HFY: The Black Ship - Chapter 43 Part 6

[@ekhidna4]

Hello, everyone. Hope everyone enjoyed the last part of chapter 43. Space battles and the carnage of combat comes next! Thank you all for your support and if you want to see what the ykanti look like, you can find a recently uploaded picture on my Kofi page. See you all later, space cowboys!

[@daghost11]

Outstanding Series, Sir… I/we look forward to the completion of this book and Book 3 of the series you’ve created… very well done, Sir… 👏👏👏

[@TheJammer3483]

​@@daghost11 Indeed.👏

[@killcode6717]

Great story. we love it

[@elvisalpha]

I would love to see more of Jincho. He's a funny character. Thank you for the story, as always, really, really good.

[@ZubZAQ]

Hot dang i was just wondering what the Ykanti look like 😎

[@drew-uk6976]

I really enjoyed that, Jincho's quite the character & is the perfect antidote to the stufiness of the nobility, gonna be a long wait for the next chapter!.

[@Soundwave119]

I do think that's the part of the reason why Clara like Jincho and how they effortlessly work together to tease Cynthia. Cynthia says the deserts in the Principality should fear Clara and Wyatt joining forces to devour all the tasty deserts but Principality should also fear Clara and Jincho teasing/messing with people as a team! 😂🤣

[@tjansson8481]

"That's Lieutenant Wormbrain to you" Love Jincho.

[@snowwolf8186]

🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@Soundwave119]

With this chapter we see the potential havic of Clara and Jincho in the same room. Poor Cynthia 😢

[@ralphgoodman8181]

Listened once and it's great. I'll play it again while waiting for the next one. Or maybe three times. Thanks

[@snowwolf8186]

For me, it will be close to all week.

[@404Dannyboy]

Love me some Jincho. The guy really sets the mood for everyone else around him, commoner, officer, princess, it matters not.

[@TERRYWIRT]

Storyline gets better and better...thank you

[@fadesevar2809]

Good chapter. It gives a good bit of background into the ftl and shows us the tactic that the crew can use in the future. As always jincho is quite the character.

[@andrewlatex950]

Got this at lunch from Patreon Wyatt is leading from the front and showing his abilities as a problem solver

[@thomasohanlon1060]

I think that Jencho is going to be a more pivotal part of this campaign than anyone knows. Soon Redford is going to be asking why does Jencho want data from Wyatt’s engagement and what improvements to what? When it’s learned what has been done to Wyatt’s fighter there will be another 79 to be upgraded, Jencho I think will be placed in charge of all fighter maintenance and given a real rank.

[@tracewallace23]

Imagine the upgrades Jenko will want to make when he sees how Wyatt pilots the Noerenavio 🤠💪🏻

[@thomasohanlon1060]

@@tracewallace23 if Wyatt pilots the Niore Navio, he might just be leading the fighters.

[@Soundwave119]

I would not be surprised if Jincho ends up part of Clara's retainer. I totally could see EkhidnaWritez doing it.

[@stevepickens9912]

@@Soundwave119 one or two Steps ahead of who ever they are fighting

[@alexanderweigl6614]

Outstanding buildup of the story Wyatt's and Jincho's idea and solution is brilliant, but there's still the possibility of Felicity messing it up by sending a spydrone straight into the system. It might be a good idea to prepare some distraction if needed to prevent them messing it up

[@shanealexander9952]

If I had to guess Felicity is in for a rude arrival, maybe same one they expected Wyatt to receive.

[@carsparks1980]

Funny thing, sending in a spy drone might actually help the Noirnavio. Sending the drone will cause a warp signature and alert the Drazzan, but they will be waiting to see the much larger warp signature of a combat vessel or fleet - which will never come, unless the Draymore fleet jumps in. While the Drazzan will be on high alert, their attention will be misplaced. If the Draymore fleet jumps in, "They gonna be in a WORLD of hurt."

