Sci-Fi Fantasy Short Film: "Penumbra" | DUST

[@danielbyers]

Thanks for these great comments! Love that the film's making you think, you're digging the cosmic sci-fi/horror blend, and even picking up on some of the references and inspirations. This was a lot of fun to make, with some real technical challenges for the visual effects scenes. Don't hesitate to AMA.

[@cmastersfilm]

Who was the best crew member on this film and why does he spell his name Christian Masters?

[@danielbyers]

@@cmastersfilm I don't pick favorites but whoever played that window silhouette killed it

[@Andrea-xs4ny]

This had a lot of great elements. Congrats on the film! I loved the sisters' recreation of Michelangelo's "Creation of Adam." You have to wonder how many people who are deemed crazy have simply experienced something unbelievable or too terrible to speak about.

[@vapormissile]

@@Andrea-xs4ny Amen. My mom taught me that no one is actually Normal. Stay strange, all of us lovable, eccentric, broken, &/or crazy oddballs.

[@danielbyers]

@@vapormissile I'll drink to that!

[@watchdust]

A statement from the director, Daniel Byers: "Penumbra came out of a fascination with astronomy, dark matter, and dark energy - and what these phenomenon mean about our place in the universe. That in spite of scientific advances, we still know practically nothing. That the vast majority of what IS, is something we cannot detect, or possibly even fathom. The film explores this sublime horror visually with negative space and invisible forces, and also explores inner darkness. It poses the question: if no one believes you, what is the difference between being insane, and having experienced the impossible?"

[@antoniograna7258]

Yes. This was a well done short. But one of the themes I thought this really touched on was mental illness. The sister is being taken away by The Dark and the other sister tries to -but can’t - save her...until she too is consumed by the dark. Both the main character and the mother say “I’ll believe you”.

[@danielbyers]

@@antoniograna7258 Absolutely, mental health was a major component, inner darkness, questions of trust and belief, and how that impacts the closest relationships. It's a circular structure, as you also noticed.

[@dedperdedtld]

@@danielbyers Great acting perfectly conveys those ideas! It's not that the character at the end of the story can't speak - she can't share.

[@aldunlop4622]

I disagree that we know “practically nothing”. We don’t understand why galaxies are accelerating away from each other so we theorise there is some dark matter causing it, that’s all. Chemistry is pretty well understood (I’m a Chemist), Biology is just really, complex, but it’s not magic, Physics, apart from dark matter doesn’t have any “knowledge holes”. That’s why there haven’t been any huge advances in science, it’s fairly well understood and has been for a hundred years. A lot of science these days is more about practical applications.

[@BariumCobaltNitrog3n]

@@aldunlop4622 *Dark matter pulls things closer, slowing the expansion of the Universe. Dark energy pushes and causes the expansion to speed up. We don't understand a lot. Like how we got here, why there is life and what caused the Big Bang. We don't know why life didn't form elsewhere or why time only moves in one direction. We know practically nothing about what life is like in the oceans, 80% is still unexplored (Nat. Geo). We don't know why quantum mechanics has different, and "weird" rules, despite using the knowledge to make technology work for us. We also know next to nothing about all the different sources of energy in the Universe such as the one pulling the two frightened sisters into the void. Are ghosts real? Matter (and thus energy) cannot be created nor destroyed so is reincarnation possible? Souls? What is consciousness? Where in your body is your personality? These questions would be easy to answer if we knew how things work, but we just don't. Why are people afraid of a vaccine now, after a hundred years of seeing how effective they are?

[@AnthonyMiyazaki]

Quinn Jackon's (Dori) acting when her mom asks her what happened near the end was impeccable. This was just what the scene needed, and not a blurting out of anything verbal. Sometimes the best dialogue is no dialogue at all.

[@Ingrid922]

You can't speak at all when something so horrible happens.

[@debby8428]

@@Ingrid922 You are 100% correct. My son died in an accident in 1996. The next year his best friend died suddenly too. When I saw the friends mom at the wake we just looked at each other and hugged. There were no words for a moment like that.

[@retrochannel1763]

big thanks to the crew for giving us a well made short movie. And also for Dust, for supporting so many talented artists.

[@danielbyers]

Cheers, @Retro Channel!

[@c.j.cleveland7475]

Loved it! The acting was great all around. At the end, when her mom is asking her what happened, Dori's non-response said more than anything she could have said. The story line is begging for a full length movie or possibly even a series. Well done to all involved! 👏👏👏👏

[@DanielAppleton-lr9eq]

I was reminded a little of Poltergeist, even though technically, the activity wasn't supernatural.

