"I Woke Up to an Emergency Alert on my Phone" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@paunchycactus6459]

Mrcreepypasta:"The monsters have been eradicated, I feel relieved" Me: looks at time......15 mins left "OH GOD"

[@fluffybum204]

I got that

[@Beeawooo]

Lol me too

[@ralstonmorgan1456]

...

[@hotpocket3120]

ong

[@anonymousskelly6091]

*I FEEL THIS*

[@FLASHM97]

Biggest plot hole. How did the phone battery last so long

[@BubbleTEA-or8jx]

Uniform_collector he had a charger?

[@9bang88]

Bubble TEA where did he plug it in

[@kermitbaby3330]

Draga Nam Sloboda the bunker maybe idk

[@pifflesomepuffnadder855]

He probably had one o' those mobile chargers that I've never heard of or seen before. It's either that or I'm just an idiot who's writing and extremely wasteful comment just so I can read it when I'm bored. What do you think?

[@iisforimagiraffe9143]

He could have a power bank

[@saturnstar4258]

Listening to this during quarantine is so funny, dudes like "I dont think I can be here by myself forever" *Me, on day 15 with bowl 82927 of popcorn* "dont worry you'll get use to it, the voices start to become friends"

[@strawberrytiramisu]

I’ve been doing the same thing (not going anywhere but the store and not hanging out with friends ) for going on 4 years. No regrets honestly. I had lost myself because before I went the homeschooled route I’d change myself to fit in. Now I do whatever I want and I’ve never felt so free and happy.

[@harleen4328]

Same

[@ONLINEHELP3R]

True tho Saturn true true

[@shawncollier571]

I love my voices

[@christopherkinsella3912]

“Day 15”. You sweet, innocent, soul.

[@buddypowe]

damn extrovert couldn't keep it together and stay put

[@noyou3334]

Factsss

[@hunterlutz6172]

@buddypowe Love your Dbz-Themed profile

[@the7thseven873]

Being an Introverts has its benefits Stay inside = 😌✨ Peace of mind.

[@CA-vy8et]

makeanewchronoplz lmao a few of my family members are like this and were the first ones to crack during quarantine...

[@YoungPimpinOG]

Being ambiverted is lonely..

[@Teboski78]

I find it hard to believe that a prepper dude with his own bunker wouldn’t have more than a single handgun as weaponry

[@pho3n1xr1sing]

Right one side arm and one box of ammo no prepper in the world is gonna be that poorly armed

[@twilightparanormalresearch186]

Once I own a house (currently renting) I’ll have a bunker built for nukes, tornadoes, other disaster scenarios. And I’ll have a few firearms a handgun, shotgun, ar15 or ak47 doesn’t matter and Mabye a long rifle

[@Teboski78]

@@pho3n1xr1sing unless this takes place in a E🤮urope & the weapon & ammo are illegal so it was hard for him to get more

[@zt_g]

@@Teboski78 He did say "torch" instead of "flashlight" so entirely possible that at least the author isn't in the US.

[@mwbgaming28]

@@zt_g could be in Australia, we use the word torch

[@winterseb1725]

“And good bye” *HEY THERE KIDS ITS ME MR.CREEPYPASTA*

[@solsasson2760]

👏

[@solsasson2760]

The shit that freaks me out the most is how he knows I'm a kid like some Chris Angel shit

[@davidmorningway6025]

Some narrators let the mood slowly fade with music and ambience to keep the mood, but he just dives right in there. I guess when you have a 1.5+ M following you need to plug a few events, products and your wife's DnD tea co. Lol my dad is a face model for The cover of Dungeons n Dragons (The Marco Volo 3 set) he is the handsome blonde Hercules looking warrior. Funny he can't stand that kind of stuff but I'm a huge nerd, but also a buff nerd thanks to his trainings lol, but I digress 😇😎😈. MrCreepypasta.....ill send you an autographed cover for some tea lol....I actually think he only has one set that he keeps in his former model portfolio but I could be wrong lol. I still want some sleepy time tea with Valerien! Hahaha 🎧🎙💀

[@winterseb1725]

Austin Lynde-Peve not anymore 😞👊🏼

[@kekelove2611]

He scares me everytime🤣

[@johntetzlaff94]

40:30 wait a minute, there's still quite a bit left in the story....

