FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 4 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

[@kiwiqueen138]

This one’s a little shorter, it’s sort of a break chapter in between the daycare and Chica. Hope y’all enjoy :D Link to next episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/pnrammWAia6ap6s Link to previous episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/qoLNcqmZotlrn80 Link to full playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true

[@azulathesunmoonsimp8939]

Whoooo!! I’m earlier than last upload!! :DDD

[@icyferaligatr9908]

This part was a nice chance to catch a breather. Moon's admittedly was heart racing and felt super intense, so placing a short intermission to mark the official end of the first act is really making good use of the extra time given in this rewrite. I can't wait to see how differently the main trio of animatronics are handled and dealt with. See ya next Friday! -Icy

[@nottknormal]

17:18 Smiling *Chica*-ly! I'll see myself out....

[@TheJAJPG]

Vanny being a robot is a really interesting choice. I can’t wait to see where it goes!

[@kiwiqueen138]

Oh wait sorry! I don’t want you to get all excited for the wrong thing, Vannie isn’t a robot. She’s wearing a suit similar to spring trap, just without being impaled by spring locks. Gregory just can’t tell yet because he doesn’t know that it’s Vanessa in there (Similar to how he also theorized that she was a ghost, and Freddy thought that she might be Bonnie) I’m glad you’re excited though! I made her have a ‘suit’ like this for a reason :)

[@TheJAJPG]

Ohhhh, okay that makes sense. Thanks for clarifying.

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

😢 it's so sad and unfortunate the fact that the animatronics are just seen as well products that can just be destroyed by a fire sure they can be fixed but that doesn't negate the fact there will be trauma behind it it's so sad the fact that the fire exits are designed to only save humans it's just unfortunate and horrific 12:33

[@whiterabbit3050]

If I changed security breach here changes I will make: roxy and glam rock chica have better boss fight, make vanny an actual threat, security bot redesign,no more reviving peepaw afton, mae the pizza plex have no power but still have the neon lights,glam rock chica and roxy would have glowing eyes similar to freddy from fnaf 1

[@kiwiqueen138]

Good news: I do all of those things, you have come to the right place :)

[@RudyTheCannibal]

The peepaw Afton ending isn't even the true ending

[@zebmoore3671]

ok, i can’t listen to gregory holding his breath without participating 😂

[@rosykindbunny1313]

Always love your rewrites! This one was a nice little break with a preview of what's to come, which is very different from the rest, but still enjoyable!

[@freedomroses]

Hey Kiwi, I hope you don’t get offended by this but I’d like to provide some 🎉Constructive Criticism🎉 When you describe Gregory’s fear you focus mainly around how he feels in his heart and lungs. It’s all great but it gets repetitive in a larger work like this. So, suggestion: Variety, maybe he gets a chill down his spine or his feet get cold or something?

[@TVBug_]

"SECURITY ALERT SECURITY ALERT WOOWOWOWOWOOW!!!" Favorite part :D

[@cacaumassipanoficial6203]

17:43 oh, what a relief, i really want to see everyone in a better angle he he 😅

[@cacaumassipanoficial6203]

This series has a good intro, I'm definitely going to cut this part to show my friend 😆

[@astrumcat64.mp4]

Hey Kiwi !! I was wondering if I could try and make a rewrite of security breach, I have some really cool original ideas,but didnt want to copy you !! ^_^

[@Lucas87091]

Bro you don't need to ask for permission they're not the first person to do this

[@kiwiqueen138]

Thank you for asking, of course you can do that, it will be interesting to see the way you go about fixing things! :D It’s not like I copyrighted the idea or anything lol

[@heavenlyNoomba]

Ok i don't see any Easter egg this time

[@_worm_kid13]

The place is going to start on fire

[@cyanide_crow7970]

I ran here so damn fast

[@SHEEPcat64]

EEEE IVE BEEN WAITING!

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Awesome

[@BaneOfMyExistence1929]

YIPPEE

[@astrumcat64.mp4]

YIPPIE

[@aileetoilee]

Hey! I love your rewrite! It’s so unique and well-written ^^ I also wanted to ask you something, could I join you in working on this project? I could help with the art and voice acting! (´｡• ᵕ •｡`) If you want some examples of my art, I can link you to it, no problem! And I can give you my discord too if need be Have a nice rest of your day! (b ᵔ▽ᵔ)b Keep up the good work!

[@kiwiqueen138]

I’m glad that you like my rewrite! But I don’t really need any help, I’m terrible at working with other people and I am doing mostly fine on my own. But thanks for the offer, that was very nice of you! :)

[@aileetoilee]

@@kiwiqueen138 Thats okay lol I completely understand! c: