paste the essay and put in another essay Yes you can reuse essays for what people forget to do is tweak it and edit it so that the old essay fits to do as a prompt and word requirements
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem Жыл бұрын
Correct. Thanks for sharing!
@noahmurtland
@noahmurtland 5 ай бұрын
Applying for scholarships post high schools finally able to go back to school
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 3 ай бұрын
That's great!!
@tnyecampos6695
@tnyecampos6695 10 ай бұрын
Thanks so much i'll definitely use these tips!!
@dylanpickIe
@dylanpickIe 10 ай бұрын
Hi, this video helped a lot and made me rethink on how to write my essay. I am writing an essay about, "How has catholicism impacted my life?" in 1000 words. Do I write it in MLA format? Am I also allowed to include type of like bible verses in my essay? Thank you very much.
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 10 ай бұрын
When quotes are used it uses up many words of the essay. It's best to share and reflect your personal story rather than rely on quotes/versus. That will make for a much stronger and impactful essay.
@tinanyarkoa3137
@tinanyarkoa3137 Жыл бұрын
Hi I have gained admission and funding is a challenge. I have been assigned about 30 essays to write and qualify to fund my education. Please help.
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem Жыл бұрын
Check out our article on re-using essays. This may be helpful: thescholarshipsystem.com/blog-for-students-families/how-to-reuse-scholarship-essays-the-right-way/
@sharonkemboi193
@sharonkemboi193 8 ай бұрын
Even I just got admission at NYFA
@insertchannelnamehere2632
@insertchannelnamehere2632 18 күн бұрын
Hello, I need to write an essay for the recent NHS scholarship. I’m not sure where to start
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 16 күн бұрын
Start by outlining your essay using the format and examples in the video. It's good to start with your goals and what you hope to achieve with this scholarship.
@casey5669
@casey5669 7 ай бұрын
I have question is it okay if I use Grammarly for scholarship essay?
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 6 ай бұрын
Yes. To review misspellings and grammar, Grammarly is a great tool!
@irfanchoudhry3227
@irfanchoudhry3227 12 күн бұрын
HI Jocelyn I hope you would be fine when you read my comment. Jocelyn I am from Pakistan. I am award winner progressive sales professional. I have a diverse experience of 8+ years in sales which i started right after my bachelors in business administration in 2016 and also joined MBA with the job and completed it in 2017. the medium of instructions and mode of communication has been English in my whole educational period. I am seeking scholarship abroad but everyone tells me that such study gap is not appreciated in scholarship application. so my first question is that is the study gap with job experience justified or not? secondly I serve Oxford University Press as Assistant Manager Sales in Pakistan. OUP is a department of Oxford University UK, would my job experience have any positive weightage in my scholarship application. I am identified as a biker boy, a debater an orator, a singer and also present in the annual conferences of my company. I have also supervised Sports events of my company as a team captain. my career progression also shows promotions and awards. Usually competent consultants arent available, one cannot assess if he/she is eligible for scholarship. I need your kind guidance and support. looking forward to hear from you soon
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 12 күн бұрын
Our content is for students living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to find resources for international students. Good luck!
@supermax5000
@supermax5000 11 ай бұрын
If we are doing an essay that requires research on a topic, do we have to include citations and works cited since we don't know it?
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 10 ай бұрын
That would be the best practice, however, you may want to contact the scholarship organization for advice on how to cite resources as they may prefer a different format.
@ninawatkins4741
@ninawatkins4741 Жыл бұрын
Hi is membership all through college?
@Fatima-ol4iy
@Fatima-ol4iy 11 ай бұрын
Hi. I have to write a scholarship essay of 500 words regarding medine. What should i do
@esoradrose
@esoradrose 11 ай бұрын
1. Do research about medicine 2. Brainstorm ideas on a piece of paper 3. Choose a topic 4.structure the essay 5. Write the essay 6. Proofread and then submit
@esoradrose
@esoradrose 11 ай бұрын
Hope this helps
@Saudkhan40
@Saudkhan40 3 ай бұрын
Can we use AI yow write essay?😮
@istoleyourtoast8037
@istoleyourtoast8037 3 ай бұрын
No 😭tf
@TheScholarshipSystem
@TheScholarshipSystem 3 ай бұрын
Check out our video on this topic: kzbin.info/www/bejne/qoSll62abpJobrcsi=P2PegWqhZ_ucDj-y
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