[@Davicus1]

I think Jincho just about earned a spot in Clara's inner circle. Giving her a flatering nickname, solving the sneaky hyperjump problem and enhancing Wyatt's fighter along with his quirky personality has got to at least have made him a permanent crew member. But I think Clara will want more personal interaction with him. Especilly if he keeps messing with Cynthia.

[@daghost11]

@@Davicus1 Jincho proved he has many skills, including being able to Hack Principality Comms easily and is skilled at fixing things…

[@Soundwave119]

This honest has been foreshadowed a bit and this chapter confirms Jincho will eventually become part of Clara's retinue. It's funny how Cynthia said the Principality's desserts 🍨 are in great danger with Wyatt and Clara joining forces to eat them but the Principality is in danger with Clara and Jincho joining forces to mess with people! 😂

[@KrK-EST]

So sad these are so short and rare uploads.😢 There is no better(not even close) stories anywhere.❤ The writer is a GENIUS❗👌

[@Soundwave119]

How is nearly 30 minutes short? EkhidnaWritez is an great writer. 😊

[@KrK-EST]

@@Soundwave119 Short as we wish there would be a lot more every time (and more often).

[@steveb6103]

​@@KrK-ESTThere are 64 videos with a total run time of over 11.5 hours. And I just listened to them all again. For the 12th time.

[@smhaceofspades2813]

​​@@steveb6103LMAO I'm glad I'm NOT the ONLY one who loves to hear about Wyatt first complain about be a garbage hauler for the 10th time and then kicking the Drozzin @$$ to now. I have to say book 1 I've listened to a hair more than when I repeat book 2.

[@KrK-EST]

I had a bad acident couple of years ago and due to the head injury my sight is messed up so only way to experience is to listen. Hard to find things that are not consentrated on visual but story, new ideas and thought.❤️👌

[@jameskilby672]

I was really needing a Wyatt fix today. Well done

[@ohnodevo]

Less boring with you here now, Maniac....gotta love Jincho.

[@Bellator_of_the_Shadow]

Wyatt and Jincho are a great combination. Those two are going to make tracks on the galaxy's face lol

[@Soundwave119]

They do have an interesting synergy between them that they balance each other well. 😊

[@stephenf98]

I love this series.... One of the best stories in years...

[@steveb6103]

I'm with Wyatt. I like that bird! And so it appears does Clara!

[@ZubZAQ]

Second listening today 🤗. It´s so great to see like ratio going up in live while listening .

[@rawrsince718]

Jincho is about to turn Lt. Wyatt the Wormbrain Maniac into the most dangerous man in space.

[@tracewallace23]

Especially after they realize that Wyatt is going to be the only one that can make the Noerenavio "dance" like a fighter😉

[@alexanderweigl6614]

​@@tracewallace23Commander Redford is also a fighter pilot and trained to command large groups of fighters, but what sets Wyatt apart is his quick and unconventional out of the box thinking.

[@tracewallace23]

@@alexanderweigl6614 True, but also that Wyatt has already piloted the black ship 🤔🙂

[@markphelan9495]

I sooo can't wait for the upcoming battle. The lieutenant needs to back in a cockpit.....I want to see the composters in action..

[@terrywilson1226]

with Wyatt telling cmdr Redford how battled the ship it is clear he will be in command of the fighter force. he will need to get them to accept his command

[@danwhiteman2529]

👍👍 It's good to see Jincho back in the mix and maybe he might get Lupin's job after the battle. I do hope they catch Jade soon.

[@stevepickens9912]

Or maybe jincho will lead a new department, research and development on spacecraft with some side projects. Right now Jincho needs the mental challenge of an engineer craftsman and mechanic, he likes to think outside the box too.

[@borispavlovic655]

Brilliant, i can not wait for every new chapter and it is for me best sci fi on you tube... keep em comeing....

[@davidorf3921]

Time for the next episode !

