Always with the shoulder slams against zombies. The first dozen or so stories it was mildly amusing. Now it’s getting old. Mostly because- 1. “Shoulder slams” aren’t really a thing in real life. The average person isn’t even considering such an attack. So including it in these fictional scenarios make them even less believable because they’re dealing with these monsters. 2. NO ONE is shoulder slamming a zombie. “Yeah. Let me attack in a way that literally puts me in a potential zombie embrace and puts my face and neck within biting range of the creature” Again I say- swap out the “shoulder slam” in your AI story generating algorithm with “straight kick to the chest”. Much more realistic. Arguably would generate much more force. WAY more likely for a person to do. The natural revulsion people would have towards these creatures you’d see a kick.
@TrangleC2 сағат бұрын
Wonder how many of those weirdly enthusiastic commenters here are bots? This is Dead Internet Theory. AI made content with a fake bot audience.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor2 сағат бұрын
Human written story, just an AI narrator.
@donovanlemons25092 сағат бұрын
ANOTHER ONE LETS GO!🫡🫡
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor2 сағат бұрын
Hope you enjoy!
@johnjanuary29583 сағат бұрын
As always excellent work and thank you so much
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor2 сағат бұрын
Thank you so much for listening! Glad you enjoyed it!
@sarahelmore7573 сағат бұрын
These short stories are perfect they help me get through the boring parts of my day❤
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 сағат бұрын
I'm glad they help! I'll have another one for you next week too!
@stevetabor90463 сағат бұрын
You could do a series called bar stories
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 сағат бұрын
I thought about that and have the stories be way over the top as the teller embellished their tale.
@notenote20044 сағат бұрын
Strong and empowered female character?
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 сағат бұрын
To an extent. Capable and rises to the occasion, but it's not an overpowered survival story if that makes sense.
@who3463 сағат бұрын
Lucky and maybe very observant ...
@Erasmustherobot4 сағат бұрын
Cool bottle episode, I live for the living dead.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 сағат бұрын
Thank you! I'll have another one next week!
@icame2showu4 сағат бұрын
Derek my man. I’ve been letting your videos build up so I can spend a full day listening to the smooth cool voice and fan-fucking-tastic story telling. Literally about to binge dead America today. Can’t wait to hear what you cooked up in these videos!!!!!
@Erasmustherobot3 сағат бұрын
😁 I do that too, I sometimes listen to some _inferior_ zombie stories that repeat the same phrases or are written by a moron. Then I will listen to these because they are funny, tragic, scary, and just full of world building that is interesting and compelling when you fall into them. I'll think of the nurse, the kid from the lab that's the only scientist that can work on the cure, the guy with the burned face and his sister. These characters have juice. And these stories are really light on the "H and K firing 5.5 N.A.T.O subsonic round hollow points through handmade suppressors" thing. Not that it's bad, but sometimes it's a substitute for characters. It's like someone decided developed characters aren't as cool as a shopping list. Love me some guns, but it's not always the answer is my thinking. Little zombies have big ears. Anyway, yes I'll have fries with that.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 сағат бұрын
Thank you I appreciate it. Hope you enjoy your marathon!
@sndlady.5 сағат бұрын
YESSSS! a wonderful story to enjoy in this cold day , thank you Sr. You made my day a bit warmer. 😊
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor5 сағат бұрын
My pleasure! stay warm and hope you enjoy!
@sndlady.5 сағат бұрын
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor Sr. You always deliver , and really thank you for your amazing creativity.
@neilkendrick49765 сағат бұрын
still wish i could write as well as you. tho many on youtube try to emulate you derek, they are not you. you're the original & to be admired. be warm, be safe. neil *tip cap, out of respect.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor5 сағат бұрын
Thank you my friend! hope you are doing well!
