Fanboy Rewrites the DC Extended Universe

[@troyoboyo17]

To anyone who's watching this video now, any weird audio issues (specifically during the Man of Steel and Wonder Woman parts) are because I recently got a copyright claim for the music and KZbin did its experimental thing where it mutes the song audio. It sounds like total shit, so I'm really sorry about that! I promise my audio has gotten better so subscribe to find out for yourself! Edit: Also there's a part in the Man of Steel review that had to be muted, basically it was just "Zod is angry, kneel before Zod" and then fight

[@h.jlathem2194]

No one ever thinks about poor Bruce’s parents they have to go through endless torture in almost every single bat-flick I don’t think we’re the only people who are sick of having to see the death of you know who(s)

[@purpleguyfromfnaf0]

i totally thought my headphones just died on the spot

[@rairaion2612]

Damn Copyrice

[@BowlOfApples]

Lost my shit at that Batman line "Only one other thing moves that fast, and I don't see Barry Allen making daily trips to the arctic"

[@troyoboyo17]

+DougForYou Haha! Thank you! Yeah I I had a ton of fun writing that scene

[@__________1175]

@@troyoboyo17 Felt like an odd, forced reference. Why would Superman know who he was talking about? Why would Batman know about Barry at this point? Should've left it more vague.

[@kozzyarts]

_____ _____ Yeah maybe instead of saying his true name just say Flash

[@__________1175]

@@kozzyarts Not even that. If Barry's relatively unknown at this point, he shouldn't really have much of an established alter ego. I'd just do away with the line altogether or amend it to not even mention that the "one thing that moves that fast" is even a guy at all. I'd leave it ambiguous to let the audience go "Wait, is he talking about Flash?". No need to spoonfeed stuff like that, it's heavy-handed. A tease will do.

[@iceber7528]

@_____ _____ pretty sure it was meant to be a joke.

[@jbtechcon7434]

"Superman Enters The Knight" sounds like porn.

[@troyoboyo17]

Oh because it is. Did I forget to mention that?

[@kaleodos]

@@troyoboyo17 Really?

[@davisssamuel]

Send me the link.

[@butitwasmedio]

I would wana see *that* version (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[@awesomedonut8228]

My Lord you are a sultry bastard...

[@geeklore8528]

I think Suicide Squad should of taken place after Justice League, with Amanda Waller beliving that the heroes are a threaght to national security.

[@troyoboyo17]

Yoooo that's a great idea holy shit

[@geeklore8528]

troyoboyo17 Lol thank you 😊. I developed a whole phase 2 for the DCEU. Phase 1 obviously whould of built from Man Of Steel, but BVS wouldnt of been called BVS but would of been called World's Finest. Lex Luthor would of been the primary antogonist, but it would of dealt with an idea very similer to veritas from smallville. The Luthors, the Waynes and the Queens among other influential people knew about the Motherboxes and the coming of Darkseid. Lex's fscinstion with aliens and beings from another planet studied this orgnisation, but wishes to protect the Earth from aliens. He pits Batman against Superman, but they eventually reconcile their differences. Not brcause they have the same mother, but brcause they learn to see the others point of veiw. I wouldnt of had Doomsday in it at all, but I would of had Metello as it connects with the whole Kryptonite thing. Green Lantern would of dealt with Hal Jordon discovering Darkseid has destroyed several planets across the stars, in their war against the new gods. The Lantern core is near extinction and he lesrns Earth is the next tsrget. TBH the Wonder Women film they made is kinda too good to change so lets say we kept thst movie as it is. Throughout the films we would see various tasks forces and the army fight the heroes, with A.R.G.U.S' director Amanda Waller leading the charge, but when the motherboxes start pinging and Parademons start attacling the city she has no choice but to comcide that the world might need it's heroes. Chloe Sullivan, a former freind of Clarks would act as a liason to the Justice League and unite the heroes together in a similer way to how they form in Justice League War. Cyborg would of.been seen in World's Finest as a.cameo where he'd be injured on football stadium, here we would become Cyborg. Aquaman's home would be attacked by the Parademons, Wonder Woman's home wpuld be attacked by Parademons as well as everywhere else. The world would be saved however by the Justice League and praised as the heroes. Phase 2 would see the Sucide Squad form as mentioned above, then a World's Finest movie would tackle Supergirl and begin building up the legacy of Superman. Bstman would take on Red Hood in his film. And that's about as far as I got.

[@lusher5134]

Geeklore DAM, Better than my comment... I just did a flash movie. To lazy to write the rest. But woah. Nice job setting up darksied though.

[@PkmnTCG615]

That also sounds like the New 52 Justice League of America lead by Steve Trevor.

[@nataliagonzalez1698]

No. The SS were made for black ops missions so that if the squad was outed the government could just throw them under the rug. Not to save the world.

[@BerserkerGoji9973]

My ideas for a DC film franchise: - Man of Steel - Man of Steel 2: Electric Boogaloo - Elon Musk’s Bizarre Adventure: Space X is Unbreakable - Kanye West vs Eminem - Wonder Woman: Rise of the Underminer - Fortnite: Infinity War (featuring Dante from the Devil May Cry series)

[@troyoboyo17]

Holy shit... We've been looking at this all wrong.

[@BerserkerGoji9973]

Oh yeah, Phase 2 of the DCEU will include: - Neon Memesis Memevangelion - Miss Kobayashi’s Suicide Squad: The Phantom Pain - Batman & Robin (Remake directed by Neil Breen and Tommy Wiseau) And the grand finale... - Thanos vs King Dong vs Asuka Langley vs Tohru vs Kanna vs Elliott Rodger: Revenge of the Fallen Snake Eating Breath of the Wild Odyssey: Automata: The End of Evangelion

[@teehub7389]

Phase 3 will be: The Return of Fortnite The Emoji Movie 2 The Batman vs Condiment King Wonder Woman 2099 Justice League vs X Force Vs X Men vs The Avengers vs Skynet vs the Daleks vs The Galactic Empire vs The Capital vs The Emoji Movie vs Memes vs Robbie Rotten vs Shrek vs Spongebob vs Michael Myers vs Jason Voorhes Vs Freddy Krueger vs North Korea vs Thanos vs Mario: And then everyone died THE END.

[@BerserkerGoji9973]

We will have a spin-off film about the origins of Thanos, John Wick, and the inhabitants of Fortnite World. NOTE: We have ran out of a budget for this film so the film will just be a bootleg cam-recorded version of the first Man of Steel film dubbed in Polish in a theater in South Korea that abruptly ends during the last 5 minutes. As the footage progresses, more and more terrible memes of characters doing the Fortnite dance will appear and the footage and audio will get more distorted and bass-boosted. “It’s just like poetry. Every stanza sort of rhymes with the last one...hopefully it’ll work...” ~ Kira Yoshikage

[@kaleodos]

Dont forget about, Batman: Ultimate Crisis

[@beenahari3799]

"My mom needs help. Please, help her." That was all that was needed. It feels emotional, and underlines the fact that superman is just a human being. Instead, we got a sequence of a guy trying to manipulate his killer using his mom, and a stupid vigilante who conveniently falls for it before yelling the most iconic dialogue in film history. "WHY DID YOU SAY THAT NAME?"

[@tonysnyder9]

Obviously the whole scene went over your head

[@tomsiebert155]

Please oh please go do some research about BVS

[@tomsiebert155]

You don’t understand the sacred Martha scene stop being toxic

[@DissectingThoughts]

Can't they just remove Ares' mustache in post with cgi or something?

[@michealmahmoud6391]

Or give him a full blown beard as well

[@DissectingThoughts]

@2020Surya S315 yes, that's the joke.

[@everburn]

Hilarious

[@DissectingThoughts]

@@everburn I know, right?! I laughed so hard I peed myself when I came up with it.

[@everburn]

@@DissectingThoughts absolutely! that was genius

[@dannybenhur6123]

Superman Enter the Knight.....Holy Shit

[@EpicGam3rLad]

If only that was an actual movie

[@fredboidafanatic]

Somebody make this kid a director,he would actually give dceu a chance!

[@addeadde97]

Maybe not a director but a writer sure

[@tywayne3]

Superman 2 and Suicide Squad versions were actually interesting and made perfect sense!

[@dáinsleif_the_bough_keeper]

We actually have James Gunn as Suicide Squad 2 director

[@blammowammo5886]

I will, when I'm older and become a director.

[@Bobbywoodhogan]

The DCEU just crossed $4 billion WW with only 6 movies. I think it's got more than a chance

[@kingnothing915]

Sure. Sure. Kill El Diablo for no reason.

[@Targisvear]

Because it worked with Slipknot. Right? Right!?