[@Soundwave119]

Finally! This chapter i think is like double the length of most chapters in this series! Though as normal EkhidnaWritez does an amazing job writing these episodes at a high quality level writing. ☺

[@Shadow.Dragon]

Great episode! I think Jincho needs a promotion and free-reign to upgrade the ship and fighters.

[@Soundwave119]

I can see that quite possibly happening in the not so distant future. 😊

[@ashleycampbell6825]

Great writing leading the readers onto another roller-coaster of thoughts. Initially disappointed with being teased with more background detail then finally this part moves onto the pathway to discover Wyatt's next action. Initially I thought that he was going to the pirates. Nice how it does plays out with the interaction of the situation and how Jinko nicknames the Princess as Pretty Eyes. Hopefully, Chapter 44 is next to come and the much anticipated battle to liberate that star system from the Drazzan.

[@Davicus1]

When Wyatt and Clara finally get married, he'll be toasting Wormbrain and Pretty Eyes and bragging about how he suped up the space limo they'll be using to head out for the honeymoon.

[@thomasbordelon4149]

I so appreciate this story being made available. Some may be frustrated with the multiple parts as it is written but honestly I would 'binge listen’ to the entire thing beginning to end if not for that. I like being forced to hang on the edge of my seat waiting for the next morsel. It makes the entire experience last longer and I can go back and listen again to better catch things I didn’t get the first time. I’m a shut in for the most part, and burning time in an engaging way is critical for me. Very enriching this way. Thanks, keep up the good work. I’m definitely a dyed in the wool Sci-FI buff from way back and find it tragic how the movies are so often stale and exhaustingly predictable these days. This is fresh, can’t say enough, thank you.

[@ekhidna4]

You are most welcome here, Space Wanderer.

[@AdrienCoates]

Was not expecting this out today, but I am glad that it is. Glad to see that Jincho will be putting his expertise to good use. and that Wyatt will be giving Commander Redford how it felt to him as he command the Black Ship. Now the question is will or does Commander Redford get the same feeling that Wyatt got when he was commanding the Nora Navio. This was an excellent chapter. lover how it all came together. and cant wait for the next Chapter!

[@philipburger8804]

sci fi fan for 60 years best so far thanks

[@tgriffetts4806]

"She wants to eat me!" I almost fell out of my chair laughing when I read that line. A great reaction to the image Cynthia must have been projecting when she saw Jinto there unexpectedly. The commander grilling Wyatt for everything he remembered when commanding the battleship was epic in knowing the capabilities of the battleship commanded by a fighter pilot and used with the same tactical experience. I can envision he will have some tactics to contribute when he has to command the battleship himself, but I would have thought Wyatt would have been grilled already as a debrief on the experience and battle (maybe I incorrectly assumed this is known about these things). Saltizar Reed is a plot tease in the making. Will he find a way to recover his honor? Will Wyatt inform him that it was though talking to him that he conceived the idea how to sneak into the Drazan infested system? Will the Commander and Clara use this AI navigation hack to surprise the enemy ships following them or trick them into an ambush to become unwitting forces in defeating the Drazan in the system? The enemy fleet is following in hopes of an easy victory after Drazan forces weaken the Princess ship, but the FTL drive described only reveals the departure and direction the ship left from, so if they follow expecting to pop in soon after the battle, they might appear ahead of the princess's ship and wind up fighting Drazan instead. Which ever direction the story unfolds, I am an avid fan. Thank you and keep up the great work.

[@michaelnunez186]

I cannot wait for the next episodes, my wife tells me that i am going crazy because i only talk about the blackship and play all the episodes in a loop😂😂 …..and yes i do not care, i am going crazy. Give me more, more, more i tell you😊😊😊

[@kevindunn5591]

My girlfriend know not to bother me when a new episode drops.

[@ashleycampbell6825]

Your wife needs some of your personal attention and validation. That should be enough of a hint.

[@DrgnLdyLizzie2001]

My husband has yet to learn this. He likes it, but isn't as into it as I am.

