FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - PROLOGUE (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

[@kiwiqueen138]

Sorry, this one isn’t scary yet, *the first episode* is being posted immediately after this one because it’s *Overall MUCH more impressive* than this simplistic introduction to what their lives were like before Bonnie up and died Hope yall like it anyway :) 1ST CHAPTER LINK: kzbin.info/www/bejne/Z5_Tl55srZmSpqc FULL PLAYLIST LINK: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true

[@Thebluemamott]

This is beautiful, thank you.

[@subliminalwashec451]

I. Can have your one world app name Dowlands

[@jellywolf5141]

I love how each of the characters act- Freddy being worried and loving. Bonnie being eager and perky. Chica being excited and having a excited attitude. Roxy being nervous about doing well- which is unlike her OG character, but it shows how she wants to be “the best”.

[@Agentpman1]

"That was 16 years ago" hit me like a brick. Loved your SUF Rewrite! Already have HIIGH hopes for this!

[@Jaded_Jasper]

THE KIWI QUEEN RETURNS!!!

[@Emi_.Mily64]

YAYYYYYY-

[@lumisherbert5682]

I accidentally watched the first episode before this :'), and I was really happy because they were all being so sweet up until "That was 16 years ago" came and hit me like a frozen potato to the face. This is rly good!

[@SusannahMurphine98]

Same boat, here! I’m not sure why it took me this long to come across this, either. I was here for the Animatronic Family, and then I remembered that Bonnie wasn’t long for this story. I’d gotten attached. Well done!

[@insomnia5354]

I love how you portrayed the relationship between the workers and the animatronics sentient beings being treated very strictly and being treated like they are not human like they are disposable objects and when they mess up they are lectured like how vanessa yelled a Freddy for breaking down like it was his fault and I bet Chica is called disgusting by the workers when she is suppose to be a fitness model robots are not meant to eat but Chica cant help it this abuse could have lead Roxanne to be obsessed to be perfect, maybe out of per fear of not being scrapped

[@snakesbakecookies]

My favourite game rewritten by one of my favourite KZbinrs. this is going to be incredible

[@Vivigreeny25]

LETS FUCKING GOOOOOOOOO Edit: Oh okay so THATS how it’s gonna be, huh? Pain? Hm? Just laugh as I scream in agony? God I love your writing

[@DeadlyD05]

I'm hyped to see how this goes simply because you knocked SU:F out of the park. I extremely appreciate your work, as it's something that you don't see done properly that often. SU has easy ground work because there isn't as much material to work with. Though considering you're tackling FNAF:SB, you have my support. Do what you need to do.

[@DreadPirateElla]

I absolutely love this!!! It's such a nice intro to the series!! but I absolutely HATE the guards 😭 they're so rude for no reason, like don't talk to my comfort characters like that. Freaking silencing them and cutting them off, absolutely jerks OH WHAT THE END WHAT OH GOD

[@alexandercapitulo5262]

Literally screamed when I saw this- oh my gosh- ITS HERE AHHHHHHHHHHH

[@rosykindbunny1313]

Trans Roxy? Ooh, I like this!

[@Da1X_Builds]

I watched this part after viewing some of the later parts down the line. Thanks to that I was able to put the pieces together, dear god…

[@staticmations4764]

Im so glad your feeling so much better!! I know this is going to be amazing!!

[@staray4958]

Jokes on you, I’m not new, I’ve been here for a while. Also you somehow show up somewhere in EVERY fandom I join. First SU, then Undertale, now Security Breach and SaMs. So that led me back to your actual channel.

[@undertalefan_4life420]

I AM HERE FOR DIS.

[@undertalefan_4life420]

And then I wasn’t… 😈

[@fawnoverbrawn]

Me, both a FNAF and SU fan:

[@Sl33pyH3ad]

SAME

[@soap699]

I am only reading this cause the su one was so good

[@billyjo420me]

same i like fnaf and su so this chanl is my faverate

[@blistineduh3088]

YAYYAYAY I cant wait for the next episode AHHHHH

[@Jadinite-2006]

I have full respect when it comes to the original writers & to rewrites.

[@gailasprey7787]

Kiwi I love your videos! This was a perfect introduction to everything in the security breach mystery of where Bonnie went. ❤

[@nottknormal]

AHHH I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS!!

