Everyone Left This Helpless Alien Race to Die, Except the Humans! | Best HFY Stories

[@DominionDesire]

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[@jojofarley4511]

Y'all know that the name of the little aliens, though hilariously funny, was spelled wrong mos every time..koreans, deloreans..etc real funny tho🤣

[@neiska25]

Mice people: "Our SOS has been received, but there's a strange sound beaming back." Mouse Elder: "Put it on speaker?" Humans: (Free bird playing)

[@DominionDesire]

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[@jerikoloki6713]

YYYYYYEEEEAAAAAHHHH!!!!! 💥 🐁 🖲

[@aladoc6832]

Yyyyyeeeeesssss!!!!!!

[@DarthGibberish]

A1: Why is it just music? A2: Why is it getting faster? A3: Dunno...slaps though.

[@seanboggs215]

They should've learned that, when humans are faced with adorable creatures getting harmed, we all collectively turn into John Wick.

[@guardianangel7589]

Yo, what happened to that ungodly powerful empire? Oh, you know, they started killing cute things and Humanity took exception to that.

[@iBeReaper]

Ok that got me to laugh way to damn loud 😂😂

[@DragonRider-pj4qs]

Youre not wrong look at any dnd party or anyone playing fallout. You touch dogmeat or the parties chosen pet the warcrimes start

[@jewelplate]

@@guardianangel7589 Uh they accidentally kicked one of the inhabitants of the puppy planet and some guy called john killed billions with a pencil

[@astolfrodolfo9868]

HOLY SHIT! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AFTER READING THAT!! I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT IT'S PROBABLY BECAUSE IT'S TRUE

[@XtreemAlan]

Small alien creature: *exists* Humanity: *in Jamaican accent* I would like to pet this small creature

[@rogaldorn1965]

Yeah, Vulcan would LOVE to boop their snoots.

[@ashipthattriestobotheryou4759]

Too bad Big E made everyone xenophobic…

[@Careonovam]

VULCAN LIIIIVES! * stomp stomp stomp *

[@jamesgarrett5218]

Loved reading the captions. The rodents were called Deloreans, Koreans, Libyans, Dilurians, Bulgarians. All comical.

[@pcdeltalink036]

The planet's name was equally hilarious on how many ways the captions figured out Lurics V or however it is spelled.

[@victoriakiteley8337]

Then don't read it, listen to it. You want to read pick up a book 😊

[@jamesgarrett5218]

@@victoriakiteley8337 Intelligent people can watch, listen and read simultaneously. Captions were intended to be comical.

[@victoriakiteley8337]

@@jamesgarrett5218 and those with greater intelligence than that, use these platforms to get through daily chores or have something to listen to while relaxing. Oh and I know they're meant to be comical 😊, have a nice day.

[@paradoxnemesis]

lmfao

[@ShadowWolfRising]

'Looks at the picture.' Yeah that tracks, humanity would DEFINITELY help them.

[@Allantitan]

No hurt furry babies

[@hagamapama]

The hard part would be convincing humans not to bring a few home.

[@ShadowWolfRising]

@@hagamapama I think alot of People on Earth would be fine with allowing them to immigrate to Earth. Especially given their technology expertise.

[@brittany8002]

Right? Humans would be like super smart, adorable creatures who basically learn for everyone else? Yeah. We're bestie now

[@hagamapama]

@@brittany8002 Well that, and we fought alongside them. Even if we didn't see them as pets, we'd see them as brothers in arms. Half the human race would want to give them ear skritches, the others would want to see how their metabolisms process human beer. Seriously, respect to these little ankle bruisers. Where we come to the table with natural strength, speed and endurance, they faced something that was giving humans a hard time and survived, armed only with wits, technology and sheer determination, and they were giving as good as they were getting in the end there. Humans would respect the hell out of them after that. Not warrior's bodies but warrior's souls. Yeah they'd be welcome on Earth anytime. Hell, since the disease that laid the Lurians low was strong enough to make a human think twice, we should invite these little badasses to the Galactic Deathworlders Association. If their homeworld wasn't a deathworld before it sure as hell is now!