[@unhelpfulrevelations7989]

Doesn't have to be Diablo. Just any rando fucker's head blown off would have actually made them a real suicide squad

[@Ok-eg8dg]

@@Targisvear except slipknot is a nobody

[@dcmarvelcomicfans9458]

They should have killed off Captain Boomerang

[@dcmarvelcomicfans9458]

@Aidan DORRIES yeah it might have been better

[@MarioGenerations]

A big flaw you missed is not what’s in the movies, but the order of the movies BVS, suicide squad, and justice league came way too early and there should’ve been movies that built up to those events

[@troyoboyo17]

Oh absolutely, that's a given lol. If I had 100% control I'd say do 2 Superman movies, BvS, Wonder Woman, a good Suicide Squad, Flash/Aquaman/Shazam or something like that, and then Justice League. At least some more time in between BvS and JL to make us give a shit about Superman's death. In my Justice League video that I'll eventually get to I'll address this, since I think in that video I'm going to just completely redo the DCEU

[@benman92]

@@troyoboyo17 yeah, like we got all these solo movies after jl but why couldn’t we get them before

[@lonelysatoshi2482]

Yeah, imo it should've been in this order; Man of Steel, BVS, The Flash, Wonder Woman, Aquaman, The Batman, Justice League, a MOS sequel (Man of Tomorrow is a name I like) and then Suicide Squad and I guess after that Shazam, WW84, Green Lantern Corps, Birds of Prey vs Gotham City Sirens, other movie sequels and more stuff, at least that's how I see it

[@circe2258]

This is how i would te write it (i have a basic plot down for each movie so ask about them if u wanna know) DCU MOVIES Darkseid Chronicles Chapter 1 The batman Man of steel Wonder woman The flash Dawn of justice The Justice league Chapter 2 Batman : Knightfall Aqua man Last child of krypton Wonder woman: Paradise lost Suicide Squad Shazam Shazam : black adam Green lantern: Sinestro’s might Justice : Panic in the sky Chapter 3 Suicide squad : mad house Batman: krypton’s curse Wonder woman: Gods and mortals Legend of Hawk birds of prey and the fantabulous emancipation of one Harley Quinn Fate The Darkseid Multiverse Chronicles Chapter 4 Nightwing Green lantern : Rage of Crimson red Zatanna Man from Mars Flash 2 The feline maiden Titans birds of prey and the humorous extermination of all men Green arrow The new gods Shazam: fury of the gods Nightwing: Court of Owls Chapter 5 Martian Manhunter 2 Aqua man and the lost kingdom Atomic venture Zatanna : mistress of magic Teen Titans 2 Nightwing: The Last Laugh Constantine Mister Miracle Part 1: Lantern: Blackest Night Fate 2 Part 2: Flashpoint Part 3: Crisis On infinite Earths

[@tochiokeke5478]

Here’s the order the DCEU should’ve gone in. 1. Man of Steel (2013) 2. Batman (2014) 3. Wonder Woman (2015) 4. Justice League (2016) 5. Green Lantern Corps (2016) 6. The Flash (2017) 7. Death of Superman (2017) 8. Batman: Knightfall (2017) 9. Flashpoint (2018) 10. Justice League: Dark (2018) 11. Suicide Squad (2019) 12. Teen Titans (2019) 13. Reign of the Supermen (2020) 14. Justice League: Tower of Babel (2020) 15. Wonder Woman: Paradise Lost (2020) 16. Batman: Under the Red Hood (2021) 17. Green Arrow (2021) 18. Justice League: Dark 2 (2022) 19. Shazam (2022) 20. Green Arrow (2022) 21. Teen Titans 2: Judas Contract (2023) 22. Justice League: Invasion (2023) 23. Flash vs. The Rogues (2024)- Wally West iteration because Barry died during Invasion. Also the movies would be really similar to the DC animated movie series. Like REALLY similar. Like basically copy and pasted but that’s okay because they copy and pasted their stories from most new 52 stuff.

[@troyoboyo17]

Yeah I'm down with most of those (I don't personally think we need Flashpoint or Knightfall but that's a personal preference)

[@tochiokeke5478]

troyoboyo17 yeah. You could really use any Batman story for Knightfall. Death in the family, Battle for the cowl(of course red hood would then need to be the second in the trilogy) etc... EDIT: Also it just seems like if your gonna have a flash movie then Flashpoint is a major option you can go with.

[@redfox1366]

Nightwing Interesting. So Flashpoint comes only a few years in? What’s the story there compared to the other Flash movies and how will it affect the overall universe (asking out of curiosity, not to argue over its placement or inclusion).

[@josephn1698]

2024: forever evil ;)

[@minecraftotalwar]

That would be awesome

[@dekam7279]

1989: in 2019 we'll have flying cars 2019: double ads

[@TomasTitan08]

No idea why this is here of all vids 😂

[@weeaboojones7561]

"The shoes are attached to legs obviously" Thanks for clarifying. Seriously though, good videos, good ideas & your editing is great.

[@troyoboyo17]

Listen, I just had to be sure lol. And thank you, I really appreciate it!

[@rivaldovillegas3725]

@@troyoboyo17 In Snyder's man defense, a part of Humanity is figuring out who you are, Clark basically had an Identity Crisis as he didn't know who he was why he came to earth. It's a question that haunts him until he figured out he was Krypton, that and the battle against Zod he thought he could be a Hero to this world, but obviously the world isn't as simple as beating the bad guy anymore which why he still questions his purpose.

[@billymccrary2246]

Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (2014 film) Iron Fist Ghostbusters (2016 film) Power Rangers (2017 film)

[@berberizm]

somebody hire this guy

[@juancardenas7697]

This is what I would've done: Man of Steel- Make it less dark and gloomy and more hopeful, otherwise it was a good movie. The Batman- This movie wouldn't be an origin story, but a movie that introduces us to this universes Batman and this would be a much more mystery-ish movie with the villain being Scarecrow as he torments Batman, and maybe a little Joker origin in there somewhere. Suicide Squad- Make the cast smaller by just keeping Rick Flagg, Harley Quinn, Deadshot, Diablo, and Amanda Waller as our main focus. Villain will still be Enchantress, but her goal will be to absorb the Motherbox. The team stops her and the Motherbox is sent to Star Labs. Harley Quinn is broken out by the Joker. Wonder Woman- Same thing, but after Wonder Woman kills Ludendorff, Ares does appear and gives Diana his speech. Diana tries to kill him, but he disappears leaving her confused. Steve Trevor dies and Wonder Woman fights Doctor Poison who has taken that super dust thing. Wonder Woman beats Doctor Poison and almost kills her, but Steve's words echo in her head and she spares her. The movie ends with Diana hearing news reports of an explosion at Star Labs, and Victor Stone's death. Batman v Superman- Most things are the same, but the tone would be a lot less gloomy and limit the biblical comparisons a lot. The meta flash drive will only contain Victor Stone's clip as that is what Diana went to investigate. No Martha and instead Superman says, "Save my mom.". Instead of Doomsday, the Trinity fight Bizarro and Superman still dies. Batman blames himself for Superman's death and he promises to be a better hero. Justice League- This movie will just center around Batman, Wonder Woman, and Cyborg. Cyborg accidentally creates a portal that releases Steppenwolf, and the movie plays out the same way but without the other members. This is just what I would have done.

[@troyoboyo17]

I actually really like your change to Wonder Woman. I said that it was perfect in the video but it obviously wasn't, I just had a really strong emotional connection to it so I didn't want to mess with it, but your version keeps the original ideas of the movie pretty intact without overcompensating and changing the entire ending like I've seen.

[@CenoriaWoah]

Juan C I mean... if you don’t want the origin of Batman... You could connect it to “The Gotham” TV show.

[@helloill672]

Yeah. More Cyborg the better! He is the most overlooked in the DCU

[@itsDjjayyArt]

Martian man hunter

[@jerardwallace1769]

@@CenoriaWoah No, just no

[@justsillyrachet1737]

Well at least justice league didn’t divide the fan base,if anything it brought it together considering EVERYONE thought it was trash

[@pizza6747]

You NEED to be the Kevin Feige of DCEU

[@thesenate2682]

Mas o Kevin Feige ta começando a cagar no p** desde homem aranha longe de casa.

[@domenicocozzi7318]

@@thesenate2682 go fuck yourself piece of shit

[@Whateveridksomething]

@@domenicocozzi7318 what was he saying

[@darthinfinte7047]

Domenico Cozzi what did he say

[@theultraatomicgamer]

Domenico Cozzi What the hell is he saying tho?

[@jwtcosplay4507]

That whole “eternal life” thing or whatever could totally be Lazarus and be connected to Ra’s al Ghul

[@OmarFW]

I'd have watched that version of suicide squad

[@troyoboyo17]

OmarFW Thank you! I was originally going to do a full video about it, but I decided MoS and BvS were more important before Justice League

[@tangtaster]

I would be interested in a full version of Suicide Squad, the whole point of the squad is to do a mission that normal people couldnt legally or wouldnt morally do. The movie makes no damn sense.

[@AetheriteDark]

OmarFW I will be watching Suicide Squad Two 100% because James Gunn is the director.

[@3mbthelabel]

PHASE ONE - 2013- •Superman: Man of Steel 2014- •THE BATMAN 2015- •Wonder Woman 2016- •Dawn of Justice: Part One •Suicide Squad •AQUAMAN: King of Atlantis 2017- •Dawn of Justice: Part Two •The Flash •SHAZAM! •JUSTICE LEAGUE: PART ONE PHASE TWO - 2018- •JUSTICE LEAGUE: PART TWO •Superman: Man of Tomorrow •Wonder Woman 2 2019- •TEEN TITANS •The Flash 2 •Suicide Squad 2 2020- •Green Lantern Corps •ATOM •BOOSTER GOLD 2021- •JUSTICE LEAGUE: Doom PHASE THREE - 2022- •Martian Manhunter •AQUAMAN: Throne of Atlantis •Doctor Fate 2023- •TEEN TITANS 2 •The Crime Syndicate •Blackest Night 2024- •THE BATMAN: The Dark Knight •The Lantern Corps •Superman: Man of Hope 2025- •FLASHPOINT PHASE FOUR - 2026- •Blue Beetle •ATOM 2 •LOBO 2027- •SHAZAM! 2 •Crisis on Infinite Earths 2028- •Wonder Woman 3 •INJUSTICE 2029- •Constantine 2030- JUSTICE LEAGUE: APOKOLIPS: PART ONE 2031- JUSTICE LEAGUE: APOKOLIPS: PART TWO

[@jonathanbonathan3839]

damn thats a good list but why would booster gold need a solo movie?