[@kaydee1338]

Story: Dropping my gun and!........ LETS PLAY RAID SHADOW LEGENDS

[@monkeysareswag4381]

💀💀💀

[@Tiger0408]

For me just now was a fortnite ad 🙄

[@charlesblackwell327]

lol I got an expedia ad at that same point thought it was part of the story for a moment.

[@ZacAttackManiac]

Drop gun and... wtf KZbin I already play raid shadow legends...

[@damkylan3]

That’s the true horror here.

[@9bang88]

Imagine falling backwards from firing a handgun lmao

[@turtletoes4496]

First man to fire a handgun chambered in 50. Cal😂

[@starryeyedgirls]

pls i fired a gandgun when i was 7 and i was fine tf 😭

[@thekyng809]

I mean if it was a 500 mag

[@VampireQueenAmy]

Imagine not understanding how recoil works

[@9bang88]

@@VampireQueenAmy if you mean the writer yea lol

[@wintertimber1749]

The narration together really ties the horror together. The panic in the voice at the right moments is incredible Edit: Ha sleep paralysis

[@princeblackelf4265]

finally, been waiting for a complete version. oddly relevant for the current times.

[@randomuser5443]

Baphomet 666 We all gonna die

[@gamerevolution173]

@Baphomet 666 Quarantine

[@YoushouldloveyourselfNOW1738]

@@gamerevolution173 Never been quarantined

[@timohara7717]

Bruh it's not may 20th yet this year stop lying

[@SadiqHussein-ri4kv]

@@timohara7717this was 3 years ago numbnuts

[@TheFirehands150]

Normal person: Yup, there are monsters outside so I'm gonna lock myself in and hide. Creepypasta guy: Curiosity got the better of me AND THE MONSTER SAW ME, JIM!!! HE SAW ME!!!

[@nicholasryan7766]

Yeah, dude's definitely a Chad, no doubt

[@timohara7717]

Nah bruh to avoid american endermen and the most common of reddit creatures, siren head evil man and pole people, you gotta outgoofy them or kill them

[@KingJim97]

I told you not to look outside

[@blueferal8626]

Starts screaming and calling the creature the n word 🦖

[@tyresemalik87]

Am i the only one here who actually gets scared listening to the stories I swear to god it feels like I’m the person in the story

[@EarthenCavy]

Dude, I was listening to "The Showers" in an RV, parked in the middle of a pitch-black forest, and I thought I was gonna crap my pants. I totally hear you, haha!!

[@jayhuseby3660]

I listen to these on third shift in an empty factory with just me and one other person in the place. There are lots of times I have to just turn it off and try to not be creeped out.

[@warthunder5014]

It used to be like that for me but I got over it after about a month and I sleep to these now I still have moments when I'm listening to one and it really freaks me out and I go lock my camper door and windows and I throw covers over them so nothing can see in and I cant see out

[@hazard1126]

I o

[@pasteldreams5413]

Usually, no. But that's because I listen to creepypasta when I'm multi-tasking throughout the day, and rarely when it's dark outside.

[@doc7orwho138]

"Dont lick random strangers on the street" XD thats one of the best quotes ive gotten from mcp so far

[@zt_g]

I feel like this is good advice, even without a pandemic. At least ask first; consent is important.

[@harleen4328]

@@zt_g yeah

[@CalebLaw1]

I'd say dying in a mass explosion is actually probably one of the best/quickest/painless kinds of deaths. Not so bad.

[@villagemarauder]

Wouldn't it activate every pain receptor throughout your entire body?