[@spiritofthewolf15x]

They pushed the "harming something that is cute" button, they shouldn't have done that.

[@71tofu]

Almost as bad as the Goku button.

[@hagamapama]

Remember, humans are almost psychotically protective of their young, or anything that vaguely resembles one of their young. So a race that perpetually reminds us of our young, like the Lureans, has a fair bit of influence over us.

[@M-S_4321]

Never touch the "harming something that is cute" button in front of humans. A lot of us will drown that battlefield in blood. Doesn't matter who it comes from.

[@TheCrusaderKing]

Cute things threatened. Humans: And I took that personally.

[@NekuSebas]

ah yes, the strongest evolution trait anything can get: look cute to humans.

[@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ]

Well... it's not wrong.

[@Super-Saiyan-Blue-Gogeta]

Galactic Council honestly got off easy as Humans tend to find overkill solutions when threatened.

[@Questknight12]

Overkill, so really unneeded, so often used. The reasoning, because we intend to make examples, because examples are remembered.

[@zathtanks]

@@Questknight12if its cute overkill doesn’t matter

[@mikesixx7655]

@@Super-Saiyan-Blue-Gogeta there's no kill quite like overkill

[@ImaPseudonym-go6oy]

If it's small, fuzzy and cute, there's a good chance a human is going to bond with it. We'll cheerfully turn each other into worm food on a whim and smile, but god help you if you touch a hair on one of our animal companions, because that WILL unite us.

[@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ]

Me: "grabs a mini gun", so which direction do I shoot to?

[@renz5002]

​@@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ you see that fleet of council ships? We don't like it, we want it gone.

[@thomasmallon9107]

The Galactic Council would learn to fear the three most fearsome words in the universe: "Hold my beer."

[@sheacd1]

Messing with the cute little fuzzballs is just as bad as screwing with the boats.

[@rainsoakedscribe7068]

WHO TOUCHED MY BOAT?!

[@rhorybader4054]

@@rainsoakedscribe7068 I think someone needs a visit from the sun.

[@h1n14lifegaming]

​@@rhorybader4054two visits to be specific.

[@mikesixx7655]

​@@rhorybader4054TWICE!

[@theallies2007]

​@@mikesixx76553. That one was Godzilla lol

[@markosimunic4770]

Mice aliens: why, would you help us? Humans: because i watched redwall!

[@mikesixx7655]

Why are the nukes screaming Eulaliaaaaaaaa?

[@babecat2000]

Yes another Redwall fan

[@DarthGibberish]

47 Brian Jacques novels my furry little friend. That's why.

[@mikesixx7655]

@@DarthGibberish I own them all and have them all signed

[@CursedClaws]

Fuzziness in danger! Raining blood starts playing. Doomslayer mode activated.

[@poisonivystar4]

"They've got us surrounded, the poor bastards."

[@TrikeRoadPoet]

Mess with the fuzzies, and humans get cranky!!!

[@Cranky931]

What?

[@sy4380]

Fuzzie/furries?

[@AhHereWeGo]

If they look like the thumbnail, they are adorable and must be protected at all costs

[@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ]

Agreed

[@meme-bu8qu]

I'm surprised the humans weren't feeling petty toward those that abandoned the mice people.

[@GuukanKitsune]

Listen. We humans are a whole race of friendly jocks who never forget a debt. The Lureans are a whole race of adorable friendly little nerds who have done nothing but help everyone they've ever met. Including us. And you abandoned them. I'll make it simple. You want to abandon them to their fate.. fine. You want to forget all you owe them? Fine. But we won't. That is our choice. We will save them from their fate, or share in it. Because it is the right thing to do. I greatly suggest you don't try and stop us.

[@DarkLordDumbledore]

I hope that is a summary of the story.