[@josephchapman]

Oh and huge thanks for the closed caption. Really appreciate the detailed descriptions along with the speech-to-text as it makes the tone clearer.

[@GreatGreebo]

The acting in this was BRILLIANT.I believed their emotions and motivations for doing what they were doing.

[@danielbyers]

[@dgwachtel]

Great film! I haven't experienced "jump scares" like these since "Alien". The camera angles and the pacing were extraordinary, building tension slowly until the climax and denouement. The actresses are incredibly good at their craft. If there is any justice they should go far in their careers. Fifteen minutes want by like five. The writing, direction and camera work were just about perfect. The advice "show don't tell" was followed and made the impact greater than most films. No expository scenes necessary. The sound didn't overwhelm but increased the tension in a subtle way - great job. After twenty minutes since watching this little masterpiece my hands are still shaking a bit. I'll remember this one for a long time. Thanks for this gem and I look forward to your next projects. -dave

[@rtdude1]

Wow I'm very impressed. Most shorts like this at least feel a little like you've watched a short, but this almost felt like I'd watched a feature length film. Well done. I really enjoyed it. And the acting was great as well.

[@danielbyers]

@rtdude1 Sweet, thank you!

[@fabled-pilgrim]

Holy crap!! That scene where the entity is on the balcony staring back gave me shivers, lol. This short was really good. The pacing was perfect, the back story was interesting and engaging. A nice take on the abduction genre. Also, the performances were both excellent, very believable characters. A big thumbs up.

[@MagpieSue]

Can tell me at what point in the short that you saw an entity? I didn't see it

[@pineapplepenumbra]

@@MagpieSue At 7:05.

[@ronaldhall5524]

I was gonna say the same thing! All the hairs on my body stood up. 😳😳

[@daviddemar8749]

Unfortunately I didn't like this short film because the middle portion was so poorly lit that i couldn't tell what was happening.

[@chrisbentleywalkingandrambling]

First film/short to send shivers down my whole body. Really enjoyed it.

[@danielbyers]

Excellent 😈

[@WhiteUnicorn82]

What's it about? I was going to watch it at some point, but wasn't sure if it'd be worthwhile. I've returned a few times to read replies from people, so I'm very familiar with the first 6 minutes and 20 seconds because I generally respond. I like all sorts of sci-fi and action/adventure, etc - do I stand a good chance of liking this? I'd better get going now because I'll end up seeing some of what I've not seen yet, (wouldn't want to spoil it should I wish to watch it all someday). I'll look forward to reading your reply. Thanks ** I didn't want to delete it just in case it had already been read, but sorry for the stupid comment - I was tired when I wrote it, (just woke up around 7am). I meant not to be antagonistic, but it was a waste of time! Sincerely, sorry!

[@alejmora]

Me too! I got goosebumps, it has not happened to me since more than a decade. Thanks to the people who made the short!

[@edyak6280]

Great story, well told. You left me wanting more, so that’s a win in my book. Thanks to all involved; I have been thoroughly entertained.

[@Z-Diode]

Undoubtedly a new masterpiece! The acting on display here sets standards. I'm always amazed at the talent that comes to light in such short subjects.

[@marymagmartha7453]

_Now, I may not say this just right, but out of the many Alien 👽 “abduction” films, television series or documentaries I’ve seen since the 80s - this was the best 15 minutes of nervous emotions and stomach churning ever_

[@patricialessard8651]

I thought it was pretty good actually. The tension and drama led to a good ending. You don't always need to see an alien chasing people around. The knowing what's probably coming is pretty creepy. I got it and liked it. Thank you and stay safe!

[@hilaryc3203]

We saw it on the patio ...a bit

[@dnisey64]

Look back on old Alfred Hitchcock movies.

[@spacedman42]

The intensity of the atmosphere and superb acting created with a cool story gave me shivers right up my spine to the back of my head. Even after writing this i can still feel my heart. Nice work :)

[@danielbyers]

Thank you, Anthony!

[@jeffreygandhide7013]

I don't really like scary things but the acting of both woman was great, I stayed because of it almost. The scene when dory can't speak is so well done. Bravo for her. The pitch is good nothing extraordinary (just my opinion) but everything else is great ! Thanks for sharing it :)

[@kennyhagan5781]

Nice short. Eerie as hell, but within the realm of possibility... good job.

[@PaulDaveyJsy]

Superb. Sci fi can also be horror and this proved it. Great acting, great storyline and by the looks of it she will soon be joining her sister which would make a great sequel . Well done.

