I Asked ChatGPT To Rewrite This Facebook Ad

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In this video, I’m critiquing a Facebook Ad that’s promoting a $35 sleep mask sold by Manta Sleep.
You’ll hear a point-by-point breakdown of:
✅ What works about the ad…
✅ What’s lacking…
✅ What could be improved…
✅ And what I would do differently…
I’m also breaking down 5 other variations of the Manta Sleep ad - all submitted by real writers from the Posse community.
And… just for fun…
I asked ChatGPT to rewrite the ad. And I’ve got some things to say about that, too 😉
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Alex Cattoni’s inspiration for the Copy Posse came after observing a dangerous divide in the copywriting industry...
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[@AlexCattoni]

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[@aleenamahoor2855]

The way you talk is so energetic and gives a unique sense of motivation. Really enjoyed every single second of this...

[@ames550]

Hey Alex, if I may comment my feelings about the AI is that it doesn't feel like an ad, it feels more like a lazily, perfunctory brief to a creative person. As I copywriter, I don't see a hint of a creative idea in that "ad" and am shocked anyone would respond to it unless all they want is some basic theoretical proof that it works. I don't see an emotional hook, or anything to bring a smile to my face, or reason that particular mask would bring a "how cool or clever this mask is." Advertising is meant to be creative. To bring about an emotional response and to rise above the ordinary. If this is where the future is headed, I am just glad I worked in the business for multinational companies around the world for over 35 years when I did. I know I wouldn't have lasted if I had presented that work to my creative directors. Thanks for letting me have my little rant.

[@hiryuimajin]

This is a perfect way to describe it. It's lackluster. I love how flawed AI is.

[@AlexCattoni]

Agreee!!!

[@RobertDunn310]

As a freelance translator, I agree with your assessment about AI. I personally use it as a tool, and it does make a great thesaurus for when you want to rephrase a certain word or sentence, but I make sure that it doesn't do anything more than that, because the creative human is me, not ChatGPT.

[@paritoshsontakke7254]

Awesome reviews Alex. Thanks for this video. It helps a lot.

[@bernardinenkechiejiogu9214]

Always the best ❤️ Thanks Alex! I'll put on my thinking Cap because I am the one with the human brain 😀

[@SamVanderWielen]

Always enjoy when you do these exercises!

[@jinspiredvlog]

I just love your content, Alex! I have been learning a lot from you!!!!!!!! =)

[@Mimi25291]

Wow this was super helpful Engaging and powerful. Thank you so much, your time is valuable and you give so much value with it so selflessly. Thank you!

[@AlexCattoni]

Thank you for watching!

[@sandergelderblom9517]

Love this type of content

[@Markclark-od7kw]

Loved this video Alex. Super motivational to see you put on your Super Hero Copywriter glasses and get straight to work.😅😅😅🎉🎉🎉

[@AlexCattoni]

Love to hear this! Thanks for watching!

[@wallacebankley3384]

How can you make it shorter when the video is full 🌕 of wisdom

[@maricelp116]

They could have use the brand name istead of saying just "eye mask"

[@kafuiahiabu2782]

OMG I can't believe this... A #win moment 😂😂😂 Thank you Alex I'm very grateful I've taken full notes

[@CinnamonGirl42069]

Your glasses are super cute! I'm on the hunt for the perfect glasses. Where did you get yours?

[@ericaweiszmann1018]

This was a lot of fun to watch!

[@AlexCattoni]

Thanks for watching!

[@ericaweiszmann1018]

@@AlexCattoni The way you break down why each component of the edited ads works/needs additional revising was so powerful. You make me feel like I can become a copywriter so thank you!

[@TheHumanRanger]

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[@suniajellani3007]

But I submitted my copy on youtube😢

[@SOMEONE......]

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Hii alex cattoni, 🎬 I hope this message finds you well! I couldn't help but notice your passion for creating awesome content. If you ever need a hand with video editing, I'd love to help bring your vision to life! 🚀 Let me know if you have any upcoming projects in mind-I'd be thrilled to collaborate!

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Ma'am no matter what you look so beautiful ❤

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😂 Tharki

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Don’t waste bro! She’s married .

[@Qais44]

He is in the way to propose through his first copywriting exercise. 😂😂 ​@@christiansanchez1578

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[@lauraaa3049]

Love the hook