[@hagamapama]

If the humans ever decide that some race needs killing, the Lureans are now the only people in the galaxy who might be able to do the kitten eyes and say "Please don't" and we'd stop. They wield enormous power over humans because they now remind us of our better selves. We need that reminder from time to time. Helps us stay peaceful in a world full of irritants great and small.

[@dreadequation7320]

Sorry but this is definitely fiction, intelligence at least here on earth is dictated by predatory behavoir. Proof of this are ourselves and every intelligent creature on the planet, predation=intelligence every successful apex predator are the most intelligent creatures in our eco system like dolphins, seals, tigers, hawks, falcons, chimpanzees, wolves, foxes ect. As the old sayings goes Vae Victus and to victor goes the spoils.

[@dreadequation7320]

@@hagamapama Right like we don't eat cute critters now like rabbits ect.

[@victoriakiteley8337]

​@@dreadequation7320 give them sentience and the ability to talk, and you will see it all change 😊

[@iamnotamouseok]

Ok so there was potential in this story for a twist so obvious I was surprised it never came. The lureans are renowned for their medical advancements. But a strange new disease pops up and they can't handle it. It just "happens to mutate" every time they try to treat it? And the alliance group just cuts them off and leaves them to die, then outright threatens the ones who try to help? And THEN a hostile race just pops out of nowhere to attack? And the lureans have info on them from long ago? This plot is incomprehensible. Here's how I fit it together. The plague wasn't natural, it was designed. A bioweapon. An attack. Either it was designed to adapt, or every time it failed a new version was released. And the council's abandonment was deliberate. The lurean were *supposed* to die. Why would the council throw away such a valuable intelligent race? Because the hostile aliens have an inside man, and they want revenge for that ancient conflict. The lureans extinction and their planet being ripe for the taking was supposed to be some kind of deal with them. But of course the humans are here to throw a wrench in the works. Of course this plot would delve into some kind of political intrigue, like which species among the council sent the virus and made a deal with the hostile race, and what happens to them and their standing in the council, but eh, not my department, I just spun this plot patch for fun òwó

[@DominionDesire]

Wow, that’s a next-level plot twist! I appreciate the creative spin you put on it, really makes you think 👀. Maybe I’ll explore something like that in a future story. And hey, we’re close to hitting 1k subs - would love if you joined us on the way to the milestone! 🚀🔔

[@astolfrodolfo9868]

What happens to the traitorous species? I'll tell you what happens HUMANITY SMASH. I was thinking of something funnier but I can't remember or put it into words so I just went with the classic HULK SMASH deal, Though I suppose depending on the race they would be smashed in another way

[@alkenny7074]

Read John Ringo's "Legacy of the Aldenata" series for a good take on this. :)

[@supertails8881]

Wait hold up, that plot sounds like the same thing what Ultron Shredder did, in 2003 TMNT

[@Frostblitz96]

Itty bitty mouse people in trouble? Yeah, humanity is coming to their aid

[@AmaryInkawult]

Haven't aliens learned not to underestimate Deathworlders with a Death Wish yet?

[@skylerburgess8907]

Please fix your captions bro.

[@JCastle1]

It's a.i.

[@AosorarisuUnedited]

@@JCastle1 Just because it's AI captioning doesn't mean you can't review and correct it after.

[@niaford690]

@@AosorarisuUnedited They leave it to AI so they don't have to do the work. That's why so many of these AI channels have terrible captions and even voicing at times. It also increases viewer interaction, letting their video spread further.

[@georgezwick3717]

@@AosorarisuUneditedthe funniest part is that if this is a short story from HFY the story is already transcribed, it would literally be cut and paste and timing edits.

[@josea.ruizquinones9262]

@@JCastle1i mean, leureans, murians, koreans, lybians, deloreans, lutyans, Lawrence, blueprints, lutyens, limericks, luring, marines, lurien, laurates, Bulgarians

[@nyneeveanya8861]

The voice was real good for this one but if you have a deaf person reading this they will never figure out what is going on. Laureans, Koreans, Delorens fighting with the help of humans against the Zaragoz, Csar Gots, and Zodiacs. While the person reading this stayed with the same name for the different groups the person writing it needs some help or the AI needs some more teaching and upgrades.