[@danielbyers]

Thanks Paul!

[@TheJaghutWarren]

Seems like according to Hollywood, most Sci Fi is horror. Humans can't seem to board board spaceships without at least one psychotic break😂

[@zippythinginvention]

Wow! The most chilling film I've seen on Dust. Well done!

[@joshuamefford6944]

That was great!!! Good acting and the creep and suspense level was perfect. Would love to have seen what happens to the sister, left me wanting more!!

[@ozoneswiftak]

Wow. When she fell from the sky, I was wondering what was going to happen. That was great.

[@n.d.risley8674]

Great story and the actors were incredible. I wanted it to be a full feature film.🔥

[@JohnnyNiteTrain]

Overhead shots of a solo car driving in remote locations, with ominous music….works every time!!!

[@weissrw1]

Goodness gracious!!!! That was well put together. Great casting... great writing... great tempo and acting. Must have had a good budget!!! I was on the edge of my seat!!! Damn!!!!

[@danielbyers]

Awesome! Glad you enjoyed it, Ronald.

[@joshhayl7459]

🟦 At 9:47 how did the axe SUDDENLY get so FAR from her?.... And how could anyone not end up with a broken-back from falling in that harness the way she did? GREAT job on the boyfriends makeup (or however you pulled that off). And btw,.....What a place to LEAVE us!

[@timnorthstar3268]

From the very first moment a very absorbing tale, very well acted with great production... best of all a terrific ending that doesn't put a spoiler on the whole. Great work.

[@FelixDGLanas]

Fantastic short film, congratulation to the team, this is one of the finest sci-fi shorts I have ever watched. Can't wait for your next production!

[@danielbyers]

Tremendous! Thank you, Felix!

[@kevinluther8455]

12:15. Oh god. People are capable of this level of acting. I don’t know whom to believe in now.

[@kepler186f4]

And when aliens communicate how would they do it.... what a powerful film, the acting was superb and the green screen shot of the Milky Way was spectacular! Sometimes a lingering ending is better than deus ex machina... please bring on the sequels.

[@wrestlingwithpower]

Been forever since I’ve watched a Dust video! Binged some last night so I’m hooked again

[@danielyoung2641]

Gave me the CHILLS! 🥶 Nice job!

[@dataexpunged6969]

I'm amused how at the end it looks like her hand is moving on it's own while writing, so it's like some entity is forcing her to write about it, like it did with her sister.

[@badAim2]

For those who say that this was a horror movie rather than sci-fi: It was both. The same way as you have comedy drama movies, you can have sci-fi horror ones.

[@NewMessage]

My wife calls them 'Sci-Die' movies.

[@danielbyers]

@@NewMessage I love this and am stealing it =D

[@rtdude1]

I agree with you and it did the combo extremely well. Great job

[@MMAGamblingTips]

Yes! Just like The Invisible Man for instance. Several episodes of Black Mirror are sci-fi horror too.

[@danielbyers]

@@MMAGamblingTips or Alien, the Thing, Signs...! It's kind of rare but it's definitely one of my favorite genres.

[@sportjunk70]

I forgot this is a short film, I became totally absorbed. That is entertainment, thanks for the film.

[@crowjr2]

That was just fantastic! Well written, good acting, cinematography, sound, everything.

[@danielbyers]

Thanks @crowjr2 !! Was a good team!

[@john30039]

Great video. Great acting. Two 👍

[@MissOlympia2023]

1 of the best Dust films I've seen

[@ericchild8845]

I love the rock climbing references throughout the clip. Adventurous souls with an unrivaled sense of determination and driven to overcome are climbers. Excellent choice for subtle character development. Great work. More please!

[@danielbyers]

As a climber myself I agree! Glad you enjoyed it!

[@cybobseven2762]

What a great short!! A mixture of horror and sci-fi...i am loving it! Well done!!

[@danielbyers]

Thanks Cybob!

[@rudevalve]

Certified Gold!!!!!

[@greyareaRK1]

Great short! So well designed and acted. Loved the concept of the alien and abduction. Atmosphere rich.

[@MrBDude83]

Now that's how you do a psychological thriller. Amazing.

[@martinmeeser8312]

Very tense. Amazing what you can do without tons of special effects. Best I have seen in a while.

[@njdevilsforlifewoohoo5533]

I thought that was really good. could be extended to make a Twilight Zone, or similar show episode, or even a full length movie.

[@badAim2]

Ahh yes, Penumbra. That epic horror game I tried to play so many times but it was so scary that I could never finish it. Back to watching.

[@stephanhuebner4931]

The series included some of the most scary games I've ever played.