[@snowwolf8186]

​@@DrgnLdyLizzie2001😒😒

[@steveb6103]

Before I retired, I would have the this playing on my speaker at work. I didn't know till I went back after 5 weeks. But everyone else was listening to and had it playing when I stopped in to say hi.

[@outlawrprc2131]

Is a great Monday ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[@jean3030]

Always such a happy surprise to see this pop up on my watchlist.

[@Urbana2012]

I may have listened to this episode six times … I enjoy it that much! Thank you; I am happy to hear that space battles are coming soon - Wyatt has so far shone in such tests against pilots, both human and alien.

[@patbrownlee5274]

I am thinking Wytte and the LongWolf battle soon to come... I hope.

[@patbrownlee5274]

Dam best chapter so far, shit is about to hit the fan. Finnily Jincho is back to save the Wytte lol thank you

[@boldstar7311]

Please hurry and bring out the next episode!!! This story is Awesome!!!❤ Always leave me craving for more!

[@momohouse44komodocriss]

Some need breathing, eating and drinking to sustain life I need this story. I'm totaly invested I'm loving it❤

[@jim-stacy]

Ekhidna, ive thinking about this all day. You are somehow weaving together all the best ingredients from the top SCI FI universes, yet keeping it fresh original and totally immersive. Got to hand it to you yet again-expert sci fi author

[@carsparks1980]

I KNEW Jincho was going to be a part of this! Much simpler solution than what I thought of. Very well done! I suspect Ch 44 p 1 will be warning order to the crew, assignments, and Hastrung system entry. Then it gets real. 😀 The Noirnavio will get one heckuva rep from this. I also suspect Felicity &co will be caught very much off guard. And what of Ishtonel?

[@robertwhitehead8671HMCS]

Jincho should be put to work finding the Spy in the Prince's midst

[@snowwolf8186]

That will come in time. I to would like to see it. But we the readers only know that info.

[@tracewallace23]

I'd be more worried that the spy will attempt to kill Jenko in order to stop him from doing upgrades to the Noerenavio or to keep him quiet after Jenko "accidentally" figures out WHO they are and who they've been talking to 🤔🤷🏻‍♂️ No matter what happens, Great Story

[@robertwhitehead8671HMCS]

@@tracewallace23 he's not on the black ship the spy tried but failed to get a informant on her as well in there lasts are port when Wyatt was doing his banner work

[@randallmountjoy707]

@@tracewallace23Jade isn’t on the Black ship

[@drewsaadUNITED]

Probably a little sad how much I look forward to the 2 eps a week or so....MORE MORE MORE!!!!😂😂

[@boblowinske1616]

What a great alien, Jincho is one of my favorites in this story. The tactical part makes sense. Now the battle, finally.

[@nm0reira]

Jincho and Wyatt... Does two will create some crazy modifications to the fighters that will become standard. Things will start to fire up soon

[@ashleycampbell6825]

After Wyatt proves the fighter modifications in battle, I am certainly thinking that the Composter Squadron will have all of their fighters upgraded. Jincho is also unimpressed with Principality weaponry which is limiting the fighting capability of the Black Ship. One step at a time and I am anticipating Jincho eventually being given permission to do exactly that.

[@snowwolf8186]

​@@ashleycampbell6825 maybe in time the Nora navio too

[@stevepickens9912]

Jincho, will his ill fitting uniform be replaced with something new, how far will he go up the ranks only time will tell. And was he the pilot when him and crew escaped their home world.

[@waynecox4272]

Jincho should be put in charge of studying the boogyman armour. Also the Prince should release the video of the trial and Frederick Anderson shooting at the Prince to show as proof he was a traitor. The very act of firing on the Prince warrents his death

[@killzone3121]

Still doesn’t matter for house Anderson, to them it will only seem to as a blood thirsty prince killing one of there main successors without a trial.

[@waynecox4272]

​@@killzone3121That may be so, but it's a propaganda war. Proof of his treason might keep other houses from following House Anderson.

