Galactic Arena Crowds Mocked Human Warriors, Until One Entered the Ring | Best HFY Stories

[@jayceecombs6887]

It just ended w/o ending! That is truly messed up!!!

[@cuchulainnmurphy4526]

Would like to hear more of this story. Please and thank you. 😊

[@noahkleugh9323]

Nice classic.

[@johnthomas-uy4tw]

If you underestimate your opponent you are dead.

[@ldryland]

So its not juste, the end was one if those, 'both warriors ended up in the pits if hell and now were all going to sung tributes'?

[@tioraytm]

A circle is round.

[@darkiee69]

A boxing ring is square.

[@tioraytm]

@@darkiee69 You are wise beyond your years.

[@CryptidsRoost]

I hope there there is a part two to come for this story...??

[@stuartodell1709]

Gave a down check because you cut it short. No finish! Too many words to discribe things.

[@pax1sw]

I gather from the angry comments there no Part 2 to this story. That sucks.

[@armandoa2484]

Much as I hate to say it, the story sucked. Just my opinion because there was to much at about nothing. As far as I can tell the galactic idiots designed the robotic pain in the butt to take out the ghost but it got out of hand and started taking anything and anyone in its way to get to him then time just stands still and leaves all of us wondering why, why did I pick this story? Needs work and a decent ending!

[@peterhall8572]

If you are in an even or straight fight, your tactics suck

[@GrigoriZhukov]

True wisdom.

[@michaellinnet6095]

This gets a thumbs down for being too verbose and no ending.

[@murphymmc]

So many unneeded words. Not every sentence needs multiple adjectives and adverbs to describe things that don't need it. A 14 minute story, painfully stretched out to 28 plus minutes. The entire power of the galaxy quivering from the attacks of one creature, that, my friend, is a fatal flaw in the story. Stop with part one, please do not attempt a part two.

[@armadillotoe]

Look at the lyrics to Piano Man. They are a great example of telling a compelling story with few words.

[@DM-sq3jm]

Were you describing your paragraph? 😂

[@eyesopen5386]

Well there's 14 minutes we'll never get back. Lol

[@GunnersRange]

What kind of BS is this?????