[@3mbthelabel]

@@jonathanbonathan3839 Booster Gold is such an amazing character. He is one of the holders of time itself and it can play a great part in this universe. Imagine some hilarious scenes where he's talking to Skeets the robot, that'll be awesome. Also his movie can setup Blue Beetle movies and more. Thanks for enjoying my list really appreciate it

[@redfox1366]

EGNationnnHD Crazy list here! TWO Dawn of Justices?? Solo films with no sequels?? This truly is a dream lineup.

[@jonathanbonathan3839]

@@3mbthelabel you right you right I enjoy your list man it must've took a long time to do that

[@3mbthelabel]

@@redfox1366 Thanks bro

[@richarsonmirien5676]

here what l would've done as my phase 1 of dc phase 1 1-man of steel 2-THE BATMAN:the story is going to be a mix between the darkknigt returns and under the redhood 3-batman/superman: world's greatest 4-WONDERWOMAN:basically the movie we got except that the main villain is actually the nazi general and not ares (he will be save for the third wonderwoman film) 5-THE FLASH(this itiration of the flash is actually wallywest instead of Barry Allen) 6-JUSTICE LEAGUE:the main villain is going to be brainiac who planned on taking every major city in the world to add to his collection but is stop by the JL and hal jordan who becam a greenlantern in this film.ln the post credit scene we see tomarray and killowog come for haljordan to bring him on oa 7-GREENLANTERN:this film take place a few months after JL and follow the adventur of hal in space

[@miteruno]

he didnt say ludendorff was a nazi, he said that the enemys should be nazis, like in tha comics, that would change the time period in the movie. i bet they didnt want that to separate it from captain america

[@skoolsux903]

richarson mirien not Wally as flash, to early

[@skoolsux903]

richarson mirien maybe in a justice league sequel we see Barry sacrifice him self to save the league and in the end credits Wally puts on the suit

[@darksideofevil13]

You should watch Nandovmovies. He did a fun rewrite for WW making Dr.Poison the main villain.

[@redfox1366]

richarson mirien Having Wally would be fun, but having both him and Hal Jordan on the team is a little overkill when it comes to comedic characters. Hal and Barry work well as a duo and Wally and Jon also, but not Barry and Jon or Hal and Wally. It’s not as nice a mix.

[@dannybenhur6123]

Khandaq....smart move

[@csajegyember6179]

Yep. Where Black Adam belongs!

[@Targisvear]

Smarter than anything Warner though out.

[@Awesome_Pichu]

It's amazing how creative a fan can make their own versions of a superhero that's better than official versions like the movies.

[@Eurydium]

Don't get me wrong, I loved this video, but he just corrected parts of the plot to make more sense. He didn't write the whole script out from scratch or direct the cinematography.

[@3nu570]

This is true and I love when people do it! Fans can add so much to the original story by just having headcanons or making slight rewrites to the plot, it really makes the fictional world feel richer. I've had cases where I straight up hate the original version of something, but adore the version that the fans have made out of it.

[@LjuboCupic1912]

*** *** well, he said he wanted to stick to the skeleton of the original movies, and he made them work much better, that’s the point of the video.

[@circe2258]

This is how i would te write it (i have a basic plot down for each movie so ask about them if u wanna know) DCU MOVIES Darkseid Chronicles Chapter 1 The batman Man of steel Wonder woman The flash Dawn of justice The Justice league Chapter 2 Batman : Knightfall Aqua man Last child of krypton Wonder woman: Paradise lost Suicide Squad Shazam Shazam : black adam Green lantern: Sinestro’s might Justice : Panic in the sky Chapter 3 Suicide squad : mad house Batman: krypton’s curse Wonder woman: Gods and mortals Legend of Hawk birds of prey and the fantabulous emancipation of one Harley Quinn Fate The Darkseid Multiverse Chronicles Chapter 4 Nightwing Green lantern : Rage of Crimson red Zatanna Man from Mars Flash 2 The feline maiden Titans birds of prey and the humorous extermination of all men Green arrow The new gods Shazam: fury of the gods Nightwing: Court of Owls Chapter 5 Martian Manhunter 2 Aqua man and the lost kingdom Atomic venture Zatanna : mistress of magic Teen Titans 2 Nightwing: The Last Laugh Constantine Mister Miracle Part 1: Lantern: Blackest Night Fate 2 Part 2: Flashpoint Part 3: Crisis On infinite Earths

[@calebscorner6428]

I would’ve done Batman V Superman several phases down the road so the emotional states in that fight are huge. Brother verses brother instead of two blokes who just met.

[@matt15]

Same I really liked Man of Steel until I read Superman Rebirth and Superman Secret origin and realized how wrong Man of Steel got it

[@troyoboyo17]

Seriously! Secret Origin is one of my favorite Clark stories, and it proves you can retell the classic origin in a way that's exciting and adds to the character

[@andreaquino5596]

Because it was based on New 52?????? Oh my god yall are brain dead

[@matt15]

Andre Navarro de Aquino that doesn’t mean it’s good

[@cleverpsyche115]

@@matt15 If you want a defining Superman story, I recommend Superman: What's So Funny About Truth, Justice, and the American Way (Or the movie version, Superman Vs. The Elite) and All-Star Superman. Both of them nail Superman whilst providing my favorite aspect of his character: always finding another way to solve your problems.

[@Iffmeister]

@@andreaquino5596 even New 52 Superman is more accurate than Man of Steel

[@earthtosam1982]

Honestly, they should have just given Ares a black silhouette of a face with flames coming from his eyes.

[@PlanetImaginationMix]

All of theses rewrites actually work Warner Bros should hire you as a movie consultant; however, I like Suicide Squad as is your rewrite was good but out all the DC movie Suicide Squad is the only one I like. I'm curious to see what you would with Justice League. That movie needs a rewrite.

[@troyoboyo17]

Thanks! That really means a lot, I appreciate that. I don't personally care for Suicide Squad but I respect your opinion (also sorry I bashed that movie more than the others lol). And yeah Justice League was a mess, and I'm working on that. I just have no fukkin idea how to fix it without completely redoing it like with a new team, new villain, and new movies setting it up

[@dignerds]

No...the only thing wrong with these movies was WB meddling ..otherwise Snyder had it right..this kid has no clue what he is doing..

[@kordellswoffer1520]

@@dignerds his films were and still are a mess. How doesn't he know what he's doing when zack himself didn't know anything about what he was doing.

[@captainamerica3248]

I think your take on the Martha scene is good. I'd prefer if after Bruce helped Clark up, he asked again, "Your mom?" And Clark responses "Martha. Martha Kent." "Huh." Batman brushes it off, the scene cuts to black as the two of them head to save her.

[@troyoboyo17]

Hey guys! Thanks for watching! If you liked this, be sure to subscribe and stick around for more videos like this. Sorry it took so long to make another rewrite, I've got school and shit. But I've got a new mic, and hopefully I'll be able to upload a little more often. Let me know that you guys think I should do next!

[@yoymisho6447]

troyoboyo17 yo you’re actually hilarious great video tho

[@bretdaniels6782]

I like it. The only thing I disagree with is Joker as the villain in Suicide Squad. He just is not that kinda villain ya know. Maybe Death Stroke?

[@troyoboyo17]

@@bretdaniels6782 Yeah that's fair. I really only put Joker for the general audiences, but yeah Deathstroke would work, or someone else had the idea of Brimstone which is a pretty deep pull which I like.

[@__________1175]

@@troyoboyo17 Welp, just reached the end of the BvS part and I'm beginning to wonder why I bothered watching this if you're gonna keep the biggest mistake the DCEU has made thus far, prematurely killing Superman in his second film. It was far too soon for Doomsday and in the actual film it appears to be done so that Snyder can say that the world would love him because he sacrificed himself for them even though most of the world outside of Metropolis and Gotham would have no idea what the hell happened that night. It was an obvious copout that pretty much amounts to "Everyone hates him so I'm gonna kill him to guilt everyone into loving him".

[@__________1175]

@asim0092 I've been noticing that since the Man of Steel part. Honestly just trying to finish the vid because I'm already 3 quarters of the way through but these aren't so much fixes as they are just wish fulfillment.

[@3mbthelabel]

In BvS, it was crystal clear that Batman didn't care about the kryptonians or their kind. So if Clark shouted "save my mom" then Batman wouldn't care. So he shouted Martha so Batman knew that by killing him, he's letting a person die.

[@gamingchaotic1704]

wouldnt say that. he probably thought supes didnt have any personality feelings or emotions

[@LegendPurpleDragon152]

EGNationnnHD Still a shittily written scene

[@TraphikHD]

Him saying Martha was more about batman realizing how far gone he was and remembering what we took the cowl up for in the first place.

[@LegendPurpleDragon152]

Wyatt Elvis We know that. It's not that we don't get what the scene was trying to say, it's that it was very poorly executed and frankly a contrived way to end the fight. Especially since he just immediately drops all grievances with supes as soon as it happened

[@TraphikHD]

@@LegendPurpleDragon152 I didn't take it that way. I saw it as he realized that Lex was playing them, that he let other's influence his thoughts and start to turn him into the thing he swore to fight. I didn't see it as him dropping all of his problems with supes but more realizing they were on the same page the entire time and it was all his fault for letting it get that far.

[@Antonio_Ortiz]

2:10-2:31 Thank you! Goyer and Snyder was more interested in making an over-the-top symbolic statement about a sacrifice made for Superman's supposed benefit, but it lacks any sense of weight to defining the character.