[@smileitsfreeanditwillmakes4121]

What game I want to play

[@dereckprice8900]

I really liked it and it would be nice to have a part II to get more backstory!

[@MAILLADY2010]

This needs more

[@leftyme4568]

How did that lifeline get so short all of the sudden? Other than that, it was great.

[@ToyotaKTM]

It would have made more sense if it had gotten caught on something like the chimney.

[@kingwillie206]

She would have died either way based on how hard she fell inside the house. It would have been more believable if she had gotten sucked into the portal and spat back out, then floated down prior to the portal closing.

[@dataexpunged6969]

@@kingwillie206 precisely. Her back would've snapped, falling from that height.

[@29lookingood]

Well made short. What makes is really surreal so that, it's not ghosts or aliens, it's "other". 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾💯💙

[@Ghost_Recon_Actual]

I thought for sure she was dead. A free fall from that height, the rope and harness, and the sudden stop at the end sure seemed like a broken back and severed spinal cord from the sudden breaking of the vertebra. Love the story style and commitment to suspenseful horror. More, please. 🥺

[@danielbyers]

It was a real "suspension" of disbelief, eh ;)

[@woodstoney]

That was really well done. The set, story line and actors were amazing as were the special effects! We need more mind puzzles like this one.

[@danielbyers]

Thanks @woodstoney! Love building mind puzzles for y’all!

[@cursocuritiba]

Wow!! It must be continued...

[@theflyingfool]

Great acting ladies! Good story too!

[@TheBadRandolph]

Goosebumps... That's how good this is.

[@LA_Viking]

Extraordinary acting. Thumbs...or thumb up!

[@omgoleus]

Huh wow, I don't scare easy but that was hella creepy. Well done.

[@rickmasseur2008]

Very well done! Love the ending!

[@HarryAspinwall]

Love this!

[@danielhanawalt4998]

Very well done. I was in a discussion about the existence of God and Satan...or the nonexistence of them. Someone asked when the last time was anyone saw either of them. I answered I didn't have knowledge of that but that emotions are not seen, only the effects they have on us. This film is a similar thing. As much as we know is as near nothing to what there is as a single grain of sand amongst all the beaches on the planet.

[@danielbyers]

Makes you wonder about fairy abductions, alien abductions, possessions... are these all part of some overlapping but culturally distinct psychological human experience?

[@danielhanawalt4998]

@@danielbyers Anything's possible. Even the impossible maybe, at least what we think of as impossible.

[@danielbyers]

@@danielhanawalt4998 Yes!

[@drsingingeagle]

Well, at least they didn’t shake the camera like a lot of moviemakers are doing these days.

[@robertdiehl1281]

Great acting. Wanted to see more. The good stuff.

[@AnthonyMiyazaki]

Dori's receiving a message from Fae perhaps? Excellent work on this to all involved. Great work Daniel!!!

[@danielbyers]

Thanks so much, Anthony! Glad you enjoyed, and interesting theory about the end !

[@zethraelofteldrassil3149]

I thought the same thing. Fay probably messaging her to leave it alone.

[@connoisseuroftigolbitts]

Where did Fey go the first time? Why did she say people thought she was crazy at the beginning? Extra terrestrial!?

[@danielbyers]

So glad you’re asking these questions! Hopefully we’ll be answering some of them in a feature!

[@johnheaney6383]

Intense…well acted! Nicely done!

[@josephchapman]

Blown away! Really great work! Minor continuity error at 6:22.

[@danielbyers]

Thanks Joe! & Often you have to make choices in edit to prioritize one thing or another - continuity vs story flow, for example. I'm usually with Walter Murch... if you can land the emotion and story, everything else is small beans!

[@davey2k12]

Love these films well done these should be on TV like syfy channel

[@scetchport]

WOW ...just....WOW !

[@vapormissile]

John Keel meets John Carpenter. Very nice work. It helps us live.

[@danielbyers]

High praise!! Thanks so much!

[@Tkcrypto1]

I hate the part in movies when people don't listen. Lol, she said come inside multiple times.

[@trex283]

The acting and story were very good. Thanks!

[@spiritangel1367]

Spectacular..!!

[@independentview854]

DUST suits my goldfish memory and attention span just fine

[@michaellee6489]

Pretty cool flick! its already been said that Quinn Jacksons' acting was remarkable, such depths of terror, disbelief, despair conveyed without a word was just staggering! Standing applause for all involved!

[@danielbyers]

Thank you Michael! And yes, Quinn is brilliant, and great to work with!