[@devonm042690]

Don't forget the blueprints that needed to be able to defend themselves, the large, imposing zigzags, and the once helpless Marines. Oh, and for some reason the Bulgarians are rebuilding their society; 'with human aid' it says, as if Bulgarians aren't human. Either way, not sure why that was seen as important enough to mention.

[@stephaniewilson3955]

@@devonm042690 because it is funny?

[@Teardehawkee]

Save The Mousefolk!!

[@thomascook3336]

Government "nothing can be done, just accept your end like a good servant." Human nature - finds ways to overcome all odds and strengthens allies Governments "why won't you just bend down and die. We don't need good doers in our realm."

[@aladoc6832]

To inspire their forces, commander Holt had them pull up an ancient recording of a human elder from a long time ago, and what was broadcast was the Lurians first introduction to a human named Winston Churchill who told them they would fight on the beaches they would fight on the landing grounds that would fight in the air and they would fight in the seaand I would never ever ever never never ever ever surrender....

[@thewildcolonialboy8034]

Luriks V airlift. When a fleet of freighters airdropped millions of tons of food, medicine, and supplies onto the surface of Luriks V per day for months.

[@edwardroche2480]

If Earth is ever attacked by overwhelming odds I surely hope there is is a better plan than this one, because the deciding battle will happen in more than just one place with more than just one Mothership. Most of the Sci-Fi stories have the planets being saved by a single battle in a shingle place by a dozen earthmen. There will be thousands of these battles on a single planet when it is brought to heel

[@eichzoernchen]

yeah, these narrated battles always seem very two-dimensional and in a very contained area... for an interplanetary conflict that's a bit flat

[@oblivion_rose1889]

@@eichzoernchen So basically most of the clone wars in star wars. Although it's implied that there are planets with multiple battles (like geonosis), most outer rim planets are defended or conquered in very limited battles focused almost exclusively in a single capital city

[@stephaniewilson3955]

Well, with most of the population wiped out by the plague the survivors would have gathered together in one place to try to rebuild.

[@nicholaschisholm7018]

Kinda like ID4, yes the primary heroes did take the mothership, but across the planet the coordinated attack on the city killers went on too

[@SavageShooter93]

I swear at least 30% of this story was simply reiterating how the "humans fought against all odds in defiance of the galactic councils orders" and "The Lurians? who were one thought of as small weak scholars who were written off and forgotten proved themselves" Cut all that redundant rephrasing of the same basic sentences out and the run time would cut by a third.

[@Chris-P.-Bacon-III]

common problem with generative AI... it forgets what's already been established very easily, and will often lose the plot -- the story likely had to be coaxed into the right direction or corrected a few dozen times as it stands. the main reason for that forgetfulness is low working memory. you'd need a server rack full of ram sticks to make it worth its salt. as for losing the plot and a lack of direction... well, that's just generative ai for you, not something that you can really break from. it's interested only in adding words to an incomplete sentence that are statistically valid... and as soon as it decides a sentence is over, the sky's the limit for the next one. it could be LITERALLY anything.

[@cyberpunk4560]

protect little ones

[@strngrdngr6572]

Cuteness The Universe's ultimate weapon!

[@seanboggs215]

"Delusions were no strangers to challenges". *Tries desperately to avoid making chris chan joke*

[@DominionDesire]

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[@absinthe489]

The Koreans got me mufuckin 💀

[@HossBlacksilver]

The Deloreans are masters of cars and time travel.

[@absinthe489]

@@HossBlacksilver lol

[@phuzzychinn]

The planet will break before the Guard will.

[@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ]

FOR THE EMPEROR...No wait, wrong franchise

[@thebuddha4208]

You got time to send military to stop them but no time to send a couple doctors they were using them. They were never friends. 9:37

[@vietcongnva1197]

Ok, but... Can they cook ratatouille? 😂🤣😅😯 🐁🐀🥙🥙🍆🥕🥒🐀🐁🍴🍴🐁☕🐀🍸🍾🐁🐀 😯😋😋

[@martinenglish6641]

I like this story. Thank you for sharing.