[@ryangarner7721]

“The Suicide Squad should be like DC’s Guardians of the Galaxy” *enter James Gunn, years later*

[@e443productions9]

plz rewrite justice league

[@troyoboyo17]

+E443 Productions Yeah I probably should. I was planning on waiting for the inevitable "extended cut" came out on Blu Ray before I did anything with it, since that's honestly the real movie we should have gotten

[@antoniochasten3192]

troyoboyo17 Sorry but that ain't happening.

[@oreticencias]

@@antoniochasten3192 Haha yeah

[@mediaconsumption3972]

Nando v Movies did a great rewrite

[@davidjames-cameron617]

He just did

[@mattnsg13]

the BvS rewrite was SO GOOD i wish the movie was like you showed in this vid

[@talmidd.3816]

I've burst into tears when you said: "Bruce won't let a son lose his mother... Not again... " That's some serious screenwriting there! And maybe then add a flashback of a gun shooting and breaking apart the pearl necklace! Now we've got some deep story! Thank you so much on this.

[@ahmedalhosani6895]

My DCEU Phase 1: 1-The Batman 2-Man Of Steel 3-Wonder Woman 4-Trinity or BvS 5-The Flash 6-Aquaman 7-Green Lantern 8-Justice League.

[@circe2258]

This is how i would te write it (i have a basic plot down for each movie so ask about them if u wanna know) DCU MOVIES Darkseid Chronicles Chapter 1 The batman Man of steel Wonder woman The flash Dawn of justice The Justice league Chapter 2 Batman : Knightfall Aqua man Last child of krypton Wonder woman: Paradise lost Suicide Squad Shazam Shazam : black adam Green lantern: Sinestro’s might Justice : Panic in the sky Chapter 3 Suicide squad : mad house Batman: krypton’s curse Wonder woman: Gods and mortals Legend of Hawk birds of prey and the fantabulous emancipation of one Harley Quinn Fate The Darkseid Multiverse Chronicles Chapter 4 Nightwing Green lantern : Rage of Crimson red Zatanna Man from Mars Flash 2 The feline maiden Titans birds of prey and the humorous extermination of all men Green arrow The new gods Shazam: fury of the gods Nightwing: Court of Owls Chapter 5 Martian Manhunter 2 Aqua man and the lost kingdom Atomic venture Zatanna : mistress of magic Teen Titans 2 Nightwing: The Last Laugh Constantine Mister Miracle Part 1: Lantern: Blackest Night Fate 2 Part 2: Flashpoint Part 3: Crisis On infinite Earths

[@caddja2155]

"Aeres should not have a mustache" xD That was bothering me too!!

[@samuelbarber4154]

Superman is from Krypton but don't you think for a second, that he's Kryptonian.

[@catioroforasterodeloeste4790]

For me, they should reboot all the franchise, and make a whole universe based on these titles: The Adventures of Martha Kent Killer Croc and the subway neighborhood. Captain Boomerang: The Legacy Krypto.

[@ambition4490]

Catioro Forastero del Oeste Dawg Killer Croc💀

[@benman92]

Hell yeah!!! Krypto!!!

[@louielfc2008]

1:54 I think instead of him having jeans and a shirt with an S on the front he should be wearing a homemade denim like suit made by his mother because not only could that stay faithful to the comics it can also link back to the fact that Clark Kent was raised on a farm in Kansas and that his parents really did love him and no matter what view him as their son

[@kristianwhite1061]

My Personal DCEU Order, I’ve had this for a while now: 1. Man of Steel (2013) 2. Wonder Woman (2014) 3. The Flash (2014) 4. Man of Tomorrow (2015)(MoS2) 5. Green Lantern Corps (2015) 6. The Dark Knight Returns (2016)(BvS)* 7. Suicide Squad (2016) 8. Wonder Woman 1984 (2017) 9. Justice League (2017)* 10. Aquaman (2018) 11. Shazam! (2018) 12. Green Lantern: Blackest Night (2018) 13. Last Son of Krypton (2019)(MoS3)* 14. The Flashpoint Paradox (2019)* 15. Titans (2019) 16. Wonder Woman: Paradise Lost (2020) 17. Legion of Doom (2020)(SS2) 18. Justice League: Doom (2020)* 19. Girl of Steel (2021) 20. Batman Beyond (2021) ....... *Directed by Christopher Nolan featuring Christian Bale, this would be an equivalent to BvS. No Superman Death or Doomsday. *This Justice League would feature Darkseid, a force that would bring everyone together, including the alive Superman. No Cyborg, but Martian Manhunter and Green Lantern. *Man of Steel 3 would feature Doomsday, after the second featured Lex Luthor. Essentially an earned Death of Superman movie. *This Flashpoint would see flash trying to reverse Superman’s death and screwing up the timeline. This altered timeline features his mother alive. *The Justice League would be under assault from the Legion of Doom as seen in the previous movie, receiving help from the Titans that include Cyborg who will later join. Will include the revival of Superman to stop Braniac, revealed to be the secret puppet master of the Legion. Side Note, I like the idea of naming the supergirl movie after the first Superman, and having Batman Beyond conclude the series that began with Batman Begins. In another world haha.

[@NexusVerseTV]

“Only one thing moves that fast, and I don’t see Barry Allen making trips to the Arctic” that was brilliant

[@austinharvey3493]

"I think it's the best superhero movie since the rami trilogy" Iron man three: allow me to introduce myself Seriously its probably better than you remember and definitely feels like a classic superhero movie

[@comforth3898]

Agreed🤝

[@comforth3898]

Agreed 🤝🤝🤝🤝

[@jud1stunna]

My DCEU Outline. 1. Batman is coming across advance weaponry in Gotham and has to take down the Penguin balancing his Batman vs Bruce Wayne persona. Penguin in a social climbing criminal with the Iceberg Lounge as a front for his criminal dealings. In the end he stops the Penguin but looses the shipment of advanced weapons. Post credit he calls Clark Kent as an investigative journalist to look into it. 2. Superman. Clark is investigating advanced weapon from Batman. He finds them but ends up getting his but kicked. The weapons are being dealt by Intergang who takes teenage orphans to work for them. Lois is also investigating Gertrude Goodness' children nonprofit. In the end, they find that Gertrude is the leader of Intergang. Lois gets captured and Superman has to save her by taking our some advanced body suits. End credit, police show up to arrest Gertrude and she boomtubes out. 3. Aquaman. Arthur is a halfbreed human/atlantean. Mira shows up and begs him to come to Atlantas and depose Orn who is angry at the surface world for pollution. Orn is being supplied with advance weapons by Black Manta. Orn wants Arthur dead but can't do so himself. So he hires Black Manta to take our Arthur. Arthur ends up defeating Black Manta and deposes Orn. Orn escapes. End credit Orn meets with a cloaked figure, Dasaad, who promises him soon the oceans will be his and the world will be conquered. 4. Flash. Barry works for Central City police. In his free time he is investigating his mothers murder to free his father. His investigation leads him to his mother's old coworker at Starlabs Chad Rook. His mother was studying weapons that we confiscated by Superman. Chad is able to use the tech to develop a suit that can alter the weather aka Weather Wizard. Barry confronts Chad as the flash and they battle. Flash, using different techniques is able to death Weather Wizard and free his father. more if interested

[@fabriziomilcent3835]

Im interested!

[@jaw8689]

I’m interested

[@Reptileus]

I wanna know what the hell is it with making Superman Jesus... for the LOVE OF WHATEVER CONTROLS THE UNIVERSE IF ANYTHING DOES AT ALL! He does not need to be Jesus, he does not need to be a messiah! He needs to be a MAN first.

[@shelinam]

Agreed. The movies need to focus more on the “man” part than the “super.” It’s the humanity in him that makes him extraordinary not his Kryptonian heritage.

[@tonysnyder9]

It's not about making him Jesus, it's about what the world would perceive him as. Never once does Clark think of himself that way, when it's from his perspective it shows a man trying to do the right thing, but from the world's perspective, people would look at him as a messiah figure, not understanding anything about him, or they view him as a threat. It's all right there in the movie, just gotta pay attention. I'm sorry that Zack Snyder uses visuals and emotion to get his point across rather than useless dialog to make things simpler for you. Dig a little deeper.

[@petrenicolae3282]

My version of DCEU(so far): Superman(origin story and Metalo is the villain not a cyborg but a supeer robot made by Luthor to actually look like an human named Jonh Colbert. Metalo begins to fall in love with Lois but knowing that she likes Superman,he tries to kill him but Superman wins by destroying him Lois being the first reporter there sees the destruction the the dying robot calling her name.She realise that the robot is Jonh and looks at Superman like he is a monster,and runs. Mid-Credit Scene: Jimmy Olsen at at an Interview for a job at Daily Planet. Post-Credit scene 1:Luthor looking at the news about Superman being a killer,saying: „Well Jonh,you did good,but next time it will be better!" turns to a container that has the real Jon Colbert being made into a cyborg. Post-Credit Scene 2:a shot into the Phanthom Zone showing Zod laughing like a madman.

[@SaintEuripides]

Man of Metal Fatman vs Blooperfan: Lawn of Moustache Suicide Bobs Thunder Cushion Moustache Leaf Equalman Kazaam

[@benkenobi8328]

This is all amazing but honestly I felt like we should’ve gotten a Batman film not a superman 2 film or whatever we got in Batman v superman

[@dannybenhur6123]

Smallville Jonathan and Man of Steel Jonathan are total opposites...