[@stevepickens9912]

Or, contact only House Anderson to save their honner

[@johndexter1421]

👍

[@patrickhbrinson8780]

Please make a movie I would stand in line for two or three days to see it. You got to love it

[@lukeytron]

The TV show "Silo" was originally a self published novel. It's not totally impossible.

[@ssark9187]

The story is too big and complex for a movie. A T.V show would be better.

[@Terran.Marine.2]

Maniac seems a lesser insult than worm brain.

[@markalan3108]

this series should make a great TV series.

[@Interdector]

I was thinking about anime adaptation (blue hair is very common there)

[@onthecouch4498]

⁠@@InterdectorI agree. Anime! Especially with the description of the armored suits and space vessels and all the other aliens beings included in this universe

[@ThomasTomiczek]

I like Redford about calling the Princess. Wyatt is inner circle - he likely has card blanche to enter her quarters (not like that - I mean without prior appointment). And he is - "typical noble" - starting to build his own entourage with Jincho. Clara really builds some seriously good people around her. Not only Wyatt - but also the people she already has.

[@davidorf3921]

Also Clara is fine with being called Pretty Eyes, she doesn't care because Jincho has just let them pull off a surprise attack, so far away from the typical noble attitude

[@daghost11]

@@davidorf3921 Clara Is Enlightened, She recognizes Skills over lineage, that even Commoners could potentially have something to offer the Principality, and she’s not willing to throw that away due to decorum… And with Jincho- The Prince was already looking at reaching out to the Hierarchy, to improve relations… It helps to have a couple or Few of their Species/Citizens in service, to mitigate Culture Shock…

[@daghost11]

@@ThomasTomiczek Wyatt’s circle is shaping up to be- Galt, Nultar & Jincho, not counting Clara, Cynthia, Redford & Milkadese… Wyatt is already putting together a formidable team around him…

[@davidorf3921]

@@daghost11 Not sure if Nultar will be in his inner circle but I agree as one of his composters they ought to be close

[@daghost11]

@@davidorf3921 Nultar was the first Noble to speak up for Wyatt against the Reid’s… and had the biggest laugh about the duel & Salazar…

[@jasonmacip3108]

Man I can’t get enough of this can’t wait for the next one Thanks so much

[@Soundwave119]