[@CalebLaw1]

@@villagemarauder Huh...I thought it would be over before you could feel anything. However, it'd probably be over in less than a second, so there's that.

[@What-thaW]

I think Caleb is right because there’s a short delay to pain reaching the brain and therefore being felt / processed. It’s usually meaningless but explosions are pretty damn fast so your brain might just not be there anymore once the pain receptors’ signals reach it

[@serpentshadws2020]

@@CalebLaw1 maybe- I never had a bomb hit me so ya

[@justcommoncurt]

That's a misconception like dying in space. It would be quick if you were close to the blast zone. If not your body would be hit with burns all over but it wouldn't kill you right away. As a defense mechanism your body would slow blood circulation and you'd likely be stuck on the ground in pain slowly dying from radiation poisoning 🙃

[@wendydornoc6374]

I am having a hip replacement in 6 weeks.. I listen to story time a lot to get me thru the preoperative jitters.. Thanks..

[@shashummga3477]

The ending was pretty unsatisfying... I was hoping that we’d figure out more about these things and where they came from

[@Wolf-jp4xi]

They were creatures..And even though it wasn't real, you can't just expect a biologist to go and see what they are...Or, too much information.The guy/girl did do everything for their life so...Yea

[@usernamepassword236]

Well not every story will end with the protagonist finding out how to stop them and saving the day it is much more reasonable that he isnt some super genius that can follow the clues and see how they were created

[@caseywright3740]

I mean I find this ending more realistic but I do think the ending could have been better

[@caydenhancox7346]

If you want to contact the og creator, there name is u/voidedconsience on reddit

[@jenniferodell9228]

@@aldeenztheman crack head's, they we're crack head's!

[@oofree4013]

And if it makes you happy, this was a parallel universe alternate ending, the ending in our universe included the carpet bombing actually working, and he made it to the shelter without a hitch.

[@justadinosaur6091]

Well yeah

[@justadinosaur6091]

Thats a good Theory

[@twilightparanormalresearch186]

Or better yet. Purging the area in fire with a nuke. Just to be sure

[@butter_akbar2688]

You show emotion when telling these stories which is good it makes it seem as you were in the story Those monsters are smart they left his house I attacked because they knew that “he” was gonna lead them to other survivors

[@catsdogswoof3968]

War lord

[@butter_akbar2688]

@@catsdogswoof3968 yes?

[@timohara7717]

I think I was talking about how American endermen are extemly strong and s

[@timohara7717]

​@@butter_akbar2688 also you commented after the death of my channel

[@butter_akbar2688]

@@timohara7717 that’s is tragic

[@NovaHendrixx]

the panic in your voice is SURREAL! its absolutely insane how realistic you make them feel. i remember listening to the first half of it on one of those tts reddit stories channels. i was scared shitless but something about the emotionless robot voice made it slightly less scary. but your human voice and natural panic is so fantastically realistic i couldn’t sleep for the night. it’s now 9 am and i have not slept at all yet. i’ve been glued to my bed which has been transformed into a nasty pool of sweat. absolutely amazing 10/10 would shit my pants again.

[@dustinchen]

nah

[@GlaciesA]

I would've stayed in the bunker until there was 0 food left, just imagining having to deal with a bunch of ppl in a small closed space during an apocalypse sucks lol being alone is way better if you have enough to survive

[@thetrollage1298]

With no entertainment and no human interaction even the biggest introverts would want and need actual interaction.

[@GlaciesA]

@@thetrollage1298 Yes just how I like It, no one, specially in what it looks like the end of the world or a huge area, the last thing I want is ppl unless I had no food or shelter, he had everything just needed to sit thigh until there was nothing left, nothing else matters, fuck ppl normally and extra fuck them in the extremes situations, I would've lived alone for as long as I needed

[@catsdogswoof3968]

​@@thetrollage1298but they don't need too

[@kaiseranthony842]

This is the only notification for KZbin I have ever immediately clicked on. Thanks

[@grimmtvgaming7653]

Man what a ending, I had to listen to the last 7 minutes like 3 times

[@supergang1279]

The emotion in his voice is amazing!! I love this one so much!!