[@tonysnyder9]

Disagree, they both are trying to protect their son and teach him right from wrong, not that hard to understand.

[@Itsmmkangya]

This was actually so good. You should actually do an updated version

[@circe2258]

i created my own DCEU movie timeline!! would be interested in your opinion on it DCU MOVIES Darkseid Chronicles Chapter 1 The batman Man of steel Wonder woman The flash Dawn of justice The Justice league Chapter 2 Batman : Knightfall Aqua man Last child of krypton Wonder woman: Paradise lost Shazam Batman : The man who laughs Green lantern: Sinestro’s might Justice : Panic in the sky Chapter 3 Suicide squad : mad house Tower of Babel Wonder woman: Gods and mortals Aquaman : The Lost kingdom Legend of Hawk birds of prey and the fantabulous emancipation of one Harley Quinn Fate The Darkseid Multiverse Chronicles Chapter 4 Nightwing Green lantern : Rage of Crimson red Shazam: fury of the gods Zatanna Man from Mars Flash 2 The feline maiden Titans The new gods birds of prey and the humorous extermination of all men Green arrow Nightwing: Court of Owls Chapter 5 Martian Manhunter 2 New gods : mythos Atomic venture Zatanna : mistress of magic Teen Titans 2 Nightwing: The Last Laugh Constantine Mister Miracle Part 1: Lantern: Blackest Night Fate 2 Part 2: Flashpoint Part 3: Crisis On infinite Earths (have plot written for chapter 1-3 and parts 1-3 of Crisis on infinite earths so just ask if u wanna know)

[@breawycker]

What are we some kind of Fanboy rewrites?

[@heyman7040]

(I'd start this universe in 2020) PHASE ONE: Batman Man of Steel Batman 2 Aquaman Wonder Woman Justice League PHASE TWO: Batman 3 Aquaman: The Dark Trench Wonder Woman: League of One DC Legends of Tomorrow Justice League: Throne of Atlantis Shazam! PHASE THREE: Batman v Superman Doctor Fate DC Legends of Tomorrow 2 Nightwing: Year One Aquaman: Tide Justice League: Darkseid War Part 1 Shazam! and Black Adam Supergirl Justice League: Darkseid War Part 2 Nightwing: The Red Hood PHASE FOUR: White Canary New Gods Richard Dragon and the Legend of the Claw Legend of Aquaman Doctor Fate : Crash of Universes

[@m10original19]

Geo Isales I know that you based this whole list on the mcu.

[@heyman7040]

@@m10original19 Yeah, I was wondering if anyone would notice

[@Abominatrix650]

This is amazing! You have some really good ideas! Except the whole keeping Doomsday thing. I'm a strong advocate of NOT using the great, big thing that kills Superman 2 movies into the franchise. It's still too soon. Instead, I'd keep him alive and replace him with Bizarro, which serves the same purpose as a rogue zombie Kryptonian but also fits better than Doomsday.

[@Jack-ql3yq]

I just wish we had more solo movies before jumping straight into Justice league to try keep up with the MCU

[@autismalert2788]

I agree 100% except don’t blow up Diablo’s head thanks. Choose someone else other than killer croc and diablo

[@troyoboyo17]

Didn't Diablo die in the original Suicide Squad though? I'm like 90% sure he did but the movie might have just not presented it well

[@autismalert2788]

troyoboyo17 yeah he did, but I liked him and since your remaking it could you spare him haha

[@th3rasave]

@@autismalert2788 it'd provide more drama tho

[@kyler.murray4016]

Imo, Zod’s whole plan just screams Justice League level threat. Have him be the main villain of the first Justice League villain, with Brainiac being the main in the 2nd, followed by Darkseid. For the first JL, have Superman, Batman, Wonder Woman, Hal Jordan GL, Barry Allen Flash, Aquaman, Martian Manhunter, & Cyborg (yes 8) have them have their own individual films FIRST (except for Superman, who has 2) and also have a World Finest instead of Batman v Superman. So Phase l would look like this: •Man of Steel- Have Superman take on a villain OP, while also having to learn his place on the world & Humanity (Summer 2013) •Green Lantern- Have Hal Jordan take on the former GL Sinestro while also learning how to be a GL while being mentored by Alan Scott (Fall 2013) •Martian Manhunter- Have MM also be a castoff on to Earth by his treacherous brother Ma’alefa’ak (Spring 2014) •Batman: Night of the Owls- Basically the title, add in Jason Todd (yes, I said it) & Batgirl (No Nightwing YET) (Summer 2014) •Aquaman- Basically similar to his film, just no mention of him being a hero (Fall 2014) •Flash- Have him take on Professor Zoom while also trying to prove his father’s innocence and his mothers real death (Summer 2015) •Man of Steel 2- Have Supes take on the partnership between Lex Luthor & Metallo, who happens to have a past relationship with Lois (Summer 2015) •Cyborg- Tricky, but the basic idea is him being in a car accident, where it leaves him with significant injuries that hamper his football and basically cripple him. BUT, it wasn’t his fault; his best friend also was part of the crash. Have Cyborg try to adapt to his new life, but his best friend just keeps blaming it on Vic. Have both become Cyborgs and take on each other. (Fall 2015) •Wonder Woman- Basically the same (Spring 2016) •Batman & Superman: World’s Finest- Have Batman & Supes take on the partnership between Lex Luthor & Joker. Have Batman’s rogues like Poison Ivy, Clayface, Mr Freeze, Bane, Two-Face etc, go along with the Joker to take on the heroes. (Summer 2016) •Justice League- General Zod’s plan to turn Earth to New Krypton with Batman, Superman, Wonder Woman, Green Lantern, Flash, Aquaman, Martian Manhunter, & Cyborg team up to take on Zod and his Kryptonian Military Guild. Have the Kryptonian be OP asf. The whole movie would be similar to the JL episode where the Thanagarians invade. (Summer 2017) Phase l complete

[@jacob-un4xc]

I would love to see your phase 2

[@kyler.murray4016]

jacob 9507 Phase 2 is where things SHOULD get interesting. Start off with a Man of Steel 3 where Lex Luthor runs for president going up against the candidate of the other political party (doesn’t really matter which one is which) in Nominee Raymond Jensen (aka Parasite). Also, Superman must also deal with the threat of a new Genetic Research Project that alex Luthor is funding for his corrupt criminal activities which Businessman Clay Ramsey (aka Kryptonite Man) is the head. Start introducing other heroes such as the Hawks, SHAZAM!, Doctor Fate, Green Arrow. Introduce other teams as well like the Teen Titans, Suicide Squad, The Outsiders, The New Gods, JLA Dark, & The Omega Men. The Omega Men, to me, should be DC’s version of the Guardians of the Galaxy. In the sequels for Batman, Wonder Woman, Martian Manhunter, Flash, Cyborg, Aquaman, introduce the Sidekicks so that they can start off the Titans. The big bad of this Phase would be Brainiac. Add in another Batman & Superman: Public Enemies where both Supes & Batman team up in exposing President Lex Luthor while also being in the run of the new UltraMen, a private Superhero team that Lex Luthor composed of in order to ruin Superman’s reputation.

[@jacob-un4xc]

@@kyler.murray4016 love your version I would take that over this dceu

[@hydevanbrutton1516]

great input. I feel the same and was saying WB and their Directors ( Zach Synder) were going to ruin the DCMU. Some of the things they did wrong: 1. Frankenstein movies . ( They took iconic comic stories and mashed them into a monster on life support. ( Death of superman, Batman vs Superman, Wonder woman, The Dark night). They hacked off bits from here and there and botched it up. 2. Terrible Directing/interpretation. Zach synder's Justice league is another….. Watchmen 2. ( its almost like the same dark, avoid apocalypse theme. The bonding over "martha". The dark-ness of the movie and the terrible CGI. It was a terrible rendition from someone that wanted a paycheck more then to bring the story to life. 3. Casting. Ben Affleck's' Batman was to be the glue that holds the DCMU together like ( Robert Downey Jr's Irion man). He was the wrong fit. Too Old, Too Fat, and just did not look like he cared. They should have gone a bit younger because as the movies get delay and it takes a few years to crank out some movies hes not going to be in his 50-60's. Also Batman has meet his Justice league teammates early in life and established a realationship. They basically merged The dark night w/ Death & introduction of superman. 4. No originality. They are just remaking amazing DC animated movies. In the animations its easy to get a story on board and not as expensive, but to try and shoot shot-by-shot is harder and they failed. marvel takes movies from comics. dc is taking movie form re-used animation … and parts from here and there. 5. Short-term gain vs long-term sustainability and development. They only care about catching up to marvel now and want to make the quick buck. They are not planning out the movies and the integrated story introduction and character development. its literally a rat-race to pump out pre-mature superhero movies to the public before the audience gets tired. Marvel had built loyalty and a following..... WB/DC as basically said "F You!" to its fanbase and pushed them away to be more into marvel. HOW TO FIX. 1. Proper casting: Change Batman ( Pay the big money to get back Christian bale or find someone who can act and play bruce wayne) . Proper Lex Luthor ( they messed that up. I wanted to walk out of the film.) 2. Stop re-using the same villains over and over and over again. ( Joker.... general zod…… lex Luthor...… great... but boring now) I like how marvel and Spiderman are using other villains to bring new life. 3. Don't just remake the animated movies. 4. Don't make a Frankenstein movie. 5. Get directors that now comics the beauty of the characters 6. Plan out the long-haul 7. Get BRUCE TIM on board. He made the animated batman and superman series we all love. even the justice league that was the best. He did a super job let him have control to get these characters they due.

