How to Write a Good Thesis Statement

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[@profarhampton]

Thanks Glory, I appreciate that!

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This was an excellent explanation of making a thesis statement. I'm sure that following your advice, I'm going to do great in my class. So, thanks a lot for the video!

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[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

Hi Achuil, I'm glad you found me! Thanks for your lovely comment. :)

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[@profarhampton]

Hello Jaizon. Wow, thanks so much. I hope my current students feel the same as you! :)

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[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

শঙ্খচিল (Shonkhochil) Hello! I'm so glad you understand now! Thanks for watching. :)

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The best explanation so far specially for younger writers.

[@profarhampton]

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[@catherinebinayan8563]

@@profarhampton Ma'am, how about a video of how to write a research essay introduction of an opinion essay for any controversial topic today? Most instructuonal vidoes just talk theoretucally without showing how it is actually done

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[@profarhampton]

That's so good to hear! Thanks for letting me know. 😊

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[@profarhampton]

You are most welcome!

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Hi there! Thank you so much for watching my videos! You will certainly learn a lot. Good luck! :)

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Hello Professor Hampton, I really enjoyed your video, I saw many videos but only yours was concise and to the point. Your voice is so soothing and invites the listener and viewer to stay tuned. I think Morgan Freeman should be worried..:) Best

[@profarhampton]

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Excellent! Thorough and succinct at the same time. Very clear explanation.

[@profarhampton]

I am honored by your comment. Thanks!

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Thank you so much for bringing such clarity to my understanding of a thesis!

[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

Sorry, I'm just seeing this comment, but I'm glad you found this video helpful. :)

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[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

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[@profarhampton]

I'm glad it was helpful. :)

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[@jenniebaez6947]

Will this work for a GED extended response? I am trying to learn how to write a response for my test. I need to learn how to start the topic and body of the essay for an argumentative response.

[@profarhampton]

Jennie, so sorry that I'm just seeing this, but my videos on the writing process and on the argument/persuasive essay show you how to get started.

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[@profarhampton]

D. Davis Thank you so much! :)

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[@profarhampton]

Awesome, thanks for watching! 😊

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Hi Jadari, thanks so much! :)

[@yasmensafi2260]

Hi please can you help me ? I have to analyze and write an essay the poem (On being brought from Africa to America) can you give me a good thesis statement to this poem?? and I’m sorry if I have mistakes ☺️

[@profarhampton]

Hi Yasmen, first you need to decide what theme you will examine in your essay. I believe this poem is by Phyllis Wheatley. An example might be, "In the poem, "On being brought from Africa to America," Phyllis Wheatley expresses feelings of emotional and physical loss of self and culture." Hope that helps!

[@yasmensafi2260]

Ashan R. Hampton really thank you so much .

[@nx97i17]

Hi, I have a question does the thesis statement come before or after the topic sentence?

[@profarhampton]

Hi there, a topic sentence is the first line of a paragraph. A thesis is usually the last line of the introduction for a full student essay.

[@nx97i17]

@@profarhampton oh I get it now, thank you so much for your quick respond 🥺💗💗

[@melaniefuifui1802]

How can you write a thesis statement for a self introduction speech?

[@profarhampton]

Hi Melanie, a thesis is for essays and research reports. Speeches are different. Speeches usually begin with a thought provoking question or quote. You should choose one of those openings that is meaningful to you and fits your personality. Hope that helps. Good luck!

[@melaniefuifui1802]

Ashan R. Hampton thanks so much

[@kennedyoloo7370]

Hi Ms Ashan, my lecturer asks me to write an essay on the pros and cons of hybrid cars, which theis will be good for my paper

[@profarhampton]

Hi Kennedy, Use the 3 point thesis statement. You need to come up with three areas that you can compare both cars on such as gas mileage, affordability...and think of one more! Watch my video on comparison/contrast essays. Good luck! :)

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Thanks, apt

[@profarhampton]

Thanks a lot for watching!

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[@profarhampton]

Great, thanks!

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I just subscribed to your channel I'm looking for help. I was wondering if I may submit a question privately related to education and professors.

[@profarhampton]

Hi Waston, I am so sorry that I'm just seeing this comment. Hopefully your situation was resolved. Thanks for watching!

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Hi i need all the help i can get on how to do a thesis statement

[@profarhampton]

Hi Chantell Stallworth, did the video help? Do you have specific questions the video didn't cover? Let me know.

[@Nadeen76]

Do we put an opposite view in thesis statement ?

[@profarhampton]

Hello Nanoosh, no, do not include an opposite view in the thesis. The thesis should prepare the reader for the subject and points of your essay. Your essay should focus on one point of view. You would only mention an opposing viewpoint in the concluding paragraphs of an argument essay. Thanks for your question!

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its really Helpful.

[@profarhampton]

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Thanks

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You're welcome!