[@Plankensen]

Captain Holt? I like to think that every time a Holt shows up in these stories, it's always the same Holt.

[@laurahayes8784]

Probably is. Or a cousin.

[@deadw0rker]

Deloreans, Lureans, Lybians, Koreans, blueprints, Lutyens, Luring. The subtitles are on point! Tbh it got really funny at some point and i bet i missed some words. Loved the story though!

[@DominionDesire]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@DominionDesire]

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[@TheTrueAdept]

This reminds me of some world-building notes from a Traveller/Transhuman Space fusion setting I've been playing with. So, the basic idea is that Solmanity (Earth Humanity) in that setting evolved down the lines of the setting Transhuman Space but discovered many of Grandfather's (aka Science Cthutulu's) 'projects' in the meantime. After the Vilani Imperium's fall and the Orion Mandate's rise (a mix between the 2nd and 3rd Imperium in Traveller lore), a race decided to attack one of the species that was under protectorate status under the Orion Mandate (it's rather inclusive, though there is a process to become proper members and being a protectorate is the start). The Orion Mandate basically said 'stop killing our subjects'. They refused. The Mandate then said, 'Don't make us fight you'. They kept going... and then proceeded to do the Geneva Checklist impression. The Mandate went, 'welp, you asked for it,' and started laying the smackdown on this race... but it came to a head when they deployed biosphere killers on several planets in the warzone. *_THAT_* was the last straw. After a short deliberation, the Armageddon Sanction (aka your race/nation is deemed such a threat to the universe that the only alternative is *_the outright extermination_* of your nation/race, and all the protections of the Standards of War are now out the window, and this was the only time it would be handed out) was levied. The Orion Mandate then proceeded to *_EXTERMINATE_* that race from the universe. Didn't like it, but it had to be done. The rest of the known galaxy looked at each other and were scared *_SHITLESS_* of how far the Orion Mandate was willing to go to end a threat... and decided that the Standards of War is a good thing...

[@brianstocks9724]

Thank you for your hard work!

[@luisnadais8378]

A very touching story 😢

[@rebekahgoss4985]

For those reading the subtitles. You should watch Thor Ragnarok in descriptive audio mode. Man disney turned it in to a comedy 😂😂😂lmao.

[@Erebus369]

Good story - we love our furry little friends

[@Fuxy22]

Such an advanced species shouldn't just have 1 planet... that doesn't make sense... a galactic council should have them all over the place and living on multiple solar systems.

[@DominionDesire]

Great point! Advanced species should definitely spread out. 🚀 If you enjoy these stories, consider subscribing-we're almost at 1k! Thanks for your support!

[@sot1224]

I don't know when you play tall you don't tend to expand

[@joosyjulie]

Being as small as they are, 8 billion would probably only fill a city the size of London.

[@Fuxy22]

@@joosyjulie even less of a reason to have them packed together close enough for a virus to easily spread...

[@joosyjulie]

@Fuxy22 what I meant was that being so small they could spread out a long way and not tax their environment. They wouldn't need other planets until their population was much, much higher than ours would be for the same size planet.

[@FanfictionEnjoyer]

The only thing I don't really believe about this being semi-possible is that someone would think a critical aspect like technological research is somehow 'no longer useful' when that is literally the entire way you win modern or post-modern war. Research a bigger, better, more advanced gun. As a galactic council member I would be constantly worried about species from another galaxy potentially invading. Or even species from another big bang radius that have literally been around since before the dust of our stars were anything more than a singularity building towards critical mass. An advanced enough race might even be able to turn an entire galaxy into a ship and fly it out of their own collapsing big bang radius to harvest newer galaxies. Technology is far to important to risk even a single cluster of leading scientists dying.

[@jaythesaiyajin8783]

Com officer "mam the council is threatening military action what do we do?" Holt "play 7 nation army on all channels."