[@troyoboyo17]

I agree with everything except recasting Batman (I think Affleck is a pretty good choice but hasn't been in a good movie yet) and including Bruce Timm. Bruce Timm imo has gone completely crazy as of late when it comes to the more recent animated movies that he's worked on like Killing Joke. Without the censors of children's television he's able to do whatever he wants which isn't really a good thing. Instead of Timm I think bring in Paul Dini. He did a lot of the same work as Timm in the DCAU while also writing for the Arkham series.

[@hydevanbrutton1516]

paul dini is also a good bet youre right. how do you feel about Jim lee becoming the new chief creative officer, I hope that also comes into the DCMU as well as comics. Good stories support good movies. Yes, Bruce Tim's the killing joke and his newer movies were a bit different then what I was used to. Not sure if I liked the killing joke tbh I'm hoping the marvel guys get bored and decide to jump ships or take on a new challenge and try with the DCU. . With X-Men others characters coming back they'll be busy for a long time making good content and introducing many people to new and different stuff.

[@troyoboyo17]

I'm not sure how I feel about Jim Lee. His art is obviously some of the best in the business, but I'm worried that might be too much for him. He already seems pretty stretched out as it is as evidence by some of his new art. But who knows, we'll see how it goes. I preferred Geoff Johns in that role but anything is better than Dan DiDio. And I don't see the Marvel guys ever leaving Marvel lol. Unless if there's some big falling out between them and Disney i think they're pretty much stuck there for life haha

[@baloproductions]

I agree with you, but “frankenstein” movies can work really well, marvel has been doing it for quite a while, but the best example of this is thor: ragnarok, they mixed a bunch of thor stories like ultimate thor and bits of planet hulk etc.

[@lindsaybrowne8183]

"We introduce the scene in a pretty similar way but just not edited by a four year old" So GOOD

[@ADEADSKELETON]

Great Vid, good insight and presentation, wish your channel luck I think you've got potential.

[@troyoboyo17]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that!

[@81u9]

This is how it should have started 2013: Batman We meet a Bruce Wayne who has been doing this for a few years. - He adopts Dick Grayson - The main villain is someone like Riddler/ Scarecrow/ Two Face - A side villain may be included such as Firefly/ Pyg - The main cast of Characters includes Bruce Wayne, Dick Grayson, Alfred Pennyworth, Jim Gordon, - Smaller roles could be characters like Barbara Gordon, Lucius Fox - Catwoman can cameo - Riddler/ Mr. Freeze Easter/ Killer Crock eggs may be included - Main Villain gets defeated and is put in Arkham - Side Villain and Catwoman both escape - Dick Grayson becomes Robin at the end ( Bruce Reveals Robin suit) Mid-Credits: Joker Teaser Post-Credits: Superman Teaser

[@GodlyToonz]

“Save ma-...” *save my mom*

[@mnemo-nyx5750]

Your narration is not only very entertaining but it sounds scarily similar to how I describe any of my rewrites/story.

[@Icybubba]

Dang, your version of Suicide Squad sounded really good

[@agenerousfox87]

My ideas for a DC film franchise: -The Batman (Penguin, Firefly) -Superman (Lex Luthor, Copperhead) -Batman and Robin (Riddler, Catwoman, Killer Croc) -Green Lantern (Hector Hammond, Black Hand) -Aquaman (Ocean Master) -Batman: Year One (The Joker, Two-Face, Deadshot) -Wonder Woman (Ares, Doctor Poison) -Flash (Captain Boomerang and Reverse Flash) -Nightwing: Year one (Blockbuster, Deathstroke) -Justice League (Stepen wolf) [Batman, Superman, Flash, Green Lantern, Aquaman, Wonder Woman] -Superman 2 (General Zod, partly Lex Luthor) -Batman 4 (Ras al Ghul, Lady Shiva, Talia Al-Ghul) -Green Lantern 2 (Paralax, Sinestro) -Green Arrow (Brick, The List) -Flash 2 (Godspeed, Captain Cold) -Justice League 2: (Brainiac) [Prev + Martian Manhunter, Green Arrow] -Green Arrow 2 (Merlyn) -Wonder Woman 2 (Cheetah) -Batman: A death in the Family (Joker, Harley Quinn) -Aquaman 2 (Black Manta) -Suicide Squad (Onslaught) -Wonder Woman 3 (Circle, Gigantta) -Teen Titans (Fearsome Five) [Kid Flash, Nightwing, Starfire, Terra, Cyborg, Wondergirl, Arsenal, Tempest] -Green Lantern 3 (Carol Ferris) -Justice League 3 (Kalibak) [Prev+ Black Canary, Hawkgirl, Zatana] -Batman 6 (Poison Ivy, Harley Quinn) -Titans 2 (Trigon) [Prev+ Robin, Wondergirl, Raven) -Shazam (Doctor Sivana) -Flash 3 (Reverse Flash, Mirror Master) -Superman 3 (Mongul) -Batman: Under the Red Hood (Red hood, Killer moth, Black Mask) -John Constantine (Anton Arcane) -Green Arrow: Snowbirds Don't Fly (Ricardo Diaz, China White) -Justice League 4 (Vandal Savage, Scandal Savage) [Prev+ Shazam, Cyborg, Doctor Fate, Atom] -Titans: Judas Contract (Deathstroke, Hive, Terra) [Nightwing, Robin, Kid Flash, Batgirl, Beast boy, Starfire, Wondergirl, Raven] -Green Lantern 4 (Red Lantern Core) -Batman: Hush (Riddler, Thomas Elliot) -Nightwing: Russia (Nyssa Al-Ghul, KGBeast) -John Constantine X Doctor Fate (Klarion) -Green Arrow 4 (Tommy Merlyn) -The Trinity (Silver Banshee, Silver Swan, KGBeast) -Flash 4 (Trajectory, Trickster) -Batwoman (Scarecrow, Zsasz) -Firestorm (Killer Frost, Maxwell Lord) -Justice League 5 (Darkseid, Desaad, Knockout) [Prev+ Lex Luthor, Elongated Man, Batwoman, Guy Gardener, Supergirl, Steel, Metamorpho, Stargirl, Citizen Steel, Captain Atom] -Flash 5 (Gorilla Grodd) -Suicide Squad 2 (Bane) -Supermen: Match (Match, Lex Luthor, Mercy Graves) [Superman, Supergirl, Superboy] -Batman 7 (Court of Owls) -Green Arrow 5 (Cupid, Anarky) -The Titans (Deathstoke, Titans East, Jericho, Ravager) [Nightwing, Starfire, Kid Flash, Superboy, Miss Martian, Donna Troy, Tempest, Firestorm] -Wonder Woman 4 (Villainy, Inc, Devastation) -Shazam 2 (Black Adam) -Birds of Prey (Black Mask, Bronze Tiger) -Suicide Squad 3 (Cadmus) -Teen Titans (Brotherhood of Evil, Cheshire, Mr. Freeze) [Red Robin, Robin, Raven, Blue Beattle, Bumblebee, Spoiler, Beast boy, Lagoon boy, Artemis] -Martian Manhunter (Ma'alefa'ak) -Flash 6 (Hunter Zolomon, Heatwave, Weather Wizard) Aquaman 3 (Charbdis, King Shark, {Black manta}) -Cyborg (The Phantom Limbs) -Justice League vs Injustice (Lex Luthor, Black Adam, Black Mantis, Sinestro, Bane, Deathstroke, Professor Zoom, Gorilla Grodd, Bizzaro, Cheetah, Klarion, Cupid) [Prev. minus Lex Luthor] -The Death of Superman (Doomsday) -Legends of Tomorrow (Jon Carter, Per Degaton) [Rip Hunter, Booster Gold, Stargirl, Elongated Man, Spoiler, Citizen Steel, Huntress, Silver Swan, Black Lightning] -Green Arrow: Year One (Professor Ivo) -Flashpoint (Reverse-Flash, Aquaman, Wonder Woman, Prometheus)

[@mmmbhss3468]

How the heck did you write this . It's good tho

[@agenerousfox87]

@@mmmbhss3468 I wrote it on a word document while bored and drunk one night. Some of these movies are nessecary for the whole francise but the immense ammount of Wonder Woman and Flash movies aren't as neccessary.

[@douglasdaniel4504]

2:20 THANK you. One of the single most irritating character mistakes they made with MoS. Also, re: MoS, I would have liked them to foreshadow the fact that Kryptonians could seriously hurt each other before they get to Zod's death (which I was cool with, personally). Up to that point, it didn't seem Clark and the other Kryptonians could actually damage each other in any significant way-- the Battle of Smallville was mostly them throwing each other around-- and the neck snap just seemed to come out of the blue for me. I liked your take on all of these films. Your version would have improved on the actual product in every case (except maybe, WW, because I didn't notice the mustache....)

[@troyoboyo17]

Seriously! I think that comes from what they were doing in the new 52 with Superman where they tried to make him more like Batman which imo didn't really work. And yeah actually now that you mention it you're right. Throughout the movie no Kryptonian really feels like they get hurt so a lot of the fights feel inconsequential. I think it would be cool if there was a scene where Superman first gets punched in the face by Zod or someone, and he flies back, looks down to see that he's bleeding, and he's surprised because he's never been hurt like this before. Like go full Dragonball Z with it lol.

[@dignerds]

They made no mistakes with MOS..