[@adyn315]

man gets relentlessly hunted by endermen: part one

[@harleen4328]

XD yes i love this comment

[@jentaylor2494]

I've listened to so many of these stories but I always come back to this one. One of the best ever

[@christoperdixon4212]

Good story but there are several things i dont get. After the bombing why wouldnt the military mop up? Even in iraq we would always move in force after a strike with armor and gunship support and that was against humans

[@gachadumpsterfire6722]

Seeing as how there was a mob of the creatures going after op the second the door to the bunker with more people in it was open, I'd say that either the creatures hid before the bombing and came out after the blast and took on the military, or actually survived being hit by the blast with not even a scratch(and took on the military). They were able to break down the bunker door(but not Craig's bunker's door, not sure why), so they would be a force to reckon with(unless the door was not the best). As for the all-clear message, it could either be a fake and the creatures know rocket science, or they stayed hidden when the military mopped up(but didn't check basements or cellars where the creatures could lay in wait), thought it wiped them out, and sent the message, not knowing how wrong they are. These are possible scenarios.

[@dst4909]

@@gachadumpsterfire6722 they didn't break the bunker door though. The man wasn't able to lock it in time, so they opened the door.

[@thehalfzatoichi2869]

He didn't Write this...

[@timohara7717]

American endermen are to strong to ungoofy

[@timohara7717]

​@@gachadumpsterfire6722 they did take down his door because he's an idot

[@MeteoricCat3278]

He should've stayed in the bunker. Sure, he keeps talking about his sanity, but... At least he would've been safe.

[@strawberrytiramisu]

I would’ve stayed in the bunker till I had no choice but to leave ngl

[@joshXnovak1]

See, that’s the the thing about losing your sanity. You don’t make rational decisions.

[@brookelinn2926]

I'm sad right now so I'm watching this to make myself scared instead 😁

[@KandyBoy69]

@@brookelinn2926 yo

[@bxdvibes6746]

@@brookelinn2926 ay same

[@kari7403]

@@brookelinn2926 as, I hope you're not as sad now, 3 months later. 👍😁

[@bloomblo_panda7656]

How your not scared 9 months later👍😁

[@99thpeanut59]

Bruh he’s probably back to being sad

[@turtletoes4496]

When you raise your voice, you sound like a preacher

[@Behemoth9030]

Don’t insult him.

[@secrettoxin4718]

Mike Horvath woah white knight who said it was an insult

[@ThreeofMoths]

@weeb ladka they said he sounded like a preacher, by that description, when he raises his voice, it fills with passion and valor, it's pretty obvious that they meant that, and didn't mean that he sounded like a religion fanatic, it's on you for misunderstanding and trying to speak for someone and taking offense to a comment that wasn't even directed to you.

[@catsdogswoof3968]

@weeb ladka Kinda racist

[@bigcountrymountainman9740]

the crazy thing about carpet bombing is the fact that it doesn't destroy like a normal explosion. It doesn't have an intense shockwave that goes out a great distance. It's called the AOE or area of effect. Carpet bombshave a small area of effect but whatever it lands on completely blows it to pieces. For instance if they would drop a bomb with a large in a housing complex it with level all the housesand the only thing we left was the foundation... And there would be a ring of debris where the shockwave ended. When Hiroshima and Nagasaki was investigatedthe following day there was a ring of bodies and debris about 25 foot thick all the way around the city where theshockwave stop. Because after it pushes it out so far it dissipates and then everything that's being pushed by the shockwavestops as well. But carpet bombing would make the town look like he said in the story, like skeletons. I fought in the second Battle of Fallujah in 2004, Kandahar and Kabul with small insertions in between MOS 0 3 1 7 and there was a small town just outside of Kandahar that was housing jahad and their caches. We had a b-2 flyover and drop, what's called a section, in which they destroy a very specific area. They flew up one side of the townand completely destroyed the right side and then the plane turn and came back and destroyed the left side. When it was all said and done it look like God sent an angel down with a big sledgehammer... There was no fire anywhere it was just all concussion from shockwave. There was a goat that was fused into a metal pole, we guessed it was from where it has hit the pole so hard from the blast.