[@kaneslives]

Something hurts Mrs. Jonathan Brisby. Humanity: So begins your end...

[@saikirito1210]

So basically, only one explorer ship with exploration crew who weren't soldiers or doctors, somehow managed to manage a plain, plan an offensive against a possibly advanced enemy in terms of warfare, didn't get any reinforcements from Earth nor reprimands for going off-course AND getting their homeworld sanctioned by their trade partners and still manage to fight off an entire fleet without any form of space front against a fleet in space? How?

[@gojiratanaka77]

The indomitable human spirit, that’s how!

[@Aki-kh2qe-StreetKidZZZ]

You do realise that some countries have mandatory army and then they go to the work force, right? It's pretty plausible.

[@thominaduncanson7596]

Psyops and pinocoladas--works every time. 😏

[@TheRandomOtakus]

I would love to see an expansion on this story and species

[@DominionDesire]

Thanks for the love! An expansion sounds great-stay tuned! We're about to hit 1k subscribers, so make sure to subscribe and join the adventure!

[@Ragehaven]

I agree

[@WrensthavAviovus]

First 6 monites repeats itself. We called for help, they ignored us. Humans found the signal garbled, then humans found the signal garbled. They were defying intergalactic decree, they were defying intergalactic decree, they were defying intergalactic decree. Sounds like a student padding their essay to meet the word or page count.

[@DelightfullyMADD]

I love stories like this, because unlike so many people today who love to be "Trendy-Misanthropists", we ultimately do far more good than harm overall. So fictional stories that depict humans positively is a very nice change of pace from the usual "HUMANS BAD!" bs that so many edge lords like to throw out these days.

[@sideless5339]

Rest of the Universe: *silence* Humanity: We have to save these cute Mouse People!!!

[@thebuddha4208]

Wow, they just found out who their friends are 3:02

[@dixievfd55]

This would have been a good Enterprise or Voyager episode.

[@fallofcamelot]

They had an episode like this in Enterprise. They left them to die because of a proto version of the Prime Directive and congratulated themselves for being so enlightened.

[@dixievfd55]

@@fallofcamelot +TNG crew -plague and you have the plot of Insurrection. The Zargak just get replaced by the Son'a.

[@TuckaBuck89]

I like these stories. But, PLEASE clean up the captioning. E.G. Koreans, Libyans, Deloreans (a car).

[@myristicanz]

You attracted me with cute fluffy picture of mouse and trapped me with a good story.

[@existinginaspace8347]

A good excuse to expand the HMOFA legacy

[@PieCakeandDonuts]

Mice on there last stand thinking all hope is lost:😢 Mean aliens not nice ones to clarify:😂 Mice:sir theres ships entering orbit and targeting our enemies there transmitting two messages Message to mice:(Bruno mars-Count on me) To mean aliens:(Mick Gordon-The only thing they fear is you

[@Bladwcotsu]

And that's how you introduce the Skaven to sci-fi

[@techmarine83]

I mean....I consider the alliances reaction to be a reasonable one. I don't blame them.

[@Allmightyimortal]

They could have atleast tried to find a cure for this instead of immediately abandoning them. If it was their planets, would they have done the same?

[@mikedubovs1574]

Remember.. dolphins don't eat.. but tuna is yummy... Eat chicken wings not rabbit legs.. fuzzy

[@johnsanford3596]

It must be so incredibly difficult to transcribe the spoken word. Thank God we FINALLY have advanced AI technology to solve this impossible challenge.

[@kristomonieth]

we like soft and squishy !!

[@shadizersilverhand2113]

Spend centuries helping everyone soon as they need help everyone they thought were friends or allies promptly betrayed and abandoned them and only people that never even knew them and gained no benefits from them rushed to their aid.

[@fartinthewind933]

The captions that keep saying Koreans is priceless.

[@feralbluee]

Very good reading and a great story. :) 🐭👩🏻 Now let’s see if we can save ourselves!!! 11.8.2024 ☀️💙🌷🌱

[@DominionDesire]

Yes! Thank you!