[@arturoarticaaab3526]

9:40 - Anti-cheat system: disabled - Creative mode: enabled

[@danielbyers]

Hahah basically

[@carolynnunes3922]

Very well acted; very engaging! An awesome short! Kudos!

[@MiTheMer]

This is more Horror than Sci-fi, I'd say. But was okay~

[@Theorica]

Cosmic horror. Right smack dab in the middle. Probably why you feel that way--more horror than sci-fi, I mean.

[@zimriel]

HP Lovecraft "The Other Gods" vibe to it

[@thetalkingshrimp5683]

Great alien abduction film, they always seem to get their way, don't they? When they're near, phone doesn't work, if you had a camera that doesn't work either, you just have to fight them but then they remove the gravity from the room, you might even just go unconscious.

[@Yellow-Rose]

Definitely not a fair fight

[@TomasHradckyComposer]

Wonderful work.

[@Theorica]

If you're able to pack this much into less than a 1/4 hour, imagine what you can do in 2 of them. It's good when by watching a film, you can instantly see and hear the love and knowledge of the genres it draws from. So many nods in the details while making its own mark. The last scene with the pen reminded me of the mashed potatoes au Devil's Tower compulsion or similar. Ya. I liked it quite a bit.

[@danielbyers]

Awesome , thanks @Theorica! Great observations and much appreciated, definitely came from a deep love of the genre!

[@artplat]

Это было очень сильно! Вы ребята создаете шедевры, искренне рад что нашел ваш канал на ютубе, я восхищен вашими работами!

[@Mazxlol]

the camera and sound were actually pretty good! it felt like i was watching a real horror movie!!! gave me a bit of Alan Wake vibe! a full movie with a good story would be awesome ;)

[@danielbyers]

Thanks @Mazxlol !

[@MR3DDev]

How do you get in contact with these people to get a short film on this channel? Asking for a friend

[@sparsrus]

Wicked AF! Seat of my pants kinda wicked. i want the rest of the story kinda wicked. thank you....

[@danielbyers]

😈 thank you, Kevin!

[@RafeCruise]

Wow. This is great.

[@mishie618]

Wow. Just... wow

[@Lanzetsu]

Damn this was good.

[@reputationbarbie]

I like climbing and X-Files, this hit right 👍

[@kevinreed7181]

Excellent content, top notch

[@paulcosgrove6160]

Excellent.

[@yogiwp_]

Would love to see more cosmic horror theme!

[@danielbyers]

You and me both!

[@gregdingo]

The earliest I saw was the 1956 movie "Forbidden Planet" , the creatures from the id. If you have never seen it please watch if you can somewhere, it's a true classic!!

[@sonovivo1247]

a perfect example of NON Sci-Fi, pure horror, perfect for all those horrible perverts, having pleasure by pain, violence and sadness, being totally unaware how they continue feeding their false assumptions about what life is and unable to love, being gentle (and helpful) or experiencing awe gratitude and experiencing an uplifting life.

[@PyroFalcon]

Schizophrenia is hell

[@hyperphantom2468]

scared the shit out of me.....another artwork by dust.......op!!

[@danielbyers]

Excellent! Fear in your heart = joy in mine

[@jobisselle2861]

Excellent!

[@dnisey64]

What happened to the 1+hr long on weekends?

[@horaciogonzalez287]

Wow…one of my darkest nightmares as a kid, I used to dream of starting floating and going up nonstop…slow…not able to do anything about it…

[@danielbyers]

Had the same nightmare 😬interesting

[@horaciogonzalez287]

@@danielbyers yeah…man watching this gave me goosebumps!!😅 I had a lot o brutal shocking nightmares as a kid /teenager, but since I had this one…I was afraid to sleep

[@danielbyers]

@@horaciogonzalez287 Hope it didn't re-traumatize you!! But it was part of the inspiration for this, and it's cool to hear you experienced the same thing

[@horaciogonzalez287]

@@danielbyers no problem this was way back in the day, sometimes real life can be scarier than nightmares 😆 and I can’t stop looking for this kind of entertainment, great job here, looking forward any new material 👍

[@George-fk4uj]

I want to say congratulations for the hard work you put into making this short films they are absolutely fantastic !!! I wont even say that it is like Netflix i will say that your short films are better than most Netflix shows

[@danielbyers]

Thanks so much @George, high praise 🤘

[@tanrose8645]

😮 💙😔... Well done❣️👏👏👏🌹 PLEASE Stay 'safe', everyone❣️ Blessed be🌛🌹🌜

[@ahmethasanzengin4392]

Great!!!