[@tylerkincade6576]

Matthew Dixon yeah man it’s defiantly not what they make it seem like in the movies. But that’s a crazy story especially the part with the goat. That would be really brutal to see that. The power of the force of the blast is insane.

[@bigcountrymountainman9740]

@@tylerkincade6576 the only reason I knew it was a goat was because of a leg bone apace of the skull in one horn. But like it didn't go inside of the pole, it fused to the pole. From what I understand it was because of where it was only around 50 yards from ground zero and the amount of energy on something that can get burnt at 180 degrees is nothing for that type of concussion that comes off of that bomb when it goes off. Kaboom

[@lrn5152]

@@bigcountrymountainman9740 First off, Marine here. Semper Fi to you. Second off, that's some really interesting stuff. I'm a nerd when it comes to some things and this just made me happy to learn. In all reality I enjoy when I learn new things like that even if it's dark or not very enjoyable in real life situations. But damnit, that is awesome.Thank you.

[@bigcountrymountainman9740]

@@lrn5152 hello brother. What's your MOS Glad I could emulate your thought process. LOL I'm just kidding lol. I throw out a few situations through combat experience and between myself and my father grandfather and Uncle I have a lot of knowledge that I've gained from past military men and legends. I can't tell you how many times I've had people call me a liar and call b*******on things that I say in my comments.... But things you see in movies in comparison to what actually goes on in combat or just ina military setting, people don't realize that they have been brainwashed and deceived by what Hollywood portrays. My grandfather was a very very famous army rifleman of the 506th E company 101st airborne paratrooper regimen by the name of William Guarnere. I've never watched the series that they made about the 506 easy company called Band of Brothers because I was so close to my grandfather and he just died a couple of years ago, so with that said, I don't think I could handle watching it. Because I saw an interview with Tom Hanks about him and he said that the guy that played bill guarnere, played him so well that even my grandfather said that it was like watching him watch his self. He fought from Normandy to Bastogne to wear him and his best friend Joe Toye had their legs blown off.

[@bigcountrymountainman9740]

@@lrn5152 I meant to ask you in my comment while your MOS was but I don't know if I did or not. I went on a big rant LOL

[@AlfAllton]

You have such a way of telling the story that always put me on the edge of my seat, I find myself so engaged... Thank you Sir.

[@viewerdiscreationisadvised660]

Still debating if this dude was just insane (or high) the whole time. Possibly killing his neighbor, some random stranger and presumably himself all while hallucinating.

[@-Emonem-]

They need to make a movie about this. Who’s with me?

[@davidcryptt]

fax

[@bootyeater7331]

“Towards the sound of the sound”

[@robertchampion2800]

That's not what he said

[@mikehawk2894]

When?

[@iamafanofmanythings3973]

If this is about covid I'll literally throw my phone

[@call_me_mrhate165]

This story was written a while ago then voiced in parts then posted in parts there's not way it's about covid-19 my dude

[@johnwesch5926]

Whey

[@tylerkincade6576]

John Wesch weigh

[@Jolis_Parsec]

Hey, look on the bright side, bruh. At least you don’t have to worry about turning into a giant worm while getting chased by your evil grandpa who’s somehow been reincarnated as a snapping tortoise. Just sayin’. 🤣

[@hunterbell2905]

I

[@sirmatt101]

this story would be creepy if the MC didn't just randomly find what he needs like crazy. it's like everytime he loses something he finds something else just as good, if not better

[@catsdogswoof3968]

Well its not his fault contact the redditor

[@23Tuv]

Video game logic

[@Serph..]