It's good this chapter is once again for Wyatt's pov, seeing what his Eureka was in the last episode. Nice touch EkhidnaWritez with the elevator scene were Wyatt is still getting use to being an noble and hating being called Lord. I do like we learn more about commoners who want to become parts of a nobles retainer or/and become a noble. Especially about nobles in Volantis and the Academy. I do like how Wyatt thinking about Worlo's colorful way of commoners trying to gain favor of nobles. It doesn't suprise me that Wyatt wants to give Worlo something for all the help he gave to Wyatt and his family. 😊 Interesting to hear more about the interior structure of Principality ships vs the Black Ships. It was an interesting twist seeing Wyatt going to the Noirnavios main shield generator, somewhere he has never been before. I am not surprised that Lupin Lucanto didn't want to be nice to Wyatt but is smart enough not to needsly antagonizing someone who is part of Clara the Reaper's personal retinue. It's funny how for once it's Wyatt surprising Jincho and not the other way around. 😊 I am not surprised that Jincho would be happy to have Wyatt break up his monotonous normal tests of the Noirnavio. Interesting to hear Jincho educate him on FTL travel to better come up with a plan for the Hangstrong system. Great job EkhidnaWritez explaining how FTL space travel works in this series. Interesting to hear Warp lanes aren't required but the fastest ways in and out of Star systems. Interesting to hear Jincho explains how you avoid warp signature by jumping way out from the system than normal. It makes it even more interesting that this is how Jincho left the Hierarchy. Not surprising that Wyatt decides to bring Jincho to meet Redford since he can explain it way better than Wyatt who barely understood what all Jincho said. Its so funny when Redford realizes the yakanti with Wyatt is Jincho and thinking about the antics he will have to deal with the genius. Then his stress levels increase with Wyatt saying that he should summon Clara to the meeting since she will have to know this info anyway LOL! EkhidnaWritez did an amazing job with the part where Redford says Wyatt will be the death of him. Not surprised that Jincho was not phased by Redford's threat if Jincho is loose beak with the top secret info he is about to be briefed on and be part of making combat operations. Aaahhhhh, silliness ensues when Jincho and Clara are in the same room, especially how Jincho messes with Cynthia and how Clara and Redford pile on LOL! 🤣I do like how Redford is supposed by this crazy but effective way avoiding warp detection sensors and how this explains tactics sometimes used by the Erebians and occasionally by clever pirates. It sounds like normal warp travel has you exit/entire a syestem around the termination shock of the system and warp sensors can reach around the Bow Shock. So what Jincho is suggesting is that jumping out around the edge of the local Oort Cloud. I do wonder if a Kalzach Viel is yakanti language for Oort Cload? I understand Redfords worry about random stellar bodes in the OC that could it Noirnavios as it exits warp but out there the chances of a large enough object are astronomically low, that you probably have a better chance of getting killed by a small meteorite here on Earth. Its so hilarious the nick name Jincho gives to Clara is “Pretty Eyes” and Cynthia’s outrage at his crass nature to a near boiling point but Clara does not care since she knows in Jincho’s pov it’s a compliment and he just gave them a prefect way to fix there main problem invading the Hangstrong. 🤣 I am not surprised that Clara realizes part of the reason why Wyatt likes Jincho a lot is because of their mutual hatred of the Drazin. No surprise that Jincho is having the time of his life with being in the center of the attention and being praised for his intellect providing his bosses a way around their problem. Great way to end the chapter with Wyatt learning about Jades smear video and Redford wants Wyatt to spend time with Clara being a true friend with her to help her decompress with the huge amount of stress on her. That and before he leaves Wyatt tells Redford his experience commanding the Noirnavio like he was originally planed on after lunch but was pushed off with Wyatt’s Eureka moment.

[@daghost11]

@@Soundwave119 it confirmed my suspicions- Jump & stop short, just to coast in, and approach from a much different direction… Wyatt using Jenco to help confirm his theory, made even more sense, since Wyatt is more comfortable talking with them… It’s a nice Character trait, that Wyatt is trying to repay those that have helped him… I even liked how he explained his inspiration was brought on by a Civil Conversation with Salazar… I had to chuckle at Redford- “You want me to summon a Princess for You..?? You’re gonna be the death of me…” 🤣🤣🤣 Jenco- “I just need permission from Pretty Eyes…” 😋🤣🤣🤣 Even better- The Noirnavio is going to jump in from an unexpected direction & slip into the system, and a Day Later Cayston forces with Felicity & Maximillian are going to jump into a regular “Lane” drawing the attention of the Drazzan, mean while- the Noirnavio attacks them from the rear 😋😎

[@snowwolf8186]

It's something out of Honor Harrington series that I read. I thought go in Mimicking a drawson destroyer then go from there.

[@ekhidna4]

It is indeed correct. A Kalzach Veil is the Oort Cloud in ykanti language.

[@carsparks1980]

I'm just hoping "you'll be the death of me" isn't foreshadowing. Wyatt still has a lot to learn about command.

[@Soundwave119]

​@snowwolf8186 I agree with you that in this chapter, I am getting a Honor Harrington verse vibe. With how suggested avoid warp detection is similar to what the Mesan Alignment does. I could say more but that would be huge spoilers for that series. 😊

[@jeepingwiththelazyturtle1388]

my favorite SCi FI story!

[@alu.minium521]

Another clue where the Black Ships come from based on interior design to go along with the Captain's control link up. A place that doesn't have separation between nobility and commoners. I am thinking the isolationist group. They aren't in the Pax Humanis and being off by themselves, who really knows their levels of technology.