@neilkendrick49763 сағат бұрын
@@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor meant every single word derek. particularly the bit where i wrote that your work is bein emulated and, most certainly not diluted sir. i reiterate, though often copied, there are few originals, like yourself. they do exist, but, you rate very highly and, that must be recognized.
@rishab0BКүн бұрын
Why are your main female characters always such intolerable smart asses?
@charliechurch5004Күн бұрын
The writer is in his 40s 😅 all his characters are the same age 😅
@charliechurch5004Күн бұрын
Waitressing is NOT a cardio workout 🤣🤣🤣🤣 a 42 year old woman needs a serious workout to get to cardio level. Cardio heart rate is well above 100, its like 120 or so if ur heartbeat is going that high weighting tables there is a serious problem 🤡🤣
@charliechurch5004Күн бұрын
A cardio workout 😅 no
@craiggillett59852 күн бұрын
Fantastic short stories , love this one.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor2 күн бұрын
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
@VladmirPoopN2 күн бұрын
Why are so many southern people doing horror stories
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor2 күн бұрын
Can't speak to others, but I love me some zombies, so I made this series.
@dudehi33173 күн бұрын
Love these short story's great job wens the next big series part and we're will it take place
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 күн бұрын
Thank you! I have a couple more of these short stories plotted out that I'm going to do, but I'm putting together a big series that should start right after that. I'm thinking it's going to be an interconnected series of standalones, similar to what NYC and Lexington was, but it's going to be set at the Outer Banks in North Carolina. That's where I went on vacation last year and it sparked a lot of ideas I wanted to explore.
@AtomicBird-z4 сағат бұрын
@@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor I’m from Lexington and loved those!!!!
@buddykaiser23803 күн бұрын
This is a genuine question: do subway cars not have emergency breaks anymore? Let me also add that this is a good story. Would like to see something a little longer too in the same zombie universe you've written here. Haven't gotten to the end yet so maybe a continuation of these characters and if not maybe some new characters in the same world as this.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 күн бұрын
there's roughly 340 hours of stories set in this zombie universe on the channel! check out the playlists page, which has the main series, an 18 part standalone series, as well as dozens of standalone shorts like this story.
@buddykaiser23802 күн бұрын
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor sweet. This was my first. I'll definitely check them out. I always have a zombie apocalypse book playing while I'm working. I'm glad for new material because believe me I've listened to a looooot of them. Lol
@katesmiles42083 күн бұрын
Good story. Refreshing to have a capable lead character. 😊
@CRESCENTII19683 күн бұрын
I grew up in Baldwin Harbor lol
@ZombieMisa3 күн бұрын
I love all of them. Some times I wish we would get a continuation of some of the smaller ones. Like I wanna know what happens to some of them. I also miss Danta and Zion. Like I'm dying for more of them.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor3 күн бұрын
I have plans for a followup series down the line picking up the stories in the 2nd month with some of these. Going to be a little while tho
@craiggillett59853 күн бұрын
Love this one
@bearjawhomestead4 күн бұрын
That was cool
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor4 күн бұрын
Thank you! Just trying out some different ideas with this series.
@juliewright43324 күн бұрын
The only thing I don’t like about these stories is that I have A type blood and I’d be out by day 2 🥲
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor4 күн бұрын
I try to look at the silver lining. Sure I'd be toast, but at least I'd be spared all that running. Haha
@juliewright43324 күн бұрын
@ No way!! I’d love the chance to survive!! I’d enjoy the struggle a little too much.
@boyscout-p3u4 күн бұрын
i kinda wanna see a part 2
@ACTIVAO4204 күн бұрын
Are these AI voice only? Or is the story AI too?
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor4 күн бұрын
It's just an AI voice. The words are all mine. With as much content as I produce, using an AI voice was the only way to have weekly content without going broke, haha.
@JonathanV-e5c5 күн бұрын
Bravo!
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor4 күн бұрын
Thank you!
@EnglishTking5 күн бұрын
Let’s pick up the likes. Thank you Derek
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor5 күн бұрын
Thank you! I appreciate it!