[@jirokoshibailey2052]

Listening to all this... We humans would still cuddle them like a good dog

[@gahlainrigh5927]

lureans: you might be big and strong *cough* and i might be small, weak *cough cough* and sickly..... BUT I HAVE A GUN! *BANG! zargax dies of technology*

[@Jackty89]

Fun story, but quite a few potholes tbh. Like, how many humans were with that exploration fleet? As I highly doubt it's going to be more then a 100k, so them fighting off a planet wide pandemic AND after that a planetwide invasion without any further (human) reinforcements/supplies is just to far fetched.

[@dianalindeman1644]

Worst captions ever! Bulgarians, Koreans, and Libyans won't like it if they find out! The plague reminded me of the Ebola epidemic in Africa, except the people were helped, not abandoned. Those medics, even with precautions, took the ultimate risk to save lives.

[@aubreymorgan9763]

My only issue is we have multiple advanced races that apparently can’t figure out vaccines and quarantine procedures

[@DominionDesire]

Great point! Advanced tech doesn't always mean common sense. 😄 By the way, we're at 983 subscribers-just 17 away from 1k! Would love your support!

[@aubreymorgan9763]

@@DominionDesire oops sorry. legit thought I already did. fixed

[@timtheskeptic1147]

That's part of the fun of sci-fi. Perhaps an alien race is impervious to viruses or microbes. Evolutionary biology is odd.

[@aileanaminx8362]

Don't mess with the boats.

[@kisstune]

WHO DARES TOUCH MY BOATS!!!!!!

[@ShadowWolfRising]

Habitual Linecrosser viewer?

[@Allantitan]

@@kisstunewe destroyed 5 of their boats. They dropped the sun on us twice -Japan probably

[@JMM33RanMA]

The story was engaging, and the voice was good. The titling is a problem, but not reading it is my recommendation. If possible the titling should be optional through closed captions. Criticism of an AI or speech to text program won't help, because English is notoriously difficult.

[@TheDoomsdayzoner]

If you think English is difficult, wait untill ya hear Russian....

[@JMM33RanMA]

@@TheDoomsdayzoner I agree, having tried to learn it [and failed], that Russian is one of the languages that is difficult for English speakers to learn. What is easier about English is that we don't gender everything, and don't have cases that require adjectives to match the gender of the nouns. When learning other languages we have to know whether pencils, cars, stop signs, etc are male, female or [in languages like German] neutrum. We can just say blue book, no gender for the noun or adjective. The difficulties for speakers of other languages [I am an ESL/EFL professional] are: 1. radically different dialects [most Americans can't understand British accents like Geordie, and some Australian and Indian speakers. There are problems even within the US, some regional dialects are difficult. 2. Frequent use of idiomatic expressions, especially baseball and football derived as those sports are little known in most countries. 3. Different counting systems, Fahrenheit, miles, use of comma instead of period in numbers, use of traditional idioms like a pinch of salt, etc. 4. Different meaning or use of lexical items such as prepositions and articles that seem to be the same but are not. There are more, and the problem with detailing them is that the difficulty depends on the other language. English is one of the few languages that has both th θ and th ð, for example.

[@TheDoomsdayzoner]

IELTS Academic here. And, with all due honesty and respect - you were talkin' outa ya hat m8. 1. Russian got as much dialects and pronunciations as English, if not more. Sure, writing is always the same. But trust me - after getting used to northern people, southeners' Eminem-level of fast-talkin' will have ye on the ropes, begging for dem to slow down. 2. Idioms exist in every Language. And on top of those Russian has "cute"/"diminitive" and "gigantic"/"monstrous" version of every word. And I gotta tell you - THEY ARE CONTEXT-SENSITIVE, like everything else in Russian. 3. Europe uses Metric system and Celsius, so it's just an American problem with outside world. You guys really like to use archaic systems, I'll tell ya what. 4. Russian doesn't have Articles. But we do have fock ton of other rules. Russian has enough usual sounds tk make Japanese jealous. The only language with more sounds and nore complex pronunciations would be Icelandic.