[@RonaldMyers-oz3pk]

TY for the next chapter. 😊 Nice finish to my day

[@randomSoviet]

amazing as always, thank you for the upload

[@phillee427]

No you can't leave me hanging like this. I'm glad Redford got in on the joke. It makes him more personable

[@codyayres]

I love jincho

[@MyOLD36chevy]

I had a friend like him he fun to be around and I miss him.

[@mikesantos2130]

I love his series. 🙋‍♂️♥️🇨🇦

[@ericgrace9995]

Thank you for creating a believable universe !

[@frankgiampetro4913]

Jincho has a story. A good backstory.

[@michaelnunez186]

I am ready for the next one😂

[@strategicprepper2648]

Love that bird.

[@mrlazylazy5095]

Staying extra at work to be able listen to it

[@elvisalpha]

I, on the other hand, when the episodes hit on Saturday or Sunday, I usually close early. 😅😅😅

[@keithperry5755]

Clara and sweets, Jincho and lachoa, why not, birds and bugs .

[@Crazy49er]

Going to need a Drazzan style skull 'n cross bo...limbs painted on the side of the ship after this arc. The infamy of Clara "The Reaper" Cyntha "The Blood Rend" Wyatt "The Maniac" will grow

[@sroyal76]

I'm loving it. Liked it better when I could binge listen to it lol. Oh well. Keep them coming.

[@62forged]

Another great chapter. Thanks.

[@jimdavis1124]

When the Noirnavio drops into the Hastrugn system unnoticed Felicty Cintor’s fleet will follow with a warp signature which will alert the Drazzan. Send out a probe for the Drazzan to see and then direct it toward Felicty Centor’s fleet and let the Drazzan attack them. When the Drazzan engages Felicty Cintor’s fleet and both are suffering great losses, then you make your move from stealth and destroy the Drazzan and finish off Felicty Cintor’s fleet. During the battle Wyatt kills the Lone wolf.

[@ssark9187]

I think there is going to be a dogfight between Wyatt 🐶 and The Lone Wolf 🐺

[@Theodorussfo]

Went through chapter 43 parts 1-6 and found it really flows well though I had heard all the parts more than once as they came out. I find I have a way better feel and handle on all the happenings and character developments.

[@dennisstancil1427]

wow, that was GREAT, thank you

[@nautifella]

Okay, I think I see what's coming. Wyatt and company will slip in to the _Hastrung system_ causing panic, or at least haste within _Felicity's Fleet._ They will not go unnoticed by the _Drazzan_ as they jump in, and the _Drazzan_ will engage the small fleet. Clara will allow them to fight for a while before engaging both, perhap capturing another _Black Ship._ and sending a much diminished _drazzan force fleeing the _Hastrung system_ for good. Perhaps the system will be awarded to the _House Staples._ (He needs another promotion too)

[@lauravanniekerk4719]

"I can keep my beak shut tightly"!!!!!

[@randrews4614]

thanks for great episode

[@wbryanjackson7310]

Awesome, I love Jincho

[@kazwright1233]

I do hope that you publish these books. I would love to have them on my shelf or in my kindle collection. Thank you for sharing.

[@jskn15]

At the top of my lungs I'm going to say yes all right let's get some more

[@peetleroux3423]

Love this series p,ease make more

[@booniecap2839]

Another great chapter

[@michaelhorn9642]

I SEE WYAIT is getting to be more like a noble he does not say please or thank you anymore but its probably a good change for his position, also nice to see there is another with the ability to think outside the box that can be helpful in the form Jincho as Wyaat is a pilotJincho is a savi tech.

[@kaikenichi6409]

Poor Redford he gonna be shocked after hearing how wyatt command the ship

[@ashleycampbell6825]

As we remember, Wyatt piloted the ship like a fighter. This reminds me of a WW2 naval battle where USN cruisers were deployed instead of the expected destroyers [by the Japanese Navy] and outfought their opposition.