@melissahuffman66305 күн бұрын
Started this Sat. But was unable to finish. So it was what got je thru a Monday at work. Thanks Derek
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor5 күн бұрын
I'm glad it helped you get through your Monday! hope you enjoyed it!
@craiggillett59855 күн бұрын
Shit I really enjoyed this, upped my notifications for all.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor5 күн бұрын
Thank you so much! I'll have another one for you on Saturday!
@Erasmustherobot6 күн бұрын
"Y'all know I right here, right?" Too damn funny.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
Haha thank you!
@jhg576 күн бұрын
You are one talented fella Derek - thx for another great story
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
Thank you so much! I'll have another one for you next weekend!
@michelelyons94106 күн бұрын
absolutely terrific story! but it kind of sucked that one of them got bit and you ended it before we know what happened.
@DiegoOrtiz-pd3xb6 күн бұрын
Reason i like the day zero stories is i can listen to them while im catching up in the playlist and not have a continuity break.
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
I like them too because for the same reason. When I do a main series entry I have to go back and do research to make sure the story is right. With these I can jump right into the chaos.
@craiggillett59856 күн бұрын
Just found these stories and this channel- I love stories from day 1, the whole outbreak and fall of civilisation better than the post apocalypse
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
Thank you! Glad you're here and enjoying the stories. I'm going to have a lot of these early day stories this year, with new ones every saturday!
@juditharbogast33376 күн бұрын
Wow.... Enjoyed this. Good one...
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it
@anoche216 күн бұрын
Yeet
@nizzlebizzle6 күн бұрын
Brother, a request. I know it took alot out of you, but can we get another long tale like Alaska or a continuation of international tales. Not that I do not LOVE the first month( these introduced me to you)
@booksale56 күн бұрын
I second the international! That British one I can still remember well and was super magnetized listening to it. I reckon that took quite a chunk of time and energy. Definitely appreciated!
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
I have ideas for both of those! I have a couple more shorts to do next week, but after that I'll be jumping into a longer story!
@booksale55 күн бұрын
@@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor I’m glad you mentioned longer story because I remember earlier on leaving a comment about biking shorter videos because I listen to them when I’m sleeping and then lose track where I dozed off at one and so forth but finally KZbin has a timer function! It might be a premium feature, but it’s worth it in my opinion, watching KZbin without the premium feature is like having a pager before cell phones. I’ll have to go back and start listening to those episodes. But I have to admit, after being spoiled with human narrators and some AI that has a bit more intonation inflection so on and so forth, it might be a hard one to do. I think what’s most cringe is when There is a point in the dialogue which is either sad or exciting or something with an! And the AI reads it as monotone as anything else. I can’t emulate it, but it’s like that boring science teachers that reads the same throughout the whole thing “and then Andy called out to Andrew “you have to jump now!”
@thebuddha42086 күн бұрын
OK I guess we’re gonna move straight past that guys kids😅 18:13
@thebuddha42086 күн бұрын
Every weapon is going to make a sound and give away your position except slingshots Bowen arrow use a sling shot/wrist, rocket with steel ball bearings 3/4 of an inch straight into the zombies brain the only sound is them hitting the ground 16:52
@thebuddha42086 күн бұрын
Now there’s a story, the garbageman cleaning up the city, one zombie at a time, tossing them in the back of the truck
@davidsteele95596 күн бұрын
Thank you Derek!!
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
My pleasure! Hope you enjoy!
@barbara52306 күн бұрын
Wow my old stomping grounds ! Thanks for this one dear 😄
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
My pleasure! Hope you enjoy!
@ginjersnapz90456 күн бұрын
Your stories are the bright spot of my week
@DerekSlatonHorrorAuthor6 күн бұрын
I'm glad you enjoy them! And glad to know I'm brightening up your week. I'll be back next week with another one (and some longer ones in the not too distant future!)