He saw the quest markers

[@imaghost2961]

I unfortunately have done that too many times. I’m writing this one zombie story and the main character found a farm full of stuff. He did have to kill the former inhabitants though. I guess I just wanted to have some nice stuff in between the dark horror type stuff. The main character has been living at that farm with his brother for like 90 chapters now. It’s my first time writing a huge story, so I panicked.

[@sirmatt101]

@@imaghost2961 it happens its a trap a lot of writers fall into when they wanna make horror stuff, spooky shit happens but here's a basically deus ex machina warehouse full of shit for the MC to survive with and theres no real reason other then "lucky me"

[@2p-blog-thing]

That.... ending is going to stay with me.

[@Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective]

2p-blog -thing not sure why but the ending actually made me laugh. Just the idea this poor asshole ultimately ended up killing a shit load of innocents because he didn’t wanna be lonely.

[@harleen4328]

@@Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective same it made me laugh to

[@trulyagoose]

Reminds me of “My city has been cut off from the world, and I have a set of rules to survive”

[@Andi-ex1js]

Finally!! For the last hour i've been racking my brain to find this story again Looking through all the lockdown stories of my favourite creepypasta narrators.. And i found it!! This Story gave me nightmares.. Every now and then when i'm in bed i get anxious that the neighbor across the road can see me in my bed.. And what if it were one of those things and i'm doomed. It absolutely terrifies me

[@everettatkepgroovin]

I've been listening to these since sixth grade before bed, I'm 18 now

[@tallspartan117]

Bruh same this one kept me up tho

[@dopertearz4life]

How old in 6th grade?

[@beanzy1891]

I’m 19 today march 24th 😊

[@Ecofriendlyant]

Damn I'm young XD

[@strawberrytiramisu]

@@dopertearz4life like 11-12 if I remember correctly.

[@spontaneouslizard]

knowing how people reacted to quarantine, the fakest part of this story is that people actually did stay in their houses when told to.

[@jimmysuros6302]

This scenario is extremely different from a pandemic. People would be more scared of these creatures than a virus.

[@strawberrytiramisu]

@@jimmysuros6302 maybe. I feel like some people would still stay out just to catch the creatures on camera for the purpose of clout.

[@vg4655]

Damn that says a lot about our society

[@duckmeat4674]

People did stay in their houses, we were promised 15 days to fight the curve

[@antoninstrelba1948]

i mean.. covid and shit like this is something different

[@Sambasic]

the voice acting is SO good!!!!

[@pacthedoc4649]

This is like my fifth time watching this and I'm still on edge throughout the story 🤣

[@jaydengriffin5984]

Get whoever made this an oscar a grammy or whatever this was absolutely amazing and my favorite story ever.

[@crazyblueantman7605]

I remember listening to this story years ago, and i remember a comment that extended the story and it was amazing. Sad that i vant find the comment anymore

[@MeatBallSister]

Same

[@kipras4699]

i wouldn't have left that bunker until there was no food and water.

[@angelmarino3985]

This kind of sounds like a quiet place monsters

[@carlindurfee7566]

Yeah I thought that too but these can see too so even worse

[@andrewdarby2729]

My first thought!

[@weilyonTOP]

A quiet place was a fucking scary movie that was only pg-13 and the creatures remind me of them a little bit, being violent and having claws, but the problem is, these monsters can hear, see, are very intelligent, and seem to be invincible to any weapons, while a quiet place the monsters are blind, less-dangerous, and can be killed by the right means.

[@anonymousskelly6091]

That movie was freaky

[@moldybabyman]

And yet again, like what happened when I was listening to 1205 7th street, I was chill and calm and then - - little dude dancing on the screen and I struggled to contain my laughter.