[@__________1175]

Except, had either of you paid attention, Pa Kent *didn't* tell him to let the kids die. Clark asks what he was supposed do and if he should've let them die. Pa Kent says "Maybe" and he's clearly reluctant. He then goes on to elaborate that when people know about him and what he can do it will change everything. It's not that Pa Kent wants Clark to be some empaty-less sociopath, he wants to protect his son. Frankly, I felt the rewrites here lacked a lot of that depth and went for more superficial fan service and wish fulfillment. Another example is when he mentions that Pa Kent should've died of a heart attack because Clark can't do anything to stop it. Whether you liked the tornado bit or not, that essentially accomplishes the same thing. Clark cannot save Pa Kent without exposing himself so Pa Kent resigns himself to his fate. Clark could save his father but it wouldn't be what his father wanted and it would endanger Clark. Meanwhile what's the tragedy of Pa Kent dying of a heart attack again? The god like being can't save his father from an illness? Yeah, that's way deeper. Too many MoS rewrites are just clearly people who didn't like that it wasn't the traditional Superman (and wasn't intended to be) and just try to mold him to be more like their ideal version.

[@ThatJohnKillion1970]

This is the second time I've heard someone replace the "Martha" scene with "mother". It totally saves everything else.

[@kartikadewi3270]

Clark : save my mom ! Bruce : Alien mother, ok. (Killing Clark by stabbing him) Killing Lois Lane Killing Lex Luthor, Killing martha kent and every luthor goons. Yeah..... NO

[@lunatic4152]

I liked it, this deserves more views and you deserve more subscribers. But honestly there's one thing that I think should be changes in the man of steel sequel. It's doomsday. I honestly think that lex is a genius and creating doomsday is a stupid move. Doomsday is an uncontrollable killing machine and even if doomsday kills superman he will still destroy stuff and kill people and that's basically putting an end to humanity and himself. What I would change is make lex be in a battle suit with kryptonite and everything, and superman and batman could work together to defeat him. His suit gets destroyed and lex gets out he points a gun at superman and superman doesn't do anything seens he knows his bulletproof and lex shoots him but the bullet is kryptonite, supes gets shot and batman tries to take the bullet out but he fails and superman dies. The rest goes the same way that you said it. Great rewrite please do justice league.

[@troyoboyo17]

Thank you! I really appreciate that. And yeah I totally agree. I think, firstly, bringing in Doomsday in Superman's second movie was a huge mistake, and it absolutely should have been a Battle Suit instead, I love that idea. I don't know if I like the idea of Lex killing Superman though. I think if you do the Death of Superman, you should do it right, and that's with Doomsday (Not saying what they did was right, obviously, it was very bad, they shouldn't have done it at all at that point). But I do really like the idea of the Battle Suit. When I first was thinking up ideas for this script, I had Lex actually turn himself INTO a version of Doomsday with the Kryptonian virus, which I think might be a decent middle ground with your idea and what we got. Lex would then die with Superman, and then we'd get a scene with his father, Lex Luthor Senior, standing over his grave. I didn't go with it though because it was a little crazy and out there, and I wanted to stick kind of close to what we got so it would fit into JL. Which I now regret, because JL was a big ol disappointment.

[@capello5688]

When you hit us with that Justice League cartoon theme music I got a wave of Nostalgia

[@PWORBLX]

Dream Lineup: Phase 1 Man Of Steel The Batman Wonder Woman The Flash Justice League Green Lantern PHASE 2 Man Of Steel 2 Shazam Gotham City Sirens Justice League 2 Batman 2: Terror In Gotham Batgirl Injustice PHASE 3 Nightwing Flashpoint Wonder Woman 1897 Titans Suicide Squad The Lantern Corps

[@joking_oregon1]

I seriously got an infinity war ad on this like 4 months later after the movie comes out.

[@huncrweo3157]

How do you not have more subs?, dude this was great

[@troyoboyo17]

Huncrweo Honestly your guess is as good as mine lol. But seriously thank you, I really appreciate it!

[@gia2790]

Bruh It sounds amazing. You have great potential. I'm 2 years late but Im glad I found it cuz it sounds better than the whole of DCEU

[@Factsworld_001]

Why would any one say his mother's Name Instead of Mother. That was really stupid. Glad u understand that.

[@masstree3479]

Here's my dceu: first movie Superman: same story as man of steel with a little changes Batman: same story as batman arkham origins with a few changes as well The Joker: Joker narrating his life unreliably to a psychiatrist and at the end its revealed the psychiatrist is Harleen Quinzel and is falling for the joker. Superman 2: Man of Steel.: story about lex luthor and superman. Wonder Woman: same story as wonder woman with Ares not having a mustache. The Flash: The flash is trying to take down killer frost as she tries to cure herself in bad ways and she hires captain boomerang as a mercenary(captain boomerang will be cooler and more bad ass) Slade: a story about death strokes life. Suicide Squad: they go on some sick mission Batman 2: court of owls are trying to get a super weapon from the government as Amanda waller sends the suicide squad to get it as well. Green Lantern : haven't really thought of this as much Justice League: cyborg will be introduced here. Villain is steppenwolfe. Sorry of it kinda sounds simple rn lol I'm still working on a video about it. But eventually I'll have a proper dceu. Thanks for reading all this if u did 😅

[@lukeyboy191]

Man of steel: Change the movie titles to superman: man of steel. Make it way more light toned and hopeful with more comedy and removing the ugly filter, re structure the film with its flashbacks as it’s done really messy. Bvs: Change the film into just superman: man of tomorrow focusing on just being a superman movie with it being superman vs lex Luther with lex Luther being old and bitter basically taking Batman’s role in the film and erasing young lex and his whole thing and also no doomsday, Wonder Woman or superman death end the film Suicide squad: Change the film into a batman film I’m sorry but a suicide squad film had no business being in the first wave of dc films so instead we are gonna do batman: the red hood with batman being in his prime but not old and he also doesn’t kill and the story follow the under the red hood story Wonder Woman: keep exactly the same however at the end area doesn’t show up and the film ends with Diana killing the general and realising ares had nothing to do with the war Justice league: Have the movies villain be darkseid not steppenwolf and start off throwing us right into it with darkseid descending on earth with superman being the first line of defense with him facing darkseid but then have him have his ass absolutely beat and he first time there is someone more powerful then him so use that introduction as the point where superman goes I can’t do this alone and have him go and recruit the league

[@egghead4624]

This is excellent. Your bvs version is so much better than the movies, the only thing I would do different is justice league. I would have them unite for someone other than darkseid, as I see him more of a endgame villian, instead start with the white Martians, than go to the legion of doom in the second one, and have them unite to fight the league, than darkseid

[@lukeyboy191]

EggHead I like your idea of white Martians reminds me of secret origins

[@dignerds]

What a stupid ending for wonder woman You suggested ....also..most of the scenes in Man of steel wasnt filtered and featured rich color..and the whole movie was filled with hope...

[@cwest841]

Celticluke19... sounds like you're a Marvel fanboy.

[@j.t2348]

Man of steel was already great kid, just Jonathan Kent had to change.. bvs and suicide squad is the one that needs change

[@RFSCaveman]

I think, in WW, Ares should have A) not shown up at all. or B) not have been killed (if he really was).

[@AlejandroMontoyaMarin]

Great video. My all time WISH movie was JLA. I drew a fake teaser tgrailer back in 2009, of what I wouldve done as a JLA trailer and that got me into film school. I wish wish wish one day I can do something DC. But i love your ideas, great work!

[@troyoboyo17]

That's actually really awesome! Is that on KZbin? I'd love to check it out

[@AlejandroMontoyaMarin]

troyoboyo17 no! Hahaha it was drawn. Not filmed but, I am a fan of JLA and that was the film i always dreamed of doing.

[@Cwothe2]

Holy shit nice, got goosebumps at 4:47 just thinking about it, good work

[@selinguven3115]

Doomsday shouldn’t be in BvS

[@edwardellis3038]

i agree

[@arthurbriand2175]

Bizarro should, he is a wrapped superman, that is everything batman has been training for.

[@sorandomandquirky9425]

@@arthurbriand2175 Someone else watched Nando's videos, I see

[@seekeroftruth9454]

Arthur BRIAND and then what role should ww have?

[@arthurbriand2175]

@@seekeroftruth9454 watch the Nando v Movies video. It is a great essay on how to fix BvS. Basically WW is only Diana Prince in this. She would not fight in the last battle because it should be something limited to Batman and Superman

[@apurbo7967]

I think forever be grateful to you for adding the Justice League music at the end.

[@comicmiracle9216]

Why did she kill Diablo tho, why Diablo man. The rest of your ideas for everything are good though, I really like them.

[@troyoboyo17]

Thanks! I appreciate that! Honestly, wasn't expecting people to have this much of an emotional connection to El Diablo 😂 I just tried to follow along with what the actual movie did (I'm pretty sure he died. It definitely seems like he did... Actually now I'm not sure). But to be completely honest, I think El Diablo's character arc as is presented in the movies is kind of a "one and dead" kind of thing. I think his sacrifice was probably the best part of the original Suicide Squad and gave him a full and satisfying end. I'm not sure if keeping him alive for future movies would really add anything and there are probably other characters who could fill the same-ish role but also bring something new. But that's just my view on the character and stuff, you're of course welcome to disagree with me

[@1701bf]

THANK YOU!!! you just summed it all up so neatly! I know can rest and leave my friends in peace with my mental reshoots!