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

I've watched the series and I'm going to give my notes here this is absolutely fantastic everything about this rewritten series is absolutely perfect You were perfect you were flawless I loved this. This is the tone that security breach should have had more desperate and more scary something that felt more like a horror story for a kid rather than a kid just taking fetch quests You did absolutely fantastically The way you portrayed the animatronics the way everyone was The way Gregory was you made Gregory so likeable and nice to be around Gregory's character everything you did you gave us danger you gave us a sense of urgency with everything it was fantastic and perfect thank you

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

and i've offically finished what we have to far (Up until "the fall of Vanny for me"") and....thank you you;ve inspired me in ways you could never know you inspired me to make my own rewriting of security breach. idk why but i feel inspired by your work. i just idk it feels nice i just wanna say i have barrowed aspects of your rewrite into my own production if thats ok with you but i do belive that i have done your produciton justice and my Porject was unique enogh that it doesen't feel like a coppy and paste from you

[@kareemahickson2018]

Just found this channel and started watching this and now I want someone to animate this

[@kalebstigall2989]

I know it’s gonna be awesome

[@hamzainium]

"that was 16 years ago" **vine boom**

[@BaneOfMyExistence1929]

YIPEEE

[@underswapsans8062]

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WELCOME BACKKKKKKKKK

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Hell yeah

[@BaconAbe]

I really wish I could've caught this when it came out I thought my phone auto set the notifications on. I really like your content though and I wish well on your mental health after all this is amazing work and I imagine it was very difficult so don't forget to take a break if you need it.

[@SnooflySmith]

Don't worry. I have infinite amounts of faith in you. Especially after steven universe future RW.

[@zebmoore3671]

The sweet sleep over scene…. then the last 60 seconds. uh oh.

[@Raddish-Is-Radd]

Yesssss

[@wobblewubbzy]

ITS HERE!!!

[@azulathesunmoonsimp8939]

I see you in so many damn comment sections- I’m sure this is gonna be amazing ✨

[@cycloneabsol9405]

HOLD UP A SEC THIS WHOLE CHAPTER IS BONNIE POV THE ENDING SAYS “THEY’VE CHANGED” IS THAT LAST BIT A MODERN-DAY BONNIE STILL ALIVE OR SOMETHING?!?!?

[@juanbat2793]

Finallly Yea

[@heavenlyNoomba]

Yo i love the way u did this It A kind of remind me of Steven Universe rewrite👍🏾👍🏾👏🏾🙌🏾👏🏾🙌🏾👏🏾🙌🏾👏🏾🙌🏾👏🏾

[@agoodfriendtoyou6985]

7:59 Is she, you know 🏳️‍⚧️

[@kiwiqueen138]

Yup, Roxy isn’t a new character replacing Foxy, she’s just trans :)

[@TheMediaMage]

@@kiwiqueen138 I love this so much!

[@bittyitcharson]

Hello! Is there a written/readable version? This seems incredibly interesting but I'm not much of an audio person (and I'm sure I'm not alone here) :'3

[@XXVelvetScottageXx]

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[@DollyHasNoLife]

This sounds super cool but sadly my brain won’t let me enjoy it cus I’m more of a reader then listener T-T It’s dumb but not being able to see the words paired with a voice (albeit very nice) just irks me so bad. Regardless 😎👍

[@kiwiqueen138]

LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true Hope you enjoy :D

[@DollyHasNoLife]

@@kiwiqueen138 Thank you so much!

[@Epicplayz10101]

Huh, cool, I just found you out.

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Hey, Kiwi, I'm going back through these episodes, and I noticed something: You unilaterally refer to DJ Music Man as just "DJ". Is that for some plot reason, or do you just prefer not calling him Music Man?

[@kiwiqueen138]

His full name is still “DJ music man”, I just don’t want to say it every single time because it’s a mouthful lol

[@cycloneabsol9405]

@@kiwiqueen138 Fair enough 😂

[@nobodyimportant4210]

Very minor FNAF movie spoilers⚠️ It’s funny how you named Bonnie’s manager Hank since in the movie, the man Bonnie kills in the closet is named Hank too

[@twist_ending7545]

Omg is Roxy trans??

[@kiwiqueen138]

Yeah, pretty much. She’s not a new character replacing Foxy, she’s just trans lol

[@twist_ending7545]

@@kiwiqueen138 I love her! oh my goddess

[@lunaofthecorn4192]

ELLO

[@toasterbounce]

Yooo

[@Maddison-jn6fs]

This is great but can explain how a robot can be trans I don't understand how that would work

[@kiwiqueen138]

It would actually be easier than humans being trans - the robot was simply built to be male, decided they felt they were female instead, so their body was re-built to be female by technicians :)

[@Maddison-jn6fs]

@@kiwiqueen138 that makes more sense than what I was thinking

[@kailiahmoon]

Maybe you could put my FNAF OC Merika in one of your parts as like a cameo or a brief appearance?

[@subliminalwashec451]

I can have your one world app name Dowlands kika queen

[@rat38]

IT'S HERE IT'S HERE

[@XXVelvetScottageXx]

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