[@aesthetic_apples888]

this guy has TALENT with his suspense voice

[@galenjones9529]

The first mistake the character made was lack of preparation. The second mistake was failing to remain calm. The third mistake they made was refusing to follow logic. The fourth mistake was failing to suppress their curiosity. Their fifth mistake was failing to arrange contingencies. The character was an idiot. The kind of person who would be the first to perish in any of these kinds of situations. The fact they lived as long as they did was pure luck. Nothing but luck. I'm not surprised on how it ended, not even a little. Mr creepypasta did a great job bringing this to life. The voice acting brought out the desperation felt by the character.

[@catsdogswoof3968]

No it was the monsters fault for letting him live he should thank th em some candies

[@icel8828]

Finally. I’ve been looking for what happens after part 2 for the longest time. Thank you

[@blitz4297]

always have loved your voice- please keep up the amazing work I plan on writing my own- hopefully, you'll read it one day

[@Seep1ng]

This was so scary, that it helped me pull an all nighter thank you comrade!

[@traweigand4013]

Great narration! You really put everything you've got into the stories. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! Awesome job!

[@bridgettgriffin4629]

The cadence and tone of his reading had me scared af!!! 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽

[@DivineAdversity777]

Tbh I adore MrCreepyPastas narrations…He and Dark Somnium are very familiar/comforting voices to me idk…

[@jasonherrera4716]

Weakest dude I have heard. Dude eff your mental health when monsters are trying to kill you.

[@Kennyken4044]

MrCreepyPasta actually got me into creepypasta reading back when he first started. First community I joined on amino too. Thank you for the great content and being part of the few joys in my childhood. 💜

[@ovo5228]

Glad someone else uses amino too

[@Kennyken4044]

@@ovo5228 used.. left years ago... too many pedos ^^'

[@ovo5228]

@@Kennyken4044 Same

[@Huskq]

Judging off the fact they can manipulate his alerts it's arguable that the creatures planned for him to lead them to the other survivors day one

[@WaterPickle]

YES I FOUND IT AGAIN MY BRAIN WAS REMBRING THIS STORY AND BOOM I REMEMBERED THE NAME

[@bc8796]

A bit sad cuz I felt like we were sort of getting hints that op has some weird dark/mysterious past but nope. They just kinda dumb lol. Great story tho, one of the few that has genuinely creeped me out in a good while

[@tanker-Sauce]

Watching this in the middle of the night isn’t the best idea

[@marlinskibarlinski26]

This has been one of my favourite creepy pastas ever! Please, please can there be more of this type???

[@Bruh1]

he doesnt write them. maybe read the subreddit. They have all kinds of stories :)

[@celesteross2474]

I gotta tell ya the way you deliver a story its completely riveting,leaving your listeners pining for more

[@xrystal89]

stops in the middle of the bloody road, knowing there are soul-sucking, body shredding, nightmare-inducing, fast af creatures close behind you... w t f

[@CrazyGalaxyCat]

He probably wouldn't of gotten people killed if he just kept moving

[@aesthetic_apples888]

Nobody: The Creatures: IM FAST AS FUCK BOIII

[@Stupidcake9]

@@aesthetic_apples888 LOL

[@joshadkins4120]

I love this story!!! Especially with Mrcreepypasta performing it. Keep'em coming!! We're all waiting for the next brilliant choice you make...😁

[@fuzzy_buddy8642]

The fact that these stories can deliver horrifying chills with only sound is crazy and am I the only one who has visual memory’s that u make up urself

[@yaroflores6981]

I’ve said it once I’ll say it again you are hands down the best creepypasta I’ve heard!! I like how you give life to the story by how you act it 🔥🔥

[@earndoggy]

This story gives me hope. The more people like this person, the better my chances of survival.

[@bobiijae790]

My last name is pronounced like surgeon but with a T but you didn't butcher and I totally appreciate it man! Thanks so much for the shout out. It was my first one ever I feel so awesome LOL

[@bobiijae790]

Please don't take it as me being not picky bcuz you can pronounce any way I was just so excited to get a shout out 😁

[@catsdogswoof3968]

Where would a t go 💀

[@Man_Aslume]

Turgeon?