[@troyoboyo17]

Oooh I like that term "mental reshoots" I think I might steal that from you in the future if that's cool 😂

[@mr.libluckiestinfinitebene2589]

Some ways I'm and I do agree with you, some ways I'm and I do disagree with you

[@luisoncpp]

It's interesting your point of "how a fanboy could have a better idea than a professional filmmaker" and I think I know the answer: it's easy for film makers to get lost in production, for different reasons, like dealing with other people involved in the production that wants to impose a different vision, budgets cuts, delays, and also the continuous feedback of all people involved could distort a lot the perception of the project itself. After reading the script soo many times it loses its impact, and it's very hard to know if the changes suggested by other members of the team are positive or not.

[@toatakanuva4846]

My Phase One of DCEU would be something like this: 1) Man of Steel (2013) 2) Wonder Woman (2014) 3) Batman: Under The Red Hood (2014) 4) The Flash (2015) 5) Aquaman (2015) 6) Batman V Superman (2016) 7) Green Lantern Corps (2016) 8) Justice League (2017)

[@MrTDownes]

Great video... more people should watch this

[@troyoboyo17]

Thank you!

[@TheVarietyVendor]

Here's how i would've done it... Man of steel. Martian manhunter is Kal-El's care taker. Krypton is about to explode(which is later revealed that the government's super computer, "Brainiac" is the reason behind it). Jor-El is killed by his once military faction(led by Zod). And Lara is wounded. She sends her only son and shape-shifting family friend thru an escape pod to earth. The pod itself contains Krypton's history and has the ability to turn everything around it(within a 3 mile radius) into "Krypton-like" land(think hyrule from Legend of Zelda). When the pod crash lands in Kansas. Secret Agents surround it. And they pick apart the pod. Manhunter is still in sleep status due to the pod unexpectedly landing on earth a day early. The agents take away the green alien. Thinking he's the only worthy subject. A farmer sneaks into the scene wanting to investigate the situation. Curious to what is going on. He see's Baby Kal-El. Looks a far and he see's how cruel they seem by the way they're dragging the martian into their van. So he takes the baby away and get's into his truck. Telling his wife to drive really fast. Who looks into his lap. And see's the baby sleeping peacefully. Wide eyed, the couple race home. And decide to raise the kid as their own. Opening credits: MAN OF STEEL Martian man hunter's backstory is revealed after the opening Credits. And we see Mars being a peaceful land. Until all life just ended due to fatal virus that was unleashed from within the planet. Which is later revealed to have also been Brainiac's doing. Martian manhunter wake's up in the operating table. With his guts opened up. And man smoking a cigar looks at him from across the room. His name tag reads "Lionel Luthor". His teenage son is the doctor operating on Manhunter. The Martian turns into a giant demon. Breathes fire at the lab. And breaks out after killing a few men along the way. Only to realise he's on a remote island on the coast of indonesia. We cut back and forth. Of Clark growing up in a happy household and being a good kid. While Martian manhunter struggles, trying to survive while searching his once kid companion. Clark graduates college(at age 17). With a degree in journalism. And when he's out partying with his friends. He get's drunk and unleashes powers he never knew he had. Lazers shoot out and it cuts the electrical lines. Shutting off the power to half the neighborhood. Kids walk out of the party. And the house is shown sliced in half. It then crumbles down. Sun is up. A hand get's out of the rubble. And Clark slowly gets to. No one is around. He starts running home. He realises how fast he is. He thinks it's awesome. Once he's home. He's smiling "Ma! Pa! You'll never guess..". Pa Kent died of a heart attack. Thinking he lost his son... End of Part 1. I shall continue later...

[@Memedog1990]

The suicide squad was so good. You should become a writer

[@jacobkuffer4497]

"Superman: Enter The Night" Surely "Superman: Hour of Darkness" would've been a better fit?

[@angelob2375]

10:25 Press 🔼 for Inverted Takedown

[@FerylMusic]

Your narration was brilliant! You made me cry :) thank you for this.

[@thanos2161]

IF YOU DIDN'T STICK TO COMICS ,YOU COULD HAVE DONE THIS, Man of steel 2013 Batman meets superman 2014 The dark knight 2015 Wonder woman 2015 The dark Knight part 2 2016 The Justice league ,2017(villain=braniac) Throne of Atlantis 2017 Batman riddle me this 2018 Man of steel 3 2018 Wonder woman ,the darkseid war begins 2019 Doom patrol 2019 Grayson 2019 Jl vs DP 2020 Superman, the darkseid war part 2 2020 the darkseid war final chapter 2021 The death of superman 2021, Reign of supermen ,2022 Flashpoint2022 Orion 2023 Teen titans 2023 Robin 2023 Death of the flash 2024 Jl vs the anti monitor 2024(continues in no hope jl) NO HOPE JL 2025 JL FOREVER 2025

[@dilophosaurussk4333]

batman: we start with bruces parents getting murdered(again) then, we get a montage of bruce growing up, training to become batman, etc. so, we then cut to him finishing the first ever batman suit, no sonar, gliding or bullet-proof yet, basically, its just a costume with some sharp spikes on its arms, so we get bruce getting into it, grabbing a few batarangs, grabbing the batclaw, and taking off into the city, he wanders the roof-tops for a while, when, he encounters a bank-robbery, there are 4 guys inside, they are dressed in yellow suits with black stripes, they do not appear to have any guns, so he runs through the door, he leaps at one of them, kicks him to the ground, charges the second one, but gets a chain wrapped around his neck by another one from behind, he tries to escape but fails, we get a blurry image of a dark, fifth figure, before batman falls unconsious, he wakes up in a dumpster, he immediately realizes that he is missing his batarangs and the batclaw, he walks through gotham, gets on a small wooden boat he used to get to the mainland, and starts paddling to wayne manor, he barely makes it to the batcave, and immediately as he gets on the dock, he passes out, he wakes up, in his normal clothes, in his bed, he is soon greeted by alfred who already brings him a glass of water, bruce wakes up gets some food and water, and starts watching the news(you can get a cameo from daily planet) they talk about the bank robbery and about how all the criminals got away, BUT four individuals were identified by finger-prints(these are made up names so do not take them seriously), bobby adamson, clark winton, alfred parker and martin parker, after this, bruce searches the web for any more info on the goons, he finds out alfred and martin are brothers and that their mother who has already passed away owned 2 cats which they now have to take care of, that bobby owns 3 cats, and clarks cat has only recently passed away, so he gets something that ties them together: cats he looks the internet for any other crimes relating to the "cat gang" and finds the following: 2 bank robberies including the one from last night, and 3 murders of policemen, he also finds out they strike every friday, so he starts working on replacement batarangs and a new batclaw, sadly, he does not finnish the batclaw before friday, when he heads out to the city and keeps an eye out for bank robberies, he finds the goons robbing a bank, and tecidesn to take it more stealthily now, he sneaks through the doors, and one of the goons is sent to investigate, bruce throws a penny in fornt of himself and the goon says he found something the others come to him, bruce leas at them kicks one of them grabs the other one by the neck, throws him across the room, nearly evades a batclaw from the thrid one, grabs the batclaw, punches him, and kicks the last one in the gut, he quckly runs away from the scene, but gets stopped by catwoman on her cattilac and she says "wanna catch me? gotta race me" and drives away, bruce qucikly starts batclawing across the buildings and runs atop the rooftops but he just cannot catch up, he stops and then hears the catillac stop, he looks down and sees catwoman climbing a ladder he jumps down and while they are falling they get into a tussle, batman eventually gets the upper hand and when they hit the floor catwoman pushes a button before passing out, this triggers the catllac to start a countdown, bruce naturally assumes this is a bomb, grabs selina and batclaws to safety, the countdown: 5... 4... bruce jumps down and pushes it on the street, far from the buildings, the count down: 1... 0... it explodes and we cut to black, selina is at a hospital bed, she asks the nurse where is she, the nurse answers with in a hospital, selina asks how did she get here, the nurse anwers: a strange man in a costume carried you here, paid for your treatment, and told us you are a criminal

[@TomasTitan08]

5:23 messed up mic

[@brandawgz]

It was copyright deleting the audio

[@brendan4784]

This man can turn garbage fires into masterpieces

[@circe2258]

i created my own DCEU movie timeline!! would be interested in your opinion on it DCU MOVIES Darkseid Chronicles Chapter 1 The batman Man of steel Wonder woman The flash Dawn of justice The Justice league Chapter 2 Batman : Knightfall Aqua man Last child of krypton Wonder woman: Paradise lost Shazam Batman : The man who laughs Green lantern: Sinestro’s might Justice : Panic in the sky Chapter 3 Suicide squad : mad house Tower of Babel Wonder woman: Gods and mortals Aquaman : The Lost kingdom Legend of Hawk birds of prey and the fantabulous emancipation of one Harley Quinn Fate The Darkseid Multiverse Chronicles Chapter 4 Nightwing Green lantern : Rage of Crimson red Shazam: fury of the gods Zatanna Man from Mars Flash 2 The feline maiden Titans The new gods birds of prey and the humorous extermination of all men Green arrow Nightwing: Court of Owls Chapter 5 Martian Manhunter 2 New gods : mythos Atomic venture Zatanna : mistress of magic Teen Titans 2 Nightwing: The Last Laugh Constantine Mister Miracle Part 1: Lantern: Blackest Night Fate 2 Part 2: Flashpoint Part 3: Crisis On infinite Earths (have plot written for chapter 1-3 and parts 1-3 of Crisis on infinite earths so just ask if u wanna know)

[@hermes7330]

Your version of suicide squad is still bad. Why? The whole movie would be bland. And the ending would be cluttered

[@calebchavez3689]

Through your editing and story telling , i got real goosebumps when the Superman theme played. Well done

[@educatedscum5306]

Nice job brother

[@dignerds]

Terrible job..not even rookie level..Snyder had it right .