[@daghost11]

I think Redford will find it interesting that Wyatt treated the Noirnavio like a Fighter on Steroids- Speed, Agility & an abundance of Firepower that Wyatt barely had a chance to fully exploit prior to passing out due to his injuries… but Wyatt appreciated the view & freedom the ship gave him and a perspective he never expected, not even in his fighter… plus the Spinal Gun allowed for a 1- shot, 1- kill of a Drazzan Cruiser class that’s the true game changer there… the downside- Distance to Target & Recharge Time… that will be the key factors in the up-coming battle….

[@carsparks1980]

@@daghost11 Another downside is the heat buildup. It's what gave away the Noirnavio at Jintrax.

[@daghost11]

@@carsparks1980 true, but Wyatt purposely heated the ship up to get the Drazzan’s attention to draw them away from Woodshaft… Drazzan aren’t going to attack or follow what they can’t see…

[@carsparks1980]

@@daghost11 While your comment is correct, the spinal mount cannon does quickly negate stealth. It served Wyatt well at Jintrax - but this ain't Jintrax. We'll just have to see. "Drazzan aren’t going to attack or follow what they can’t see…" Precisely. 😆

[@james8989891]

Yes thank you

[@thomasridley8675]

This and the series leading to the New Era are my favorites. And i am too invested to ever put them to watch later.

[@musicandmoviefan9217]

ugggggh 30 minutes teases ...this is an outstanding story well written, exciting and cohesive.....even the AI narrator is not bad. I cannot wait till the entire story is finished and available as a block download. Will there be a hard copy of this story available for purchase?

[@davidstowe5652]

Great job and good luck 👍⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👍

[@valentinlopez6189]

Glad this chapter came ib

[@josebarahonalopez907]

Thanks!

[@scifistories1977]

Thank you, Jose!

[@jeffwatson7345]

why do i love this so much?

[@deplorable1-2]

LOL Posted 5 mins. ago. 240 views and 62 likes. Somebody was waiting!!!

[@zerodiv]

This is the way

[@johnmeikle1477]

Will I have time to make popcorn before the next chapter?

[@frankmoore3598]

Please and Thank You , goes a log way,Lieutenant.

[@RogerCovell-l7g]

Love it, thank you.

[@TitanDrone]

Worlow and Jincho need to meet. I can already imagine the comedy

[@stevepickens9912]

Jinco , master tech , with Warlo the student

[@RobertJ-t9c]

just getting better and better.

[@williewilliams6571]

I am totally addicted to this and "Adopted by Humans". Just can't get enough. And I suspect that Salazar Reid may become an unexpected and unlikely Ally in the future

[@jimdavis1124]

Task Jincho to find out who hacked the system. No problem for a smart Ykankti to find the traitor. r.

[@yvindwestersund9720]

Ok i all ways end up whit Sitting on it for two weeks Just so I can have 90 to 120 minutes of new material and i hate that But i understand that the author needs to get the story right and sooo far it had been great Sooooooooooo Keep it coming i can't wait to see what happens next ❤❤❤❤ just saying 🇳🇴

[@edgarkeisi]

THANK YOU!!!

[@quasimodotrahanaquasimodo]

they need to also get the Drazzan to attack the traitors black ships before they attack the drazzan

[@randallmountjoy707]

The traders can’t follow because the Black ship will not be moving in a A I Line ?)

[@009dracko]

So green is the grass on the other side of the fence. Till you find yourself standing on the other side of said fence.

[@KaasSchaaf666]

so you have three parties: the black ship, the small fleet of traitors flying after the princess, and the Drazan, hmm it would be a nice outcome for Wyatt and the princess to escape and the traitors have to fight the Drazan!

[@WilfredRubalcaba]

Great love it beautiful better and better ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[@yomogami4561]

darn great chapter but i'm glad i waited for the last part thanks for the stories