[@JMM33RanMA]

@@TheDoomsdayzoner An akademician are you? well your English composition needs more work. As to Russian having dialects, the propaganda of the Московия монгольское варварское террористическое государство is that Ukrainian is a dialect of Russian and that Ukrainians don't exist. Thus Russians [nikunturny Muscovians] can't be trusted to be scientific or truthful about anything, including the weather. Bye!

[@theredtechengineer1480]

So sad that the galactic council abandoned the Koreans and Libyans. 😔

[@brightlord-ov7cm]

I'd of fed them to my pet python. I named him Hercules.

[@reiman1308]

In space, humans are more compassionate to little furry cute critters.

[@marcksman7896]

Don't mess with the Mice, or Humanity will kick your ass Thrice.

[@DominionDesire]

Haha, well said! 🐭💪 We're almost at 1k subs-don't forget to subscribe for more epic tales! 🚀

[@scp2539]

the text tells a different story XD humans going to help koreans in city 65. I'm writing this a 8:55, I look forward to the rest of the 2nd story :P

[@DominionDesire]

Glad you're enjoying it! 😄 Don't forget to subscribe-we're about to hit 1k subscribers! Your support means a lot!

[@jerikoloki6713]

We worship and idolize an animated mouse, you think we gon sit by and let those fuuzballs die‽ FREEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOMMM

[@robertbojin9471]

Captions working fine

[@my_own_minion]

other than the ai generated tts, it's a good story

[@manuel2824]

on my first listen, around when the human explorers received the distress signal, i was given the impression that there was a needless repeat and retelling of the humans' "unanimous vote to do the right thing" and it really pissed me the fuck off because it felt like a pointless repeating something already told. didnt find it on the second listening intending to confirm that though. would have been a neat listen if it hadnt been for that but its not the first time i hallucinate shit :P

[@williamburroughs9686]

It's a really good and moving story. You just need to work on your subtitles.

[@antoniobutler3947]

Bro since when did Bulgaria become a planet of mice people.

[@Sehnjoe39]

Lmao did anybody else notice in the story text it kept saying Koreans ?

[@cyancaves5180]

didnt know the Libyans lived in Korea

[@fku-v3f]

Constructive criticism incoming: like the vid. I liked the vid and subbed😉 However, ur commentary in a few places is redundant. "Holt ignored the message from the Galactic Council." Then she ignores it again, but you word it differently. Still means the same thing. You do this in a few other places as well. The second instance of her ignoring the GC could've been supplemented with the Loreans telling Holt and her crew stories from the Lorean homeworld. And the Loreans playing some of their music for the humans, albeit reluctantly, seeing as how they're population is being ravaged. Rly enjoyed the vid....just wanted more depth. Look forward to the next one.👍

[@mikedubovs1574]

Mouse like? Or chipmunk like or squirrel like... gerbil like Or rat like?? Mouse like? Nah.. glue traps.. don't want shit and piss all over

[@MrGrimm-eo5lc]

0:23 Wait... Deloreans? Dont tell me that timetraveling nutcase had somehow experimented on mice giving them greater intelligence and named them after his nuclear powered car?

[@mikesixx7655]

Harms small cute animal. Humans turn into canada during a war

[@Helios9826]

Korea had quite the run here

[@Headloser]

So when Earth government going to help?

[@sebsunda]

What about Earth Central command? It seem this story is too focus on that one ship... I would have preferred to see some involvement from the whole of humanity.

[@coolet9132]

So alien mice people came from Korea, good to know. So they activated a planetary shield and yet enemy ships could just fly through it.

[@JoeMartinez18]

the subtitles are so confusing. Delurians were translated as Koreans and Lybians XD

[@roberthutchison7806]

So apparently the plague just vanished the only slowed the plague and never cured the plike so somebody needs to finish the story

[@johnhillbilly8625]

how many times can you repeat your self or rephrase the same line