[@Wolf-jp4xi]

I don't know why....This made my day SO MUCH BETTER! I don't know how, but I feel better...Maybe it was your voice...Maybe it was the AWESOME and ELABORATE story...Or both..But this video just made my day....

[@jenniferodell9228]

I love listening to you Mrcreepypasta. You have so much emotion in your story telling that keeps me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

[@kazeke2703]

This would make an amazing movie, kind of like a quiet place but they have less flaws and are extremely intelligent , and it doesn’t have a happy ending. I WOULD PAY TO WATCH THIS!!!!

[@edwardicus4]

*POSSIBLE SPOILER* "Human company was what I so desperately needed..." 🎶THAT WAS YOUR FIRST MISTAKE🎶

[@Man_Aslume]

Ngl this us vs them mentality that introverts have is full of bs Unless you are mentioning something else if so then im a idiot

[@michaelmcdowell7096]

On that corvid note it has about a 5% mortality rate and I have several high risk factors so for people like me, and all people really, play it safe so we can save ad many lives as we can; much love

[@jonathanjackgoodman2764]

If I ever find myself in a situation like this and avoiding others is an option I'm definitely gonna take it. People are way to crazy.

[@XG-OFFICIAL-59]

Whoever wrote this is literally a mastermind. I've never had a reaction to a story like the first time I heard this. So terrifying

[@scottcol23]

This story was terrifying. I love it

[@gregomy8845]

i finally found it bruh. i’ve been looking for the full story for over a year

[@hunterwalker5715]

A good story has two parts, a great writer and an exceptional teller and you Mr Creepy Pasta are one I haven't felt this scared in quite a while great job

[@offtheradar-5802]

An excellent *Penn* er and an excellent teller. 10/10

[@sauravkumar-yj8ip]

excellent.emotion in your narration was perfect.almost real

[@NotSoNormal1987]

I'd of stayed in the bunker. I would be too afraid to leave. I can wait for the national guard to come knocking on the bunker door. I'm not new to nightmares or sleep paryalisis.

[@Crimson-Hat]

Imagine leaving the bunker and damning a bunch of other people to die all because you're not an introvert.

[@pamgranger7052]

Excellent story..thanks bunches 💓 😘 💗

[@julieblake9728]

Nothing like a good creepypasta to get me up in the morning

[@oreolover9321]

I love the story but it's a shame that the dad was trying to do the right thing but he put everybody on danger

[@t-rexx4251]

This is my favorite story youve narrated.

[@toxix999]

This is one of his best stories of all time love it

[@shiftedstarz]

dude i love your voice.

[@caminam78]

They remind me of deathclaws

[@oofree4013]

Yeah, I always pictured them as a skinny midget in a black green screen suit with bones making bumps on the skin

[@Moths000]

I normally never get scared of anything but the beginning of this story (like the first 15 minutes) scared me a little. I’ve listened to these kind of story’s since I was 9 (I’m 13)

[@donovanrichard1829]

Anyone else imagine these are the stories that aren't mentioned in the SCP universe

[@sekiro_the_one-armed_wolf]

18:45 the glass? The gun was whatever but the glass was deafening?

[@thatguy2291]

Damn, it's been a good few years since I've listened to one of your videos. First listened to ya' back when I was like 14 and was just getting into creepypasta. Glad to see your still making awesome readings after all this time.

[@neurotictapeworm]

I cannot stop listening to your voice, it's just so suited to every character you voice

[@tronic6981]

This one of the only creepypasta’s that genuinely makes me scared and uneasy

[@ethanblow6646]

This gives me bloodborne/silent hill vibes, I like it a lot

[@Cadesworth]

Your incredible narration skills honestly carry half these stories. You're always able to mine quality out of them, no matter how poorly written they are.

[@619timbercali]

Mic pop @48:46 got my subwoofer jumpin in my car lol